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* TheGoodShepherd: Truly cares about his parishioners and works toward their well being.
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* TheGoodShepherd: GoodShepherd: Truly cares about his parishioners and works toward their well being.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Gets assassinated offscreen by Stallen.]]
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* OffScreenMomentofAwesome: He defeated a raid lead by none other than Lyn Corbray, sending them retreating before they could do any true damage to Lyseni territory.
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* OffScreenMomentofAwesome: OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: He defeated a raid lead by none other than Lyn Corbray, sending them retreating before they could do any true damage to Lyseni territory. territory.
* OhCrap: Nearly faints when he hears of [[spoiler: Gerion]]'s assassination and realizes it'll start a new war before his side is ready.
* OhCrap: Nearly faints when he hears of [[spoiler: Gerion]]'s assassination and realizes it'll start a new war before his side is ready.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: His failed Wildfire Plot againat Braavos radicaized the Commune, further commmitting it to the cause.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: His failed Wildfire Plot againat against Braavos radicaized radicalized the Commune, further commmitting committing it to the cause.cause.
* PublicExecution: [[spoiler: Is hanged for assassinating Gerion.]]
* PublicExecution: [[spoiler: Is hanged for assassinating Gerion.]]
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Becomes the Targaryean king after Rhaegar's death despite still being a young child.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Becomes the Targaryean Targaryen king after Rhaegar's death despite still being a young child.child.
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to being raised and trained by Arthur and Barristan, he's an actual warrior king of significant skill.
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to being raised and trained by Arthur and Barristan, he's an actual warrior king of significant skill.
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* RealityEnsues: He is not very attractive from a combination of age, exposure, and several injuries to the face.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: His plan to take the Bleeding Tower works in part because of its RefugeInAudacity. Its success makes it close to CrazyAwesome.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: His plan to take the Bleeding Tower works in part because of its RefugeInAudacity. Its success makes it close to CrazyAwesome.SuccessThroughInsanity.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Deliver a subdued and short but potent one to Jaime when asking he return the Star of Valor she had presented him with. Satying his actions showed he was not currentyly worthyy of it.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Deliver a subdued and short but potent one to Jaime when asking he return the Star of Valor she had presented him with. Satying his actions showed he was not currentyly currently worthyy of it.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Has been considering forfeiting his place in Westeros to pursue his knightly exploits in Essos. No one else supports the idea.
** He ends up going through with it anyway.
** He ends up going through with it anyway.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Has been considering forfeiting his place in Westeros to pursue his knightly exploits in Essos. No one else supports the idea.
** Heidea, but he ends up going through with it anyway.anyway.
* DrowningMySorrows: Does this while in the Summer Islands, to cope with how his life has spiraled since renouncing his inheritance.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Does this while in the Summer Islands, to cope with how his life has spiraled since renouncing his inheritance.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Dies offscreen of a tropical disease while in the Summer Islands.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: His position of information to the government has made him invaluable, and stays below what is considered a threat to Myr.
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* KnowledgeBroker: Sells information for the right price.
* SecretIdentity: Who he really is remains unknown, though it's strongly implied by the narrative that he's Varys.
* UltimateJobSecurity:His position of information to Has positioned himself perfectly so that he's too invaluable for the royal government has made to remove, while his fellow underworld figures aren't threatened enough by him invaluable, to try and stays below what is considered a threat to Myr.
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* SecretIdentity: Who he really is remains unknown, though it's strongly implied by the narrative that he's Varys.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates of Qohor for Drogo, he puts him the man and his family in front of the horde's horses to be ridden down.
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!!Kindly Man
* UltimateJobSecurity: His position of information to the government has made him invaluable, and stays below what is considered a threat to Myr.
* UltimateJobSecurity: His position of information to the government has made him invaluable, and stays below what is considered a threat to Myr.
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* RewardAsATraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
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* RewardAsTraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
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* RewardAsTraitorDeserves: EvenEvilHasStandards: Utterly despises cowardly acts, and killed a magister for selling out his own city.
* RewardAsATraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
* RewardAsATraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
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* AvengingTheVillain: Plans to reunite the Khals to start a war with Myr to avenge the fallen Dothraki.
* RewardAsTraitorDeserves: When a magister opens the gates for Drogo, he puts him and his family in front of the horses to be ridden down.
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* TheSpymaster: Serves as Robert's Master of Whispers, and keeps up the duties of such even after being promoted to Hand.
