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Mr./Ms./Mrs. Reader.
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Mr./Ms./Mrs. Reader.
John Q Troper.
(Alternately, use Mrs., Ms. Miss., and Jane - the method of address remains still the same.)
(Alternately, use Mrs., Ms. Miss., and Jane - the method of address remains still the same.)
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* CatchPhrase[=/=]VerbalTic: Is it a CatchPhrase or a VerbalTic? It could be either, so take your pick. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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* CatchPhrase[=/=]VerbalTic: Is it a CatchPhrase or a VerbalTic? It could be either, so please, take your pick. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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*** [[spoiler:She's also an alien? Knows about the red seeds? She grows her own saplings?]]
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* Expy: Of Cesare from TheCabinetOfDrCaligari
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He is the mysterious Harry's aide. When it comes to his work, he certainly makes the grade. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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He is the my, that is to say, Mr. Stewart's, mysterious Harry's aide. When it comes to his work, he certainly makes the grade. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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* RhymesOnADime: Mr. Tillotson likes to rhyme. No one's sure why he does it all the time. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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* RhymesOnADime: Mr. Tillotson likes to rhyme. No one's sure why he does it all the time. Although it might just be the name, of my, that is to say, Mr. Stewart's, game. [[CatchPhrase So says Mr. Stewart.]]
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* BigFun: He calls himself a jolly old bumble bee spreading pollen and is quite well liked by the Greenvale inhabitants. [[spoiler: [[FatBastard It's an act]]]]
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* BigFun: He calls himself a jolly "jolly old bumble bee bee, spreading pollen wherever I go" and is quite well liked by the Greenvale inhabitants. [[spoiler: [[FatBastard It's an act]]]]act]]...however, the desciption he gave is [[{{Foreshadowing}} quite]] [[TheCorruption accurate.]]]]
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Looks quite similar to John Goodman.
** Some people were convinced that he looks like Gabe Newell.
** Some people were convinced that he looks like Gabe Newell.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Looks quite similar to Various gamers see him as John Goodman.
** Some people were convinced that he looks likeGoodman, Gabe Newell. Newell or Michael Moore.
** Some people were convinced that he looks like
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* PluckyComicRelief: In fact, the background music that often plays during his scenes is titled "Comic Relief. [[spoiler:Subverted with his true personality.]]
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* PluckyComicRelief: In fact, the background music that often plays during his scenes is titled "Comic Relief. [[spoiler:Subverted with his [[CompleteMonster true personality.]]]]]]
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* [[spoiler:YourHeadAsplode: Or something that emerged from it, anyway.]]
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: York has two pretty much healed scars on the left side of his face. [[spoiler:Zach's scars, however, are worse, one of them even screws up his eye.]]
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* TheUnsmile: York simply cannot smile like a natural human being.
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* MostAnnoyingSound: Yes, I know your pot is getting cold. I'm driving the fastest car in the game and am practically flooring it. Now shut the fuck up, lady!
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* MostAnnoyingSound: Yes, I know your pot is getting cold. I'm driving the fastest car in the game and am practically flooring it. Now shut the fuck up, lady!
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* KillItWithFire: Actually not the best idea, as it causes them to go apeshit and charge towards you, causing damage on impact. However, it does make fighting the Crawling Shadows easier.
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* KillItWithFire: Actually not the best idea, as it causes them to go apeshit nuts and charge towards you, causing damage on impact. However, it does make fighting the Crawling Shadows easier.
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* PluckyComicRelief: In fact, the background music that often plays during his scenes is titled "Comic Relief". [[spoiler:Subverted with his true personality.]]
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* PluckyComicRelief: In fact, the background music that often plays during his scenes is titled "Comic Relief".Relief. [[spoiler:Subverted with his true personality.]]
* [[spoiler:PsychopathicManchild: Interesting how an extradimensional alien fits human definitions of immaturity.]]
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** [[spoiler:Zach, on the other hand...]]
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Just call him York. That's what everyone calls him.
