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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Dwight is shown to be a big goofball, cracking jokes and making strange concoctions. Later in the story, he [[spoiler:rapes Molly Heaton and beats Tommy to death with a hockey stick in a fit of rage]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him to focus on his hockey career, he [[spoiler:rapes Molly]]. When Tommy confronted him at the ink rink, [[spoiler:Dwight beat him to death with a hockey stick]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him to focus on his hockey career, he [[spoiler:rapes Molly]]. When Tommy confronted him at the ink rink, [[spoiler:Dwight beat him to death with a hockey stick]].
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Dwight is shown to be a big goofball, cracking jokes and making strange concoctions. Later in the story, he [[spoiler:rapes [[spoiler:drugs and rapes Molly Heaton and Heaton, then beats Tommy to death with a hockey stick in a fit of rage]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him to focus on his hockey career, he [[spoiler:rapesMolly]].Molly at a party]]. When Tommy confronted him at the ink rink, [[spoiler:Dwight beat him to death with a hockey stick]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him to focus on his hockey career, he [[spoiler:rapes
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him, him to focus on his hockey career, he [[spoiler:rapes Molly]]. When Tommy confronted him at the ink rink, [[spoiler:Dwight beat him to death with a hockey stick]].
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Fights with Tommy, [[spoiler: rapes his girlfriend and murders him]].
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Fights with Tommy, [[spoiler: rapes his girlfriend girlfriend, and murders him]].
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: While evil Evil is somewhat of a stretch, seeing that he didn't kill Tommy. But despite being a general {{Jerkass}}, the reason he wanted the case reopened was to prove to his son that he was not a killer.
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* AwwTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Despite being a general {{Jerkass}} to Tommy, he does still care for him as his brother, eventually gifting him his hockey stick. During the exhibition match at the end, he sees Tommy's ghost.
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* MoralMyopia: Is unrepentant about [[spoiler:raping Tommy's girlfriend to get back at him]], but [[spoiler:murderously]] flips out at Tommy when he insults him.
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Hockey player for the Manayunk Chieftains, Cullen had a fight with Tommy in the ink rink. He was the prime suspect for Tommy's murder, but due to lack of evidence, the charges were dropped. Nevertheless, a cloud of suspicion would follow Cullen him for years. Now, eager to redeem himself in the eyes of his son Jason, Cullen approached the detectives with an alibi, backed up by his ex-girlfriend Brenda Patterson.
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DisproportionateRetribution: Angry that Tommy was neglecting him, he [[spoiler:rapes Molly]]. When Tommy confronted him at the ink rink, [[spoiler:Dwight beat him to death with a hockey stick]].
* MoralMyopia: Is unrepentant about [[spoiler:raping Tommy's girlfriend to get back at him]], but [[spoiler:murderously]] flips out at Tommy when he insults him.
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* MoralMyopia: Is unrepentant about [[spoiler:raping Tommy's girlfriend to get back at him]], but [[spoiler:murderously]] flips out at Tommy when he insults him.
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