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* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship. He appears in all three stories of the trilogy, being the one who explains how he was on the Train in ''Blossoming Trail'', exploring his adventures on said train in ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and returning for ''Voyage of Wisteria'' [[spoiler:once his memories return.]]
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* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship.friendship[[note]]He would later return to the anime in Episode 102[[/note]]. He appears in all three stories of the trilogy, being the one who explains how he was on the Train in ''Blossoming Trail'', exploring his adventures on said train in ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and returning for ''Voyage of Wisteria'' [[spoiler:once his memories return.]]
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* Class 5-E only appear for one scene in Episode 11 to talk over Chloe and question how she must be into Pokémon. Here they're all a bunch of bullies that drove Chloe to withdraw into herself and feel so worthless.
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* Class 5-E only appear for had one significant scene in Episode 11 to talk over Chloe and question how she must ''must'' be into Pokémon. Here they're all a bunch of bullies that drove Chloe to withdraw into herself and feel so worthless.
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* Amelia Hughe's appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what she's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when ''Voyage of Wisteria'' starts.
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* Amelia Hughe's appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what she's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could couldn't care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when ''Voyage of Wisteria'' starts.
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* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she once had a character page that was broken into three sub=pages.
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* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she once had a character page that was broken into three sub=pages.
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* The canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon (he wouldn't get her to start trying till Episode 31). Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did. A comment from the author says that starting at Chapter 13, he'll have a bigger role, and that role is to be the one to unleash the Unown. To emphasize how big of a role he gets, he was the ''second'' character in ''Blossoming Trail'' to get their own page, the first being his sister.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon (he wouldn't get her to start trying till Episode 31). Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did. A comment from the author says that starting at Chapter 13, he'll have a bigger role, and that role is to be the one to unleash the Unown. To emphasize how big of a role he gets, he was the ''second'' character in ''Blossoming Trail'' to get their own page, the first being his sister.
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* The canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
foreground.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomenaand he rarely interacts with his interactions with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon (he wouldn't get her limited due to start trying till Episode 31). that. Here, the story focuses on how his (in this story) neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
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** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did. A comment from the author says that starting at Chapter 13, he'll have a bigger role, and that role is to be the one to unleash the Unown. To emphasize how big of a role he gets, he was the ''second'' character in ''Blossoming Trail'' to get their own page, the first being his sister.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena
** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did.
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** He has his own spin-off story [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30621053 ''Infinity Train: Whittering Roots'']] written by the writer of ''Infinity Train: Boiling Point'', exploring what happened if he got on the Train.
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* Miss Jenny April only has a few seconds of screen time in the anime by the time the story was written yet she plays a significant role as to why Chloe didn't trust adults.
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* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she's the '''only''' character whose tropes were divided into three sub-pages.
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* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she's the '''only''' she once had a character whose tropes were divided page that was broken into three sub-pages.sub=pages.
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* Appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what Amelia Hughe's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose is to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when Voyage of Wisteria starts.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show. Voyage of Wisteria has her exploring the train with her mother as part of the Red Lotus Quarto and later has her own subplot to protect Warbler upon learning the music note denizen is a reincarnated Grace.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.]]
* Kinda. The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here, Blossoming Trail focuses on their dynamics and how much Grace's teachings have made them despicable. In Voyage of Wisteria it focuses on how they must live with the aftermath of their actions after the Fog Car shattered their innocence.
** Todd and Lucy are the most focused members of the Apex in both Blossoming Trail and Voyage of Wisteria.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show. Voyage of Wisteria has her exploring the train with her mother as part of the Red Lotus Quarto and later has her own subplot to protect Warbler upon learning the music note denizen is a reincarnated Grace.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.]]
* Kinda. The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here, Blossoming Trail focuses on their dynamics and how much Grace's teachings have made them despicable. In Voyage of Wisteria it focuses on how they must live with the aftermath of their actions after the Fog Car shattered their innocence.
