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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is a bizarre mix of silly, ominous, and surreal that makes for deranged, but very catchy battle theme.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is a bizarre mix of silly, ominous, and surreal that makes for a deranged, but very catchy battle theme.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast for how surprisingly dark this game is.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast bizarre mix of silly, ominous, and surreal that makes for how surprisingly dark this game is.deranged, but very catchy battle theme.
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* [[https://youtu.be/0K_xO8JltXc Not Safe]], the purified Zones theme, is 100ccs of creepy straight through the head. A repetitive bell sound mixed with odd noises, loud whispering and the occasional sound of someone banging on metal and muffled cries for help. Perfectly fitting the [[WhiteVoidRoom purified]] [[EldritchLocation Zones]] and their absence of life... Save for you and the [[HumanoidAbomination Secretaries]].
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* [[https://youtu.be/0K_xO8JltXc Not Safe]], the purified Zones theme, is 100ccs of creepy straight through the head. A repetitive bell sound mixed with odd noises, loud whispering and the occasional sound of someone banging on metal something and muffled cries for help. Perfectly fitting the [[WhiteVoidRoom purified]] [[EldritchLocation Zones]] and their absence of life... Save for you and the [[HumanoidAbomination Secretaries]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:how surprisingly dark this game is.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:how how surprisingly dark this game is.]]
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* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
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* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].pipe.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG1lDSQ3gI Fake Orchestra]], Dedan's battle theme. An intense theme, which fits Dedan quite well.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG1lDSQ3gI Fake Orchestra]], Dedan's battle theme. An theme, plays when he stops messing around and fights you. It's intense theme, which fits Dedan quite well.enough to let you know that Dedan, being a Guardian, won't be a pushover.
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** We also have the mall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiPOydBpHn0 Windows Licking.]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], which serves as an excellent contrast to the otherwise peaceful Zone 2.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A Fond La Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French, literaly "Midnight Pedal to the Metal"[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], which serves as an excellent contrast to the otherwise peaceful Zone 2.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A Fond La Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French, literaly "Midnight Pedal to the Metal"[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
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** We also have the The mall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiPOydBpHn0 Windows Licking.]]
Licking]], is surprisingly catchy and upbeat compared to the rest of the Zone's overworld themes.
** When an outbreak of Specters happens, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], a more serious piece, kicks in as the Batter gets down to business.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], which serves as an excellent contrast to the otherwise peaceful Zone 2.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A Fond La Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French, literaly literally "Midnight Pedal to the Metal"[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
** When an outbreak of Specters happens, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], a more serious piece, kicks in as the Batter gets down to business.
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* There's also [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlrVw8W3rrg O Rosto De Um Assassino]] [[labelnote: translation]]"The Face of a Murderer" in Portuguese[[/labelnote]] Enoch's actual battle theme. Intense, chilling, and befitting of Enoch himself.
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* There's also [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlrVw8W3rrg O Rosto De Um Assassino]] [[labelnote: translation]]"The Face of a Murderer" in Portuguese[[/labelnote]] Enoch's actual battle theme. Intense, Intense and chilling, and befitting of it suits a battle with the humongous enemy that Enoch himself.has become.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the experience that the game gives you strong recommendation to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the experience that the game gives you a strong recommendation to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the experience that the game gives you strongly recommendation to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the experience that the game gives you strongly strong recommendation to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the game that you receive a word to the wise to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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The music is such a massively integral part of the experience that the game that gives you receive a word to the wise strongly recommendation to turn it on before you begin playing for the first time.
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** [[https://youtu.be/rCywWxg5DoY Desperately Safe]]. It's incredibly beautiful, in a haunting, sad kinda way...
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** [[https://youtu.be/rCywWxg5DoY Desperately Safe]]. Safe.]] It's incredibly beautiful, in a haunting, sad kinda way...
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A La Fond Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A La Fond La Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French[[/labelnote]], French, literaly "Midnight Pedal to the Metal"[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
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* [[https://youtu.be/0K_xO8JltXc Not Safe]], the purified Zones theme, is 100ccs of creepy straight through the head. A repetitive bell sound mixed with odd noises, loud whispering and the occasional sound of someone banging on metal and muffled cries for help. Perfectly fitting the [[WhiteVoidRoom purified]] [[EldritchLocation Zones]] and their absence of life... Save for you and the [[HumanoidAbomination Secretaries]].
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** [[https://youtu.be/rCywWxg5DoY Desperately Safe]]. It's incredibly beautiful, in a haunting, sad kinda way...
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* The them of Zone 3, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9v4_A9Qv6TU Burned Bodies]] is a somber yet catchy tune that perfectly captures the feel of Zone 3, while also foreshadowing its dark secret...
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I& Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I& Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
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* The them theme of Zone 3, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9v4_A9Qv6TU Burned Bodies]] Bodies,]] is a somber yet catchy tune that perfectly captures the feel of Zone 3, the zone, while also foreshadowing its dark secret...
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I& com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.
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* [[https://youtu.be/jRekoZDFzyM Clockwork]], which plays in the Postal Service in Zone 1. It has a nice beat with eerie synth in the background, really characterising the monotonous bureaucracy of the place.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.
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* The final boss theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.
