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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and tells her in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination.
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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and tells her him in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination.
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'''Kathryn''': I do! You are little more than a dog scrounging for food at the King's chair! I am more then what you or that weakling of a king could ever dream of! [[YouHaveNoIdeaWhoYoureDealingWith You have no idea who you're dealing with]] —
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'''Kathryn''': I do! You are little more than a dog scrounging for food at the King's chair! I am more then than what you or that weakling of a king could ever dream of! [[YouHaveNoIdeaWhoYoureDealingWith You have no idea who you're dealing with]] —
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'''General Victis''': Bastard! ''[points his sword at Beronor's chest]'' I may be old and tired, aye. But I had PERFECT judgement when I was out there with my men! It was not my judgement that made the arrows ''bounce'' off of the brute's scales! It was not my old age that gave that creature such a deadly ferocity that it tore my men apart with little effort! If you believe that our army is sufficient to take it down Beronor, then you won't mind when I volunteer you to be at the front line leading the men when the thing next comes!
** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor's dwarves to create any Black Arrows they can for whatever price they ask. Lords Beronor and Gregorse try to protest against asking for help from the people they planned to "discreetly" conquer. The gentle, pregnant, and recently widowed Queen [[SilkHidingSteel puts a stop to their nonsense]] in a way that makes Quithyra proud to serve Lalemwen.
** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor's dwarves to create any Black Arrows they can for whatever price they ask. Lords Beronor and Gregorse try to protest against asking for help from the people they planned to "discreetly" conquer. The gentle, pregnant, and recently widowed Queen [[SilkHidingSteel puts a stop to their nonsense]] in a way that makes Quithyra proud to serve Lalemwen.
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'''General Victis''': Bastard! ''[points his sword at Beronor's chest]'' I may be old and tired, aye. But I had PERFECT judgement when I was out there with my men! It was not my judgement that made the arrows ''bounce'' off of the brute's scales! It was not my old age that gave that creature such a deadly ferocity that it tore my men apart with little effort! If you believe that our army is sufficient to take it down down, Beronor, then you won't mind when I volunteer you to be at the front line leading the men when the thing next comes!
** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor'sdwarves Dwarves to create any Black Arrows they can for whatever price they ask. Lords Beronor and Gregorse try to protest against asking for help from the people they planned to "discreetly" conquer. The gentle, pregnant, and recently widowed Queen [[SilkHidingSteel puts a stop to their nonsense]] in a way that makes Quithyra proud to serve Lalemwen.
** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor's
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** When Kathryn arrives at the Door of Night under Fankil's control, Irmo frees her before giving her a power-boost. When she wakes up in the physical world, she frees herself and fights Fankil, even taking the form of a dragon.
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** When Kathryn arrives at the Door of Night under Fankil's control, Irmo frees her before giving her a power-boost.power boost. When she wakes up in the physical world, she frees herself and fights Fankil, even taking the form of a dragon.
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''[Smaug nearly attacks Galadriel, but then he ponders on what Sauron has done to him and Kathryn, and makes up his mind]''\\
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''[Smaug nearly attacks Galadriel, but then he ponders on what Sauron has done to him and Kathryn, Kathryn and makes up his mind]''\\
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brand's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing losing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brand's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's Brand's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.soul.
* After Aragorn falls in the river during the fight against Saruman's Warg-riders, Kathryn saves him by briefly summoning Arwen to revitalize his will to live.
* After Aragorn falls in the river during the fight against Saruman's Warg-riders, Kathryn saves him by briefly summoning Arwen to revitalize his will to live.
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** Smaug defeats Urgost in battle rather quickly.
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** Smaug defeats Urgost in battle rather quickly.quickly.
* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
* Smaug and Faervel's battle of wits in the 15th chapter that's borrowed from ''Film/StarTrekIntoDarkness''. You can practically hear [[Creator/BenedictCumberbatch the shared actor of Smaug and Khan]] uttering the slightly different threats. But then, [[NervesOfSteel without loosing his cool]], Faervel [[YouOweMe calls upon the favour Smaug swore to him]] in the previous story and forces the dragon to accept King Brandon's condition that Kathryn will be returned to him once he returns from the north and leaves Erebor and Dale without harming a single soul.
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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and [[FamousLastWords tells her in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination]].
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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and [[FamousLastWords tells her in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination]].imagination.
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-->'''Kathryn''': ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Never.]]'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Insult. My children.]]