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* {{Expy}}: His role as equipment developer for Special Branch makes him the equivalent of [[Franchise/JamesBond Q]].
* GadgeteerGenius: After retiring from active duty to become Royal Chronicler, he secretly takes a secondary position as heading up the development of new equipment for Special Branch.
* GadgeteerGenius: After retiring from active duty to become Royal Chronicler, he secretly takes a secondary position as heading up the development of new equipment for Special Branch.
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* ArchEnemy: Apparently he and Ser Harry Flash criss paths a number of times, to Flash's regret.
* CrazyPrepared: Had a back up plan in case his Wildfire Plot was foiled.
* CrazyPrepared: Had a back up plan in case his Wildfire Plot was foiled.
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* ArchEnemy: Apparently he and Ser Harry Flash criss cross paths a number of times, to Flash's regret.
* CrazyPrepared: Had aback up backup plan in case his Wildfire Plot was foiled.
* CrazyPrepared: Had a
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* TheDragonAscendant: He is raised to the rank of Triarch ofter the Battle of Tyrosh.
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** Averted in him later being DemotedToDragon to accomodate Donys Rahtheon. Though he does not seem to mind the demotion so much as who replaced him.
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* TheDragonAscendant: DragonAscendant: He is raised to the rank of Triarch ofter the Battle of Tyrosh.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He proposed the Wildfire Plot in part to secure safe passage out of Tyrosh for his people knowing the city was no longer safe.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He proposed the Wildfire Plot in part to secure safe passage out of Tyrosh for his people people, knowing the city was no longer safe.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' currenttroubles. But troubles, but will work with him volunatily voluntarily to pursue greater goals.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current
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* VillainousValor: the man's motives of protecting and avenging his family, along with skill, courage and cunning in his missions make him a formidable opponent.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Lampshades this himself to Ser Harry in the Flash Parers musing on his losses.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Lampshades this himself to Ser Harry in the Flash Parers musing on his losses.
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* VillainousValor: the The man's motives of protecting and avenging his family, along with skill, courage and cunning in his missions make him a formidable opponent.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Lampshades this himself to Ser Harry in the FlashParers Papers, musing on his losses.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Lampshades this himself to Ser Harry in the Flash
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* Determinator: No amount of setbacks or outright defeats have caused him to waver in seeking vengeance against the Abolitionists.
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* Determinator: TheDeterminator: No amount of setbacks or outright defeats have caused him to waver in seeking vengeance against the Abolitionists.
* DwindlingParty: Is keenly aware of the Myrish Remnant being bled dry by the wars.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Once just a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon for the Myrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Once just a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon for the Myrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Once just TheRemnant: Is a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon prominent member and defender of one for Old Myr.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He proposed theMyrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.Wildfire Plot in part to secure safe passage out of Tyrosh for his people knowing the city was no longer safe.
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* VillainousValor: the man's motives of protecting and avenging his family, along with skill, courage and cunning in his missions make him a formidable opponent.
* VillainousValor: the man's motives of protecting and avenging his family, along with skill, courage and cunning in his missions make him a formidable opponent.
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* Archenemy: Apparently he and Ser Harry Flash criss paths a number of times, to Flash's regret.
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* Archenemy: ArchEnemy: Apparently he and Ser Harry Flash criss paths a number of times, to Flash's regret.
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* EvenEvilHasLoveOnes: His male relatives died in the Slaver Wars and his sisters were traumatized to various degrees.
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* NobodyToNightmare: Once just a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon for the Myrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.
* TeethClemchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
* TeethClemchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
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* NobodyToNightmare: FromNobodyToNightmare: Once just a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon for the Myrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.
*TeethClemchedTeamwork: TeethClenchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
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* Archenemy: Apparently he and Ser Harry Flash criss paths a number of times, to Flash's regret.
* CrazyPrepared: Had a back up plan in case his Wildfire Plot was foiled.
* Determinator: No amount of setbacks or outright defeats have caused him to waver in seeking vengeance against the Abolitionists.
* TheDragon: Serves as this for the Myrish Remnant.
* TheDragonAscendant: He is raised to the rank of Triarch ofter the Battle of Tyrosh.
** Averted in him later being DemotedToDragon to accomodate Donys Rahtheon. Though he does not seem to mind the demotion so much as who replaced him.
* EvenEvilHasLoveOnes: His male relatives died in the Slaver Wars and his sisters were traumatized to various degrees.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: His failed Wildfire Plot againat Braavos radicaized the Commune, further commmitting it to the cause.