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A FBI agent with a lot of weird mannerisms, but a big talent in the field of profiling. He is very passionate about the cases he inverstergates, as well as getting his daily cup of coffee. Just call him York. That's what everyone calls him.
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** She does give York some pretty nifty items for putting up with her babbling though. The catch is that you have to drive her all over town. For no reason.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: He can run pretty fast and has some great stamina for a fat guy. [[Spoiler: His first form during his boss fight can really move as well.]]
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* {{Acrofatic}}: He can run pretty fast and has some great stamina for a fat guy. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: His first form during his boss fight can really move as well.]]
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* [[{{Acrofatic}}: He can run pretty fast and has some great stamina for a fat guy. [[Spoiler: His first form during his boss fight can really move as well.]]
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* [[{{Acrofatic}}: {{Acrofatic}}: He can run pretty fast and has some great stamina for a fat guy. [[Spoiler: His first form during his boss fight can really move as well.]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Acrofatic}}: [[{{Acrofatic}}: He can run pretty fast and has some great stamina for a fat guy. [[Spoiler: His first form during his boss fight can really move.move as well.]]
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A travelling sapling salesman who frequently stops in Greenvale. Forrest is almost always seen with a tree sapling in one hand and his CanineCompanion Willie by his side.
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A travelling sapling salesman who frequently stops in Greenvale. Forrest is almost always seen with a tree sapling in one hand and his CanineCompanion Willie by his side. He also appeared in the PS2 game, ''Spy Fiction'', which were also written by SWERY.
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* TheStoic: York is unflappable. He ''cannot be flapped.''
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Looks quite similar to John Goodman.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Looks quite similar to John Goodman.Goodman.
** Some people were convinced that he looks like Gabe Newell.
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* FairCop: Not too hard on the eyes, and that's ''before'' she puts on a dress.
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* HairstyleInertia: Bizarrely subverted in a serious case of FridgeLogic. [[spoiler:His child self doesn't look a thing like he does as an adult... but does look like [[http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/videogames/detail-page/B002WSR8BC.01.sm.jpg his original character design]], which was changed after it was deemed too blatantly similar to TwinPeaks. Guess the developers didn't have time to change the younger self's appearance as well.]]
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* HairstyleInertia: Bizarrely subverted in a serious case of FridgeLogic. [[spoiler:His child self doesn't look a thing like he does as an adult... but does look like [[http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/videogames/detail-page/B002WSR8BC.01.sm.jpg his original character design]], which was changed after it was deemed too blatantly similar to TwinPeaks.TwinPeaks' Dale Cooper. Guess the developers didn't have time to change the younger self's appearance as well.]]
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* HairstyleInertia: Bizarrely subverted in a serious case of FridgeLogic. [[spoiler:His child self doens't look a thing like he does as an adult... but does look like [[http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/videogames/detail-page/B002WSR8BC.01.sm.jpg his original character design]], which was changed after it was deemed too blatantly similar to TwinPeaks. Guess the developers didn't have time to change the younger self's appearance as well.]]
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* HairstyleInertia: Bizarrely subverted in a serious case of FridgeLogic. [[spoiler:His child self doens't doesn't look a thing like he does as an adult... but does look like [[http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/videogames/detail-page/B002WSR8BC.01.sm.jpg his original character design]], which was changed after it was deemed too blatantly similar to TwinPeaks. Guess the developers didn't have time to change the younger self's appearance as well.]]
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* HairstyleInertia: Bizarrely subverted in a serious case of FridgeLogic. [[spoiler:His child self doens't look a thing like he does as an adult... but does look like [[http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/videogames/detail-page/B002WSR8BC.01.sm.jpg his original character design]], which was changed after it was deemed too blatantly similar to TwinPeaks. Guess the developers didn't have time to change the younger self's appearance as well.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Transsexual}}]]: [[spoiler:Seems to highly be implied, what with his feminine nature and being counted as a "Goddess" in the end.]]
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* [[spoiler:NightmareFace: I SEEEEEEE YOU ZACH!]]