** Todd and Lucy are the most focused members of the Apex in both Blossoming Trail and Voyage of Wisteria.
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* Appeared Amelia Hughe's appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what Amelia Hughe's she's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose is to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when Voyage ''Voyage of Wisteria Wisteria'' starts.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show.Voyage ''Voyage of Wisteria has her exploring the train with her mother as part of the Red Lotus Quarto and later has her own subplot to protect Warbler upon learning the music note denizen is [[spoiler: a reincarnated Grace.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.Grace.]]
*Kinda. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the ''Blossoming Trail'' takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm.]]
* The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here,Blossoming Trail ''Blossoming Trail'' focuses on their dynamics and how much Grace's teachings have made them despicable. In Voyage ''Voyage of Wisteria Wisteria'' it focuses on how they must live with the aftermath of their actions after the Fog Car shattered their innocence.
** Todd and Lucy are the most focused members of the Apex in bothBlossoming Trail ''Blossoming Trail'' and Voyage V''oyage of Wisteria.Wisteria''.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.
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* The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here,
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* We see Bea Pangoro in person instead of just in a photo due to the battle being three on three.
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship. This story reveals that he was stuck on the Infinity Train just when he decided to go see Goh in Vermillion City. And then we learn that he was [[spoiler:part of Gladdion's team]].
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship. This story reveals that he was stuck on the Infinity Train just when he decided to go see Goh in Vermillion City. And then we learn that he was [[spoiler:part of Gladdion's team]].
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* We see Bea Bea's Pangoro in person instead of just in a photo due to the battle being three on three.
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship.This story reveals that He appears in all three stories of the trilogy, being the one who explains how he was stuck on the Infinity Train just when he decided to go see Goh in Vermillion City. And then we learn that he was [[spoiler:part ''Blossoming Trail'', exploring his adventures on said train in ''Knight of Gladdion's team]].the Orange Lily'' and returning for ''Voyage of Wisteria'' [[spoiler:once his memories return.]]
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship.
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* In a sense; the canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon. Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon. Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
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* In a sense; the The canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involvesPokémon.Pokémon (he wouldn't get her to start trying till Episode 31). Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
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* In a way since Kurene and Ikuo Fujihachi major focus was in Episode 15 (which reveals Goh being a shut-in) but this reveals that they have done little to nothing to get their son anything resembling a social life.
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* In a way since Kurene and Ikuo Fujihachi Fujihachi's major focus was in Episode 15 (which reveals Goh being a shut-in) but this reveals that they have done little to nothing to get their son anything resembling a social life.
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!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''
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* Miss Jenny April only has a few seconds of screen time in the anime by the time the story was written yet she plays a significant role as to why Chloe didn't trust adults.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Specter gets a bigger role here.
* Paul London doesn't appear in ''Lucha Underground'' until Season 3 and even then his arc mostly revolved around obsessing over Mascarita Sagrada as the White Rabbit and then going full SanitySlippage when he meets said White Rabbit and offers up his partners for guidance. And in the show itself he only gets two ''solo'' matches of his own with the other being Trios matches and a 3 vs 1 handicapped match. He's one of the central heroes of ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and has a minor, yet significant role in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' when [[spoiler:he broadcasts a challenge to gather what remains of the Apex to be dragged into the Hazbin Car where he's currently residing.]].
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Oliver was Chloe's guide around Corginia in Blossoming Trail, and revealed to be the stage manager for Corginia's plays. Here, he makes himself the regent of the Corgi Car while Atticus is away and Atticus must partake in trials to regain his crown.
* Mad Ben was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Specter gets a bigger role here.
* Paul London doesn't appear in ''Lucha Underground'' until Season 3 and even then his arc mostly revolved around obsessing over Mascarita Sagrada as the White Rabbit and then going full SanitySlippage when he meets said White Rabbit and offers up his partners for guidance. And in the show itself he only gets two ''solo'' matches of his own with the other being Trios matches and a 3 vs 1 handicapped match. He's one of the central heroes of ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and has a minor, yet significant role in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' when [[spoiler:he broadcasts a challenge to gather what remains of the Apex to be dragged into the Hazbin Car where he's currently residing.]].