* NobodyToNightmare: Once just a skilled clerk, he has become TheDragon for the Myrish Remnant as a spy and saboteur.
* TeethClemchedTeamwork: He hates Donys Rahtheon, seeing him as a major cause of all of Essos' current troubles. But will work with him volunatily to pursue greater goals.
* ThatManIsDead: Is quite willing to admit he has done, and will do things, he never would have done before the wars.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: The suffering of his family and destruction of Old Myr motivate his actions.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Lampshades this himself to Ser Harry in the Flash Parers musing on his losses.
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* HardworkHardlyWorks: Averted. Playing by the rules did not see him rise so quickly in Myr, but it has earned him respect and a chance to jump in the ranks.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Takes an active role in shaping Myrish royal policy, specifically when it comes to finances.
* SilkHidingSteel: Has all the grace expected of a classical queen, while also having enough NervesOfSteel to keep her cool during an AssassinationAttempt.
* SilkHidingSteel: Has all the grace expected of a classical queen, while also having enough NervesOfSteel to keep her cool during an AssassinationAttempt.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Gets the name Blacksail rather than Seawoth in this story, but still the same Davos.
* BreakThemByTalking: Gets several privateers in service to Tyrosh to either flee the battlefield or switch sides by making them offers on behak of the Alliance.
* BreakThemByTalking: Gets several privateers in service to Tyrosh to either flee the battlefield or switch sides by making them offers on behak of the Alliance.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Gets the name Blacksail rather than Seawoth Seaworth in this story, but still the same Davos.
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* BreakThemByTalking: Gets several privateers in service to Tyrosh to either flee the battlefield or switch sides by making them offers onbehak behalf of the Alliance.
* BreakThemByTalking: Gets several privateers in service to Tyrosh to either flee the battlefield or switch sides by making them offers on
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos while reluctant at first is riding the wave of upheaval to secure a better future for himsef and his family. Saan on the other hand has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos Davos, while reluctant at first first, is riding the wave of upheaval to secure a better future for himsef himself and his family. Saan Saan, on the other hand hand, has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
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* TheRedBaron: Earns the title "Daario the Defiant" for his limited success and survival facing the abolitionists.
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* FatalFlaw: Pride. He wiuld rather fight to keep all he has and his proud indpendence; than give up his slave based wealth in order to gain ap otabtially high and pofitable palce in the new order.
** It being a flaw becomes more apparent when he is offered a second chance to change sides at Trosh, with even many fellow pirates taking it, but still holds to his course.
* GoodOldWays: Sees the changes i Essos as being only for the worse.
* HonorBeforeReason: His pride in living as man in his own right is part of why he will not bend the knee to either Braavos or Myr.
* Hypocrite: After the destruction of Tyrosh he ebds up becoming a privateer anyway.
* MyCountryRightOrWrong: Palyed with. He had no issue harassing his homeland as a pirate, but he feels obliged to defend it against the total war of the current age.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Laments the decline of the ae of great pirates liek hinself and the end of the 'gentlemanly' limited war amongst the Free Cities.
* Pirate: Like canon he is one of the Pirate Lords of the Stepstones.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: While he and Davos have no personal animosity they have committed to different sides in the wars and know it.
** It being a flaw becomes more apparent when he is offered a second chance to change sides at Trosh, with even many fellow pirates taking it, but still holds to his course.
* GoodOldWays: Sees the changes i Essos as being only for the worse.
* HonorBeforeReason: His pride in living as man in his own right is part of why he will not bend the knee to either Braavos or Myr.
* Hypocrite: After the destruction of Tyrosh he ebds up becoming a privateer anyway.
* MyCountryRightOrWrong: Palyed with. He had no issue harassing his homeland as a pirate, but he feels obliged to defend it against the total war of the current age.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Laments the decline of the ae of great pirates liek hinself and the end of the 'gentlemanly' limited war amongst the Free Cities.
* Pirate: Like canon he is one of the Pirate Lords of the Stepstones.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: While he and Davos have no personal animosity they have committed to different sides in the wars and know it.
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* FatalFlaw: Pride. He wiuld would rather fight to keep all he has and his proud indpendence; independence than give up his slave based slave-based wealth in order to gain ap otabtially a probably high and pofitable palce profitable place in the new order.
