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* "Facepalm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has contributed a full song to the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* "Facepalm Mute". It's Mute" is one of the few times Spencer has contributed a full song to the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has contributed a full song to the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* "Face Palm "Facepalm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has contributed a full song to the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* The whole "Clear" EP showing off the different writing styles by all the band members.
* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with the soul music vocal style of Spencer.
* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with the soul music vocal style of Spencer.
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* The whole "Clear" ''Clear'' EP showing off the different writing styles by all the band members.
* Both parts of"Juggernaut" ''Juggernaut'' with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with the soul music vocal style of Spencer.
* Both parts of
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written contributed a full song for to the band and it's ''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's ''awesome''.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's ''awesome''.''awesome'' for that reason alone.
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* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
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* Crazy The crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's '''awesome'''.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's '''awesome'''.''awesome''.
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* "Face Palm Mute". It's one of the few times Spencer has written a song for the band and it's '''awesome'''.
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* "Erised" has a guest solo from Jake's [[CoolUncle]] John Petrucci.
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* "Erised" has a guest solo from Jake's [[CoolUncle]] CoolUncle John Petrucci.
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* "Erised" has a guest solo from Jake's [[CoolUncle]] John Petrucci.
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That's "entirety", not "entirely".
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* "Reptile". The entirely of it. The song is a journey and gets more melodic as it goes on, with truly heavy parts scattered here and there.
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* "Reptile". The entirely entirety of it. The song is a journey and gets more melodic as it goes on, with truly heavy parts scattered here and there.
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* "Reptile". The entirely of it. The song is a journey and gets more melodic as it goes on, with truly heavy parts scattered here and there.
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%%* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
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%%* There can't be an AwesomeMusic SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
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This sentence makes no sense grammatically as written. I've no idea if this is what you were going for, but at least it makes sense grammatically.
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* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with soul music vocal style of Spencer.
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* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with the soul music vocal style of Spencer.
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* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things". These tracks (and others too) are notable for combining downtuned groovy djent chugging with soul music vocal style of Spencer.
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%%* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
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Not only are these explicitly zero-context, but most of the other examples on the page skirt the borders of being zero-context. Obviously, "obviously" is meaningless Word Cruft.
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* Obviously, "Racecar". All the 15 minutes 21 seconds of it, especially the instrumental parts right before the last chorus steps in.
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* Obviously, "Racecar". All the 15 minutes 21 seconds of it, especially the instrumental parts right before the last chorus steps in.
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* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
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* Relentless grooves of "Ragnarok" and "The Gods Must Be Crazy" must be mentioned too.
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* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
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* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
%%* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
%%* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
* Crazy awesome main riff %%* Relentless grooves of "Motormouth"."Ragnarok" and "The Gods Must Be Crazy" must be mentioned too.
%%Why? These examples give no indication of why these tracks are awesome.
%%* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
%%* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
%%Why? These examples give no indication of why these tracks are awesome.
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* Obviously, "Racecar". All the 15 minutes 21 seconds of it, especially the instrumental parts right before the last chorus steps in.
* "Icarus Lives", one of Periphery's most recognizable riffs.
* "Jetpacks Was Yes!" and its purely awesome guitar solo.
* "Have a Blast" provides a tasty orchestral intro, thrashing verses and UncommonTime bridges.
* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
* The final part of "Luck as a Constant" with brilliant dual guitar solo work by Misha and Jake.
* Relentless grooves of "Ragnarok" and "The Gods Must Be Crazy" must be mentioned too.
* The whole "Clear" EP showing off the different writing styles by all the band members.
* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
* "Icarus Lives", one of Periphery's most recognizable riffs.
* "Jetpacks Was Yes!" and its purely awesome guitar solo.
* "Have a Blast" provides a tasty orchestral intro, thrashing verses and UncommonTime bridges.
* There can't be an AwesomeMusic page for Periphery without mentioning "Facepalm Mute".
* The final part of "Luck as a Constant" with brilliant dual guitar solo work by Misha and Jake.
* Relentless grooves of "Ragnarok" and "The Gods Must Be Crazy" must be mentioned too.
* The whole "Clear" EP showing off the different writing styles by all the band members.
* Both parts of "Juggernaut" with special credits to "Rainbow Gravity", "22 Faces", "Psychosphere", "Omega" and "Stranger Things".
* Crazy awesome main riff of "Motormouth".
