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* RapeIsASpeciaKindOfEvil: One of the ways he tortures the mental selves of his female victims is by sexually abusing them, making what his Stand inflicts a literal form MindRape.
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* RapeIsASpeciaKindOfEvil: RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: One of the ways he tortures the mental selves of his female victims is by sexually abusing them, making what his Stand inflicts a literal form MindRape.
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* RapeIsASpeciaKindOfEvil: One of the ways he tortures the mental selves of his female victims is by sexually abusing them, making what his Stand inflicts a literal form MindRape.
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* OfficialCouple: In this story she's been dating Kamoshida for a while. Justified in that Kamoshida has undergone a major case of AdaptationalHeroism.
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* OfficialCouple: In this story she's been dating Kamoshida for a while. Justified in that It's likely shocking for those who are aware of what Kamoshida is like in canon, but this iteration has undergone a major case of AdaptationalHeroism.
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* GuestStarPartyMember: Temporarily joins Joker, Morgana, and Sumire in rescuing Kasumi.
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* TalentedButTrained: She's a talented gymnast, but she takes her training seriously. Which helps keep her from dropping in performance during gymanstic meets when her energy levels start to feel like they're decreasing.
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* TalentedButTrained: She's a talented gymnast, but she takes her training seriously. Which This helps keep her from dropping in performance during gymanstic meets when her energy levels start to feel like they're decreasing.
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[{{Mecha}} Money For Nothing]]
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[{{Mecha}} Money For for Nothing]]
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Kasumi's twin sister, and a skilled gymnast.\\\
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/87490060 My Castle Stands]] (named after a Music/JTMusic song), creates an overlay that resembles a vast medieval castle, complete with all the typical traps.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/87490060 My Castle Stands]] (named after a Music/JTMusic song), creates an overlay that resembles a vast medieval castle, complete with all the typical traps. Non-Stand users afflicted have their mental selves experience pain without injury, which is reflected in the real world.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108861444 Wax Museum]] (named after an Music/InsaneClownPosse song), creates an overlay designed after an art museum, with more modern security set up such as laser tripwires.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108861444 Wax Museum]] (named after an Music/InsaneClownPosse song), creates an overlay designed after an art museum, with more modern security set up such as laser tripwires. Non-Stand users that are afflicted by the overlay have their mental forms trapped in paintings, creating a false sense of lethargy and overworking.
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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: He's at least willing to admit to his dirty dealings, at least to Strike Back, unlike some other dirty cops who insist they're still benevolent law protectors.
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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: He's at least willing to admit to his dirty dealings, at least to Strike Back, unlike some other dirty cops who insist they're still benevolent law protectors.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/126228796 Space Oddity]] (named after a song by Music/DavidBowie), creates an overlay in the form of a giant space station that can produce a multitude of robots. It also houses a starship that acts as his Stand's physical form.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/126228796 Space Oddity]] (named after a song by Music/DavidBowie), creates an overlay in the form of a giant space station that can produce a multitude of robots.robots, especially from people's mental forms to create a false sense of blind obedience. It also houses a starship that acts as his Stand's physical form.
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[PlayingWithFire Life Is Showtime]], [[TheArchmage Life is Showtime Requiem]]
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[PlayingWithFire Life Is is Showtime]], [[TheArchmage Life is Showtime Requiem]]
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* ByThePowerOfGrayskull: "Life Is Showtime! Burn and Blaze!"
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* ByThePowerOfGrayskull: "Life Is is Showtime! Burn and Blaze!"
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* InSpiteOfANail: He still ends up punching a SadistTeacher in the face and is [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized]] for it like his canon counterpart. But instead of Kamoshida, he punches Toshiro Ishishiro for doing what canon Kamoshida did ([[ForWantOfANail minus getting his leg broken]]).
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* InSpiteOfANail: He still ends up punching a SadistTeacher in the face and is [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized]] for it like his canon counterpart. But instead of Kamoshida, he punches Toshiro Ishishiro for doing what canon Kamoshida did ([[ForWantOfANail ([[PointOfDivergence minus getting his leg broken]]).
