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!!Arctus (Cubchoo)
A young Cubchoo that Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.
A young Cubchoo that Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.
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A young Cubchoo that Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.
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* AnIcePerson: Being an ice-type and sporting some strong ice-type moves makes him this.
!!Rhydon
* CompositeCharacter: He takes cues from Ash's Charizard from canon, being arrogant and disloyal to his trainer.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Subverted. Rhydon doesn't immediately work with Ash and even tries to attack him after recognizing him. But when Ash earns his respect, he becomes more open to working with him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rhydon hardly gets along with ''anyone.'' When he and Ash fight Brock's Rampardos, Rhydon eventually just stops listening to him.
!!Gyarados
!!Rhydon
* CompositeCharacter: He takes cues from Ash's Charizard from canon, being arrogant and disloyal to his trainer.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Subverted. Rhydon doesn't immediately work with Ash and even tries to attack him after recognizing him. But when Ash earns his respect, he becomes more open to working with him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rhydon hardly gets along with ''anyone.'' When he and Ash fight Brock's Rampardos, Rhydon eventually just stops listening to him.
!!Gyarados
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* TheBusCameBack: As of chapter 12, he's fully recovered and back on Ash's team.
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* TheBusCameBack: As of chapter 12, 13, he's fully recovered and back on Ash's team.
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* TheBusCameBack: As of chapter 28, he's fully recovered and back on Ash's team.
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* TheBusCameBack: As of chapter 28, 12, he's fully recovered and back on Ash's team.
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* AdaptationalBadass: As early as his Chimchar days, he's shown prowess as a combat prodigy. Paul notes that he actively looks for and attacks weak-points even without his input.
* AdaptationalWimp: In regards to his ''Blaze'' ability at least. In the anime, it turned him into an all out ''[[GlassCannon Glass]]'' '''[[UpTo11 Nuke]]''' and made him an unstoppable force of nature even during his Chimchar days. Here, it's noted that his ''Blaze'' ability is about on par with any standard Chimchar.
* AdaptationalWimp: In regards to his ''Blaze'' ability at least. In the anime, it turned him into an all out ''[[GlassCannon Glass]]'' '''[[UpTo11 Nuke]]''' and made him an unstoppable force of nature even during his Chimchar days. Here, it's noted that his ''Blaze'' ability is about on par with any standard Chimchar.
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* AdaptationalBadass: As early as his Chimchar days, he's shown prowess as a combat prodigy. Paul notes that he actively looks for and attacks weak-points weak points even without his input.
* AdaptationalWimp: In regards to his ''Blaze'' ability at least. In the anime, it turned him into anall out all-out ''[[GlassCannon Glass]]'' '''[[UpTo11 '''[[ExaggeratedTrope Nuke]]''' and made him an unstoppable force of nature even during his Chimchar days. Here, it's noted that his ''Blaze'' ability is about on par with any standard Chimchar.
* AdaptationalWimp: In regards to his ''Blaze'' ability at least. In the anime, it turned him into an
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* CombatPragmatist: He actively seeks to exploit enemy weak-points, and unlike most Pokémon, he doesn't need his trainer's input to do so.
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* CombatPragmatist: He actively seeks to exploit enemy weak-points, weak points, and unlike most Pokémon, he doesn't need his trainer's input to do so.
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* PlayingWithFire: Naturally possesses fire type moves such as ember and flame wheel.
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* PlayingWithFire: Naturally possesses fire type Fire-type moves such as ember Ember and flame wheel.
Wheel.
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* AdaptationalBadass: He learns Volt Tackle as early as the Kanto region rather than during the Hoenn region.
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* AdaptationalBadass: He learns his most powerful move, Volt Tackle Tackle, as early as the Kanto region rather than during the Hoenn region.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He doesn't go through his initial bout of disloyalty and rudeness that he did when he first became Ash's partner.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He doesn't go through his initial bout of disloyalty and rudeness that he did when he first became Ash's partner.partner, though early on, he does enjoy using his electricity to shock Ash for fun.
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* CompositeCharacter: He takes cues from Ash's Charizard from canon, being arrogant and disloyal to his trainer.
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* Jerkass: Rhydon hardly gets along with ''anyone.'' [[spoiler: When he and Ash fight Brock's Rampardos, Rhydon eventually just stops listening to him.]]
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* Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: Rhydon hardly gets along with ''anyone.'' [[spoiler: When he and Ash fight Brock's Rampardos, Rhydon eventually just stops listening to him.]]
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A young Cubchoo that [[spoiler: Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.]]
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A young Cubchoo that [[spoiler: Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.]]
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A young Cubchoo that [[spoiler: Ash receives after winning the St Anne Pokemon Tournament.]]
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* LittlePowerBigPotential: Little Cubchoo Arctus will one day grow to be a big, powerful Beartic.
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* TakingTheBullet: Pikachu does this during the Game Corner Incident, leaping in front of Proton's Weavile to protect Ash and taking its attack - something that almost '''''kills''''' him.
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* TakingTheBullet: Pikachu does this during the Game [[spoiler:Game Corner Incident, leaping in front of Proton's Weavile to protect Ash and taking its attack - something that almost '''''kills''''' him.
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* TakingTheBullet: Pikachu does this during the Game Corner Incident, leaping in front of Proton's Weavile to protect Ash and taking its attack - something that almost '''''kills''''' him.
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[[spoiler: * TakingTheBullet: Pikachu does this during the Game Corner Incident, leaping in front of Proton's Weavile to protect Ash and taking its attack - something that almost '''''kills''''' him.
him.]]
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* LittlePower,BigPotential: Little Cubchoo Arctus will one day grow to be a big, powerful Beartic.
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* LittlePower,BigPotential: LittlePowerBigPotential: Little Cubchoo Arctus will one day grow to be a big, powerful Beartic.
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Jerkass: Rhydon hardly gets along with ''anyone.'' [[spoiler: When he and Ash fight Brock's Rampardos, Rhydon eventually just stops listening to him.
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