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* LightIsNotGood: The...''things'' appear as flashing strobe lights. The only real ''natural'' light around, and they seem to be turning people into monsters.
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* LightIsNotGood: The...Ironically for a premise of the world plunged into darkness, lights are often an indication of danger.
** The... ''things'' that appear as flashing strobelights. The only real ''natural'' light around, and they seem to be turning lights turn people into delusional hostile monsters.
** The... ''things'' that appear as flashing strobe
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--> "I followed it into the crops to get a good look at it. The crops we're about 6-7 feet high, so that gives you a good idea of how much taller it was."
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** Also, when the protagonist is asked why he vanished for a month: [[spoiler:"Wait what the hell do you mean I've been gone for a month? It's only been a week or so."]]
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** Also, when the protagonist is asked why he vanished for a month: [[spoiler:"Wait what the hell do you mean I've been gone for a month? It's only been a week or so."]]"]]
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* TheCorruption: Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as the protagonist.
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* TheCorruption: TheCorruption:
** Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as theprotagonist.protagonist.
** The dark water, a mysterious substance the invaders released into Earth's water supply. It causes whoever drinks it to become paranoid and delusional, and also begins to change their bodies. [[spoiler:When Danyon eventually reappears, his skin has turned ''gray'' due to prolonged consumption of the water.]]
** Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as the
** The dark water, a mysterious substance the invaders released into Earth's water supply. It causes whoever drinks it to become paranoid and delusional, and also begins to change their bodies. [[spoiler:When Danyon eventually reappears, his skin has turned ''gray'' due to prolonged consumption of the water.]]
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* CurbStompCushion: While the long term effect appears to have been minimal at best the protagonist does observe a couple instances of what appears to be military aircraft destroying the hovering objects.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Looting, rioting, and general societal distress was the first phase of the sun vanishing, now the planet is being besieged by strange lights, flying objects, and people turning into madness mantra uttering psychopaths.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Looting, rioting, and general societal distress was the first phase of the sun vanishing, now the planet is being besieged by strange lights, flying objects, and people turning into madness mantra psychopaths uttering psychopaths.MadnessMantra.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The sun is still gone, and the protagonist is suffering both physically and mentally as well as being harassed by a mysterious group that wants to stop him from resisting the aliens. However, even after his bout of SanitySlippage, he manages to pull himself back from the edge and continue fighting to survive. His last update shows him actually managing to ''kill'' one of the alien lights as it comes for him, and he promises that he isn't going to give up just yet, suggesting that there is still hope for humanity in the survivors.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The sun is still gone, and the protagonist is suffering both physically and mentally as well as being harassed by a mysterious group that wants to stop him from resisting the aliens. However, even after his bout of SanitySlippage, he manages to pull himself back from the edge and continue fighting to survive. His last recent update shows him actually managing to ''kill'' one of the alien lights as it comes for him, and he promises that he isn't going to give up just yet, suggesting that there is still hope for humanity in the survivors.]]
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* EverybodysDeadDave: The protagonist only finds crazy people. Up until Danyon showed up to help him escape, he couldn't find a trace of any sane individuals, and even his neighbor, ''who he heard screaming less than a few minutes before'', vanished from his ''own house'' without a trace.
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* EverybodysDeadDave: The protagonist only finds crazy people. Up until Danyon showed shows up to help him escape, he couldn't find a trace of any sane individuals, and even his neighbor, ''who he heard screaming less than a few minutes before'', vanished from his ''own house'' without a trace.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The sun is still gone, and the protagonist is suffering both physically and mentally as well as being harassed by a mysterious group that wants to stop him from resisting the aliens. However, even after his bout of SanitySlippage, he manages to pull himself back from the edge and continue fighting to survive. His last update shows him actually managing to ''kill'' one of the alien lights as it comes for him, and he promises that he isn't going to give up just yet, suggesting that there is still hope for humanity in the survivors.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Danyon arrives to pick up the protagonist just as a brainwashed lady is about to find him under a bed.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Danyon arrives to pick up the protagonist just as a brainwashed lady is about to find him under a bed.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Danyon arrives to pick up BlueAndOrangeMorality: Nobody is sure why the creatures are doing what they're doing, and the protagonist wonders why they are keeping remnants of humanity alive when they seemingly have the ability to just as a brainwashed lady is about to find him under a bed.]]exterminate the species.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The closest we've gotten to a sighting of the creatures is [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this image]]...of a totally black, [[NothingIsScarier featureless silhouette, standing in the corner of the room.]] We later get another partial glimpse of one, and the protagonist notes that it's very tall.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The closest we've gotten to a sighting of the creatures is [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this image]]...of a totally black, [[NothingIsScarier featureless silhouette, standing in the corner of the room.]] [[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1019064563814330374 We later get another partial glimpse of one, one]], and the protagonist notes that it's very tall.tall.
--> "I followed it into the crops to get a good look at it. The crops we're about 6-7 feet high, so that gives you a good idea of how much taller it was."
--> "I followed it into the crops to get a good look at it. The crops we're about 6-7 feet high, so that gives you a good idea of how much taller it was."
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* HumanoidAbomination: The closest we've gotten to a sighting of the creatures is [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this image]]...of a totally black, [[NothingIsScarier featureless silhouette, standing in the corner of the room.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination: The closest we've gotten to a sighting of the creatures is [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DdICRZSVMAELEHg.jpg this image]]...of a totally black, [[NothingIsScarier featureless silhouette, standing in the corner of the room.]]]] We later get another partial glimpse of one, and the protagonist notes that it's very tall.
