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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#32676: Nov 21st 2014 at 10:49:26 AM

I am aware of that. I am not the one who proposed him in the first place.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#32677: Nov 21st 2014 at 10:52:55 AM

It was a DOUBLE arrow, not you [lol]
Aika Village is cut.

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HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#32678: Nov 21st 2014 at 10:54:27 AM

I recall once we let an evil Player Character in, but that was because it was a big twist that you're playing as the game's villain, not its hero, and there were no "alternate" good or evil paths. Can't recall what game it was though.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#32679: Nov 21st 2014 at 10:54:35 AM

Oh, okay then.

I think you're referring to the witch Ellen from The Witch's House, or something to that effect. But, yeah, she actually switched bodies with another girl prior to the main events of the game, and then she causes the girl's father to unintentionally kill his own daughter, because he thought that she was a monster.

edited 21st Nov '14 11:00:43 AM by AustinDR

Hawaii_Knut The Dark Lord of Hawaiian Shirts from Norway Since: Aug, 2013 Relationship Status: On the prowl
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#32680: Nov 21st 2014 at 10:59:27 AM

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Fair enough. I will skip Player Character's example.

edited 21st Nov '14 11:01:49 AM by Hawaii_Knut

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#32681: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:09:03 AM

[up]Maybe do it (heck, I'm just curious. Why don't we allow PCs anyway? Moral agency?}.
Two more possible images for Creepypasta.

edited 21st Nov '14 11:09:27 AM by ACW

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AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#32682: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:13:27 AM

I guess the Designated Hero trope would be at play there.

AquaRegia Since: Jun, 2011
#32683: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:16:22 AM

Player characters COULD count, but only if they have literally no chance to be anything but a Complete Monster. If say, a player character is a Complete Monster on 4/5 routes, but can be redeemed on the fifth, they're out. Needless to say, player characters who qualify are pretty rare — not a whole lot of people want to play as a Complete Monster, after all.

edited 21st Nov '14 11:21:28 AM by AquaRegia

HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#32684: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:16:30 AM

I thought it was that, since it's the player's choice to take an "evil" path in a game, it'd be like calling a real person a monster.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#32685: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:25:08 AM

I just view it as just calling the player's character a monster, not the player his or herself.

bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#32686: Nov 21st 2014 at 11:42:05 AM

A player character could only qualify if the game forced them to do horrible things and gave them no alternate routes. They would also have to be incapable of doing a single good thing out of genuine altruism. Ellen is the only example so far. It's played out so that you are forced to do horrible things. You have to feed a frog to a giant snake even after the frog had helped you, and you have to kill a living flower. Ellen does do some good things in the game( saving a butterfly from a giant spider for example), but after you have played the full game through, and considering the way Ellen acts, and the fact that she needed to save the butterfly to continue, it is nlikely she did that out of altruism, rather it is more likely she did it for her own benefit. I woulb be wlling to judge this player character that is being suggested rather than jus dismiss it on principal, but only if the game forces you to do horrible things with no other option, and prevents you from doing any good things out of altruism (doing good things for your own benefit is acceptable though).

jjj
Camberf Since: Jan, 2012
#32687: Nov 21st 2014 at 12:48:07 PM

So, could the guy from that upcoming game Hatred qualify?

bobg Since: Nov, 2012
#32688: Nov 21st 2014 at 12:49:07 PM

[up] Who is he, and what's the plot?

jjj
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#32690: Nov 21st 2014 at 12:56:13 PM

Ah yes, that thought occurred to me too. We'll have to wait until the game's released, but he sure seems like he could be a prime candidate.

[nja]Has its own page, BTW: Hatred

edited 21st Nov '14 12:58:20 PM by ACW

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Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#32691: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:04:24 PM

@ Hawaii Knut: My only problem with Lorne is he's a proxy. Black Garius was responsible for the massacre and had Lorne carry it out.

On American Horror Story...season is less than half through. Let's delay talk on it, shall we? Thought so.

