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** Her interposing herself between Kashet and the grounded wing was pretty impressive too.
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** Her interposing [[GoThroughMe interposing]] herself between Kashet and the grounded wing was pretty impressive too.
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* In the fourth book, Avatre had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!
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* In the fourth second book, Avatre had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!everything.
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* Kiron's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty badass to me.
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* Kiron's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty badass to me.badass.
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* Kiron's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty BadAss to me.
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* Kiron's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty BadAss badass to me.
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* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome, terrifing, but awesome.
* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome, terrifing, but awesome.
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* The Magistrate, using the ''legal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make Vetch's life as misreable miserable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
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* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome,terrifing, terrifying, but awesome.
* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome,
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* The previously assmued assumed dead [[spoiler: Re-eth-ke swooping in to save a falling Aket-ten from falling to her death]].
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* Krion's Kiron's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty BadAss to me.
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* The Magistrate, using the ''legal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make etch's life as misreable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
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* The Magistrate, using the ''legal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make etch's Vetch's life as misreable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
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--> ''Oh yes, the Magi should be shiering in their beds. A half-trained Jouster, a Winged Fledgling, and a foreign Healer. We shall defeat them and send them packing and still have time for breakfast!''
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--> ''Oh yes, the Magi should be shiering shivering in their beds. A half-trained Jouster, a Winged Fledgling, and a foreign Healer. We shall defeat them and send them packing and still have time for breakfast!''
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* Krion's internal thoughts on his new plan to fight the Magi. He's thinking of it cynically as a kind of internal joke but, it sound pretty BadAss to me.
--> ''Oh yes, the Magi should be shiering in their beds. A half-trained Jouster, a Winged Fledgling, and a foreign Healer. We shall defeat them and send them packing and still have time for breakfast!''
--> ''Oh yes, the Magi should be shiering in their beds. A half-trained Jouster, a Winged Fledgling, and a foreign Healer. We shall defeat them and send them packing and still have time for breakfast!''
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* The Magistrate, using the ''leagal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make etch's life as misreable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
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* The Magistrate, using the ''leagal ''legal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make etch's life as misreable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
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* The Magistrate, using the ''leagal system'' to deal a nasty blow to Khefti. The idea of all of the things he did to make etch's life as misreable as possible being turned on him was very satisfing.
* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome, terrifing, but awesome.
* Coresan and Seftu's mating flight can only be described as awesome, terrifing, but awesome.
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* In the fourth book, Avatre had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!
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* In the fourth book, Avatre had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!everything!
** Her interposing herself between Kashet and the grounded wing was pretty impressive too.
* The previously assmued dead [[spoiler: Re-eth-ke swooping in to save a falling Aket-ten from falling to her death]].
* All of the last battle at the end of book four (Aerie).
** Her interposing herself between Kashet and the grounded wing was pretty impressive too.
* The previously assmued dead [[spoiler: Re-eth-ke swooping in to save a falling Aket-ten from falling to her death]].
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* In the fourth book, Avatar had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!
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* In the fourth book, Avatar Avatre had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!
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* The "Falling Man Catch".
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* In the fourth book, Avatar had a standoff with another ''adult'' dragon, with a stare-down and everything!
