SF-81A Black Knight
From The Order of the Stick #880. My only real worry about this is it might spoil an important plot development. Thoughts? EDIT: Cleaned off the leftovers of the next row of panels up.
edited 21st Mar '13 2:58:10 PM by StarSword
The imaginative Christian AspergerThe image's confusing to me, but I don't know why. Anyway, if we were to use the image, perhaps we can edit the partial top parts out of it.
Too much text, spoilers. Pull.
Avatar by NeoriceisgoodIt's a suggestion, it's not on the page yet for it to be pulled.
Bah, I'm tired. Still not a good suggestion.
Not really. Seems to me all you'd need to do is just use that last panel. *poof* Spoilers gone, relevant dialogue still present.
SF-81A Black KnightOk, I'll work up a version with just the second panel, for comparison. EDIT: New new version◊ EDIT 2: Removed a piece of the deleted panel that I missed on the first pass.
edited 21st Mar '13 3:23:59 PM by StarSword
I don't really get it.
Anime-tedNot enough context in the single panel; potential spoiler in the two-panel.
edited 21st Mar '13 3:40:27 PM by Willbyr
MOVE, B****! GET OUT THE WAY!Just tossing this out there, but to demonstrate this trope, there's either going to need to be a bit of text or multiple images showing how a character normally is, and the reaction and the source that caused the change.
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No, the other one.Doesn't work for above reasons.
We dance around in a ring and suppose,
But the Secret sits in the middle and knows.
- Robert Frost
Puʻu ʻŌʻōNot particularly good, sadly.
How 'bout a compare and contrast picture? Ya know, like Spidey joken' around and spidey kicken' ass, side by side. Then slap a caption beneath it and done. Eh?
MOVE, B****! GET OUT THE WAY!It'd still be Just a Face and a Caption with nothing indicating the seriousness of the matter. Spider-Man regularily switches back and forth between kicking butt and joking. He usually jokes while kicking butt.
edited 26th Mar '13 7:51:24 PM by DRCEQ
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That's a first draft. I can make it better, but that's just an example of what we could do.
edited 7th Apr '13 5:28:35 PM by Thecommander236
No, the other one.Just looks comical.
No, the other one.Point is, the image needs to illustrate that there's a point with it, and not a random OOC moment.
Yes, Rageshy is not meant to be anywhere near serious. Does that stop...ah...weakhearted bronies to list it in the Nightmare Fuel page? Unfortunately not.
Try again mate, preferrably with one that includes other characters' reactions.
edited 7th Apr '13 7:05:22 PM by Thecommander236
Great improvement! I am not sure it is good enough, though.
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