The image's confusing to me, but I don't know why.
Anyway, if we were to use the image, perhaps we can edit the partial top parts out of it.
Too much text, spoilers. Pull.
It's a suggestion, it's not on the page yet for it to be pulled.
Moon◊Bah, I'm tired. Still not a good suggestion.
Not really. Seems to me all you'd need to do is just use that last panel. *poof* Spoilers gone, relevant dialogue still present.
Ok, I'll work up a version with just the second panel, for comparison.
EDIT: New new version◊
EDIT 2: Removed a piece of the deleted panel that I missed on the first pass.
edited 21st Mar '13 3:23:59 PM by StarSword
I don't really get it.
Not enough context in the single panel; potential spoiler in the two-panel.
edited 21st Mar '13 3:40:27 PM by Willbyr
Just tossing this out there, but to demonstrate this trope, there's either going to need to be a bit of text or multiple images showing how a character normally is, and the reaction and the source that caused the change.
Doesn't work for above reasons.
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"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanHow 'bout a compare and contrast picture? Ya know, like Spidey joken' around and spidey kicken' ass, side by side. Then slap a caption beneath it and done. Eh?
It'd still be Just A Face And A Caption with nothing indicating the seriousness of the matter. Spider Man regularily switches back and forth between kicking butt and joking. He usually jokes while kicking butt.
edited 26th Mar '13 7:51:24 PM by DRCEQ
That's a first draft. I can make it better, but that's just an example of what we could do.
edited 7th Apr '13 5:28:35 PM by Thecommander236
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesJust looks comical.
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Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesPoint is, the image needs to illustrate that there's a point with it, and not a random OOC moment.
Check out my fanfiction!Yes, Rageshy is not meant to be anywhere near serious.
Does that stop...ah...weakhearted bronies to list it in the Nightmare Fuel page? Unfortunately not.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.Explain.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesTry again mate, preferrably with one that includes other characters' reactions.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.Got it.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle Seriesedited 7th Apr '13 7:05:22 PM by Thecommander236
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesGreat improvement! I am not sure it is good enough, though.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.
My only real worry about this is it might spoil an important plot development. Thoughts?
EDIT: Cleaned off the leftovers of the next row of panels up.
edited 21st Mar '13 2:58:10 PM by StarSword