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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel". It feels sad, lonely, and distant, almost as if telling you that the "sequel" technically isn't one, and the red looping hallway accompanying it makes it even poignant.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel". It feels sad, lonely, and distant, almost as if telling you that the "sequel" technically isn't one, and the red looping hallway accompanying it makes it even poignant.
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%%* Par for the course when the game's opening and [[spoiler: golden]] ending feature, respectively, [[Film/AmericanBeauty "Dead Already" and "Any Other Name"]] (both by Music/ThomasNewman).
%%* This whimsical soundtrack by Blake Robinson that plays when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
%%* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel".
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%%* This whimsical soundtrack by Blake Robinson that plays when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
%%* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel".
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%%* This whimsical soundtrack by Blake Robinson that plays when you follow ''[[https://www.
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* This whimsical soundtrack by Blake Robinson that plays when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]'' is infectiously happy and adventrous, making following the Line™ seem like a more fun experience.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI Epilogue]], exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, is considered one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI Epilogue]], exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, is considered one of the best pieces of music in the game.game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown Music]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, when you learn that you truly are doomed, is not much.
* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, is considered one of the best pieces of music in the game.
* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, is considered one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown Music]] Control]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, when you learn that you truly are doomed, is not much.
* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbIThe Epilogue Music]] Epilogue]], exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, is considered one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* This whimsical soundtrack by Blake Robinson that plays when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
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%%* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel".
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel".
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%%* When you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
%%* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
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%%* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
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%%* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbq25C8U4Qs&t=4s The Stanley Parable 2 Theme]] is a melancholic piano piece that accompanies the main menu of the "sequel".
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it’s played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, it has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it’s it's played in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, it has been is considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', paired with the environment it’s played in, in and the Skip Button Ending leading to it, it has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] Music]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, when you learn that you truly are doomed, is not much.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ''Ultra Deluxe'', the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in in, it has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘Ultra Deluxe’, the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘Ultra Deluxe’, ''Ultra Deluxe'', the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘’Ultra Deluxe’’, the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘’Ultra Deluxe’’, ‘Ultra Deluxe’, the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, when you learn that you truly are doomed, is not much.much.
* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘’Ultra Deluxe’’, the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
* [[https://youtu.be/8W2GkYJtxbI The Epilogue Music]] exclusive to ‘’Ultra Deluxe’’, the Epilogue music paired with the environment it’s played in has been considered to be one of the best pieces of music in the game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, when you learn the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth - which, given when you learn the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
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* Par for the course when the game's opening and [[spoiler: golden]] ending feature, respectively, [[Film/AmericanBeauty "Dead Already" and "Any Other Name"]] (both by Music/ThomasNewman).
* Also, when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] is pretty awesome too; really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth- which, given the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
* Also, when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] is pretty awesome too; really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth- which, given the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]]
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* Par for the course when the game's opening and [[spoiler: golden]] ending feature, respectively, [[Film/AmericanBeauty "Dead Already" and "Any Other Name"]] (both by Music/ThomasNewman).
* Also, when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] is pretty awesome too; really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth- which, given the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
* Also, when you follow ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=guIaCocnNaw The Stanley Parable Adventure Line™]]''.
* The Secret Disco song, Kevin [=MacLeod=]'s "Who Likes to Party", which is royalty-free and can be downloaded for free [[http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/mp3-royaltyfree/Who%20Likes%20to%20Party.mp3 here.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45wz_ZjpgdU The Countdown music]] is pretty awesome too; really gets your blood pumping, for whatever it's worth- which, given the fact that you truly are doomed, is not much.