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He's still a criminal but unlike his canon counterpart is a NobleDemon with many standards and respects those on the side of the law. He's also never shown gleefully extorting innocent people.
* AdaptationalHeroism: In canon, he was a CorruptCorporateExecutive who saw Haru as nothing more than another tool to expand his influence. Here, he's the polar opposite.
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* GoodParents: He's everything his canon counterpart isn't. He's willing to let Haru marry someone she loves, and hates that Junpei went behind his back to choose a fiance for her, and he puts her well-being above his company's. Heck, he doesn't seem to bat an eye at the idea of her being a Phantom Thief.
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* GoodParents: He's everything his canon counterpart isn't. He's willing to let Haru marry someone she loves, and hates that Junpei went behind his back to choose a fiance fiancé for her, and he puts her well-being above his company's. Heck, he doesn't seem to bat an eye at the idea of her being a Phantom Thief.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108982417 The Silent Force]] (named after an Music/WithinTemptation album), causes anyone who hears his words to be moved emotionally and resonate with his feelings, but only if he speaks with conviction.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108982417 The Silent Force]] (named after an a Music/WithinTemptation album), causes anyone who hears his words to be moved emotionally and resonate with his feelings, but only if he speaks with conviction.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/97866951 Soul Kitchen]] (named after a Music/TheDoors song), can infuse a substance into Sojiro's cooking that improves the energy of whoever consumes it.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/97866951 Soul Kitchen]] (named after a Music/TheDoors song), song by Music/TheDoors), can infuse a substance into Sojiro's cooking that improves the energy of whoever consumes it.
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* UnderstandingBoyfriend: He's one of the few people who knows about Kawakami moonlighting as a maid, but understand why she feels she needs to and remains supportive regardless.
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* UnderstandingBoyfriend: He's one of the few people who knows about Kawakami moonlighting as a maid, but understand understands why she feels she needs to and remains supportive regardless.
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1.) Too fantastical. 2.) Character reaction because of a fantastical aspect. 3.) Too fantastical. 4.) Not an outcome. Conversational Troping.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: She can't use her Stand to give medicine an effect it doesn't normally have, such as making a painkiller suddenly heal injuries.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: He comes to realize that even emotional pain is necessary to grow, as without it, Stand users wouldn't be able to control or even manifest their powers.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Her Stand may be machine-like, but she's still a flesh and blood human and overworking a Stand is like overworking a muscle. Taking on too many maid shifts causes her to get overworked and she needs to be hospitalized as a result.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Strike Back notes that despite exposing Nagisa's masterminding of the phishing scam, the police still have to question Kaneshiro to make sure he wasn't involved.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108861444 Wax Musuem]] (named after an Music/InsaneClownPosse song), creates an overlay designed after an art museum, with more modern security set up such as laser tripwires.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/108861444 Wax Musuem]] Museum]] (named after an Music/InsaneClownPosse song), creates an overlay designed after an art museum, with more modern security set up such as laser tripwires.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109354513 Walk Like An Egyptian]] (named after a Music/TheBangles song), manifests a massive desert for its overlay, and it allows Madara the ability to manipulate the internet however he wants.
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His Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109354513 Walk Like An Egyptian]] (named after a Music/TheBangles song), song by Music/TheBangles), manifests a massive desert for its overlay, and it allows Madara the ability to manipulate the internet however he wants.
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A member of Remnant who seeks to control the information sector.