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* AlienInvasion: While it isn't certain exactly ''what'' is causing all of this, the protagonist is dealing with forces well beyond human comprehension, and even saw a floating object that looked like some kind of malformed diamond. [[spoiler: As the story goes on, it becomes clear he is indeed dealing with otherworldly creatures of some sort, and that the flying diamonds are aerial crafts of some kind. Other characters begin speaking of the creatures as some kind of invading force, and Earth's situation is described as an occupation.]]
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* AlienInvasion: While it isn't certain exactly ''what'' is causing all of this, the protagonist is dealing with forces well beyond human comprehension, and even saw a floating object that looked like some kind of malformed diamond. [[spoiler: As the story goes on, it becomes clear he is indeed dealing with otherworldly creatures of some sort, and that the flying diamonds are advanced aerial crafts of some kind.unknown alien design. Other characters begin speaking of the creatures as some kind of invading force, and Earth's situation is described as an occupation.]]
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* AlienInvasion: While it isn't certain exactly ''what'' is causing all of this, the protagonist is dealing with forces well beyond human comprehension, and even saw a floating object that looked like some kind of malformed diamond.
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* AlienInvasion: While it isn't certain exactly ''what'' is causing all of this, the protagonist is dealing with forces well beyond human comprehension, and even saw a floating object that looked like some kind of malformed diamond. [[spoiler: As the story goes on, it becomes clear he is indeed dealing with otherworldly creatures of some sort, and that the flying diamonds are aerial crafts of some kind. Other characters begin speaking of the creatures as some kind of invading force, and Earth's situation is described as an occupation.]]
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* WaterSourceTampering: The invaders have done ''something'' to the world's water sources; drinking it appears to cause SanitySlippage as well as damage to the body. Only bottled water from before the sun's disappearance seems to be safe.
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After a while, they manage to get in touch with a few other survivors who basically tell them, "just don't go anywhere." And shortly after, they find out why. There are ''things'' outside. Nobody knows what they are, or why they're there, But we do know they're unfriendly. A few unpleasant experiences later, the protagonist decides it would be best to just sit tight in their home, waiting for it all to blow over.
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After a while, they manage to get in touch with a few other survivors who basically tell them, "just don't go anywhere." And shortly after, they find out why. There are ''things'' outside. Nobody knows what they are, or why they're there, But we do know they're unfriendly. A few unpleasant experiences later, the protagonist decides it would be best to just sit tight in their his home, waiting for it all to blow over.
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* CrapsackWorld: The world our protagonist finds themself in. Whatever's happening out there, it absolutely isn't good.
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* CrapsackWorld: The world our protagonist finds themself himself in. Whatever's happening out there, it absolutely isn't good.
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* FromBadToWorse: No matter how bad things get for our protagonist, whatever forces are at play seem to find ways to make their life worse and worse.
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* FromBadToWorse: No matter how bad things get for our protagonist, whatever forces are at play seem to find ways to make their his life worse and worse.
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** The aircrafts emit a bright blue light accompanied by [[HellIsThatNoise a loud blaring noise]] over anyone they find. If the tweets given before the protagonist makes their escape are any indication, something [[NothingIsScarier horrible]] happens to those exposed to it.
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** The aircrafts emit a bright blue light accompanied by [[HellIsThatNoise a loud blaring noise]] over anyone they find. If the tweets given before the protagonist makes their his escape are any indication, something [[NothingIsScarier horrible]] happens to those exposed to it.
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** One case happened when the protagonist was hiding in their house, and all the information the audience got was through twitter; apparently, someone was banging at their door, and managed to break into the house when nobody answered.
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** One case happened when the protagonist was hiding in their his house, and all the information the audience got was through twitter; apparently, someone was banging at their door, and managed to break into the house when nobody answered.
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* OminousKnocking:
** The protagonist tells his friend of a strange person standing completely still outside their house, and is told to not let anybody inside. Moments later, a video shows that this person went from standing like a statue, to knocking incessantly at the front door and even going so far as to jiggle the knob. This event leads the protagonist to stay hidden in their bedroom for two days straight.
** One case happened when the protagonist was hiding in their house, and all the information the audience got was through twitter; apparently, someone was banging at their door, and managed to break into the house when nobody answered.
** In another case, a video was uploaded of the protagonist answering the door; though the video was completely dark, the constant knocking was heard, following by the person at the door claiming the sun came back. In a following tweet, it was claimed that this person began to start banging again... on the window, with their ''head.''
** The protagonist tells his friend of a strange person standing completely still outside their house, and is told to not let anybody inside. Moments later, a video shows that this person went from standing like a statue, to knocking incessantly at the front door and even going so far as to jiggle the knob. This event leads the protagonist to stay hidden in their bedroom for two days straight.
** One case happened when the protagonist was hiding in their house, and all the information the audience got was through twitter; apparently, someone was banging at their door, and managed to break into the house when nobody answered.
** In another case, a video was uploaded of the protagonist answering the door; though the video was completely dark, the constant knocking was heard, following by the person at the door claiming the sun came back. In a following tweet, it was claimed that this person began to start banging again... on the window, with their ''head.''
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