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* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.
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* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.Erika.
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** Even more awesome? Her opponent was a Mega Level Digimon in disguise, so by technicality; Erika essential beat the daylights out of a Digimon!
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** Even more awesome? Her opponent was a Mega Level Digimon in disguise, so by technicality; Erika essential essentially beat the daylights out of a Digimon!
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* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [[EldritchLocation digital shift]] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [[FastballSpecial with a Wormon to the face]], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
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* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [[EldritchLocation digital shift]] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [[FastballSpecial with a Wormon Wormmon to the face]], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
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Armor Piercing Slap is no longer a trope
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/Crusadermon begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much ill and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/Crusadermon begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap a slap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much ill and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/Crusadermon begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/Crusadermon begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl ill and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [EldritchLocation digital shift] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [FastballSpecial with a Wormon to the face], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
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* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [EldritchLocation [[EldritchLocation digital shift] shift]] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [FastballSpecial [[FastballSpecial with a Wormon to the face], face]], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
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* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.
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* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.Erica.
* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [EldritchLocation digital shift] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [FastballSpecial with a Wormon to the face], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
* So Chitose just woke up from Eden Syndrome-induced coma and learned of Ryuji's actions. What does he do? Walks all the way to him alongside Matayoshi (which is inside a [EldritchLocation digital shift] where he could be attacked at any moment), knocks down Ryuji [FastballSpecial with a Wormon to the face], then goes on a massive 1 minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. It would've snapped Ryuji out of his funk had Arcadiamon not kidnapped him.
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** Even more awesome? Her opponent was a Mega Level Digimon in disguise, so by technicality; Erika essential beat the daylights out of a Digimon!
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] Kishibe/Crusadermon begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and has spent most of her time in her room due to this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.still.
* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.
* The MisfitMobilizationMoment at the end, when an apologetic Yu brings the leaders of all the EDEN Hacker teams to help break into EDEN and rescue Erica.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and [[Hikikomori has spent most of her time in her room due to this]], but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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* The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and [[Hikikomori has spent most of her time in her room due to this]], this, but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
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*The generally meek Erika Mishima finally loses it when Rie Kishibe/[[spoiler:Crusadermon]] begins to mock her illness, and the pain felt by humanity in general. Erika responds with an ArmorPiercingSlap that leaves Rie dazed, and results in a quite brutal CatFight. The impressive part? Erika is very much an IllGirl and [[Hikikomori has spent most of her time in her room due to this]], but she still manages to beat Rie to a stand still.