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A member of Remnant who seeks to control the information sector.
sector.\\\
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109167510 Fortune Teller]] (named after a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benny_Spellman Benny Spellman]] song), can tell her how a particular fate can be changed when used in conjunction wit her fortune-telling.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109167510 Fortune Teller]] (named after a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benny_Spellman Benny Spellman]] song), can tell her how a particular fate can be changed when used in conjunction wit with her fortune-telling.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109355082 News of the World]] (named after a Music/TheJam song), appears as a pair of sunglasses that allows Ohya to record anything she's seen or heard. Once transferred to the media, it immediately grabs the attention of whoever watches it.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/109355082 News of the World]] (named after a Music/TheJam song), song by Music/TheJam), appears as a pair of sunglasses that allows Ohya to record anything she's seen or heard. Once transferred to the media, it immediately grabs the attention of whoever watches it.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Mishima mentioens that he and the volleyball team actually remember the mental trip through Ishishiro's overlay while other students remember nothing. It turns out The Call can actually send out waves that protect people mentally.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Mishima mentioens mentions that he and the volleyball team actually remember the mental trip through Ishishiro's overlay while other students remember nothing. It turns out The Call can actually send out waves that protect people mentally.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/88212247 Panacea]] (named after a Music/{{Rush}} song), secretes a compound from its spikes that can increase the effectiveness of any medicinal formula.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/88212247 Panacea]] (named after a Music/{{Rush}} Music/{{Rush|Band}} song), secretes a compound from its spikes that can increase the effectiveness of any medicinal formula.
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* DecompositeCharacter: She winds up taking on a lot of Kasumi's role in ''VideoGame/Persona5 Royal'', the only exception being Kasumi's position on the Phantom Thieves/Strike Back.
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* DecompositeCharacter: She winds up taking on a lot of Kasumi's Sumire's role in ''VideoGame/Persona5 Royal'', the only exception being Kasumi's Sumire's position on the Phantom Thieves/Strike Back.
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* HumanAlien: All of Remnant turns out to be this, but he's the first one noted as such due to Noir's Requiem Stand.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/86789695 Elevation]] (named after an Music/{{U2}} song), creates energy streams from her hands that defy gravity, allowing anyone standing on them to literally float in midair.
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Her Stand, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34070629/chapters/86789695 Elevation]] (named after an a Music/{{U2}} song), creates energy streams from her hands that defy gravity, allowing anyone standing on them to literally float in midair.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Mishima mentiowhen embedded into a smartphonens that he and the volleyball team actually remember the mental trip through Ishishiro's overlay while other students remember nothing. It turns out The Call can actually send out waves that protect people mentally.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Mishima mentiowhen embedded into a smartphonens mentioens that he and the volleyball team actually remember the mental trip through Ishishiro's overlay while other students remember nothing. It turns out The Call can actually send out waves that protect people mentally.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: She may believe in taking down criminals, but only for crimes they've actually committed. This leaves things every personal for her when she learns Nagisa is trying to frame Kaneshiro for drug trafficking.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: She may believe in taking down criminals, but only for crimes they've actually committed. This leaves things every very personal for her when she learns Nagisa is trying to frame Kaneshiro for drug trafficking.
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* InSpiteOfANail: He still winds up killed off by the story's conspiracy, leaving Monarch in need of new Champion to empower her.
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* InSpiteOfANail: He still winds up killed off by the story's conspiracy, leaving Monarch in need of a new Champion to empower her.
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* AdaptationalOriginConnection: In this story, he was able to buy the model space ship he wanted as a boy, but his father was too poor to buy for him. It became such a treasured keepsake, with only Haru being more important to him, that it becomes a source of power for him when Monarch uses it to hold his Akuma.
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* GoodParents: He's everything his canon counterpart isn't. He's willing to let Haru marry someone she loves, and hates that Junpei went behind his back to choose a fiance for her, and he puts her well-being above his companies. Heck, he doesn't seem to bat an eye at the idea of her being a Phantom Thief.
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* GoodParents: He's everything his canon counterpart isn't. He's willing to let Haru marry someone she loves, and hates that Junpei went behind his back to choose a fiance for her, and he puts her well-being above his companies.company's. Heck, he doesn't seem to bat an eye at the idea of her being a Phantom Thief.
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[SensorCharacter Shoot to Thrill]]
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!!!'''Stand:''' [[SensorCharacter [[HeadsUpDisplay Shoot to Thrill]]
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