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* Legolas' famous Mumak slaying at Pelennor Fields, complete with trunk slide, is witnessed by Thorin and Dain, the latter of whom somewhat dazedly says he needs a drink and a pipe after watching that, because it's just ridiculously magnificent.
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* Legolas' Legolas's famous Mumak Mûmakil slaying at Pelennor Fields, complete with trunk slide, is witnessed by Thorin and Dain, Dáin, the latter of whom somewhat dazedly says he needs a drink and a pipe after watching that, that because it's just ridiculously magnificent.
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* Legolas' famous Mumak slaying at Pelennor Fields, complete with trunk slide, is witnessed by Thorin and Dain, the latter of whom somewhat dazedly says he needs a drink and a pipe after watching that, because it's just ridiculously magnificent.
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* Legolas follows in their path over a century later, and manages it alone, albeit with the remnants of their equipment.
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* Kíli revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
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* Kíli revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves Elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
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* The entire Fellowship is a BadassCrew, with Thorin - a renowned warrior in his own right, and well-placed to judge - remarking on their skill: Aragorn is the single best swordsman he's ever seen, Gimli (to his semi-paternal pride) is the best axeman in two centuries, and Legolas is a ridiculously skilled MasterArcher who leaves even Thorin in very grudging stunned silence at his abilities (such as the famous shield slide in Helm's Deep). Gandalf, meanwhile, leaves him in awe with having matched the greatest heroes of antiquity and slain a Balrog in single combat.
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* Galadriel's fight with Khamûl. She not only sends him to the Void, she destroys Dol Guldur.
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* Galadriel's fight with Khamûl. She not only sends him to the Void, but she also destroys Dol Guldur.
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* Bilbo's argument with Námo and Manwe as if he's not facing down one of the Valar and their Doomsman. Only Bilbo could pull it off.
* Kili revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
* Kili revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
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* Bilbo's argument with Námo and Manwe Manwë as if he's not facing down one of the Valar and their Doomsman. Only Bilbo could pull it off.
*Kili Kíli revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
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* Bilbo's argument with Namo and Manwe, as if he's not facing down one of the Valar and their Doomsman. Only Bilbo could pull it off.
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* Bilbo's argument with Namo Námo and Manwe, Manwe as if he's not facing down one of the Valar and their Doomsman. Only Bilbo could pull it off.
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* Tauriel and Celebrimbor's determination to find their way to the Halls of Mahal. It takes them many attempts but they don't give up.
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* Tauriel Tauriel's and Celebrimbor's determination to find their way to the Halls of Mahal. It takes them many attempts attempts, but they don't give up.
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* Kili revealing a surprisingly insightful understanding of elves and their seemingly unfeeling fronts in chapter 29.
* Tauriel and Celebrimbor's determination to find their way to the Halls of Mahal. It takes them many attempts but they don't give up.
--> '''Celebrimbor:''' We’re going to make it. And even should this attempt fail with all the others, we will try again. This I swear, child.
* Tauriel and Celebrimbor's determination to find their way to the Halls of Mahal. It takes them many attempts but they don't give up.
--> '''Celebrimbor:''' We’re going to make it. And even should this attempt fail with all the others, we will try again. This I swear, child.
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* Bilbo's argument with Namo and Manwe, as if he's not facing down one of the Valar and their Doomsman. Only Bilbo could pull it off.
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* Ori's last moments in Moria.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.
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* Ori's last moments in Moria.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.Moria. 'Brave Ori,' indeed.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.
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* Ori's last moments in Moria.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.
--> '''Kili:''' Brave Ori.
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* Thorin and Bilbo blocking Sauron's gaze when he realises where the Ring is.
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* Galadriel's fight with Khamûl. She not only sends him to the Void, she destroys Dol Guldur.
** And immediately after this, Radagast purifies it and makes plants grow again.
** And immediately after this, Radagast purifies it and makes plants grow again.
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* The entire fic is one awesome moment after another, once the War of the Ring starts.
* Dáin's death. Even after being poisoned, he kills Orc after Orc after Orc.
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* Dáin's death. Even after being poisoned, he kills Orc after Orc after Orc.
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