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* Convinced that she is dying, Millie still takes a long train ride to Washington to personally appeal to the President for resources to solve the murders.
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* Convinced that she is dying, Millie Mollie still takes a long train ride to Washington to personally appeal to the President for resources to solve the murders.
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* AmateurSleuth couple Bill and Rita Smith manage to piece together a lot of the case on their own and while Reta seems oblivious to some of the implications of their discoveries, Bill coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* AmateurSleuth couple Bill and Rita Reta Smith manage to piece together a lot of the case on their own and while Reta seems oblivious to some of the implications of their discoveries, Bill coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* AmateurSleuth couple Bill and Reta Smith manage to piece together a lot of the case on their own and while Reta seems oblivious to some of the implications of their discoveries, Bill coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* AmateurSleuth couple Bill and Reta Rita Smith manage to piece together a lot of the case on their own and while Reta seems oblivious to some of the implications of their discoveries, Bill coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* AmateurSleuth Bill Smith manages to piece together a lot of the case on his own and then coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* AmateurSleuth couple Bill and Reta Smith manages manage to piece together a lot of the case on his their own and then while Reta seems oblivious to some of the implications of their discoveries, Bill coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
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* Chief Bonnicastle and Red Eagle get a RousingSpeech about what brought their people to Oklahoma and how they intend to stay put and fight this current menace.
* AmateurSleuth Bill Smith manages to piece together a lot of the case on his own and then coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
* Convinced that she is dying, Millie still takes a long train ride to Washington to personally appeal to the President for resources to solve the murders.
* Hale tries to frame a man who had an affair with Mrs. Roan for killing Henry by telling him that everyone will suspect and pursue him either way and that he should leave town. The man replies that he is staying put and knows better than to trust Hale, marking the first time someone outside of the crime ring is shown to recognize Hale for what he is and call him out on it.
* The moment when White and his undercover investigators gather to compare notes and reveal how much of the conspiracy they have unraveled.
* Mollie walks out on Ernest without another word when he lies about having ever helped poison her.
* AmateurSleuth Bill Smith manages to piece together a lot of the case on his own and then coldly stares down Ernest and refuses to have a drink with him.
* Convinced that she is dying, Millie still takes a long train ride to Washington to personally appeal to the President for resources to solve the murders.
* Hale tries to frame a man who had an affair with Mrs. Roan for killing Henry by telling him that everyone will suspect and pursue him either way and that he should leave town. The man replies that he is staying put and knows better than to trust Hale, marking the first time someone outside of the crime ring is shown to recognize Hale for what he is and call him out on it.
* The moment when White and his undercover investigators gather to compare notes and reveal how much of the conspiracy they have unraveled.
* Mollie walks out on Ernest without another word when he lies about having ever helped poison her.