I'd also like to make a proposal, from the book based on Star Wars Rebels as a prequel: A New Dawn. The contender is a wealthy mining mogul, Denetrius Vidian

Who Is He??

Vidian is known as a whistleblower who exposed corrupt defense contractors during the clone wars. This is a lie. Vidian's true name is Lemuel Tharsa, formerly a flunky safety inspector and scientist who contracted a disease that destroyed his body. Tharsa had himself converted into a cyborg and adopted a new identity. Eventually rising to the position of a wealthy mogul, Vidian was granted control of the mining colony Gorse and its moon Cynda.

Vidian is known as a brutal taskmaster, who doesn't take well to people not meeting their mining queues.

What Does He Do?

Vidian is awful to those under him. In between forcing people to work themselves to death, he brutally beats a union boss to death with his bare hands (he's fond of this as a motivating tool).

The worst thing? Vidian plans to mine Cynda ruthlessly in a matter that will end up destroying the whole moon in a matter that will cause massive repercussions for Gorse and kill everyone there, workers and immigrated species alike. Vidian plots to frame his rival, Baron Danthe for this and rise even further in the imperial hierarchy.

Through the novel, Vidian displays willingness to kill and torture whoever crosses him. When at one point he orders a factory manager to increase her input by an unreasonable amount, she protests it's impossible. Vidian proceeds to shove the poor woman (who has been nothing but reliable in her role) into a vat of acid and uses a pole to pin her inside to dissolve in slow, agonizing fashion. When her husband confronts him and tries to arrest him, Vidian beats him to death with his bare hands.

Freudian excuse or heinous standard?

As mentioned, Vidian did suffer before he became a cyborg. He was a safety inspector who was frustrated his reports were frustrated by corrupt bureaucracy. However, he wasn't driven insane, nor did he fall to the Dark Side. Vidian chose to recreate himself in a sense of "oh, screw it, I'm joining the winning side." In this role, he's every bit as corrupt and murderous than any corrupt factory boss who ever stymied him. He's nothing more than a glory hound and a murderer.

It's typical for John Jackson Miller to give villains seeming redeeming traits and then snatch them away, so I feel it's what he's done in this case. Vidian's excuse doesn't come close to attempting genocide for his personal profit and advancement in imperial esteem.

The heinous standard...as this is in an entirely new SW continuity, I think we're clear.

nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#32692: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:05:24 PM

[up]I've been thinking about proposing him for a while. [tup] from me.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#32693: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:10:36 PM

Not sure it's a new contionuity (isn't it canon with the films?), but it seems like he's the worst with what he has. His Freudian Excuse on his character page gives me pause though. I'll even accept that getting his reports ignored and him switching sides isn't mitigating enough, but the other stuff...

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HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#32694: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:11:22 PM

[tup] Vidian, if his motive for being evil really is just jumping into bet with the winning side.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#32695: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:12:40 PM

I address that. Vidian isn't joining the class that did damage to tear them down, or because he's so hurt he's lashing out...he's joining them because he's going "oh, fuck it, I want money and fame."

He's brutally oppressing and murdering people who had nothing to do with anything that happened to him solely for cash and is a more corrupt bureaucrat than anyone he hated before the Clone Wars. He also keeps his Tharsa name alive solely so he can sign off on nastier stuff.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#32696: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:27:56 PM

I'll vote a tentative [tup] (not as bad as Palpatine obviously, but with what he has he seems bad enough). So the flesh-eating disease didn't make him insane so much as give him time to go "fuck it, I'm joining the Empire"?

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YamiVizzini Since: Jan, 2001
#32697: Nov 21st 2014 at 2:29:22 PM

I mentioned this guy pages ago. [tup] He's also obsessed with efficiency as a result of his previous condition, and there's a brief mention that he thinks the Empire is the best thing for accomplishing that, but he doesn't seem to care about a greater good in that respect, and it really doesn't excuse destroying a couple ecosystems with no warning.

edited 21st Nov '14 2:33:18 PM by YamiVizzini

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