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* Colonel Larkine is mortally killed by a bunch of Eldar - but Larkine does not leave alone, because he throws a plasma grenade with his only remaining arm and wipes out six Eldar - including a High Farseer.

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* Colonel Larkine is mortally killed injured by a bunch of Eldar - but Larkine does not leave die alone, because he throws a plasma grenade with his only remaining arm and wipes out six Eldar - including a High Farseer.

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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Fifty hours later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low. It's so impressive that a ''Custodes'' gives Weaver the Emperor's Thanks and congratulations for her victory ''in person''.

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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Fifty hours later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low. It's so impressive that a ''Custodes'' (and not any Custodes - it's the Captain General!) gives Weaver the Emperor's Thanks and congratulations for her victory ''in person''.



** The reaction from the Chaos Gods: Khorne laughs about Tzeentch's mistake, Tzeentch says nothing, Nurgle realizes the insects are not under his control... and Slaanesh ''freaks the f**k out''.

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** The reaction from the Chaos Gods: Khorne laughs about Tzeentch's mistake, Tzeentch says nothing, Nurgle realizes the insects are not under his control... and Slaanesh ''freaks the f**k out''. So much that ''it sends all of her Legions to take down the Gate of Khaine and kill Weaver''.


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** When Drazhar (a former '''Phoenix Lord''') goes into the battlefield, Taylor does the same, and once more fights one of the most dangerous Dark Eldar in existence and wins - and this time, she ''gains her Saint wings''.

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** From the opening of Chapter 36: the survivors of the Second Fall of the Dark Eldar refer to Taylor as Maelsha'eil Dannan, [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast the Angel of Death.]]

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** From the opening of Chapter 36: the survivors of the Second Fall of the Dark Eldar refer to Taylor as Maelsha'eil Dannan, [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast the Angel of Death.]]Death]].
** At the beginning of the attack, there are 187.6 billion Drukhari. Nineteen hours later, there are 4.5 billion less Drukhari.
** The reaction from the Chaos Gods: Khorne laughs about Tzeentch's mistake, Tzeentch says nothing, Nurgle realizes the insects are not under his control... and Slaanesh ''freaks the f**k out''.
** The opening salvo destroys a good part of the Drukhari fleet - and when one of the falling battleships falls, it ignites [[MadeOfExplodium the main ammo depot]].
** The first hour of the attack is an absolute massacre as the Imperials destroy everything in sight without opposition, as shown with a wing of starfighters that bombard all they see and return only because they are out of ammunition.
** The Iron Drakes find and execute Asdrubael Vect. When he claims he will return, Chapter Master Dupleix replies they will be ready to kill him again.
** It takes less than one hour for the Imperials to destroy nearly 200 battleships, four times that in cruisers and twenty-five percent of the Port of Lost Souls' infrastructure. Just that could be enough to cripple Drukhari operations... [[SerialEscalation and there's still more than ninety hours left]].
** For the Salamanders, the mere fact that Taylor has managed to recover two of the Artifacts of Vulkan is enough to celebrate.
** The Dark Eldars manage to bring in reinforcements, so Taylor calls in her own. This is followed by a scene where one Dark Eldar ship's crew goes through a MassOhCrap of gargantuan proportions when they see that Taylor's reinforcements are '''Necron ships'''. This prompts the Dark Eldar to aim everything they have at the Necrons, ignoring the Imperials - and going so desperate as to ask for help from the Eldar.
** How to deal with one of the ports so it won't become a liability, Imperial Style: Atmospheric Incinerators. Ten seconds after launching, Port Carmine is no more.
** Even Asdrubael Vect, convinced of his species' superiority, realizes that the Imperial-Necron attack on Commorragh, even if stopped then and there, will have crippled the Dark Eldar for generations to come.
** Taylor enters the field by sending multiple centipedes against the disciplined Dark Eldar guards to help the Alamo Penal Legion, and the Heracles Wardens follow by air-dropping including Pierre (now wearing his [[NiceHat pirate tricorn]]) over the Eldar, encouraging the Legion to fight even harder.
** Eldrad Ulthran realizes part of the actual plan, as made by the Emperor: It might be enough to ''permanently'' destroy Slaanesh' main source of power.
** When Biel-Tan decides to go fight Weaver at Commorragh, multiple Imperial planets are saved as the Biel-Tan invaders retreat.
** Farseer Filgonith Sirethmoren proves himself to be the OnlySaneMan of Biel-Tan by not only calling out the Craftworld's other Farseers for their idiocy, but also for being willing to aid the same Dark Eldar that have been going after Eldars since the Fall and by pointing out that the "Aeldari Empire" they want to revive is exactly the same thing Commorragh stands for.
** When the Salamanders learn about the attack on Commorragh, they call ALL THE SPACE MARINES near Pavia to join the attack.
** Aeonid Thiel finds a White Scar, who manages to reveal to him one important hint before dying: [[spoiler:'''Jaghatai Khan''' is near the Black Gate!]]
** The Necrons drop in an army of more than a million and a half soldiers in two and a half seconds.
** When the Dark Eldar send their best troops in, Taylor unleashes her full powers - by controlling the millions of Helspiders living under Commorragh and sending them against the Eldar.
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** From the opening of Chapter 36: the survivors of the Second Fall of the Dark Eldar refer to Taylor as Maelsha'eil Dannan, [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast the Angel of Death.]]

