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* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].The author, who previously had only known the lyrics by ear and later realized some phonetical mistakes, partially rewrote the song with the purpose of making it fit their story.
* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is under current suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the original series' author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is under current suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the original series' author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
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* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].The author, who previously had only known the lyrics by ear and later realized some phonetical mistakes, partially rewrote the song with the purpose of making it fit their story.
* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is under current suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the original series' author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.story.
* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is under current suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the original series' author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
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* NAD Author RipVanGabriel (that's me typing right now) plans to do a motion-comic after the fanfic is finished, which will be posted to YouTube.
* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous for, since it is a fanfic, not an anime (RVG: I do create art for the fic, which you can see embedded into AO3 and on my DA, just not all the time - I think I've drawn almost every skating costume I've described in the fic though) the author writes each skating sequence in a manner according to the top of their writing skills
* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous for, since it is a fanfic, not an anime (RVG: I do create art for the fic, which you can see embedded into AO3 and on my DA, just not all the time - I think I've drawn almost every skating costume I've described in the fic though) the author writes each skating sequence in a manner according to the top of their writing skills
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go in a style of text that's not unlike the one of teenage boys making a rant on the comment section and therefore pretty accurate to his age range. (RVG: This speech has since been edited, but the jist is the same. Long story short, Yurio is defending the quality of Team Yakov, not necessarily Viktor's relationship status (which, even according to the showrunners, is something he is annoyed by.))
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go in a style of text that's not unlike the one of teenage boys making a rant on the comment section and therefore pretty accurate to his age range. (RVG: This speech has since been edited, but the jist is the same. Long story short, Yurio is defending the quality of Team Yakov, not necessarily Viktor's relationship status (which, even according to the showrunners, is something he is annoyed by.))
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades. (RVG: the oc father didn't try to break the door, he just assumed he would because he's a massive man with a lot of strength. He thought Viktor would be too weak to do it, so when he did, that was impressive.)
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades. (RVG: the oc father didn't try to break the door, he just assumed he would because he's a massive man with a lot of strength. He thought Viktor would be too weak to do it, so when he did, that was impressive.)
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. (RVG: So far as I can tell, these jumps were all legal in the current scoring system with the ISU...8 'jump elements' total, no jumps perfomed more than twice. Still,this is once more, physically impossible and should be considered the author's artistic choice routed on a dash of fantastic realism.)
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. (RVG: So far as I can tell, these jumps were all legal in the current scoring system with the ISU...8 'jump elements' total, no jumps perfomed more than twice. Still,this is once more, physically impossible and should be considered the author's artistic choice routed on a dash of fantastic realism.)
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* Despite [[spoiler: His head injury 50 or so chapters earlier]], Yuri manages to recover enough to win [[spoiler: second place]] regardless. (RVG: This is based loosely on [[spoiler: Yuzuru Hanyu's devastating collision0accident a few years ago, when even though he fell on every jump, still won Gold.]] )
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* Despite [[spoiler: His head injury 50 or so chapters earlier]], Yuri manages to recover enough to win [[spoiler: second place]] regardless. (RVG: This is based loosely on [[spoiler: Yuzuru Hanyu's devastating collision0accident a few years ago, when even though he fell on every jump, still won Gold.]] )
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* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is, also, under suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
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* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is, also, under is under current suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the original series' author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
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** Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298 is certainly an awesome moment]].
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** Despite the justified concern both in nowhere and out of yet even more nowhere in the universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298 is certainly an awesome moment]].something that happens for no other reason than just being dramatic and throwing aside Yuuri's efforts to win that medal by his own merits for the sake of "romance"]].
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* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is, also, under suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts.
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* On the subject of the author's management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is, also, under suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts. Also relevant, the first chapter of the story claims this is a "proper follow up to the series." And as previously stated, likes to presume o being entirely accurate to canon. However, the author has diverged in multiple key points of the story, for example, erasing the Stammi Viccino series finale, forgoing the author's decision of placing the story in a universe not burdened with homophobic discrimination with the purpose of imparting drama at stakes of heavy homophobia in Viktor's home country; and finally, by inserting an array of original characters for the purpouse of yet more drama. Still, the author once again states this is entirely canon compliant and refuses to be told otherwise.
