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* FromCamouflageToCriminal: Highland went from a dishonorable discharge, to private investigator, to being one of Mia's most reliable contacts.
* KnightInSourArmor: Despite his disillusionment and his willingness to kill, Highland steadily reveals that he's in fact an idealist; he mourns what he sees as the death of America as it becomes an increasingly obvious dictatorship, admires the idealistic core of Mia's business of giving out second chances, and expresses moral considerations and lines in the conflict against the Kitchen.
* KnightInSourArmor: Despite his disillusionment and his willingness to kill, Highland steadily reveals that he's in fact an idealist; he mourns what he sees as the death of America as it becomes an increasingly obvious dictatorship, admires the idealistic core of Mia's business of giving out second chances, and expresses moral considerations and lines in the conflict against the Kitchen.
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The first viewpoint character of Claw, a criminal contractor responsible for escrow services and helping criminals acquire new identities.
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The first viewpoint character of Claw, ''Claw'', a criminal contractor responsible for escrow services and helping criminals acquire new identities.
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The second viewpoint character of Claw, Mia's husband and partner in crime.
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The second viewpoint character of Claw, ''Claw'', Mia's husband and partner in crime.
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The third viewpoint character of Claw, the newly acquired eldest child of the Hurst family, formerly Giovanna "G.C" Cavalcanti.
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The third viewpoint character of Claw, ''Claw'', the newly acquired eldest child of the Hurst family, formerly Giovanna "G.C" Cavalcanti.
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* VillainousLineage: After realizing that she felt nothing at all when she tortured Addi, and learning that the entire cyberbullying campaign was conducted on her father's orders to toughen her up, Valentina reflects that the Cavalcantis have infected her even down to her way of thinking, and that she is her father's daughter.
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* AbusiveParents: Brutally beats his son, and emotionally abuses and isolates his daughter in order to "toughen her up."
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* ControlFreak: Davie obsessively seeks control over people, both spearheading the Kitchen's attempts to integrate with the local government as enforcers and collecting people he finds interesting. His daughter speculates that this is also part of why he keeps his victims alive as trophies, going to great expense and hiring doctors to keep them alive despite their physical condition.
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* TroubledTeen: Valentina fled her family after getting a glimpse of what they did to people who crossed them, and it's left her badly traumatized.
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* TroubledTeen: Valentina fled her Growing up in the criminal Cavalcanti family after getting a glimpse of what they did to people who crossed them, has deeply damaged Valentina, which was only made worse when her social life was destroyed in high school leaving her isolated. She shocks and it's left her badly traumatized.horrifies herself with the lengths she's willing to go to, and how little she feels when she does.
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* ChildrenForcedToKill: Valentina is forced to make use of Mia's traps to kill one of her father's enforcers, and while Highland claims that her victim survived and needed to be finished off, she doesn't believe him, thinking that he told a lie to spare her feelings.
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* PrivateDetective: Was this until he shot a man, resulting in him needing Mia's services.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Highland served overseas in the military, though he left as increasingly the military was deployed against American citizens.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Highland served overseas in the military, though he left as increasingly the military was deployed against American citizens.
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* PrivateDetective: Was this He used to be a private investigator until he shot a man, resulting in him needing Mia's services.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Highland served overseas in the military, though he leftas increasingly thanks to the military was being overwhelmingly deployed against American citizens.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Highland served overseas in the military, though he left
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* TheReliableOne: Mia and Carson picked her out for this trait specifically, and even trust her with some of their deadman's switches, though she's unaware of the true context.
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* TheReliableOne: Mia and Carson picked her out for this trait her reliability specifically, and even trust her with some of their deadman's switches, though she's unaware of the true context.
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* MasterArcher: Bolden uses a crossbow in a setting where everyone else has guns, and at one point wins a shootout against a man with an assault rifle.
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* MasterArcher: Bolden uses a crossbow in a setting where everyone else has guns, and at one point wins a shootout against outdraws a man with an assault rifle.rifle who has the drop on him, hitting him cleanly through the head.
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* TheReliableOne: Mia and Carson picked her out for this trait specifically, and even trust her with some of their deadman's switches, though she's unaware of the true context.