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!!Extermination
* '''The Battle of Commorragh'''. Pavia was peanuts compared to the '''absolute massacre''' that is storming the heart of the Webway.
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* Contessa leading the Knights Errant into an Inquisitorial secret fortress to rescue Missy "Vista" Biron.

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* Contessa leading the Knights Errant into an Inquisitorial secret fortress controlled by a Lord of Change to rescue Missy "Vista" Biron.
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* Taylor indirectly touching [[spoiler:the Tyranid Hivemind]] while taking control of a Catachan ant. And surviving. For the record, the number of people in 40K canon who have done that without ending up dead or insane as a direct result is ''one'' - Chief Librarian Tigurius of the Ultramarines.
* The Dragon armors are such a novel concept and powerful weapon that, when Ryza begins to deploy them against Chaos, they start losing their Heldrakes in droves, with one Chaos leader realizing that they are suffering heavy defeats thanks to this.

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* Taylor indirectly touching [[spoiler:the Tyranid Hivemind]] while taking control of a Catachan ant. And surviving.surviving with her mind intact. For the record, the number of people in 40K canon who have done that without ending up dead or insane as a direct result is ''one'' - Chief Librarian Tigurius of the Ultramarines.
* The Dragon armors are such a novel concept and powerful weapon that, when Ryza begins to deploy them against Chaos, they start losing their Heldrakes in droves, droves (the first such battle being a ''ninety-to-one'' loss), with one Chaos leader realizing that they are suffering heavy defeats thanks to this.



** The Mechanicus unleashes one of its most powerful available weapons - one that submerges an entire region of space into a brutal wall of fire that annihilates anything it touches.

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** The Mechanicus unleashes one of its most powerful available weapons - one that submerges an entire region of space into a brutal wall of fire that annihilates anything it touches.touches and lasts for hours.



** Sliscus gets a villainous moment of his own when he ruins Hoth's plan to sink Pavia into the Warp - by sending ships to destroy the cultists that would have done the deed. He then activates a huge superweapon made out of the SpaceHulk he controls.

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** Sliscus gets a villainous moment of his own when he ruins Hoth's plan to sink Pavia into the Warp - by sending ships to destroy the cultists that would have done the deed. He then activates a huge superweapon made out of the SpaceHulk Space Hulk he controls.



*** Taylor is dangerous enough that the Custodes makes a mental note to have the defenses of the '''Golden Throne updated'''.

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*** Taylor is dangerous enough that the Custodes makes a mental note to have the defenses of the '''Golden Throne updated'''.updated''' - and even then he considers that it may not be enough.



** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about other dangers.

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** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some twenty-something old human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of been alive when the Fall) Fall happened) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about other dangers.