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* On the subject of the author's management: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications.
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* On the subject of the author's management: management of the story: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications. Author is, also, under suspect of commenting on their fic multiple times under numerous sock accounts.
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* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].
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* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].The author, who previously had only known the lyrics by ear and later realized some phonetical mistakes, partially rewrote the song with the purpose of making it fit their story.
* On the subject of the author's management: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications.
* On the subject of the author's management: regardless of the content of the story, the fic has been called to the attention of numerous members of the fandom due to the author's inflated attitude, as exposed by the fact they started their own tv tropes page, twice. As stated in their author's notes and tags, they seem to exhibe a sense of superiority over other fandom works due the "no weird stuff, no aus, no fetishes, entirely in character" policy they seem to abide to, and defend at any given chance. And despite multiple users pointing out that their work diverges from the canon and would, therefore be considered and AU, they've been shown to be highly ofended by this implications.
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* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous for (RVG: I do create art for the fic, which you can see embedded into AO3 and on my DA, just not all the time - I think I've drawn almost every skating costume I've described in the fic though) the author does a tremendous job turning the sequences into stand up and cheer moments and balancing the song lyrical with the skating moves.
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* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous for for, since it is a fanfic, not an anime (RVG: I do create art for the fic, which you can see embedded into AO3 and on my DA, just not all the time - I think I've drawn almost every skating costume I've described in the fic though) the author does a tremendous job turning the sequences into stand up and cheer moments and balancing the song lyrical with the writes each skating moves. sequence in a manner according to the top of their writing skills
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go. (RVG: This speech has since been edited, but the jist is the same. Long story short, Yurio is defending the quality of Team Yakov, not necessarily Viktor's relationship status (which, even according to the showrunners, is something he is annoyed by.))
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go.go in a style of text that's not unlike the one of teenage boys making a rant on the comment section and therefore pretty accurate to his age range. (RVG: This speech has since been edited, but the jist is the same. Long story short, Yurio is defending the quality of Team Yakov, not necessarily Viktor's relationship status (which, even according to the showrunners, is something he is annoyed by.))
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* In Chapter 68, during an arc that starts to piece together the circumstances of Viktor's mother's death, Konstantin (his father) tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary, and the whole purpose of their meeting was because the insurance company was investigating Konstantin to determine if he was responsible for his wife's death) Victor's response is absolute gold.
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* In Chapter 68, during an arc that starts to piece together the circumstances of Viktor's mother's death, Konstantin (his (an original character created by the author meant to be his father) tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary, and the whole purpose of their meeting was because the insurance company was investigating Konstantin to determine if he was responsible for his wife's death) Victor's response is absolute gold.
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades. (RVG: Kon didn't try to break the door, he just assumed he would because he's a massive man with a lot of strength. He thought Viktor would be too weak to do it, so when he did, that was impressive.)
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades. (RVG: Kon the oc father didn't try to break the door, he just assumed he would because he's a massive man with a lot of strength. He thought Viktor would be too weak to do it, so when he did, that was impressive.)
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. You can actually tell the moment when the remaining skaters doing their FS programs (after Victor's) accepted their impending defeat. (RVG: So far as I can tell, these jumps were all legal in the current scoring system with the ISU...8 'jump elements' total, no jumps were done more than twice.)
** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock from the sight while the entire audience watches in StunnedSilence.
** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock from the sight while the entire audience watches in StunnedSilence.
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. You can actually tell the moment when the remaining skaters doing their FS programs (after Victor's) accepted their impending defeat. (RVG: So far as I can tell, these jumps were all legal in the current scoring system with the ISU...8 'jump elements' total, no jumps were done perfomed more than twice.twice. Still,this is once more, physically impossible and should be considered the author's artistic choice routed on a dash of fantastic realism.)
** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock. This is justified since it's physically impossible due to physics to carry the momentum of a jump enough to perform another jump of the same rotation number, and and as so should be considered an artistc choice on the side of the author for shockfrom the sight while the entire audience watches in StunnedSilence.value.
** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock. This is justified since it's physically impossible due to physics to carry the momentum of a jump enough to perform another jump of the same rotation number, and and as so should be considered an artistc choice on the side of the author for shock
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* NAD Author RipVanGabriel (that's me typing right now) plans to do a motion-comic after the fanfic is finished, which will be posted to YouTube.
* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famousfor, for (RVG: I do create art for the fic, which you can see embedded into AO3 and on my DA, just not all the time - I think I've drawn almost every skating costume I've described in the fic though) the author does a remendous tremendous job turning the sequences into stand up and cheer moments and balancing the song lyrical with the skating moves.
* While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go.
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go. (RVG: This speech has since been edited, but the jist is the same. Long story short, Yurio is defending the quality of Team Yakov, not necessarily Viktor's relationship status (which, even according to the showrunners, is something he is annoyed by.))
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary, and the whole purpose of their meeting was because the insurance company was investigating Konstantin to determine if he was responsible for his wife's death) Victor's response is absolute gold.
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* In Chapter 68, during an arc that starts to piece together the circumstances of Viktor's mother's death, Konstantin (his father) tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary, and the whole purpose of their meeting was because the insurance company was investigating Konstantin to determine if he was responsible for his wife's death) Victor's response is absolute gold.
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks'' it. This manages to impress his father, who unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades. (RVG: Kon didn't try to break the door, he just assumed he would because he's a massive man with a lot of strength. He thought Viktor would be too weak to do it, so when he did, that was impressive.)
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. You can actually tell the moment when the remaining skaters doing their FS programs after Victor's accepted their impending defeat.
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. You can actually tell the moment when the remaining skaters doing their FS programs after Victor's (after Victor's) accepted their impending defeat.defeat. (RVG: So far as I can tell, these jumps were all legal in the current scoring system with the ISU...8 'jump elements' total, no jumps were done more than twice.)
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* Despite [[spoiler: His head injury 50 or so chapters earlier]], Yuri manages to recover enough to win [[spoiler: second place]] regardless.
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* Despite [[spoiler: His head injury 50 or so chapters earlier]], Yuri manages to recover enough to win [[spoiler: second place]] regardless. (RVG: This is based loosely on [[spoiler: Yuzuru Hanyu's devastating collision0accident a few years ago, when even though he fell on every jump, still won Gold.]] )
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** Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298 is certainly an awesome moment]].
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** Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298 is certainly an awesome moment]].moment]].
* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].
* After several chapters of buildup, Chapter 315 gives readers the long-awaited Team Skate with Victor, Yuri, and Yurio to the music of Fallout Boy's ''Centuries''. [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10974756/chapters/32805276 complete with illustrations]].
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** Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter298]].298 is certainly an awesome moment]].
** Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter
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** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock from the sight while the entire audience watches in StunnedSilence.
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* Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298]].
* Despite the justified concern both in and out of universe for the consequences of his decision, [[spoiler: Victor forfeiting the Gold medal to Yuri at the GPF Final in Chapter 298]].
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-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH HIM!]] [[YouLeaveHimAlone NEVER AGAIN!"]]
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-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend [[YouLeaveHimAlone "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH HIM!]] [[YouLeaveHimAlone HIM! NEVER AGAIN!"]]
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* That same chapter, when Konstantin starts shouting after learning that Victor burned the letter from his mother, the man takes a step towards Victor, and [RageBreakingPoint Yuri goes ballistic,]] putting himself between Konstantin and Victor and holding his father-in-law's hand in a vice grip with every ounce of strenght in his body.
-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH HIM! NEVER AGAIN!"]]
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* That same chapter, when Konstantin starts shouting after learning that Victor burned the letter from his mother, the man takes a step towards Victor, and [RageBreakingPoint [[RageBreakingPoint Yuri goes ballistic,]] putting himself between Konstantin and Victor and holding his father-in-law's hand in a vice grip with every ounce of strenght in his body.