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Oliver was Chloe's guide around Corginia in Blossoming Trail, and revealed to be the stage manager for Corginia's plays. Here, he makes himself the regent of the Corgi Car while Atticus is away and Atticus must partake in trials to regain his crown.
* Mad Ben was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]
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* Miss Jenny April only has a few seconds of screen time in the anime by the time the story was written yet she plays a significant role as to why Chloe didn't trust adults.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Specter gets a bigger role here.
* Paul London doesn't appear in ''Lucha Underground'' until Season 3 and even then his arc mostly revolved around obsessing over Mascarita Sagrada as the White Rabbit and then going full SanitySlippage when he meets said White Rabbit and offers up his partners for guidance. And in the show itself he only gets two ''solo'' matches of his own with the other being Trios matches and a 3 vs 1 handicapped match. He's one of the central heroes of ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and has a minor, yet significant role in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' when [[spoiler:he broadcasts a challenge to gather what remains of the Apex to be dragged into the Hazbin Car where he's currently residing.]].
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Oliver was Chloe's guide around Corginia in Blossoming Trail, and revealed to be the stage manager for Corginia's plays. Here, he makes himself the regent of the Corgi Car while Atticus is away and Atticus must partake in trials to regain his crown.
* Mad Ben was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]adults.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Specter gets a bigger role here.
* Paul London doesn't appear in ''Lucha Underground'' until Season 3 and even then his arc mostly revolved around obsessing over Mascarita Sagrada as the White Rabbit and then going full SanitySlippage when he meets said White Rabbit and offers up his partners for guidance. And in the show itself he only gets two ''solo'' matches of his own with the other being Trios matches and a 3 vs 1 handicapped match. He's one of the central heroes of ''Knight of the Orange Lily'' and has a minor, yet significant role in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' when [[spoiler:he broadcasts a challenge to gather what remains of the Apex to be dragged into the Hazbin Car where he's currently residing.]].
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Oliver was Chloe's guide around Corginia in Blossoming Trail, and revealed to be the stage manager for Corginia's plays. Here, he makes himself the regent of the Corgi Car while Atticus is away and Atticus must partake in trials to regain his crown.
* Mad Ben was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]
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* Bede has only two scenes in Blossoming Trail, but becomes the focal character of his own story set between Blossoming Trail Acts 2 and 3.
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* Bede has only two scenes in Blossoming Trail, but becomes the focal character of his own story ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainCourtOfCyclamen'', set between Blossoming Trail Acts 2 and 3.
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** Yamper never had a big role outside ''Episode 11'' and ''Episode 29'' of Journeys. But here he is able to tell everyone in the Institute what Chloe really needed from them, he now partakes in more battles by his side, evolves and becomes a permanent member of her party instead of being relegated to the Institute.
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* Yeardley Lobelia was a SpearCarrier in Episode 11 of ''Journeys'' to be a contrast to Chloe. Here he has more characterization and was one of the catalysts of Chloe getting on the Infinity Train by goading her into fighting Ash and his signature "work in progress" line has a harsher meaning behind it.
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* Yeardley Lobelia was a SpearCarrier in Episode 11 of ''Journeys'' to be a contrast to Chloe. Here he has more characterization and was one of the catalysts of Chloe getting on the Infinity Train by goading her into fighting Ash and his signature "work in progress" line has a harsher meaning behind it.it, not to mention to be the recipient of the author's ire on DoubleStandard.
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* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Paul London gets a bigger role here.
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* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Paul London Specter gets a bigger role here.
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!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''
* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she's the '''only''' character whose tropes were divided into three sub-pages.
* Out of Book 1's protagonists, Atticus had the least amount of importance to the plot with "The Ball Pit Car" being his only focus (and even then he turned into a Ghom and was out for the final two episodes). He gains his own arc in the story as he tries to deal with the idea that King Aloysius and the Unfinished Car may have been destroyed by the Apex.
* Appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what Amelia Hughe's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose is to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when Voyage of Wisteria starts.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show. Voyage of Wisteria has her exploring the train with her mother as part of the Red Lotus Quarto and later has her own subplot to protect Warbler upon learning the music note denizen is a reincarnated Grace.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.]]
