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A Nalhallan man. Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A Nalhallan man. Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon. A Smedry, Smedry grandfather whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. His expertise is Hushlander cultures and weaponry. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. His (His expertise is Hushlander cultures and weaponry. weaponry.) A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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A short Nalhallan man. Attica's brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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A short Nalhallan man. Attica's brother. A Smedry, Smedry uncle, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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A 16-year-old Mokian girl. Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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A 16-year-old Mokian girl. Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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A Nalhallan woman, and a professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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A Nalhallan woman, and a professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, Smedry aunt, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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* DestructiveSaviour[=/=]PersonOfMassDestruction: Alcatraz’s Talent is breaking things. This is a great and epic Talent, but he still does quite a bit of collateral damage in the process.
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* DestructiveSaviour[=/=]PersonOfMassDestruction: PersonOfMassDestruction: Alcatraz’s Talent is breaking things. This is a great and epic Talent, but he still does quite a bit of collateral damage in the process.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: A lot of the Smedries are intelligent academics while at the same time being eccentric, absent minded or just plain strange.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: A lot of the Smedries Smedrys are intelligent academics while at the same time being eccentric, absent minded or just plain strange.
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* BlessedWithSuck and CursedWithAwesome: All the Smedry Talents contain elements of both, to one degree or another. They take what seems like a stupid and annoying trait and turn it into something that can be useful and epic by taking it UpToEleven.
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* LethalJokeCharacter: All the Smedry Talents seem like a stupid and annoying hinderance at first, but into something useful and epic by taking it UpToEleven.
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*NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: They reuse names a lot, and name their kids after awesome ancestors of theirs.
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A Nalhallan man, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever. He's also really sneaky.
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A Nalhallan man, and a graduate student.student (a language specialist who focuses on Hushlander dialects). A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever. He's also really sneaky.
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A Nalhallan man, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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A Nalhallan man, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever. He's also really sneaky.
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Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A Nalhallan man. Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A Nalhallan man, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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Attica's brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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A short Nalhallan man. Attica's brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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A 16-year-old Mokian girl. Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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A professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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A Nalhallan woman, and a professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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A critic for the newspaper. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can dance really poorly.
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A Nalhallan man, and a critic for the newspaper. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can dance really poorly.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: A lot of the Smedries are intelligent academics while at the same time being eccentric, absent minded or just plain strange.
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[[folder:Aunt Patty]]
!! Pattywagon Smedry
A professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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!! Pattywagon Smedry
A professor of silimatics. Leavenworth's daughter, and Quentin and Folsom's mom. A Smedry, whose Talent is that she can say inappropriate things at awkward moments.
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* LittlePeopleAreSurreal: Kaz has dwarfism and is about 4 feet tall. When Alcatraz first sees him, he thinks he's a fairy or something. He finds the fact that Kaz is just short rather stranger than any supernatural explanation would be.
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->'''Alcatraz''': ''[pointing an accusing finger at Bastille]'' You’re a princess!\\
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Bastille's mother.
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Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon.
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Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon.
Pattywagon. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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Attica’s brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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Alcatraz's father.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: She’s the daughter of King Dartmoor. When Alcatraz finds out, he remarks that "stories such as this one ''always'' have at least one hidden member of royalty among the core cast. It’s, like, some kind of union mandate or something."
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: She’s She's the daughter of King Dartmoor. When Alcatraz finds out, he remarks that "stories such as this one ''always'' have at least one hidden member of royalty among the core cast. It’s, like, some kind of union mandate or something."
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* SingleLineOfDescent: Zigzagged. Alcatraz is the heir to the pure Smedry line, but he has a lot of cousins too.
->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
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* SingleLineOfDescent: Zigzagged. As the eldest child of Attica, who is the eldest child of Leavenworth, Alcatraz is the heir to the pure Smedry line, but line. But he has a lot of cousins too.
->'''Draulin''':cousins.
-->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
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-->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
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*SingleLineOfDescent: Zigzagged. Alcatraz is the heir to the pure Smedry line, but he has a lot of cousins too.
->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
->'''Draulin''': As the oldest child of Attica Smedry, you are the heir to the pure Smedry line. You outrank both your cousin and your uncle, which means you are in command of this vessel.
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!! Attica Smedry
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[[folder:Draulin]]
!! Draulin
[[folder:Draulin]]
!! Draulin
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A man from Melerand, and a Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A man from Melerand, and a Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A man from Melerand, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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A man from Melerand, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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[[folder:Kaz]]
!! Kazan Smedry
Attica’s brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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[[folder:Australia]]
!! Australia Smedry
Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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[[folder:Folsom]]
!! Folsom Smedry
A critic for the newspaper. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can dance really poorly.
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!! Kazan Smedry
Attica’s brother. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can get lost.
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[[folder:Australia]]
!! Australia Smedry
Sing's little sister. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that she can say wake up in the morning looking incredibly ugly.
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[[folder:Folsom]]
!! Folsom Smedry
A critic for the newspaper. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can dance really poorly.
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[[folder:Smedry family]]
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*AwesomeMcCoolname: The name Smedry actually means "Oculator". It comes from Old Nalhallan ''smead-dary'', meaning ''Lens-wielder''.
*BlessedWithSuck and CursedWithAwesome: All the Smedry Talents contain elements of both, to one degree or another. They take what seems like a stupid and annoying trait and turn it into something that can be useful and epic by taking it UpToEleven.
*BlessedWithSuck and CursedWithAwesome: All the Smedry Talents contain elements of both, to one degree or another. They take what seems like a stupid and annoying trait and turn it into something that can be useful and epic by taking it UpToEleven.