** The mission the Custodes gave to Taylor? '''''Destroy Commorragh'''''. How do they reach the place? '''''By being the first humans since the Emperor to open an entrance into the Webway.''''' How do they get the military strength they need? '''''[[SerialEscalation THEY ALLY WITH NEFERTEN'S NECRONS!!!]]''''' The author was not lying when he said things were going to escalate.

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** The mission the Custodes gave to Taylor? '''''Destroy Commorragh'''''. How do they reach the place? '''''By being the first humans since the Emperor to open an entrance into the Webway.''''' How do they get the military strength they need? '''''[[SerialEscalation THEY ALLY WITH NEFERTEN'S NECRONS!!!]]''''' [[NotHyperbole The author was not lying when he said things were going to escalate.escalate]].
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*** Taylor is dangerous enough that the Custodes makes a mental note to have the defenses of the '''Golden Throne updated'''.
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** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about Malicia.

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** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about Malicia.other dangers.



** The mission the Custodes gave to Taylor? '''''Destroy Commorragh'''''. How do they reach the place? '''''By being the first humans since the Emperor to open an entrance into the Webway.''''' How do they get the military strength they need? '''''[[SerialEscalation THEY ALLY WITH NEPHERETH'S NECRONS!!!]]''''' The author was not lying when he said things were going to escalate.

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** The mission the Custodes gave to Taylor? '''''Destroy Commorragh'''''. How do they reach the place? '''''By being the first humans since the Emperor to open an entrance into the Webway.''''' How do they get the military strength they need? '''''[[SerialEscalation THEY ALLY WITH NEPHERETH'S NEFERTEN'S NECRONS!!!]]''''' The author was not lying when he said things were going to escalate.
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** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, even accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about Malicia.

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** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, even accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about Malicia.

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** The next chapter shows how overwhelming victory was: the pirates lose 13,000+ starfighters, almost a thousand starships of different sizes, thirty-five star bases, two star forts and more than 47 million pirates. Losing just a couple of lower-end spaceships. Again, ''in fifty hours''.
** The Custodes actually acknowledges that Taylor is dangerous. And Taylor is talking to one of the most powerful men in the Imperium almost like an equal.

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** The next chapter shows indicates how overwhelming victory was: the pirates lose 13,000+ starfighters, almost a thousand starships of different sizes, thirty-five star bases, two star forts and more than 47 million pirates. Losing just a couple of lower-end spaceships. Again, ''in fifty hours''.
** The Custodes (the kind of guy that is to Space Marines what Space Marines are to common people) actually acknowledges that Taylor is dangerous. And Taylor is talking to one of the most powerful men in the Imperium almost like an equal. equal.
** With time running short after the Custodes charges Taylor with a mission, Taylor personally goes to Sliscus' flagship. The assault is another curbstomp that only ends when they reach Sliscus himself.
** Sliscus pulls off ''another'' surprise: he has ''Shrax'lor'', another of the Swords of Vaul, which kills every insect Taylor throws at him - and after the Imperials destroy Sliscus' spaceship, Taylor comes in and personally engages the Dark Eldar. The result is a duel that every Space Marine around compare as just below the Emperor's duel with Horus, with Taylor (a twenty-some human) not only matching Sliscus (who is old enough to have heard of the Fall) blow by blow, but defeating him, all while still controlling all the insects running around the ship - and laying traps made of silk that end cutting off Sliscus' hand, forcing the Dark Eldar to admit he has been defeated, even accepting [[WorthyOpponent there's no shame in losing to her]] and even warning her about Malicia.
** Taylor is now powerful enough ''to keep an Eldar's soul from being claimed by Slaanesh''.
** The mission the Custodes gave to Taylor? '''''Destroy Commorragh'''''. How do they reach the place? '''''By being the first humans since the Emperor to open an entrance into the Webway.''''' How do they get the military strength they need? '''''[[SerialEscalation THEY ALLY WITH NEPHERETH'S NECRONS!!!]]''''' The author was not lying when he said things were going to escalate.

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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Two days later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low. It's so impressive that a ''Custode'' gives Weaver the Emperor's Thanks and congratulations for her victory ''in person''.