** It being a flaw becomes more apparent when he is offered a second chance to change sides atTrosh, Tyrosh, with even many fellow pirates taking it, but still holds to his course.
* GoodOldWays: Sees the changesi in Essos as being only for the worse.
* HonorBeforeReason: His pride in living as a man in his own right is part of why he will not bend the knee to either Braavos or Myr.
*Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: After the destruction of Tyrosh Tyrosh, he ebds ends up becoming a privateer anyway.
anyway for Lys.
* MyCountryRightOrWrong:Palyed Played with. He had no issue harassing his homeland as a pirate, but he feels obliged to defend it against the total war of the current age.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Laments the decline of theae age of great pirates liek hinself like himself and the end of the 'gentlemanly' "gentlemanly" limited war amongst the Free Cities.
*Pirate: {{Pirate}}: Like canon canon, he is one of the Pirate Lords of the Stepstones.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: While he and Davos have no personalanimosity animosity, they have committed to different sides in the wars and know it.
** It being a flaw becomes more apparent when he is offered a second chance to change sides at
* GoodOldWays: Sees the changes
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* RagsToRiches: Goes from a somewhat accomposhed smuggler to a knight and member of the Myrish Royal Navy.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos while reluctant at first is riding the wave of upheveal to secure a better future for himsef and his family. Saan on the other hand has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos while reluctant at first is riding the wave of upheveal to secure a better future for himsef and his family. Saan on the other hand has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
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* RagsToRiches: Goes from a somewhat accomposhed accomplished smuggler to a knight and member of the Myrish Royal Navy.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos while reluctant at first is riding the wave ofupheveal upheaval to secure a better future for himsef and his family. Saan on the other hand has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: He is on the side of the Slavers, but still sees the genocidal Night of Flames as having gone much too far.
* FatalFlaw: Pride. He wiuld rather fight to keep all he has and his proud indpendence; than give up his slave based wealth in order to gain ap otabtially high and pofitable palce in the new order.
** It being a flaw becomes more apparent when he is offered a second chance to change sides at Trosh, with even many fellow pirates taking it, but still holds to his course.
* GoodOldWays: Sees the changes i Essos as being only for the worse.
* HonorBeforeReason: His pride in living as man in his own right is part of why he will not bend the knee to either Braavos or Myr.
* Hypocrite: After the destruction of Tyrosh he ebds up becoming a privateer anyway.
* MyCountryRightOrWrong: Palyed with. He had no issue harassing his homeland as a pirate, but he feels obliged to defend it against the total war of the current age.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Laments the decline of the ae of great pirates liek hinself and the end of the 'gentlemanly' limited war amongst the Free Cities.
* Pirate: Like canon he is one of the Pirate Lords of the Stepstones.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: While he and Davos have no personal animosity they have committed to different sides in the wars and know it.
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!!Davos Blacksail
* AdaptationalNameChange: Gets the name Blacksail rather than Seawoth in this story, but still the same Davos.
* BreakThemByTalking: Gets several privateers in service to Tyrosh to either flee the battlefield or switch sides by making them offers on behak of the Alliance.
* NoodleIncident: Invokes one from White Harbor to announce his identity via messenger to Saan.
* RagsToRiches: Goes from a somewhat accomposhed smuggler to a knight and member of the Myrish Royal Navy.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: With Saan. Davos while reluctant at first is riding the wave of upheveal to secure a better future for himsef and his family. Saan on the other hand has aligned himself with those wanting to preserve the status quo as much as possible.
* WhamLine: His intro to the story is this as his fate in this timeline had been unseen.
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** Played straight, with Killing Pobo has earned him a reputatyion as a man who will violate parley. mace in his internal thioughts lumps him in with Tywin as men who can't be trusted to negotiate in goood faith.
** Played with, as many of members of the Abolitionist Alliance adore him for the exact same deed. Seeing him as a true hero putting punishing the wicked as a higher priority than observing law and custom.
** Played with, as many of members of the Abolitionist Alliance adore him for the exact same deed. Seeing him as a true hero putting punishing the wicked as a higher priority than observing law and custom.
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** Played straight, with Killing Pobo has earned killing Zirqo earning him a reputatyion reputation as a man who will violate parley. mace Mace, in his internal thioughts thoughts, lumps him in with Tywin as men who can't be trusted to negotiate in goood good faith.
** Played with, as many of members of the Abolitionist Alliance adore him for the exact samedeed. Seeing deed, seeing him as a true hero hero, putting punishing the wicked as a higher priority than observing law and custom.