* Kinda. The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here, Blossoming Trail focuses on their dynamics and how much Grace's teachings have made them despicable. In Voyage of Wisteria it focuses on how they must live with the aftermath of their actions after the Fog Car shattered their innocence.
* Bede has only two scenes in Blossoming Trail, but becomes the focal character of his own story set between Blossoming Trail Acts 2 and 3.
* We see Bea Pangoro in person instead of just in a photo due to the battle being three on three.
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship. This story reveals that he was stuck on the Infinity Train just when he decided to go see Goh in Vermillion City. And then we learn that he was [[spoiler:part of Gladdion's team]].
* Mr. Mime/Mimey was a background character in the anime, a big part of Ash's plans in this story.
* In a sense; the canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon. Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did. A comment from the author says that starting at Chapter 13, he'll have a bigger role, and that role is to be the one to unleash the Unown. To emphasize how big of a role he gets, he was the ''second'' character in ''Blossoming Trail'' to get their own page, the first being his sister.
* In a way since Kurene and Ikuo Fujihachi major focus was in Episode 15 (which reveals Goh being a shut-in) but this reveals that they have done little to nothing to get their son anything resembling a social life.
* Akemi Tsutsuji a background character -- albeit one who causes the entire story to happen -- who gains her own spin-off story detailing her quest to find Chloe.
* Yeardley Lobelia was a SpearCarrier in Episode 11 of ''Journeys'' to be a contrast to Chloe. Here he has more characterization and was one of the catalysts of Chloe getting on the Infinity Train by goading her into fighting Ash and his signature "work in progress" line has a harsher meaning behind it.
** He has his own spin-off story [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30621053 ''Infinity Train: Whittering Roots'']] written by the writer of ''Infinity Train: Boiling Point'', exploring what happened if he got on the Train.
* Class 5-E only appear for one scene in Episode 11 to talk over Chloe and question how she must be into Pokémon. Here they're all a bunch of bullies that drove Chloe to withdraw into herself and feel so worthless.
* Miss Jenny April only has a few seconds of screen time in the anime by the time the story was written yet she plays a significant role as to why Chloe didn't trust adults.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Paul London gets a bigger role here.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]
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!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail''
* When the writer began the story (prior to Episode 29 of ''Journeys'' which is Chloe's ''second'' focus episode), Chloe Cerise only had ''Journeys'' Episode 11 focused on her or gave her a significant role in the narrative. ''Blossoming Trail'' and ''Voyage of Wisteria'' is all about her struggles and growth, while everyone else in the Pokémon World only appears in the B-plot, which itself is focused on them realizing they've failed to be there for her and trying to figure out how to make up for that when she eventually returns. To give you an example of big she is, she's the '''only''' character whose tropes were divided into three sub-pages.
* Out of Book 1's protagonists, Atticus had the least amount of importance to the plot with "The Ball Pit Car" being his only focus (and even then he turned into a Ghom and was out for the final two episodes). He gains his own arc in the story as he tries to deal with the idea that King Aloysius and the Unfinished Car may have been destroyed by the Apex.
* Appeared at the halfway point of Book 3 to give exposition of what Amelia Hughe's been doing since the end of Book 1, helping to shed light on what the Train's purpose is to Grace and Simon before she left to continue her duty to remove corrupted code on the Train and could care less about this cult doing things in her "name". Here, she's more on helping to stop the Apex since she indirectly created it and has to stop Grace and Simon from learning who Hazel truly is and becomes the leader of the Quarto when Voyage of Wisteria starts.
* Hazel was mostly there to serve as a litmus test for Grace and Simon's empathy in the canon show. Voyage of Wisteria has her exploring the train with her mother as part of the Red Lotus Quarto and later has her own subplot to protect Warbler upon learning the music note denizen is a reincarnated Grace.
* Somewhat. One-One's a key player in the entire series but never makes an appearance in Book 3 (which is when the story takes place). [[spoiler:He's fully aware of the Apex this time around and is trying to stop them from doing any more harm and has a video chat with Chloe in the Cyan Desert Car.]]