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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Two days Fifty hours later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low. It's so impressive that a ''Custode'' ''Custodes'' gives Weaver the Emperor's Thanks and congratulations for her victory ''in person''.person''.
** The next chapter shows how overwhelming victory was: the pirates lose 13,000+ starfighters, almost a thousand starships of different sizes, thirty-five star bases, two star forts and more than 47 million pirates. Losing just a couple of lower-end spaceships. Again, ''in fifty hours''.
** The Custodes actually acknowledges that Taylor is dangerous. And Taylor is talking to one of the most powerful men in the Imperium almost like an equal.
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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Two days later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low.

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** In short - at the moment the overt part of Operation Caribbean began, Pavia was the home of the thirteen most dangerous pirate fleets in the quadrant. Two days later, eleven of said fleets have been suborned, destroyed, captured, or forced to flee - with the hopes of the last two making it out in any condition to cause trouble for anyone else in the near future being very, very low. It's so impressive that a ''Custode'' gives Weaver the Emperor's Thanks and congratulations for her victory ''in person''.

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** When one ship manages to escape the aforementioned Mechanicus weapon, Taylor orders the use of ''another'' weapon - boarding torpedos filled with two of the most lethal insect species in her arsenal. They clean up the ship's interior without a problem.

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** When one ship manages to escape the aforementioned Mechanicus weapon, Taylor orders the use of ''another'' weapon - boarding torpedos torpedoes filled with two of the most lethal insect species in her arsenal. They clean up the ship's interior without a problem.


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* The Heracles Wardens manage to sneak into the ''Palace of Feasting'' and subvert the entire station in a few hours. Without being detected.
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* The Battle of Pavia. Full stop. If there's something to prove to the Imperium how to make successful campaigns, ''this'' is one of them.
** Five years of preparation have a big pay-off. Being able to overwhelm the enemy is just the first.
** The Heracles Wardens' infiltration ensures the subversion of the Rashan pirate fleet and the takeover of the main starforts in the system.
** Three fleets get destroyed from a distance before they can do a thing.
** The Mechanicus unleashes one of its most powerful available weapons - one that submerges an entire region of space into a brutal wall of fire that annihilates anything it touches.
** When one ship manages to escape the aforementioned Mechanicus weapon, Taylor orders the use of ''another'' weapon - boarding torpedos filled with two of the most lethal insect species in her arsenal. They clean up the ship's interior without a problem.
** Sliscus gets a villainous moment of his own when he ruins Hoth's plan to sink Pavia into the Warp - by sending ships to destroy the cultists that would have done the deed. He then activates a huge superweapon made out of the SpaceHulk he controls.
** That's when the Necrons make their appearance: their World Engine (strategically stealthed as a moon) fires ''once'' and sends a shockwave through the entire Imperial fleet, while wiping out Sliscus' own superweapon.
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* According to the FictionalDocument at the beginning of 6.3, the victory in Operation Caribbean was important enough to merit placing a banner in front of the Eternity Gate - a feat only awarded to the greatest heroes of the Imperium.
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* During the Matapan rebellion, Clockblocker and Vista get to show what they can really do with the support of the Mechanicus: the former can project fields of stopped time, the latter can outright wipe out entire armies by creating huge pits under them.
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** Combining with a Funny Moment, Trazyn steals the entire relief Eldar force and sends a mocking message to Manorith thanking him for his generous donation to his collection.
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* Taylor indirectly touching [[spoiler:the Tyranid Hivemind]] while taking control of a Catachan ant. And surviving. For the record, the number of people in 40K canon who have done that without ending up dead or insane as a direct result is ''one'' - Chief Librarian Tigurius of the Ultramarines.
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* The Dragon armors are such a novel concept and powerful weapon that, when Ryza begins to deploy them against Chaos, they start losing their Heldrakes in droves, with one Chaos leader realizing that they are suffering heavy defeats thanks to this.
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* Contessa leading the Knights Errant into an Inquisitorial secret fortress to rescue Missy "Vista" Brown.

