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MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#1: Dec 28th 2013 at 6:39:16 PM

(sorta) OK, this is another one of my weird ideas. Maybe. or not. At any rate, I think this has to be the weirdest concept I ever thought of and I want to know what other people think. Is it doable, would you read it, is it too derivative and any brainstorming?

The concept is this:

In Isaholmi, a Norse by Norsewest country on an alternate Earth (a kind of composite of Iceland and Norway) a street kid named Bjarki who's The Artful Dodger and half-troll (older sense of foreign/Sámi— the name "Bjarki" comes from Bodvar Bjarki whose father's stepmother was Sámi) lives with Thróinn Thrainsson, a dwarvish Fagin who's basically the complete opposite of the original Dickens character but still has a creepy aspect to him (the near-constant use of endearments for "his kids" and everyone around, the threats of "You can't escape me.. ever! If you try I will have you hanged/ use your skin as magic pants..")

Anyway, a kraptaskald (poet with magical powers) called Finnalfur Ragnarsson(Gandálf was also a legendary Norwegian king with elvish blood)approaches Thróinn asking him to send his thieves to steal the Jarknasteinn, a valuable sunstone carved of Iceland spar for his own reasons. The main problem is that Thróinn's old enemy Skjaldbjorn the Quick, his foster-daughter Disa's old lover also wants the Jarknasteinn.

BTW "Thróinn" is my own attempt to anglicise the Old Norse male name "Þrainn" meaning "swift" or "obstinate" or "craver" which Tolkien anglicised as "Thrain". Dwalin in the form "Dvalinn" appears often in Norse-based fiction.

So any opinions and plot suggestions on how to make it different? This is something I've been thinking of for a while.

edited 7th Mar '14 2:34:40 PM by MorwenEdhelwen

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MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#2: Dec 29th 2013 at 4:35:48 PM

bump. Any plot ideas or character ideas?

eg Who is Skjaldbjorn the Quick?

edited 7th Mar '14 2:12:08 PM by MorwenEdhelwen

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Kilyle Field Primus from Procrastinationville Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#3: Mar 7th 2014 at 8:18:28 AM

If it were a fanfic, I'd be interested enough to give it a try.

The premise sounds intriguing. I do love stories that take characters I already enjoy and retell stories I know via new conceits such as changes in time and setting. (Have written part of one myself.)

So... go for it.

Only the curious have, if they live, a tale worth telling at all.
MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#4: Mar 7th 2014 at 2:05:17 PM

[up] What if it wasn't a fanfic? I changed the names a lot.

BTW, "The Hobbit" meets Oliver Twist is a little off-base. More The Icelandic Sagas meet Oliver Twist.

edited 7th Mar '14 2:34:53 PM by MorwenEdhelwen

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DeusDenuo Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Gonna take a lot to drag me away from you
#5: Mar 11th 2014 at 11:38:44 AM

There's more to making original fiction than just rubbing off the serial numbers.

My question is, how is this different from The Hobbit, Oliver Twist, and The Icelandic Sagas? I would play up that difference, so that it's not "A meets B meets C" so much as "D".

I also ask how much of a Tolkien-style backstory you intend to use, or even how 'densely' (complexity) you intend to write it. The explanations for those names shouldn't matter at all, if they're common for the setting, for example.

I'd keep Finn the Huma- I mean 'Poet', and the Macguffin, but set it so he encounters the plot completely by accident. (The irony being that someone who knows epic tales ends up being caught up in one of his own; he understands the genre conventions, but only realizes that they're genre conventions and not reality after a few misadventures.)

MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#6: Mar 12th 2014 at 4:48:25 AM

[up] How is this different? Well Bjarki isn't a typical Icelandic saga hero. For one thing he's Black and Black people in sagas are portrayed on the Sliding Scaleof Villiany as morally ambiguous at best and faceless Mooks at worst.

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DeusDenuo Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Gonna take a lot to drag me away from you
#7: Mar 12th 2014 at 8:26:55 AM

I only know The Hobbit as the one starring Martin Freeman, haven't read Oliver Twist at all, and for all I know of it you made up the The Icelandic Sagas out of whole cloth (kidding!). Besides being able to describe the basic plot of this new story without referring to those three older ones, how is it different? Inspiration's one thing, but writing original fiction that does not appear too derivative (and fanfic is by definition) requires that it stand on its own without assistance.

What are you wanting to write, though?

MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#8: Mar 12th 2014 at 3:11:51 PM

What are you wanting to write, though?
A YA Victorian novel set in a Norse-influenced Victorian era. Makes sense— the Viking revival was at its peak during the Victorian era.

edited 13th Mar '14 4:57:30 AM by MorwenEdhelwen

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