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A brilliant scientist and creator of Goliath, the world's first WeaponOfMassDestruction.
* MadScientist
* PeaceThroughSuperiorFirepower: What he believes Goliath will bring.
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* ActionGirl
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Alek's mechaniks and Walker-piloting tutor.
* AcePilot: In his glory days.
* CoolOldGuy
* TheEngineer
* OldMaster
!Corporal Hans Bauer
A Stormwalker gunner who joins Alek's group after the assassination of his father.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Bauer believes he was chosen for the mission because he had no family, which would make it easier for him to undertake a mission that would cause him to be labeled a traitor.
!Hoffman
An engineer who helps Alek escape Austria-Hungary.
* TheEngineer
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Invoked. Like Bauer, he was chosen because
!Lilit
* ActionGirl
* [[spoiler:SelfMadeOrphan: She allows her father to [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice himself]] [[TearJerker in order to destroy the German's Tesla cannon]].]]
Alek's mechaniks and Walker-piloting tutor.
* AcePilot: In his glory days.
* CoolOldGuy
* TheEngineer
* OldMaster
!Corporal Hans Bauer
A Stormwalker gunner who joins Alek's group after the assassination of his father.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Bauer believes he was chosen for the mission because he had no family, which would make it easier for him to undertake a mission that would cause him to be labeled a traitor.
!Hoffman
An engineer who helps Alek escape Austria-Hungary.
* TheEngineer
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Invoked. Like Bauer, he was chosen because
!Lilit
* ActionGirl
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* EffeminateMisogynisticGuy: Before he meets [[ActionGirl Lilit]] and gets some CharacterDevelopment, anyway.
!Lilit
* ActionGirl
* [[spoiler:SelfMadeOrphan: She allows her father to [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifice himself]] [[TearJerker in order to destroy the German's Tesla cannon]].]]
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* CannotTellALie: Up until the third book.
* CatchPhrase: ''[[GratuituousGerman Dummkopf!]]''
* CelibateHero: Alek started out as this because of his title.
* CatchPhrase: ''[[GratuituousGerman Dummkopf!]]''
* CelibateHero: Alek started out as this because of his title.
* EmoTeen: Lampshaded by Volger.
* [[KingIncognito Emperor Incognito]]
* [[KingIncognito Emperor Incognito]]
* RedOniBlueOni: The Blue Oni to Deryn's Red.
* RichInDollarsPoorInSense
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* RichInDollarsPoorInSense
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* WellDoneSonGuy: To Count Volger, who he sees as a father.
* WellDoneSonGuy: To Count Volger, who he sees as a father.
* [[spoiler: BetaCouple: With Dr. Barlow.]]
* FascinatingEyebrow
* FascinatingEyebrow
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* SternTeacher
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Zaven electrocutes himself in his mech to bring down the Tesla cannon, thus saving Deryn, Alek, and everyone aboard the ''Leviathan''.]]
* CatchPhrase: "Barking spiders!"
* FascinatingEyebrow
* JackieRobinsonStory: A minor example.
* TheLadette
* OneOfTheBoys
* FascinatingEyebrow
* JackieRobinsonStory: A minor example.
* TheLadette
* OneOfTheBoys
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* WholesomeCrossdresser
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* [[spoiler: BetaCouple: With Volger.]]
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* LadyOfAdventure
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Revolutionary leader of the CUP (Committee for Union and Progress).
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* MoreDakka
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* MixAndMatchCritters
* MixAndMatchCritters
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!Doctor Nora Barlow
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*BioPunk
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*SweetPollyOliver: [[ValuesDissonance Has to disguise herself as "Dylan" Sharp so she can be in the Air Service.]]
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The X powers. Use [[CaptainObvious machinery.]]
*HumoungusMecha: Their war machines.
*SteamPunk: Said technology. Also, DieselPunk.
!His Serene Highness Prince Aleksandar Von Hohenburg
*AcePilot: Can pilot a [[HumongousMecha Stormwalker]] easily - and at night, too. [[CaptainObvious (Yeah, it's not a common skill. You can't SEE at night.)]]
*CulturedBadass: The "cultured" part is of no use on an airship, much to his annoyance.
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!Wildcount Ernst Volger
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[[folder:Darwinists]]
The X powers. Use genetically modified animals.
[[/folder]]
Charecters from the novel series by Scott Westerfeld:
[[folder:Clankers]]
The X powers. Use [[CaptainObvious machinery.]]
*HumoungusMecha: Their war machines.
*SteamPunk: Said technology. Also, DieselPunk.
!His Serene Highness Prince Aleksandar Von Hohenburg
*AcePilot: Can pilot a [[HumongousMecha Stormwalker]] easily - and at night, too. [[CaptainObvious (Yeah, it's not a common skill. You can't SEE at night.)]]
*CulturedBadass: The "cultured" part is of no use on an airship, much to his annoyance.
*GratuitousGerman
!Wildcount Ernst Volger
*ParentalSubstitute
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[[folder:Darwinists]]
The X powers. Use genetically modified animals.
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