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* Enoch's pre-battle theme [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7s4AcJ55Vtw& Front Gate]]. An incredibly dark tune, which fits Enoch's overpowering presence and his terrifying reveal about the true role of the Guardians
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* Enoch's pre-battle theme [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7s4AcJ55Vtw& Front Gate]]. An incredibly dark tune, which fits Enoch's overpowering presence and his terrifying reveal about the true role of the GuardiansGuardians.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSXcTohfrbI Brain Plague]], with both versions being amazing final level themes. [[labelnote: note]]Rewind, the overworld theme, plays first, while Re-reversed, the battle theme, starts at 0:32.[[/labelnote]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7UwSDDm_xA Woman of your Dreams]], continuing the trend of amazing pre-battle themes. Especially great for the second-to-last boss of the game.]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle theme for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
* [[spoiler: The final boss theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY&index=36 Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7UwSDDm_xA Woman of your Dreams]], continuing the trend of amazing pre-battle themes. Especially great for the second-to-last boss of the game.]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle theme for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
* [[spoiler: The final boss theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY&index=36 Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSXcTohfrbI Brain Plague]], with both versions being amazing final level themes. [[labelnote: note]]Rewind, [[note]]Rewind, the overworld theme, plays first, while Re-reversed, the battle theme, starts at 0:32.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle music for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
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* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle music theme for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMJoHa02WEE Fourteen Residents]], the title theme, is a bit chilling yet somber.
* Both of Empty Warehouse's variations. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTQsQedgITQ The exterior version]] is nice and relaxing, while the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3b-3Zh-qDg interior version]] has an air of mystery to it.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuR6msvV-IE Soft Breeze]] is a perfect early-game theme that sets up a bit of tension.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:how surprisingly dark this game is.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bO53hI3LQvs Flesh Maze Tango]], while a bit repetitive, is still a great pre-boss battle track.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG1lDSQ3gI Fake Orchestra]], Dedan's battle theme. An intense theme, which fits Dedan quite well.
* All of Zone 2's themes. Some notable members of the bunch:
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Tzk4QWEXb8 The Walls are Listening]], the library's theme, which is quite relaxing.
** We also have the mall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiPOydBpHn0 Windows Licking.]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], which serves as an excellent contrast to the otherwise peaceful Zone 2.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A La Fond Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I& Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
* Enoch's pre-battle theme [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7s4AcJ55Vtw& Front Gate]]. An incredibly dark tune, which fits Enoch's overpowering presence and his terrifying reveal about the true role of the Guardians
* There's also [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlrVw8W3rrg O Rosto De Um Assassino]] [[labelnote: translation]]"The Face of a Murderer" in Portuguese[[/labelnote]] Enoch's actual battle theme. Intense, chilling, and befitting of Enoch himself.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSXcTohfrbI Brain Plague]], with both versions being amazing final level themes. [[labelnote: note]]Rewind, the overworld theme, plays first, while Re-reversed, the battle theme, starts at 0:32.[[/labelnote]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7UwSDDm_xA Woman of your Dreams]], continuing the trend of amazing pre-battle themes. Especially great for the second-to-last boss of the game.]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle music for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
* [[spoiler: The final boss theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY&index=36 Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.]]
* Both of Empty Warehouse's variations. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTQsQedgITQ The exterior version]] is nice and relaxing, while the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3b-3Zh-qDg interior version]] has an air of mystery to it.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuR6msvV-IE Soft Breeze]] is a perfect early-game theme that sets up a bit of tension.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1EPegIzD2M Pepper Steak]], the main battle theme, is quite silly yet awesome. It also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:how surprisingly dark this game is.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bO53hI3LQvs Flesh Maze Tango]], while a bit repetitive, is still a great pre-boss battle track.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG1lDSQ3gI Fake Orchestra]], Dedan's battle theme. An intense theme, which fits Dedan quite well.
* All of Zone 2's themes. Some notable members of the bunch:
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Tzk4QWEXb8 The Walls are Listening]], the library's theme, which is quite relaxing.
** We also have the mall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiPOydBpHn0 Windows Licking.]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjQp5_Tm0RQ Unreasonable Behavior]], which serves as an excellent contrast to the otherwise peaceful Zone 2.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LzwWDmIvL5A Minuit A La Fond Caisse]] [[labelnote: translation]]"Midnight at Full Speed" or "Midnight Velocity" in French[[/labelnote]], Japhet's theme, which is a very emotionally-charged track. It has a somewhat somber feel to it, which perfectly fits Japhet once you know his backstory.
* The Game of the Mortal Fall's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVPCQW-8K_I& Magic Pipe]]. Also serves as a contrast for [[spoiler:the horrors you find at the bottom of the pipe]].
* Enoch's pre-battle theme [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7s4AcJ55Vtw& Front Gate]]. An incredibly dark tune, which fits Enoch's overpowering presence and his terrifying reveal about the true role of the Guardians
* There's also [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlrVw8W3rrg O Rosto De Um Assassino]] [[labelnote: translation]]"The Face of a Murderer" in Portuguese[[/labelnote]] Enoch's actual battle theme. Intense, chilling, and befitting of Enoch himself.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSXcTohfrbI Brain Plague]], with both versions being amazing final level themes. [[labelnote: note]]Rewind, the overworld theme, plays first, while Re-reversed, the battle theme, starts at 0:32.[[/labelnote]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7UwSDDm_xA Woman of your Dreams]], continuing the trend of amazing pre-battle themes. Especially great for the second-to-last boss of the game.]]
* [[spoiler: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6xwRc3PvIOU The Meaning of His Tears]], which is an incredibly tear-jerking battle music for The Queen. Gets even sadder considering who she's guarding...]]
* [[spoiler: The final boss theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gci4Htpj8CY&index=36 Avatar Beat]], which could easily be considered ''your'' theme, as it plays regardless of whether you side with The Batter or The Judge.]]