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* CoolSword: He inherits his houses' ancestral sword, Lady Forlorn, from his father. He loves it enough to put it on his new crest.
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* CoolSword: He inherits his houses' House's ancestral sword, Lady Forlorn, from his father. He loves it enough to put it on his new crest.
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* BadassInCharge: As head of House Umber he is a high noble of the North and one of its faed warriors.
* TheBigGuy: He earned his name in part to his size and boisterous personality.
* ButNowIMustGo: After Rhaegar's death he can no longer justify staying away from his duties to House Umber and the Last Hearth; and so return to Westeros.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be rude.
** Lady Stark feels its not the least bit innocent.
* TheBigGuy: He earned his name in part to his size and boisterous personality.
* ButNowIMustGo: After Rhaegar's death he can no longer justify staying away from his duties to House Umber and the Last Hearth; and so return to Westeros.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be rude.
** Lady Stark feels its not the least bit innocent.
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* BadassInCharge: As head of House Umber he is a high noble of the North and one of its faed famed warriors.
* TheBigGuy: He earned his name in part due to his size and boisterous personality.
* ButNowIMustGo: After Rhaegar's death he can no longer justify staying away from his duties to House Umber and the LastHearth; Hearth, and so return returns to Westeros.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would berude.
**rude. Though Lady Stark feels its it's not the least bit innocent.
* TheBigGuy: He earned his name in part due to his size and boisterous personality.
* ButNowIMustGo: After Rhaegar's death he can no longer justify staying away from his duties to House Umber and the Last
* InnocentlyInsensitive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be
**
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* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, she is never singled out as being attractive.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and the story she returns with reinforcements from the North.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and the story she returns with reinforcements from the North.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, as she is never singled out as being attractive.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and thestory story, she returns with reinforcements from the North.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and the
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* TheRedBaron: is called the She-Bear.
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* TheRedBaron: is RedBaron: Is called the She-Bear.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Averted. He rarely brings up his Dothraki ancestry in regard to military matters and is proud of the very diverse Iron Legion as a ahrat military force.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Averted. He rarely brings up his Dothraki ancestry in regard to military matters and is proud of the very diverse Iron Legion as a ahrat great military force.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: He wants to build a better Westeros, and he becomes increasingly willing to be brutal to achieve that goal.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: GoodIsNotSoft:
** He wants to build a better Westeros, and he becomes increasingly willing to be brutal to achieve that goal.
** He wants to build a better Westeros, and he becomes increasingly willing to be brutal to achieve that goal.
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* OurFounder: He replaces the Kingsguard with the Order of the Storm, with greater numbers in their ranks. He also creates the Order of the Sun to enforce royal rule in Dorne, and the Knights of the Crown to serve as both a standing army for the Crownlands and as marines in the royal fleet.
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* OurFounder: He replaces the Kingsguard with the Order of the Storm, with greater numbers in their ranks. He also creates the Order of the Sun to enforce royal rule in Dorne, and the Knights of the Crown to serve as both a standing army for the Crownlands and as marines in the royal fleet.fleet, and the Order of the Sea to police the Iron Islands after Balon's Rebellion.
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* RagsToRiches: Goes from a hedge knight/sworn sword living from job to job, to the second highest-ranking member of a powerful knightly order.
** As of the end of Balon's Rebellion he now heads his own knightly Order of the Sea, answering only to Stannis.
** As of the end of Balon's Rebellion he now heads his own knightly Order of the Sea, answering only to Stannis.
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* RagsToRiches: Goes from a hedge knight/sworn sword living from job to job, to the second highest-ranking member of a powerful knightly order.
** Asorder. And as of the end of Balon's Rebellion Rebellion, he now heads his own knightly Order of the Sea, answering only to Stannis.
** As
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* DeadpanSnarker: When he bothers to be witty its either this or SarcasmMode.
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** The peace terms forced on the Ironborn after Balon's Rebellion takes this into GoodIsNotNice territory, at best.
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* InsistentTerminology: Denies Sandor the title of Kingslayer because he refuses to recognize Balon having ever been a legitimate king.
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* InnocentlyInsenstive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be rude.
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* InnocentlyInsenstive: InnocentlyInsensitive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be rude.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son Smalljon is slain in Balon's Rebellion.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son Smalljon son, Smalljon, is slain in Balon's Rebellion.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, she is never snigled out as being attracticve.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, she is never snigled singled out as being attracticve.attractive.