-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCHHIM! HIM!]] [[YouLeaveHimAlone NEVER AGAIN!"]]
-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH
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-->'''Victor:''' "You think that's the only reason? Because you made my life a nightmare and then ''beat me'' for it? [[SarcasmMode What a ''big, strong man'' you were,]][[WouldHurtAChild punching a 12-year-old in the face]] so hard I went flying into a shoe stand and hurt my back too. No. How about because [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown you hit me in the face ''again''? and ''again''! And then ''kicked me'' a few times for good measure]], ''on my mother's own freshly dug grave'', and then poured vodka on my head so the '''''cuts''''' would burn? How about because what you did put a strain on my relationship? Forcing me to lie to my friends and fans so they wouldn't have to worry about me! How about because what you did gave me nightmares for TWO YEARS after I finally got away? My left eye STILL twitches every time I have to think about you! You think I messed up today ''just'' because you were watching? No! I had a ''blackout'' and spent most of my program trying to fight off the memory of the MONSTER you are! Making you watch my Free Skate tomorrow is the only way I can really blow off steam about how angry you made me this past year!]]
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-->'''Victor:''' "You think that's the only reason? Because you made my life a nightmare and then ''beat me'' for it? [[SarcasmMode What a ''big, strong man'' you were,]][[WouldHurtAChild punching a 12-year-old in the face]] face so hard I went flying into a shoe stand and hurt my back too. too.]] No. How about because [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown you hit me in the face ''again''? and ''again''! And then ''kicked me'' a few times for good measure]], ''on my mother's own freshly dug grave'', and then poured vodka on my head so the '''''cuts''''' would burn? How about because what you did put a strain on my relationship? Forcing me to lie to my friends and fans so they wouldn't have to worry about me! How about because what you did gave me nightmares for TWO YEARS after I finally got away? My left eye STILL twitches every time I have to think about you! You think I messed up today ''just'' because you were watching? No! I had a ''blackout'' and spent most of my program trying to fight off the memory of the MONSTER you are! Making you watch my Free Skate tomorrow is the only way I can really blow off steam about how angry you made me this past year!]]year! I spent NEARLY A YEAR trying to convince the man I loved to love me back and it took you ''ONE WEEKEND TO'' '''''RUIN EVERYTHING'''''! Ever since Yakov sent me that text, your shadow has been hovering over me. EVERY DAY. You say the only reason you bothered reaching out to tell me my mom had died was because that's what she would have wanted, and you were obligated to give me that damn care package she'd put together. [[SuddenlyShouting MAYBE YOU SHOULD HAVE JUST KEPT HATING ME ENOUGH TO STAY AWAY. YOU SAY SHE'S DEAD AND NOTHING MATTERS ANYMORE, SO TO YOU, SHE'D NEVER KNOW YOU DIDN'T FOLLOW THROUGH. YOU COULD'VE JUST LEFT WELL ENOUGH ALONE.]]
* That same chapter, when Konstantin starts shouting after learning that Victor burned the letter from his mother, the man takes a step towards Victor, and [RageBreakingPoint Yuri goes ballistic,]] putting himself between Konstantin and Victor and holding his father-in-law's hand in a vice grip with every ounce of strenght in his body.
-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH HIM! NEVER AGAIN!"]]
* That same chapter, when Konstantin starts shouting after learning that Victor burned the letter from his mother, the man takes a step towards Victor, and [RageBreakingPoint Yuri goes ballistic,]] putting himself between Konstantin and Victor and holding his father-in-law's hand in a vice grip with every ounce of strenght in his body.
-->'''Yuri:''' [[ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend "DON'T YOU ''DARE'' TOUCH HIM! NEVER AGAIN!"]]
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'''Victor''': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF!'''''
-->'''Victor''': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF!'''''
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary) beneficiary, and the whole purpose of their meeting was because the insurance company was investigating Konstantin to determine if he was responsible for his wife's death) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'''Victor''': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and [[BrainBleach you'll ''never'' get the image out of yourmind. mind.]] '''''BACK OFF!'''''