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* Contessa leading the Knights Errant into an Inquisitorial secret fortress to rescue Missy "Vista" Brown.Biron.
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** [[spoiler:Trazyn the Infinite Collector nonchalantly requests an audience with Taylor under disguise - and when discovered, he is completely unperturbed. Also doubles as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.]]

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** [[spoiler:Trazyn the Infinite Collector nonchalantly requests an audience with Taylor under disguise - and when discovered, he is completely unperturbed. Also doubles as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}.]]
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* In a room that contains high-ranked members of every branch of the Imperium, as soon as Taylor (a teenager who, just a few weeks before, was a Major of the Imperial Guard) steps inside, everyone knows ''who'' is going to call the shots.

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* In a room that contains high-ranked members of every branch of the Imperium, as soon as Taylor (a teenager who, just a few weeks months before, was a Major of didn't even ''exist'' from the Imperial Guard) Imperium's point of view) steps inside, everyone knows ''who'' is going to call the shots.



* Taylor, faced off with a Marshall of the Black Templars (the Space Marines that make even the fiercest fundamentalist look like a nice person), finds herself underwhelmingly unimpressed.

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* Taylor, faced off with a Marshall of the Black Templars (the Space Marines that make even the fiercest fundamentalist look like a nice person), Mr Rogers), finds herself underwhelmingly unimpressed.



*** What said daughter was doing? Acting like a vigilante and punishing people who were getting away with multiple crimes. Not something you usually see.

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*** What said daughter was doing? Acting like a vigilante and vigilante, punishing people who were getting away with multiple crimes. crimes and preventing others. Not something you usually see.see in this universe.



** During the assault on the Izmir Palace, the Ancient Dreadnought Pierre of the Heracles Wardens [[spoiler:formerly the Alpha Legionaries]] sneaks around the Dawnbreaker Guard and brings the doors down single-handedly.

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** During the assault on the Izmir Palace, the Ancient Dreadnought Pierre of the Heracles Wardens [[spoiler:formerly the Alpha Legionaries]] sneaks around the Dawnbreaker Guard and brings the doors down single-handedly.single-handedly while being an absolute {{Troll}}.
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** Leet, in the meantime, repeats his previous feat - and exorcises the demons in the ship with one of his devices.

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** Leet, in the meantime, repeats his previous feat - and exorcises the demons in the ship with one of his devices.by building a BFG 9000.



* Taylor, faced off with the leader of the Black Templars (the Space Marines that make even the fiercest fundamentalist look like a nice person), finds herself underwhelmingly unimpressed.

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* Taylor, faced off with the leader a Marshall of the Black Templars (the Space Marines that make even the fiercest fundamentalist look like a nice person), finds herself underwhelmingly unimpressed.
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* As the Imperials finally manage to escape the [[spoiler:Ork Battle Moon]], they find themselves in a worse situation - they are attacked by the ''Certamen Ferale'', a ''Chaos Space Marine warship''. But the Empire has also sent massive reinforcements, and the space battle soon turns as brutal as the battle on land was.

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* As the Imperials finally manage to escape the [[spoiler:Ork Battle Moon]], they find themselves in a worse situation - they are attacked by the ''Certamen Ferale'', a ''Chaos Space Marine warship''. But the Empire Imperium has also sent massive reinforcements, and the space battle soon turns as brutal as the battle on land was.
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* Taylor appears in the middle of an unknown place, surrounded by Imperial Guard men and women (who dress way too similar to the Empire 88 for her taste), in the aftermath of the battle against Behemoth - and about five minutes before the Imperial Guard's position is attacked by a massive number of Orks. Instead of staying back, she jumps in on the defence, shooting with a weapon she has never used in her life, and then begins to simultaneously control ''millions'' of bugs, using them to blind and kill as many orks and possible - and ''single-handedly killing the Ork leader'', breaking the back of the first strike. '''''That''''' is just the beginning - and completely changes the course of history.

