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** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, gunshot wounds be damned, in order to rescue Angie. She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strength, and frees the little girl.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.
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** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunshot wounds be damned,]] in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strength, and frees the little girl.]]
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** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunshot gunshot wounds be damned,]] damned, in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strength, and frees the little girl.]]
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* Klaus talking down Crymaria after her powers go out of control.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand, taking out the generator and its guards in order to depower the electrified net surrounding the Centurion.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand, taking out the generator and its guards in order to depower the electrified net surrounding the Centurion.
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* Klaus talking down Crymaria after her powers go out of control.
control. This also makes Crymaria the only known Valkyria from the Empire to survive this war.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand, taking out the generator and its guards in order to depower the electrified net surrounding the Centurion. Even when he's about to be gunned down, he knows he has won the day. The Imperials killing him have wasted their bullets since Centurion has just charged past the trap zone, making it too late to reactivate the electric net.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand, taking out the generator and its guards in order to depower the electrified net surrounding the Centurion. Even when he's about to be gunned down, he knows he has won the day. The Imperials killing him have wasted their bullets since Centurion has just charged past the trap zone, making it too late to reactivate the electric net.
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** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunwounds be damned,]] in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strenghts, and frees the little girl.]]
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** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunwounds [[spoiler:gunshot wounds be damned,]] in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strenghts, strength, and frees the little girl.]]
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* Claude braving the burning engine room to save Riley and Angie.
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* Claude braving the burning engine room to save Riley and Angie.Angie.
** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunwounds be damned,]] in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strenghts, and frees the little girl.]]
** Likewise Riley herself, braving the flames she's afraid of, [[spoiler:gunwounds be damned,]] in order to rescue Angie. [[spoiler: She basically [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion pulls of a Gendo Ikari]] and grabs the sizzling handle of a blast door, turning it open with the last of her strenghts, and frees the little girl.]]
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* Klaus talking down Crymaria after her powers go out of control.
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* Centurion smashing right into Schwarzgrad. The ship first barrages the defensive perimeter and then rams through the city wall and destroys lots of evacuated buildings in the process.
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* Centurion smashing right into Schwarzgrad. The ship first barrages the defensive perimeter and then rams through the city wall and destroys lots of evacuated buildings in the process.process.
* Claude braving the burning engine room to save Riley and Angie.
* Claude braving the burning engine room to save Riley and Angie.
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* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand.
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* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand.stand, taking out the generator and its guards in order to depower the electrified net surrounding the Centurion.
* Centurion smashing right into Schwarzgrad. The ship first barrages the defensive perimeter and then rams through the city wall and destroys lots of evacuated buildings in the process.
* Centurion smashing right into Schwarzgrad. The ship first barrages the defensive perimeter and then rams through the city wall and destroys lots of evacuated buildings in the process.
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* The fact that Squad E manages to defeat Crymaria, ''in her Valkyria state''. While she's suffering from PowerIncontinence to boot. And ''without a Valkyria of their own''. To put that in perspective, [[VideoGame/ValkyriaChronicles Squad 7]] could never beat Selvaria while she was using her powers, and in a way she still [[TakingYouWithMe claimed a final victory]] even when captured.
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* After Operation Northern Cross is broken by the onset of early winter, Squad E survive a perilous trek across the western mountains in the hopes of meeting with reinforcements. [[HopeSpot When they reach the coast]], though, they find that about half of the Federation forces were killed by the environment or Klaus's tank squad, which comes back to finish the job. But just when all seems lost, a GunshipRescue shows up in the form of three icebreaker battleships that nearly blast the tanks to pieces, forcing Klaus to retreat.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.narrator.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand.
* Raz's heroic last mission and last stand.
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!!Meta:
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzL8ueVJQ3U The promotional trailer]] being done in the style of a war documentary with Douglas Welch being the narrator.