-->'''Victor''': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and [[BrainBleach you'll ''never'' get the image out of your
* Victor calling out his father in Chapter 201, especially after the man continues to treat what he did with the gravity it deserves.
-->'''Konstantin:''' "Because I never wanted you to skate in the first place, and [[ButForMeItWasTuesday I hit you for it]] when that old man coach came to try and justify why I ''should'' let you."
-->'''Victor:''' "You think that's the only reason? Because you made my life a nightmare and then ''beat me'' for it? [[SarcasmMode What a ''big, strong man'' you were,]][[WouldHurtAChild punching a 12-year-old in the face]] so hard I went flying into a shoe stand and hurt my back too. No. How about because [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown you hit me in the face ''again''? and ''again''! And then ''kicked me'' a few times for good measure]], ''on my mother's own freshly dug grave'', and then poured vodka on my head so the '''''cuts''''' would burn? How about because what you did put a strain on my relationship? Forcing me to lie to my friends and fans so they wouldn't have to worry about me! How about because what you did gave me nightmares for TWO YEARS after I finally got away? My left eye STILL twitches every time I have to think about you! You think I messed up today ''just'' because you were watching? No! I had a ''blackout'' and spent most of my program trying to fight off the memory of the MONSTER you are! Making you watch my Free Skate tomorrow is the only way I can really blow off steam about how angry you made me this past year!]]
-->'''Konstantin:''' "Because I never wanted you to skate in the first place, and [[ButForMeItWasTuesday I hit you for it]] when that old man coach came to try and justify why I ''should'' let you."
-->'''Victor:''' "You think that's the only reason? Because you made my life a nightmare and then ''beat me'' for it? [[SarcasmMode What a ''big, strong man'' you were,]][[WouldHurtAChild punching a 12-year-old in the face]] so hard I went flying into a shoe stand and hurt my back too. No. How about because [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown you hit me in the face ''again''? and ''again''! And then ''kicked me'' a few times for good measure]], ''on my mother's own freshly dug grave'', and then poured vodka on my head so the '''''cuts''''' would burn? How about because what you did put a strain on my relationship? Forcing me to lie to my friends and fans so they wouldn't have to worry about me! How about because what you did gave me nightmares for TWO YEARS after I finally got away? My left eye STILL twitches every time I have to think about you! You think I messed up today ''just'' because you were watching? No! I had a ''blackout'' and spent most of my program trying to fight off the memory of the MONSTER you are! Making you watch my Free Skate tomorrow is the only way I can really blow off steam about how angry you made me this past year!]]
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** To sum up, Victor did ''eight quads'' and finished with a score of ''239.05''. You can actually tell the moment when the remaining skaters doing their FS programs after Victor's accepted their impending defeat.defeat.
** And the cherry on top, he also did a double-quad combination. Both Yuris are stuttering in shock from the sight while the entire audience watches in StunnedSilence.
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-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. [[SkewedPriorities It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off the ice? How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something? You know... REAL THREATS.]] Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you should all be kissing his ''feet'' for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off to Japan for a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how to skate!
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-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. [[SkewedPriorities It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off ''off the ice? ice''? How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something? You know... REAL THREATS.]] Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you You should all be kissing his ''feet'' '''''on your knees''''' thanking him for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. coming back. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off But go ahead and be stupid. '''''Make''''' Victor want to leave again! I don't think Japan will care if '''''they''''' suddenly have two champions on the roster! They sure didn't when Katsudon declared his ''super-gay love'' for Victor on ''national television'' a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how few months back!
-->''Turns toskate! Victor and Yuri''
-->"Let's go. The conference is over. ''[[PrecisionFStrike What a clusterfuck]]''."
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* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut towards his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[Music/AfterForever "Evo]][[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 ke"]].
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* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut towards his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[Music/AfterForever "Evo]][[https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 ke"]].Evoke"]].
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-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. [[SkewedPriorities It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off the ice? [[SkewedPriorities How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something?]] something? You know... REAL THREATS.]] Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you should all be kissing his ''feet'' for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off to Japan for a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how to skate!