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* Taylor appears in the middle of an unknown place, surrounded by Imperial Guard men and women (who dress way too similar to the Empire 88 for her taste), in the aftermath of the battle against Behemoth - and about five minutes before the Imperial Guard's position is attacked by a massive number of Orks. Instead of staying back, she jumps in on the defence, shooting fighting with a weapon sword she has never used in her life, used, and then begins to simultaneously control ''millions'' of bugs, using them to blind and kill as many orks and as possible - and ''single-handedly killing the Ork leader'', breaking the back of the first strike. '''''That''''' is just the beginning - and completely changes the course of history.

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* [[spoiler:Leet kills the Ork Warboss with a HolyHandGrenade. Granted, he also kills five allied Alpha Legionaries at the same time, so not so awesome.]]

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* [[spoiler:Leet kills Leet debuts by killing the Ork Warboss with a HolyHandGrenade. Granted, he also kills five allied Alpha Legionaries at the same time, so not so awesome.]]



** Taylor faces off [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha]] without fear, even though she is five feet ten to the demon's fifty feet - and rips a Baal ruby that belonged to ''Sanguinius''. [[spoiler:Cue all the Brothers of the Red standing up and pummelling Ka'Bandha and the demons with a blaze of bolters, while Taylor goes to town on Ka'Bandha.]]

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** Taylor faces off [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha]] without fear, even though she is five feet ten to the demon's fifty fifty-plus feet - and rips a Baal ruby that belonged to ''Sanguinius''. [[spoiler:Cue all the Brothers of the Red standing up and pummelling Ka'Bandha and the demons with a blaze of bolters, while Taylor goes to town on Ka'Bandha.]]


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* The KneelBeforeFrodo moment: [[spoiler:Taylor homaged by the Guards and the Space Marines after she recovers from her injuries.]]
!!Decision
* In a room that contains high-ranked members of every branch of the Imperium, as soon as Taylor (a teenager who, just a few weeks before, was a Major of the Imperial Guard) steps inside, everyone knows ''who'' is going to call the shots.
* Leet actually managing to intimidate Taylor - even though he was not trying to do it to her.
* Taylor, Clockblocker, Vista and Leet calling Contessa out for how they completely screwed up their supposed plans - and the way they left Brockton Bay to rot.
* Taylor, faced off with the leader of the Black Templars (the Space Marines that make even the fiercest fundamentalist look like a nice person), finds herself underwhelmingly unimpressed.
* After much convincing, Taylor decides that becoming the Governor of the Nyx Sector is the best way to proceed with her plans to push humanity back into the path of restoration.
** When she lands on the planet, Nostradamus Vandire (the other main candidate for the position) sends the Nyx elite PDF troops, the Purebloods, to arrest and/or kill her. Taylor releases a bunch of butterflies - and ten seconds later, all the Purebloods are dropping off asleep.
** Nostradamus tries to blackmail a Nyx noble with revealing the actions of his daughter. Said noble decides to take his chances.
*** What said daughter was doing? Acting like a vigilante and punishing people who were getting away with multiple crimes. Not something you usually see.
** Taylor faces off against Nostradamus Vandire and dominates the field easily, recounting the man's actions and completely ripping him off for his corruption. And then renders him unto the Inquisition, so he can pay for his many, many crimes.
** Taylor proving that her time as a Warlord and some common sense have helped forge her into a very good governor - it is telling that, in the future, her governorship is remarked as a GoldenAge for Nyx.
*** One of her first actions is to decide about what to do with the nobles. Unlike her predecessors, she is all too willing to have the worst of them punished - one of them, who had a penchant for [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil sexually abusing]] [[WouldHurtAChild children]], is sentenced to death by hanging, and Taylor orders that said hanging be as long and painful as possible - while giving those that can still redeem themselves a second chance.
** During the assault on the Izmir Palace, the Ancient Dreadnought Pierre of the Heracles Wardens [[spoiler:formerly the Alpha Legionaries]] sneaks around the Dawnbreaker Guard and brings the doors down single-handedly.
** [[spoiler:Trazyn the Infinite Collector nonchalantly requests an audience with Taylor under disguise - and when discovered, he is completely unperturbed. Also doubles as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.]]

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** After that fight, Trazyn tries to take Taylor, Lankovar and Gavreel for his collection. Taylor promptly shows him that she's far from defenceless - by throwing every bug nearby at him. Trazyn decides she requires too much effort to be worth the reward and leaves - not before gifting her the [[CoolSword Nebula's Shard]], a relic from the War in Heaven.

