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** IncestSubtext: Even with his early death, this is still very much present through the books. Cathy often has a sense of competing with her mother for her father's attention, and never shuts up about how hot he is.
--->'''Cathy''': Was it so terrible what our mother did, to marry her half-uncle when he was only three years older than she? No woman with a heart could have resisted him. I know I couldn't have.
--->'''Cathy''': Was it so terrible what our mother did, to marry her half-uncle when he was only three years older than she? No woman with a heart could have resisted him. I know I couldn't have.
* IncestSubtext: Even with his early death, this is still very much present through the books with her father. Cathy often has a sense of competing with her mother for her father's attention, and never shuts up about how hot he is.
--->'''Cathy''': Was it so terrible what our mother did, to marry her half-uncle when he was only three years older than she? No woman with a heart could have resisted him. I know I couldn't have.
--->'''Cathy''': Was it so terrible what our mother did, to marry her half-uncle when he was only three years older than she? No woman with a heart could have resisted him. I know I couldn't have.
* IncestSubtext: It's basically textual that Christopher is sexually attracted to--or at least very confused by--his mother Corrine. Corrine plays into it a bit, what with her spinning around in negligees and constantly cradling him to her breast, and one very memorable moment when she kisses him full on the lips.
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** IncestSubtext: It's basically textual that Christopher is sexually attracted to--or at least very confused by--his mother Corrine. Corrine plays into it a bit, what with her spinning around in negligees and constantly cradling him to her breast, and one very memorable moment when she kisses him full on the lips.
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* [[spoiler:AngstySurvivingTwin: Carrie is never the same after Cory dies.]]
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* [[spoiler:AngstySurvivingTwin: AngstySurvivingTwin: Carrie is never the same after [[spoiler:her twin Cory dies.]]
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* BrokenBird: After the attic she's never really alright.
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* BrokenBird: After the attic she's never really alright.alright, in part because [[spoiler:Cory is dead]].
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* CreepyTwins: Cory and Carrie were perceived as such, though they weren't aware of it.
** Probably fuelled by the paperback cover art, as well as their thin bodies, oversized heads, pale skin and the dark circles under their eyes from [[spoiler: arsenic poisoning]].
** Probably fuelled by the paperback cover art, as well as their thin bodies, oversized heads, pale skin and the dark circles under their eyes from [[spoiler: arsenic poisoning]].
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* CreepyTwins: Cory and Carrie were perceived as such, though they weren't aware of it.
**it. Probably fuelled by the paperback cover art, as well as their thin bodies, oversized heads, pale skin and the dark circles under their eyes from [[spoiler: arsenic poisoning]].
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* [[spoiler:KillTheCutie]]
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* [[spoiler:KillTheCutie]]KillTheCutie: [[spoiler:He is the only one of the four children to die in the attic of the arsenic poisoning.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeadAllAlong: Has in reality been for almost a year when the remain kids finally escape.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeadAllAlong: Has DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:Malcolm has in reality been for almost a year when the remain remaining three kids finally escape.]]
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** {{Portmanteau}}: Julian + Cory = Jory
{{Portmanteau}}: Julian + Cory = Jory
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* YoureNotMyFather: Bart pulls this frequently and aggressively with his Chris. Bart's [[GlorifiedSpermDonor biological father]] died before he was born, and Chris has been his stepfather since he was a toddler. He is the man who raised him, and the only father Bart can remember. Chris, for his part, unquestionably considers Bart his son, loves him, and holds out hope their relationship will improve someday. Bart refuses to call Chris his father, [[CallingParentsByTheirName calling him by his name]] or simply not speaking to him at all.
** He denies Cindy as his sister (AdoptionDiss), and sometimes Jory as his brother too (HalfSiblingAngst).
** He denies Cindy as his sister (AdoptionDiss), and sometimes Jory as his brother too (HalfSiblingAngst).
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* YoureNotMyFather: Bart pulls this frequently and aggressively with his Chris. Bart's [[GlorifiedSpermDonor biological father]] died before he was born, and Chris has been his stepfather since he was a toddler. He is the man who raised him, and the only father Bart can remember. Chris, for his part, unquestionably considers Bart his son, loves him, and holds out hope their relationship will improve someday. But Bart refuses to call Chris his father, [[CallingParentsByTheirName calling him by his name]] or simply not speaking to him at all.