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal to the press. After he finishes, he declare the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go.
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* In Chapter 10, reporters at the Russian skating team's press conference are making derrogatory comments about Victor's relationship with Yuri, when Yurio silences them with a blistering ShutUpHannibal to the press. ShutUpHannibal. After he finishes, he declare declares the press conference over and tells Yuri and Victor that it's time to go.
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-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off the ice? [[SkewedPriorities How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something? something?]] Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you should all be kissing his ''feet'' for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off to Japan for a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how to skate!
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-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off the ice? How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something? Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you should all be kissing his ''feet'' for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off to Japan for a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how to skate!
-->'''Yurio:''' "You can all PISS OFF about it. How '''''dare''''' you question the skill of one of Russia's top skating talent? [[SarcasmMode Can ''you'' skate his program better than he can with just the power of your ''raging heterosexuality?'']] IDIOTS. This is ''figure skating''. We dance on the ice wearing fancy costumes that are gaudy as all hell. The only thing more gay than that is the grappling style of mixed martial arts, and I don't see anyone complaining about how homo ''that'' is when one guy's got his nuts in some other guy's face, or even worse, if they're grappling balls to balls. It's ''absurd'' that any of you are wasting your time on this. Victor brought home 5 gold medals from the Grand Prix, Russian Nationals, Euros ''and WORLDS'', and the thing that ''you're'' worried about is how he gets his rocks off when he's off the ice? How about worrying that he might tear a meniscus or rupture a disc or something? Victor Nikiforov is a national treasure and you should all be kissing his ''feet'' for making Russia a top contender in the ISU. We have TWO CHAMPIONS in Russia now! Just because he screwed off to Japan for a while doesn't mean he's forgotten how to skate!
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* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to let go of Yuri's hand or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'Victor': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF'''''!
* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor, with a score
-->'Victor': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF'''''!
* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor, with a score
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to [[GetBackInTheCloset let go of Yuri's hand hand]] or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy) policy with Victor as the sole beneficiary) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'Victor': -->'''Victor''': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF'''''!
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* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor,with a beating his husband's score by ''less than one tenth of a point''.
* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for
* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor,
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* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut to his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 "Evo]][[Music/AfterForever ke"]], featuring ''eight quads'' powered by twenty years worth of TranquilFury.
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* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut to his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[https://www.[[Music/AfterForever "Evo]][[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 "Evo]][[Music/AfterForever ke"]], featuring ke"]].
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While the story may lack the amazing visuals to accompany the skate sequences the show is famous for, the author does a remendous job turning the sequences into stand up and cheer moments:
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to let go of Yuri's hand or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'Victor': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF'''''!
* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor, with a score
* In Chapter 208, Pitchit's free skating to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=49tpIMDy9BE Shatter Me]]
* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut to his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 "Evo]][[Music/AfterForever ke"]], featuring ''eight quads'' powered by twenty years worth of TranquilFury.
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* In Chapter 68, Konstantin tells Victor to let go of Yuri's hand or he won't get any of the money his mother left for him. (Not that Konstantin would have been able to back that threat up, since the money in question was from a life insurance policy) Victor's response is absolute gold.
-->'Victor': "I swear to God. If you say ''one more word'' about my relationship ''with my husband'', I'm going to kiss him ''right here'' in front of you, ''with tongue'', and you'll ''never'' get the image out of your mind. '''''BACK OFF'''''!
* When he shoos out Yuri and Yurio for a private conversation with his father in Chapter 69, Victor slams the door so hard he ''breaks it.'' This manages to impress his father, who did unseccessfully tried to achieve that feat for decades.
* At their first competition competing against each other, Yuri wins gold instead of Victor, with a score
* In Chapter 208, Pitchit's free skating to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=49tpIMDy9BE Shatter Me]]
* Victor's Free Skate in Chapter 210. A silent CallingTheOldManOut to his father and uncle to the heavy metal lyrics of [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7BFBW3psp0 "Evo]][[Music/AfterForever ke"]], featuring ''eight quads'' powered by twenty years worth of TranquilFury.
