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* Kiro's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A "甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice),]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of every Kiro fangirl.
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* Kiro's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A "甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice),]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], sweet, which can easily bring out the optimism of every Kiro fangirl.
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* Gavin's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 "湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature,)]] is just like him; its rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of ocean waves and the free spirit of the wind that embodies the compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
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* Gavin's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 "湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature,)]] Temperature),]] is just like him; its rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of ocean waves and the free spirit of the wind that embodies the compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9P--HR-yaEE "黑暗歸來 [Hēi Àn Guī Lái]" (The Return of Darkness,)]]" [[note]]Youtube label: "Back to Black."[[/note]] belongs to [[spoiler: Helios]] and starts showing up when the chapters reach double digits. It is energetic, yet mysterious and goes along with the coldness that is so far from [[spoiler:the warm Kiro you are used to seeing]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9P--HR-yaEE "黑暗歸來 [Hēi Àn Guī Lái]" (The Return of Darkness,)]]" [[note]]Youtube Darkness)]][[note]]Youtube label: "Back to Black."[[/note]] belongs to [[spoiler: Helios]] and starts showing up when the chapters reach double digits. It is energetic, yet mysterious and goes along with the coldness that is so far from [[spoiler:the warm Kiro you are used to seeing]].
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9P--HR-yaEE Back to Black]]" belongs to [[spoiler: Helios]] and starts showing up when the chapters reach double digits. It is energetic, yet mysterious and goes along with the coldness that is so far from [[spoiler:the warm Kiro you are used to seeing]].
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* "[[https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9P--HR-yaEE Back com/watch?v=9P--HR-yaEE "黑暗歸來 [Hēi Àn Guī Lái]" (The Return of Darkness,)]]" [[note]]Youtube label: "Back to Black]]" Black."[[/note]] belongs to [[spoiler: Helios]] and starts showing up when the chapters reach double digits. It is energetic, yet mysterious and goes along with the coldness that is so far from [[spoiler:the warm Kiro you are used to seeing]].
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* Lucien's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo "暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Fireworks in the Dark Night),]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
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* Lucien's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo "暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Fireworks in the Dark Night),]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle [[spoiler: dual personas, and emotional]] struggles into music.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFSDVKhtFyk Long Dream]]" [[note]] Youtube label: 'Sad love' [[/note]] is a quiet, melancholic track, encompassing a suffering that has been going on for too long.
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* "[[https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFSDVKhtFyk Long Dream]]" “長夢 [Cháng Mèng]” (Long Dream)]] [[note]] Youtube label: 'Sad love' [[/note]] is a quiet, melancholic track, encompassing a suffering that has been going on for too long.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, and soothing atmosphere with a desire for intimacy hinted in its melody.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, sophisticated, and soothing atmosphere with a desire for intimacy hinted in its melody.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, and soothing atmosphere with the expression a desire for emotional longing and intimacy within hinted in its melody.
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* Kiro's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A "甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice),]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of those surrounding Kiro.
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* Kiro's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A "甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice),]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of those surrounding Kiro.every Kiro fangirl.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Lucien's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo "暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Flare in the Dark Night),]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
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* Lucien's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo "暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Flare (Fireworks in the Dark Night),]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
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If you're going to go that route, then the opening quote marks need to go inside the link as well. Also, a piece can HAVE a soft tempo, not BE a soft tempo, and "its" and "it's" are NOT interchangeable; learn the difference between them, please.
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[[header: From the game soundtrack scored by Taiwanese composer--V.K:]]
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vn9xAINz6eo 戀語 [Liàn Yǔ]" (Love Language)]], the opening and main leitmotif track, is a soothing piano solo that puts you at ease. It also helps settle the romantic theme the game is [[spoiler:seemingly]] all about.
* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vn9xAINz6eo 戀語 [Liàn Yǔ]" (Love Language)]], the opening and main leitmotif track, is a soothing piano solo that puts you at ease. It also helps settle the romantic theme the game is [[spoiler:seemingly]] all about.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is a soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
* Lucien's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo 暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Flare in the Dark Night)]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
* Gavin's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature)]] is just like him; it's rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of ocean waves and the free-spirit of the wind that embodies the compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
* Kiro's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A 甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice)]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of those surrounding Kiro.
* Lucien's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo 暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Flare in the Dark Night)]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
* Gavin's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature)]] is just like him; it's rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of ocean waves and the free-spirit of the wind that embodies the compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
* Kiro's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A 甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice)]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of those surrounding Kiro.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 "時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] Time),]] is a soft tempo track led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
* Lucien'stheme--"[[https://www.theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2TnqJBvbgo 暗夜花火 "暗夜花火 [Àn Yè Huā Huǒ]" (Flare in the Dark Night)]] Night),]] is a melancholic track that aptly translates his struggle into music.
* Gavin'stheme--"[[https://www.theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 湛藍溫度 "湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature)]] Temperature,)]] is just like him; it's its rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of ocean waves and the free-spirit free spirit of the wind that embodies the compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
* Kiro'stheme--"[[https://www.theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBCrHLZUS-A 甜蜜共犯 "甜蜜共犯 [Tián Mì Gòng Fàn]" (Sweet Accomplice)]] Accomplice),]] is [[TastesLikeDiabetes cheery and sweet]], which can easily bring out the optimism of those surrounding Kiro.
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* The ''incredible'' "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JMtYHk-Dcj8 極暗之時 [Jí Àn Zhī Shí]" (Darkest Hour)]][[note]]Youtube label: 'Brilliance.'[[/note]], a rising theme that steadily builds up to a high, along with the chorus and the strings. This theme played at the premier event of the chapters 12 to 15, often during scenes where major information is revealed.
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* The ''incredible'' "[[https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JMtYHk-Dcj8 極暗之時 "極暗之時 [Jí Àn Zhī Shí]" (Darkest Hour)]][[note]]Youtube label: 'Brilliance.'[[/note]], a rising theme that steadily builds up to a high, along with the chorus and the strings. This theme played at the premier event of the chapters 12 to 15, often during scenes where major information is revealed.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFSDVKhtFyk Long Dream]]" [[note]] Youtube label: 'Sad love' [[/note]] is a quiet, melancholic track, encompassing a suffering that has been going on for too long.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is a soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Gavin's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature)]] is just like him; it's rhythm gives off the tempo of the ocean waves and the free-spirit of the wind that can sweep you off your feet and embodies the passion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
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* Gavin's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soGzx912Dm0 湛藍溫度 [Zhàn Lán Wēn Dù]" (Azure Blue Temperature)]] is just like him; it's rhythm immediately transports you up to the vast blue sky, gives off the tempo of the ocean waves and the free-spirit of the wind that can sweep you off your feet and embodies the passion compassion for justice he has in his character. It starts with a few notes to set the beat, before the guitar comes rushing in. Out of all four themes, Gavin's is the most EDM-like.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with a touch for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere with a touch the expression for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere, with a touch for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.
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* Victor's theme--"[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IouRAE31yg 時間之間 [Shí Jiān Zhī Jiān]" (Between Time)]] is soft tempo led by the cello. It has a pompously warm, cultured, and soothing atmosphere, atmosphere with a touch for emotional longing and intimacy within its melody.