**all. He also denies Cindy as his sister (AdoptionDiss), in an AdoptionDiss, and sometimes Jory as his brother too (HalfSiblingAngst).in HalfSiblingAngst. He, thankfully, does get better by the end of ''Seeds'' [[spoiler:However, it's only ''after'' Chris dies that Bart acknowledges that Chris was his father and admits having loved him.]]
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** He, thankfully, does get better by the end of ''Seeds''... However, it's only ''after'' Chris has died that Bart acknowledges that Chris was his father and admits having loved him.
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* HasAType:
-->'''Melodie:''' It seems Cindy likes dark-haired men who look like her brothers.
-->'''Melodie:''' It seems Cindy likes dark-haired men who look like her brothers.
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* HasAType:
-->'''Melodie:''' ItHasAType: As Melodie says, it seems Cindy likes dark-haired men who look like her brothers.
-->'''Melodie:''' It
The twin children of Jory and Melodie.
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Corrine's second husband.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: Julian changed his legal name to distance himself from his parents as well, both in a professional and personal capacity.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: Julian changed his legal name to distance himself from his parents as well, both in a professional and personal capacity. [[spoiler:Zigzagged when Cathy--with his mother's approval--buries him under the name Julian Marquet Rosencoff.]]
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** Zigzagged when Cathy--with his mother's approval--buries him under the name Julian Marquet Rosencoff.
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* FollowInMyFootsteps: The Rosencoffs are a long line of Russian ballet stars.
** Madame Marisha claims she tried not to do this with Julian, but she ultimately did.
** Madame Marisha claims she tried not to do this with Julian, but she ultimately did.
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* FollowInMyFootsteps: The Rosencoffs are a long line of Russian ballet stars.
**stars. Madame Marisha claims she tried not to do this with Julian, but she ultimately did.did. By the time Jory comes along, Madame Marisha is over any such qualms about forcing dance onto kids.
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** By the time Jory comes along, Madame Marisha is over any such qualms about forcing dance onto kids.
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* SternTeacher
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* EveryoneLovesBlondes[=/=]LongHairIsFeminine: Cathy has long blonde hair and is seen as being very beautiful.
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* EveryoneLovesBlondes[=/=]LongHairIsFeminine: EveryoneLovesBlondes: Cathy has long blonde hair and is seen as being very beautiful.beautiful, to the point many men desire her.
* LongHairIsFeminine: Cathy's blonde hair is very long, and she's a feminine character who takes up ballet as a career.
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* PlotTriggeringDeath[=/=]SmallRoleBigImpact: His death leaves the family without a source of income, driving Corrine to crawl back to parents and beg for forgiveness. He dies after the first chapter of the original book and roughly the first five minutes of both film adaptations, but if not for his death, the entire series never would have happened.
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* PlotTriggeringDeath[=/=]SmallRoleBigImpact: PlotTriggeringDeath: His death leaves the family without a source of income, driving Corrine to crawl back to parents and beg for forgiveness. He dies after the first chapter of the original book and roughly the first five minutes of both film adaptations, but if not for his death, the entire series never would have happened.
SmallRoleBigImpact: He dies after the first chapter of the original book and roughly within the first five minutes of both film adaptations, but if not for his death, the entire series never would have happened.
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* CreepyChild[=/=]TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior
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* DomesticAbuse[=/=]MaritalRapeLicense: With his first wife Julia.
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%% * DomesticAbuse[=/=]MaritalRapeLicense: MaritalRapeLicense: With his first wife Julia.
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* MiniatureSeniorCitizens[=/=]TheNapoleon: Elderly and under 5 feet tall.
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* MiniatureSeniorCitizens[=/=]TheNapoleon: MiniatureSeniorCitizens: Elderly and under 5 feet tall.