* Kinda. The Apex only appeared in four episodes in total (The Lucky Cat Car, The Mall Car, The Musical Car and the New Apex) and had no significance in Book 3 until the finale. Here, Blossoming Trail focuses on their dynamics and how much Grace's teachings have made them despicable. In Voyage of Wisteria it focuses on how they must live with the aftermath of their actions after the Fog Car shattered their innocence.
* Bede has only two scenes in Blossoming Trail, but becomes the focal character of his own story set between Blossoming Trail Acts 2 and 3.
* We see Bea Pangoro in person instead of just in a photo due to the battle being three on three.
* Tokio Chisou was a one-episode character who was the reason why Goh decided to reject friendship. This story reveals that he was stuck on the Infinity Train just when he decided to go see Goh in Vermillion City. And then we learn that he was [[spoiler:part of Gladdion's team]].
* Mr. Mime/Mimey was a background character in the anime, a big part of Ash's plans in this story.
* In a sense; the canon show mostly focus on Goh and Ash's adventures, with the Cerise family in the background. In here, they're at the foreground... for better or for worse.
** Professor Cerise role in the anime is basically to command Ash and Goh to go witness Pokémon phenomena and he rarely interacts with his daughter at all unless it involves Pokémon. Here, the story focuses on how his neglectfulness in regards to Chloe heavily impacted his daughter and how little he knows of her. Ironically the anime revealed in Episode 31 of Journeys that he's somewhat aware of his daughter's problems.
** Parker Cerise has even ''less'' screen time than his sister in the anime, but in this fanfic, he has a storyline when he's trying to become more mature and be Yamper's trainer in his sister's place and also revealing that he knew more about Chloe's HiddenDepths than anyone ''else'' did. A comment from the author says that starting at Chapter 13, he'll have a bigger role, and that role is to be the one to unleash the Unown. To emphasize how big of a role he gets, he was the ''second'' character in ''Blossoming Trail'' to get their own page, the first being his sister.
* In a way since Kurene and Ikuo Fujihachi major focus was in Episode 15 (which reveals Goh being a shut-in) but this reveals that they have done little to nothing to get their son anything resembling a social life.
* Akemi Tsutsuji a background character -- albeit one who causes the entire story to happen -- who gains her own spin-off story detailing her quest to find Chloe.
* Yeardley Lobelia was a SpearCarrier in Episode 11 of ''Journeys'' to be a contrast to Chloe. Here he has more characterization and was one of the catalysts of Chloe getting on the Infinity Train by goading her into fighting Ash and his signature "work in progress" line has a harsher meaning behind it.
** He has his own spin-off story [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30621053 ''Infinity Train: Whittering Roots'']] written by the writer of ''Infinity Train: Boiling Point'', exploring what happened if he got on the Train.
* Class 5-E only appear for one scene in Episode 11 to talk over Chloe and question how she must be into Pokémon. Here they're all a bunch of bullies that drove Chloe to withdraw into herself and feel so worthless.
* Miss Jenny April only has a few seconds of screen time in the anime by the time the story was written yet she plays a significant role as to why Chloe didn't trust adults.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainKnightOfTheOrangeLily''
* Alex Shepherd / The Bogeyman has a bigger role in Knight of the Orange Lily as the author felt like she gave him the short end of the stick.
* Despite being one of the victims of the Lost Incident, the amount of episodes he has focus on can be counted one hand and so can the number of duels he's been (3 full duels, two offscreen ones), along with how he has no impact on Season 3 of VRAINS because his seiyuu was unavailable to voice lines till the finale. Paul London gets a bigger role here.
!!''Fanfic/InfinityTrainVoyageOfWisteria''
* Was referenced once in Blossoming Trail as someone that the Apex couldn't defeat. In Voyage of Wisteria, he's off to hunt down the Apex and get revenge on Paul London.
* Has little to no role in ''Blossoming Trail'' compared to her daughter and son-in-law, but in ''Voyage of Wisteria'' Tomie [[spoiler:becomes the caretaker to Mew.]]
