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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers in order to keep up his reputation, draws his bolt pistol and fires it in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers in order to keep up his reputation, draws his bolt pistol and fires it in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat weak point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.
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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers in order to keep up his reputation, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers in order to keep up his reputation, draws his bolt pistol and fires it in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.
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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, soldiers in order to keep up his reputation, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.
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As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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* As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.
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As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}}but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}}but [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}} but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.
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As the Valhallan soldiers make their way down the mountain and towards the USA's defensive lines, Cain, wanting to give the image of helping to his soldiers, draws his bolt pistol and fires in the general direction of the advancing army, [[{{AccidentalAimingSkills}}but not only does his first shot hit a Sentinel, the only one to have made it down the mountain path, but hits it in the knee, penetrating a weat point and then exploding]], toppling the walker over, this is recieved by his soldiers with cheers, with them then redoubling their efforts to fight.

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