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* DarkWorld: The story is posted on twitter and anyone in reality can look outside and see the sun isn't out, but that's not the case for the universe that this story is happening in.
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* DarkWorld: The story is posted on twitter Twitter and anyone in reality can look outside and see the sun isn't out, but that's not the case for the universe that this story is happening in.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Danyon arrives to pick up the protagonist just as a brainwashed lady is about to find him under a bed.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Danyon [[spoiler:Danyon arrives to pick up the protagonist just as a brainwashed lady is about to find him under a bed.]]
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** The [[https://mobile.twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1046568900341698560 sounds the aircraft make when they activate their blue light]].
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** The [[https://mobile.twitter.[[https://twitter.com/TheSunVanished/status/1046568900341698560 sounds the aircraft make when they activate their blue light]].
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* LightIsNotGood: The...''things'' appear as flashing strobe lights. The only real ''natural'' light around, and they seem to be turning people into monsters.
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* LightIsNotGood: The...Ironically for a premise of the world plunged into darkness, lights are often an indication of danger.
** The... ''things'' that appear as flashing strobelights. The only real ''natural'' light around, and they seem to be turning lights turn people into delusional hostile monsters.
** The... ''things'' that appear as flashing strobe
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--> "I followed it into the crops to get a good look at it. The crops we're about 6-7 feet high, so that gives you a good idea of how much taller it was."
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** Also, when the protagonist is asked why he vanished for a month: [[spoiler:"Wait what the hell do you mean I've been gone for a month? It's only been a week or so."]]
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** Also, when the protagonist is asked why he vanished for a month: [[spoiler:"Wait what the hell do you mean I've been gone for a month? It's only been a week or so."]]"]]
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* TheCorruption: Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as the protagonist.
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* TheCorruption: TheCorruption:
** Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as theprotagonist.protagonist.
** The dark water, a mysterious substance the invaders released into Earth's water supply. It causes whoever drinks it to become paranoid and delusional, and also begins to change their bodies. [[spoiler:When Danyon eventually reappears, his skin has turned ''gray'' due to prolonged consumption of the water.]]
** Exactly ''what'' the red lights do isn't certain, but those who gaze into it seem to repeat that they see the sun again, become very dangerous, and actively hunt others such as the
** The dark water, a mysterious substance the invaders released into Earth's water supply. It causes whoever drinks it to become paranoid and delusional, and also begins to change their bodies. [[spoiler:When Danyon eventually reappears, his skin has turned ''gray'' due to prolonged consumption of the water.]]
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* CurbStompCushion: While the long term effect appears to have been minimal at best the protagonist does observe a couple instances of what appears to be military aircraft destroying the hovering objects.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Looting, rioting, and general societal distress was the first phase of the sun vanishing, now the planet is being besieged by strange lights, flying objects, and people turning into madness mantra uttering psychopaths.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Looting, rioting, and general societal distress was the first phase of the sun vanishing, now the planet is being besieged by strange lights, flying objects, and people turning into madness mantra psychopaths uttering psychopaths.MadnessMantra.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The sun is still gone, and the protagonist is suffering both physically and mentally as well as being harassed by a mysterious group that wants to stop him from resisting the aliens. However, even after his bout of SanitySlippage, he manages to pull himself back from the edge and continue fighting to survive. His last update shows him actually managing to ''kill'' one of the alien lights as it comes for him, and he promises that he isn't going to give up just yet, suggesting that there is still hope for humanity in the survivors.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The sun is still gone, and the protagonist is suffering both physically and mentally as well as being harassed by a mysterious group that wants to stop him from resisting the aliens. However, even after his bout of SanitySlippage, he manages to pull himself back from the edge and continue fighting to survive. His last recent update shows him actually managing to ''kill'' one of the alien lights as it comes for him, and he promises that he isn't going to give up just yet, suggesting that there is still hope for humanity in the survivors.]]
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* EverybodysDeadDave: The protagonist only finds crazy people. Up until Danyon showed up to help him escape, he couldn't find a trace of any sane individuals, and even his neighbor, ''who he heard screaming less than a few minutes before'', vanished from his ''own house'' without a trace.
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* EverybodysDeadDave: The protagonist only finds crazy people. Up until Danyon showed shows up to help him escape, he couldn't find a trace of any sane individuals, and even his neighbor, ''who he heard screaming less than a few minutes before'', vanished from his ''own house'' without a trace.