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** After that fight, Trazyn tries to take Taylor, Lankovar and Gavreel for his collection. Taylor promptly shows him that she's far from defenceless defenseless - by throwing every bug nearby at him. Trazyn decides she requires too much effort to be worth the reward and leaves - not before gifting her the [[CoolSword Nebula's Shard]], a relic from the War in Heaven.



** [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha manages to hit Taylor with its whip, and then throws a spear at her - but a Wuhanese soldier jumps between them...]]

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** [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha manages to hit Taylor with its whip, and then throws a spear at her - but a [[TakingTheBullet Wuhanese soldier jumps between them...them]]...]]



* Gladiel Imrik willingly returns to his Craftworld, even though he knows he will become the scapegoat for their defeat in the [[spoiler:Death Star]] - because he knows his men do not deserve punishment.

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* Gladiel Imrik willingly returns to his Craftworld, even though he knows he will become the scapegoat for their defeat in the [[spoiler:Death Star]] - because he knows his men do not deserve punishment.punishment.
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!!Arrival
* The Last Ultramarine screwing up with the ritual in the beginning, allowing Taylor to be brought to the future, yet preventing Chaos from laying claim to her.
* Taylor appears in the middle of an unknown place, surrounded by Imperial Guard men and women (who dress way too similar to the Empire 88 for her taste), in the aftermath of the battle against Behemoth - and about five minutes before the Imperial Guard's position is attacked by a massive number of Orks. Instead of staying back, she jumps in on the defence, shooting with a weapon she has never used in her life, and then begins to simultaneously control ''millions'' of bugs, using them to blind and kill as many orks and possible - and ''single-handedly killing the Ork leader'', breaking the back of the first strike. '''''That''''' is just the beginning - and completely changes the course of history.
* The Nyx Fleet shipmen and tech-priests of the ''Gracious Overlord'' taking some bloody vengeance on the idiotic Admiral that ordered the purge of a tenth of its crew.
* The Fay 20th, aided by the 6th and the 8th, number about 14,000 soldiers - and they are very much outnumbered by the quarter-million Orks that have invaded Fay. With a solid defense, a big bomb and some very nasty use of insects by Taylor, the Orks are destroyed, saving not only Fay - but also three other planets.
!!Arrival Interlude
* Even without [[spoiler:Khepri]], humanity was able to defeat [[spoiler:Scion during the Golden Morning]].
* [[spoiler:Malcador the Sigillite]] convincing Psamtic Mehhur, a former Rubric Marine (remember, a ''Chaos Space Marine'') to join his Knights Errant.
!!Peril
* Taylor nonchalantly killing [[SinisterMinister Priest Warchost Solav-Byukur]] with a razorbeetle.
* Gavreel Forcas, of the Dark Angels Legion, makes his debut by wiping his way through Wuhan's Hive Asao's underhive.
* The Fay 20th becomes the first Imperial unit to fight the Necrons and survive.
* Trazyn the Infinite Collector, Taylor, Lankovar and Gavreel fight and defeat Iash'uddra the Endless Swarm, the First Endbringer.
** After that fight, Trazyn tries to take Taylor, Lankovar and Gavreel for his collection. Taylor promptly shows him that she's far from defenceless - by throwing every bug nearby at him. Trazyn decides she requires too much effort to be worth the reward and leaves - not before gifting her the [[CoolSword Nebula's Shard]], a relic from the War in Heaven.
!!Peril Interlude
* Contessa leading the Knights Errant into an Inquisitorial secret fortress to rescue Missy "Vista" Brown.
* [[spoiler:Sophia Hess]] landed in Necromunda, but manages to survive for long enough to get off - only to get recruited into the Officio Assassinorum - as a Callidus.
!!Sentinel
* Taylor impresses Gavreel enough that he would have recommended her for immediate Astartes recruitment if female Space Marines existed.