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* MammaBear: Fights on to avenge her daughter Dacey's death. Returns to the wars to further avenge her daughter.
* NumberTwo: Fills tyhis role for Eddard after her return to the kingdom.
* NumberTwo: Fills tyhis role for Eddard after her return to the kingdom.
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* MammaBear: MamaBear: Fights on to avenge her daughter Dacey's death. Returns to the wars to further avenge her daughter.
* NumberTwo: Fillstyhis this role for Eddard after her return to the kingdom.
* NumberTwo: Fills
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* BodyguardingABadass: As a leader of the Brotherhood of the Broken Chin his job is to protect the royal family of Myr, inclding King Robert the Strong.
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* BodyguardingABadass: As a leader of the Brotherhood of the Broken Chin Chain his job is to protect the royal family of Myr, inclding including King Robert the Strong.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: The very first at the battle of Pentos at that.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Averted. He rarely brings up his Dothraki ancestry in regard to military matters and is proud of the very diverse Iron Legion as a ahrat military force.
* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: The very first slave to do so at the battle ofPentos at that.Pentos.
* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: The very first slave to do so at the battle of
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** As of the end of Balon's Rebellion he now heads his own knightly Order of the Sea, answering only to Stannis.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son Smalljon is lsain in Balon's Rebellion.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son Smalljon is lsain slain in Balon's Rebellion.Rebellion.
!!Maege Mormont
* ActionGirl: A proud and fierce warrior who has fought in many battles.
* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, she is never snigled out as being attracticve.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and the story she returns with reinforcements from the North.
* MammaBear: Fights on to avenge her daughter Dacey's death. Returns to the wars to further avenge her daughter.
* NumberTwo: Fills tyhis role for Eddard after her return to the kingdom.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Her daughter dies in the Sack of Myr while she is still alive.
* TheRedBaron: is called the She-Bear.
!!Maege Mormont
* ActionGirl: A proud and fierce warrior who has fought in many battles.
* AmazonianBeauty: Averted, she is never snigled out as being attracticve.
* TheBusCameBack: After a long absence from Myr and the story she returns with reinforcements from the North.
* MammaBear: Fights on to avenge her daughter Dacey's death. Returns to the wars to further avenge her daughter.
* NumberTwo: Fills tyhis role for Eddard after her return to the kingdom.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Her daughter dies in the Sack of Myr while she is still alive.
* TheRedBaron: is called the She-Bear.
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* BodyguardingABadass: As a leader of the Brotherhood of the Broken Chin his job is to protect the royal family of Myr, inclding King Robert the Strong.
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!!Greatjon Umber
* BadassInCharge: As head of House Umber he is a high noble of the North and one of its faed warriors.
* TheBigGuy: He earned his name in part to his size and boisterous personality.
* ButNowIMustGo: After Rhaegar's death he can no longer justify staying away from his duties to House Umber and the Last Hearth; and so return to Westeros.
* InnocentlyInsenstive: He seems to fail to realize why talking up how great Eddard Stark is publicly, at a feast Brandon Stark is holding, would be rude.
** Lady Stark feels its not the least bit innocent.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son Smalljon is lsain in Balon's Rebellion.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity:
** Played straight, with Killing Pobo has earned him a reputatyion as a man who will violate parley. mace in his internal thioughts lumps him in with Tywin as men who can't be trusted to negotiate in goood faith.
** Played with, as many of members of the Abolitionist Alliance adore him for the exact same deed. Seeing him as a true hero putting punishing the wicked as a higher priority than observing law and custom.
* HeroicBSOD: After Narrow Run he falls into depression only starting to recover after havng a heart to heart talk with Robert.
** Played straight, with Killing Pobo has earned him a reputatyion as a man who will violate parley. mace in his internal thioughts lumps him in with Tywin as men who can't be trusted to negotiate in goood faith.
** Played with, as many of members of the Abolitionist Alliance adore him for the exact same deed. Seeing him as a true hero putting punishing the wicked as a higher priority than observing law and custom.
* HeroicBSOD: After Narrow Run he falls into depression only starting to recover after havng a heart to heart talk with Robert.
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* CoolSword: He inherits his houses ancestral sword, Lady Forlorn from his father. He loves it enough to put it on his new crest.
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* CoolSword: He inherits his houses houses' ancestral sword, Lady Forlorn Forlorn, from his father. He loves it enough to put it on his new crest.