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** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZzQzi7uRWE Dream Girl]]" by Stardust Tunes takes it up a notch by removing the first beat drop but keeping the second, while also adding drums. Oh, and the instrumental is also great! It's very energetic, and makes you feel like you're in space instead of trapped in an arcade cabinet.[[note]][[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vdtARGIIS2M His]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsS3Id7QtPA other]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5eJebBIY5o songs]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5mWWUu8FNUc also]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XsYlBGW6qNE&t=4s count]]! They keep the original theme of the songs intact, while changing things up a bit and experimenting. All in all, his songs are great remixes of the original tracks.[[/note]]
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** "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZzQzi7uRWE Dream Girl]]" by Stardust Tunes takes it up a notch by removing the first beat drop but keeping the second, while also adding drums. Oh, and the instrumental is also great! It's very energetic, and makes you feel like you're in space instead of trapped in an arcade cabinet.[[note]][[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vdtARGIIS2M His]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsS3Id7QtPA other]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5eJebBIY5o songs]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5mWWUu8FNUc also]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XsYlBGW6qNE&t=4s count]]! They keep the original theme of the songs intact, while changing things up a bit and experimenting. All in all, his songs are great remixes of the original tracks.[[/note]]
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Fixing grammar and spelling errors; also, two tracks in a row are described as "happy and upbeat".
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cPz0WnRHzE Sweet n' Spooky]]", as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense, in stark contrasy to the original game's "Monster".
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense, in stark contrasy to the original game's "Monster".
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cPz0WnRHzE Sweet n' Spooky]]", as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn turns spooky, just like the song it replaces.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheebop]]" ishappy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense, in stark contrasy contrast to the original game's "Monster".
"Monster".
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheebop]]" is
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]", as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]", com/watch?v=4cPz0WnRHzE Sweet n' Spooky]]", as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheeebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense, in stark contrasy to the original game's "Monster".
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheeebop]]" Opheebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense, in stark contrasy to the original game's "Monster".
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheeebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE Opheeebop]]" is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzied and intense.intense, in stark contrasy to the original game's "Monster".
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aabSlw3_68E&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1 Best Girl]]", The replacement tutorial song. Despite being the tutorial, it is already very heated and intense. A perfect beginning for an awesome mod.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]" , as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
* * "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1&index=7 Opheeebop]]" This banger is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzy and intense
* Safeguard
* Rush Hour
* Freedom
* Terminal
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aabSlw3_68E&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1 Best Girl]]", The replacement tutorial song. Despite being the tutorial, it is already very heated and intense. A perfect beginning for an awesome mod.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]" , as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
* * "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1&index=7 Opheeebop]]" This banger is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzy and intense
* Safeguard
* Rush Hour
* Freedom
* Terminal
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's
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* Safeguard
* Rush Hour
* Freedom
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]"
Sour]]" , as its name implies, starts out happy and upbeat, then suddently turn spooky, just like the song it replaces.
*Opheebop
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCwsT1StIyE&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1&index=7 Opheeebop]]" This banger is happy and upbeat, and also incredibly fast-paced, frenzy and intense
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aabSlw3_68E&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1 Best Girl]]", The replacement tutorial song. Despite being the tutorial, it is already very heated and hard and intense.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aabSlw3_68E&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1 Best Girl]]", The replacement tutorial song. Despite being the tutorial, it is already very heated and hard and intense.
intense. A perfect beginning for an awesome mod.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aabSlw3_68E&list=PLhgrThs0qoMVi0xpy4vw8fmQPjsleTfP1 Best Girl]]", The replacement tutorial song. Despite being the tutorial, it is already very heated and hard and intense.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]"
* Opheebop
* Safeguard
* Rush Hour
* Freedom
* Terminal
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCkK-6fi3is Sweet's Sour]]"
* Opheebop
* Safeguard
* Rush Hour
* Freedom
* Terminal