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*ChangelingFantasy: Pretty standard (though repeatedly lampshaded). Alcatraz is a poor orphan who is constantly thought to be worthless, only for it to turn out that he's from a family of practicaly artistocratic magic wielders.
*DestructiveSaviour[=/=]PersonOfMassDestruction: Alcatraz’s Talent is breaking things. This is a great and epic Talent, but he still does quite a bit of collateral damage in the process.
*DestructiveSaviour[=/=]PersonOfMassDestruction: Alcatraz’s Talent is breaking things. This is a great and epic Talent, but he still does quite a bit of collateral damage in the process.
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*ActionGirl: Bastille is a perfect example of this. She is a 13-year-old knight and an expert fighter. Specifically, she's of the LittleMissBadass variety.
*EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: She’s the daughter of King Dartmoor. When Alcatraz finds out, he remarks that "stories such as this one ''always'' have at least one hidden member of royalty among the core cast. It’s, like, some kind of union mandate or something."
->'''Alcatraz''': ''[pointing an accusing finger at Bastille]'' You’re a princess!\\
'''Bastille''': ''[grimacing]'' Yeah, kind of.\\
'''Alcatraz''': How can you "kind of" be a princess?\\
'''Bastille''': Well, I can’t inherit the throne. I renounced claim on it when I joined the Knights of Crystallia. Vow of poverty and all that.
*EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: She’s the daughter of King Dartmoor. When Alcatraz finds out, he remarks that "stories such as this one ''always'' have at least one hidden member of royalty among the core cast. It’s, like, some kind of union mandate or something."
->'''Alcatraz''': ''[pointing an accusing finger at Bastille]'' You’re a princess!\\
'''Bastille''': ''[grimacing]'' Yeah, kind of.\\
'''Alcatraz''': How can you "kind of" be a princess?\\
'''Bastille''': Well, I can’t inherit the throne. I renounced claim on it when I joined the Knights of Crystallia. Vow of poverty and all that.
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A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent is that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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*TheConqueror: InvertedTrope. Back in the days when there were a bunch of small kingdoms, most about the size of the city, they were all more of vulnerable to the Librarians. King Leavenworth Smedry the Sixth believed they should be combined… so he abdicated, letting the small kingdom of Smedrious become part of Nalhalla. Plus, without the burden of reigning (which is a real pain) the Smedrys free to do important thinks like fighting the Librarians.
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*TheBigGuy: A 6 foot 2, 350 pound Polynesian man. Also a guns expert.
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TheProtagonist. A Smedry, whose Talent is that he can break things.
A man from Melerand, and a Smedry, whose Talent is that he can arrive late to things.
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A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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[[folder:Sing]]
!! Sing Sing Smedry
A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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[[folder:Quentin]]
!! Quentin Smedry
A man from Melerand, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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!! Bastille
A Crystin
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!! Sing Sing Smedry
A large Mokian man, and a professor of anthropology. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent that he can trip and fall to the ground.
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!! Quentin Smedry
A man from Melerand, and a graduate student. A Smedry cousin, whose Talent that he can say things that made absolutely no sense whatsoever.
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!! Bastille
A Crystin
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Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica.
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Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica.Attica, Kazan, and Pattywagon.
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* TheHerosJourney: The CallToAdventure is Grandpa Smedry. He Crosses the First Threshold when he xxxxx. The Road of Trials are everything that happens in the library. He wins a decisive victory when he breaks the lenses. He returns to the "normal world" when he goes back to Joan and Roy’s house with the intent of staying with them a while longer. He is a grown and changed person.
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* TheHerosJourney: The CallToAdventure is Grandpa Smedry. He Crosses the First Threshold when he xxxxx.enters the room behind oil can door at the gas station. The Road of Trials are everything that happens in the library. He wins a decisive victory when he breaks the lenses. He returns to the "normal world" when he goes back to Joan and Roy’s house with the intent of staying with them a while longer. He is a grown and changed person.
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!! Alcatraz Smedry
*FirstPersonSmartass: The narrator, and incredibly sassy.
-->'''Alcatraz''': You may have noticed that I began my story with it quick, snappy scene of danger and tension -- but then quickly moved on to a more boring discussion of my childhood. Well, that’s because I wanted to prove something to you: that ''I am not a nice person.''
*FosterKid
*TheHerosBirthday: His 13th birthday kicks off the story
*TheHerosJourney: The CallToAdventure is Grandpa Smedry. He Crosses the First Threshold when he xxxxx. The Road of Trials are everything that happens in the library. He wins a decisive victory when he breaks the lenses. He returns to the "normal world" when he goes back to Joan and Roy’s house with the intent of staying with them a while longer. He is a grown and changed person.
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[[folder:Grandpa Smedry]]
!! Leavenworth Smedry
Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica,
*CoolOldGuy
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[[folder:Alcatraz]]
!! Alcatraz Smedry
*FirstPersonSmartass: The narrator, and incredibly sassy.
-->'''Alcatraz''': You may have noticed that I began my story with it quick, snappy scene of danger and tension -- but then quickly moved on to a more boring discussion of my childhood. Well, that’s because I wanted to prove something to you: that ''I am not a nice person.''
*FosterKid
*TheHerosBirthday: His 13th birthday kicks off the story
*TheHerosJourney: The CallToAdventure is Grandpa Smedry. He Crosses the First Threshold when he xxxxx. The Road of Trials are everything that happens in the library. He wins a decisive victory when he breaks the lenses. He returns to the "normal world" when he goes back to Joan and Roy’s house with the intent of staying with them a while longer. He is a grown and changed person.
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[[folder:Grandpa Smedry]]
!! Leavenworth Smedry
Grandfather to Alcatraz, as well as his cousins. Father of Attica,
*CoolOldGuy
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