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-->'''Kathryn''': ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Never.]]'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Insult. My children.]]]]
** When Urgost earlier threatens Kathryn for refusing to look him in the eye, the twins leave their hiding place behind her to perch on her shoulders and hiss at Urgost even though they're scared themselves by the adult dragon.
** Smaug defeats Urgost in battle rather quickly.
** When Urgost earlier threatens Kathryn for refusing to look him in the eye, the twins leave their hiding place behind her to perch on her shoulders and hiss at Urgost even though they're scared themselves by the adult dragon.
** Smaug defeats Urgost in battle rather quickly.
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'''Smaug''': For what Sauron has done, I vow to kill him and all that he rules for this insult!
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'''Smaug''': For what Sauron has done, I vow to kill him and all that he rules for this insult!insult!
* When Urgost calls Kolstros and Vervenia unnatural half-breeds, [[MamaBear Kathryn]] gives him in the chest a magical blast so powerful that he's almost driven back.
-->'''Kathryn''': ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Never.]]'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Insult. My children.]]
* When Urgost calls Kolstros and Vervenia unnatural half-breeds, [[MamaBear Kathryn]] gives him in the chest a magical blast so powerful that he's almost driven back.
-->'''Kathryn''': ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Never.]]'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Insult. My children.]]
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** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears to loom over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.
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** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears to loom over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.off.
* When Smaug refuses to help Lothlórien's Elves to repel the Orcs of Dol Guldur and leave Kathryn to endure her difficult labour, Galadriel changes his mind by suggesting that he's too cowardly to stand against Sauron. Smaug comes very close to devouring her in outrage, only to decide to [[NobodyCallsMeChicken prove he's no coward]] and [[NeutralNoLonger swear to destroy Sauron for all the pain the Dark Lord has given him and Kathryn]]. The Lady of Lothlórien called Smaug the Golden a coward and got away with it!
-->'''Galadriel''': Perhaps I was mistaken, then. Perhaps you are not the famed dragon-dread who could slay an army as he did the great warriors of old. Perhaps you are just a snake too craven to stand against the Dark Lord.\\
''[Smaug nearly attacks Galadriel, but then he ponders on what Sauron has done to him and Kathryn, and makes up his mind]''\\
'''Smaug''': For what Sauron has done, I vow to kill him and all that he rules for this insult!
* When Smaug refuses to help Lothlórien's Elves to repel the Orcs of Dol Guldur and leave Kathryn to endure her difficult labour, Galadriel changes his mind by suggesting that he's too cowardly to stand against Sauron. Smaug comes very close to devouring her in outrage, only to decide to [[NobodyCallsMeChicken prove he's no coward]] and [[NeutralNoLonger swear to destroy Sauron for all the pain the Dark Lord has given him and Kathryn]]. The Lady of Lothlórien called Smaug the Golden a coward and got away with it!
-->'''Galadriel''': Perhaps I was mistaken, then. Perhaps you are not the famed dragon-dread who could slay an army as he did the great warriors of old. Perhaps you are just a snake too craven to stand against the Dark Lord.\\
''[Smaug nearly attacks Galadriel, but then he ponders on what Sauron has done to him and Kathryn, and makes up his mind]''\\
'''Smaug''': For what Sauron has done, I vow to kill him and all that he rules for this insult!
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* In the 7th chapter, [[CoolVersusAwesome Smaug faces Moria's Balrog]] in a vicious fight. Smaug has to use his brain as much as his brawn. See [[https://adonovan94.deviantart.com/art/Smaug-the-Golden-vs-Durin-s-Bane-737010665 here]] for the author's drawing.
** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.
** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.
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* In the 7th chapter, [[CoolVersusAwesome Smaug faces Moria's Balrog]] in a vicious fight. Despite being at least twice as big, Smaug has to use his brain as much as his brawn. See [[https://adonovan94.deviantart.com/art/Smaug-the-Golden-vs-Durin-s-Bane-737010665 here]] for the author's drawing.
** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears to loom over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.
** While Smaug's facing the Balrog, Kathryn tries to resuscitate Gandalf by transferring Raw Magic into him. When the Balrog appears to loom over them, Gandalf temporarily wakes up to charge his sword with a thunderbolt and stab the Balrog's chest, after which Smaug finishes the creature off.
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* The final fight. Fankil proves himself to be [[StrongerThanTheyLook quick and tough]] enough to give Smaug a hard time.