* Wei Cao, a formerly pampered Wuhan noble, chooses to join the Imperial Guard - and when it turns out she is not going to get any prestigious position, she just eats crow and takes on everything put in front of her.
* The Battle of Andes Primus: a battallion of Eldar attacks the Imperial forces because they want the Nebula's Shard. Enter Dragon and her new tank making mincemeat of the Eldars' tanks, the Imperials fighting like demons - and Taylor wielding the Nebula's Shard, turning every Eldar it touches into crystal.
!!Sentinel Interlude
* [[LittleMissBadass Vista]] telling Contessa off.
!!Escalation
* The ''Magos Laurentis'' is forced to land on an [[spoiler:Ork Battle Moon]]. The Imperial Guard and the Mechanicus engage in a days-long non-stop battle against the Orks [[spoiler:and a battallion of Eldars seeking revenge for the deaths in Andes]] and ''win''.
* Seeing the magnitude of the fight before them, Magos Lankovar decides the GodzillaThreshold has been passed and authorizes [[spoiler:Dragon]] to use her flying armors, as well as giving Taylor all the insects she needs. Needless to say, both prove ''very'' useful during the Battle of the Death Star.
* Taylor finds [[spoiler:a '''Standard Template Construct Database''']].
* Autarch-Mariner Gladiel Imrik calling out High Farseer Aessen Manorith for his idiotic determination in trying to retrieve the Nebula's Shard from the [[spoiler:Ork Battle Moon]], even though it risks the lives of all the Eldar in the fleet.
* The Black Templars on board of the ship found in the [[spoiler:Death Star]] did not go gentle into the night. [[spoiler:Gavreel manages to find a still-working cryogenic chamber containing multiple gene-seeds that was protected by the Apothecary to his last breath.]]
* Colonel Larkine is mortally killed by a bunch of Eldar - but Larkine does not leave alone, because he throws a plasma grenade with his only remaining arm and wipes out six Eldar - including a High Farseer.
* The Space Marines [[spoiler:(a band of Renegade Alpha Legionaries)]] arrive in time to act as TheCavalry.
* [[spoiler:Leet kills the Ork Warboss with a HolyHandGrenade. Granted, he also kills five allied Alpha Legionaries at the same time, so not so awesome.]]
* As the Imperials finally manage to escape the [[spoiler:Ork Battle Moon]], they find themselves in a worse situation - they are attacked by the ''Certamen Ferale'', a ''Chaos Space Marine warship''. But the Empire has also sent massive reinforcements, and the space battle soon turns as brutal as the battle on land was.
* When the Chaos Space Marines and demons assault the spaceship she is in, [[spoiler:Vista]] uses her SpaceMaster powers to great effectivity, sending enemy troops directly in the path of death or causing the demons to kill each other.
* Dragon pulverizing a dragon-like demon in a few seconds.
* Commissar Zuhev, a normal (if slightly augmented) human, crossing swords against a Champion of Khorne and ''winning''.
* The climax: the fight against [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha, the Angel's Bane, the Second Endbringer]].
** [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha opens the game by knocking out the Brothers of the Red (numbering more than a hundred) in a second, without touching them.]]
** Taylor faces off [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha]] without fear, even though she is five feet ten to the demon's fifty feet - and rips a Baal ruby that belonged to ''Sanguinius''. [[spoiler:Cue all the Brothers of the Red standing up and pummelling Ka'Bandha and the demons with a blaze of bolters, while Taylor goes to town on Ka'Bandha.]]
** [[spoiler:Ka'Bandha manages to hit Taylor with its whip, and then throws a spear at her - but a Wuhanese soldier jumps between them...]]
** [[spoiler:... allowing Taylor to move, stand up (even though her legs are broken) - and proceed to ''destroy'' Ka'Bandha in five swipes of the Nebula's Shard, becoming one of the Emperor's Living Saints.]]
** Leet, in the meantime, repeats his previous feat - and exorcises the demons in the ship with one of his devices.
!!Escalation Interlude
* Gladiel Imrik willingly returns to his Craftworld, even though he knows he will become the scapegoat for their defeat in the [[spoiler:Death Star]] - because he knows his men do not deserve punishment.

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