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* PunnyName: The kanji for Hase's name can be read as "run straightaway into the woods" and well, look at her talent. [[spoiler: Her morning runs around the woods are also brought up by Maede in the trial, and used as evidence against her.]]
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* PunnyName: The kanji for Hase's name can be read as "run straightaway into the woods" and well, look at her talent. [[spoiler: Her morning runs around the woods are also brought up by Maede Maeda in the trial, and used as evidence against her.]]
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* CircusBrat: Her family works in the travelling circus known as the Cirque de Lune, with Hotaru being part of the acts as well.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Hotaru is only 4'11, and is not very muscular. Regardless, she's the Super High School Level Weightlifter,and part of a travelling circus act involving [[{{ItRunsInTheFamily}} her weightlifting to boot.
strength apparently passed on through generations.]]
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* DarkSecret: [[spoiler: One of the first lines in the prologue implies that Riley has one of these.]]
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* DarkSecret: [[spoiler: One of the first lines in the prologue implies that Riley has one of these.]]
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* FlowerMotifs: [[spoiler: Suzuki is associated with red spider lilies which symbolize death, hence her being the first to die.
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* PunnyName: The kanji for Hase's name can be read as "run straightaway into the woods" and well, look at hertalent.
talent. [[spoiler: Her morning runs around the woods are also brought up by Maede in the trial, and used as evidence against her.]]
* [[spoiler: TheseHandsHaveKilled]]: [[spoiler: Hase murder Suzuki in Chapter One.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Teruya reveals a VERY black and white view on “criminals” at the first trial, despite the fact that she spent the first chapter trying to reconnect with Nori, Nakajima, the Super High School Level GANG LEADER who had one of the worst secrets in the group... one she knew about beforehand.
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* [[spoiler: SurvivorGuilt]]: [[Regarding her mother.]]
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* [[spoiler: IdentityAmnesia]]: [[spoiler: The secret motive reveals that he doesn’t remember his talent, his past, his family, or even his own name, which he assumed was Yoshi Houjou because it was what was on written in his Monopad.notebook. {{Word of God}} confirms that it’s not his real name.]]
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* AudienceSurrogate: Maromi will often voice theories or observations that the author has heard from readers, such as his reasoning for [[spoiler:accusing Hamasaki in the first trial]].
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*SacrificedBasicSkillForAwesomeTraining: Akiyama is an insane badass hunter! Buuut, he has no social skills. He also doesn't know how to cook eggs.
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*[[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]: [[spoiler: Pretty self-explanatory...]]
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* Deuteragonist: {{Deuteragonist}}: Hamasaki seems to be this so far, and Riley and him get along easily. He borders on Sidekick {{Sidekick}} territory, as the two are together more often than not, and Riley even has to calm down an argument between Nakajima and him.
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* PunnyName: The kanji for Teruya's name can be read as "illuminate the valley with truth" which can obviously refer to her seeing herself as the reporter of truth and justice.
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!!!Super High School Level Horror NovelistNovelist
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* DarkSecret: [[spoiler: One of the first lines in the prologue implies that Riley has one of these.]]
--> [[spoiler: "As I fell into unconsciousness and into silence, I wondered, “What did I do to deserve this…?” Although really, I already knew the answer…"]]
* DarkSecret: [[spoiler: One of the first lines in the prologue implies that Riley has one of these.]]
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* ItRunsInTheFamily: Suzuki picked up her talent from her father, after reading some of the reviews that he wrote.
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!!Riley Starr
!!!Super High School Level Chess Player
!!Madoka Hamasaki
!!!Super High School Level Good Luck
!!Yoshi Houjou
!!!Super High School Level ???
!!Sango Tamishiro
!!!Super High School Level Ping Pong Player
!!Kirara Suzuki
!!!Super High School Level Movie Critic
!!Nori Nakajima
!!!Super High School Level Gang Leader
!!Haruka Chiba
!!!Super High School Level Herpetologist
!!Naoki Hase
!!!Super High School Level Marathon Runner
!!Minori Teruya
!!!Super High School Level Journalist
!!Akihiko Akiyama
!!!Super High School Level Hunter
!!Shigeo Sakaguchi
!!!Super High School Level Graffiti Artist
!!Shinpi Kobayashi
!!!Super High School Level Paranormal Investigator
!!Hotaru Maeda
!!!Super High School Level Weightlifter
!!Masahiko Soga
!!!Super High School Level Costume Designer
!!Ayumo Maromi
!!!Super High School Level Voice Actor
!!Ran Eto
!!!Super High School Level Horror Novelist
!!!Super High School Level Chess Player
!!Madoka Hamasaki
!!!Super High School Level Good Luck
!!Yoshi Houjou
!!!Super High School Level ???
!!Sango Tamishiro
!!!Super High School Level Ping Pong Player
!!Kirara Suzuki
!!!Super High School Level Movie Critic
!!Nori Nakajima
!!!Super High School Level Gang Leader
!!Haruka Chiba
!!!Super High School Level Herpetologist
!!Naoki Hase
!!!Super High School Level Marathon Runner
!!Minori Teruya
!!!Super High School Level Journalist
!!Akihiko Akiyama
!!!Super High School Level Hunter
!!Shigeo Sakaguchi
!!!Super High School Level Graffiti Artist
!!Shinpi Kobayashi
!!!Super High School Level Paranormal Investigator
!!Hotaru Maeda
!!!Super High School Level Weightlifter
!!Masahiko Soga
!!!Super High School Level Costume Designer
!!Ayumo Maromi
!!!Super High School Level Voice Actor
!!Ran Eto
!!!Super High School Level Horror Novelist