** When Kathryn arrives at the Door of Night under Fankil's control, Irmo frees her before giving her a power-boost. When she wakes up in the physical world, she frees herself and fights Fankil, even taking the form of a dragon.
** When Kathryn arrives at the Door of Night under Fankil's control, Irmo frees her before giving her a power-boost. When she wakes up in the physical world, she frees herself and fights Fankil, even taking the form of a dragon.
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* Smaug gives Andraya a CruelAndUnusualDeath when she's revealed to have given Kathryn to Fankil as RevengeByProxy towards Smaug.
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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. [[spoiler:Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and [[FamousLastWords tells her in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination]].]]
* [[spoiler:Smaug nearly bites Bard's leg off, with only Tauriel's interference saving the Bowman. Despite this, he's able to get to the still working windlance and use it to shoot the Black Arrow into Smaug's heart.]]
* [[spoiler:Kathryn tries to save Smaug from death by using her Raw Magic to heal him. She overexerts herself and dies. However, it ultimately turns out that her effort does save him as well as unwittingly transform him into a human.]]
* [[spoiler:Smaug nearly bites Bard's leg off, with only Tauriel's interference saving the Bowman. Despite this, he's able to get to the still working windlance and use it to shoot the Black Arrow into Smaug's heart.]]
* [[spoiler:Kathryn tries to save Smaug from death by using her Raw Magic to heal him. She overexerts herself and dies. However, it ultimately turns out that her effort does save him as well as unwittingly transform him into a human.]]
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* Tauriel helping Bard fight against Smaug. [[spoiler:Even Even when he crushes most of her bones and she's helpless to prevent him from killing her, she [[DefiantToTheEnd refuses to beg for mercy]] and [[FamousLastWords tells her in Elvish that he's a king only in his own imagination]].]]
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* When Smaug runs from Vathvael [[spoiler:in the midst of his PainfulTransformation]], Kathryn tells the guards keeping her confined in her chambers to bring her Faervel. When they refuse, she repeats her request in an assertive way before slamming the door in their faces, after which they obey. When one of them refuses to leave her alone with the elf, she scares him away with her glowing eyes.
* After [[spoiler:Smaug transforms into a half-man/half-dragon that acts like a wild animal]], Kathryn manages to [[spoiler:calm him down [[MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast by singing to him]]. She then enters his mind and uses her magic to return him to a dragon]].
* After [[spoiler:Smaug transforms into a half-man/half-dragon that acts like a wild animal]], Kathryn manages to [[spoiler:calm him down [[MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast by singing to him]]. She then enters his mind and uses her magic to return him to a dragon]].
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* When Smaug runs from Vathvael [[spoiler:in in the midst of his PainfulTransformation]], PainfulTransformation, Kathryn tells the guards keeping her confined in her chambers to bring her Faervel. When they refuse, she repeats her request in an assertive way before slamming the door in their faces, after which they obey. When one of them refuses to leave her alone with the elf, she scares him away with her glowing eyes.
* After[[spoiler:Smaug Smaug transforms into a half-man/half-dragon that acts like a wild animal]], animal, Kathryn manages to [[spoiler:calm calm him down [[MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast by singing to him]]. She then enters his mind and uses her magic to return him to a dragon]].dragon.
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** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor's dwarves to create any Black Arrows they can for whatever price they ask. Lords Beronor and Gregorse try to protest against asking for help from the people they planned to "discreetly" conquer. The gentle, pregnant, and recently [[spoiler:widowed]] Queen [[SilkHidingSteel puts a stop to their nonsense]] in a way that makes Quithyra proud to serve Lalemwen.
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** At the end of that same scene, Queen Lalemwen decides to ask Erebor's dwarves to create any Black Arrows they can for whatever price they ask. Lords Beronor and Gregorse try to protest against asking for help from the people they planned to "discreetly" conquer. The gentle, pregnant, and recently [[spoiler:widowed]] widowed Queen [[SilkHidingSteel puts a stop to their nonsense]] in a way that makes Quithyra proud to serve Lalemwen.
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* In the 15th chapter, Kathryn sees in a vision how [[{{Kaiju}} Ancalagon the Black]] led the dragons on a devastating onslaught against the forces of the Valar, turning the tide of battle in Morgoth's favor.
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'''Lord Beronor''': Your Majesty, please listen to us when we say --\\
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'''Lord Beronor''': Your Majesty, please listen to us when we say --\\—\\
