That is fine. Though TBH they don't look like cyborgs to me.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundI would understand if you all want to kill yourselves now.
"Why does everything have to loop back to YGO?" -Guy who ruined YGOJust goes to show, sometimes the best duelists dont always make the best matches, especialy considering their respective styles.
Also, @Desdendelle: A lot of the Aliens look quite robotic to me, but that might just be because I'm looking at them on a small screen. In any case, I've decided that Cosmic Fortress Gol,Gar is a cybernetically modified clone of Cosmic Horror Gang'iel, outfitted for a more defensive style of warfare.
Also, this is the custom card I have envisioned for my deck:
One And The Same
Spell (Continuous)
Effect: As long as this spell card remains face-up on the field: whenever the controller of this card activates a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect that designates a specific Type, Name or Attribute as the target; you may choose the affected type within that category, if multiple categories are designated, choose one.
edited 23rd Sep '12 4:22:48 AM by Lunacorva
I would've expected something Alien themed.
Well, TBH, there weren't any Alien themed cards that either already in my deck, or ridiculously overpowered what gave me the idea for this card was when I tried to use Crop Circles to special summon Gang'iel but I couldn't because he wasn't an "Alien". So I thought it would be useful to have a card that removes that restriction.
Well, it does not seem that way to me. Also, @the card: formatting, please.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the ground...Yeah, first of all, I think I'm going to change it so that it only effects cards on my side of the field, otherwise it would be ridiculously overpowered considering that everyone here uses a deck designed around a specific type of creature.
Still, what's wrong with the formatting?
Please format the card according to the Problem-Solving Card Text rules. So it will be readable. And uniform.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundEdited it.
Race and name don't exist in the YGOverse, heh heh. You'll need to be more specific.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundOkay, I'm gonna need some help with that, I have a problem with coherency in Real Life
Perhaps you can begin by telling what, exactly, do you mean by race and name? Perhaps giving an example or two would help.
<GM Notice>
-Pokes the main thread-
</Gm Notice>
edited 23rd Sep '12 2:30:05 AM by desdendelle
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundRace: Ie: Dragon, Pyro, Faire, Fiend, Dinosaur, Insect ect.
Name: Ie, a card that says "Special summon one creature that has "Amazon" in it's name.
Race is called Type. Name is, under problem-solving card text, referred to as 'a "X"' card. So, if, for example, a card targets "Lightray" monsters in your grave, it will say something like 'target 1 "Lightray" monster in your Graveyard'.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundOkay, I've edited the card so that it says Type instead of race, but I'm not sure how to word the name part, since changing it to X or specify a paritcular name, still doesn't really fit the card.
Okay, it's readable (though the 'recipient' can go, it's redundant), but it seems kinda OP to me. So: nerf?
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundI'm guessing OP stands for overpowered correct?
Indeed. Except when it stands for Opening Post, but then you can usually tell from the context.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundI think I need a draw...
(EDIT) ...yep, I do need a draw. It's my turn, methinks.
edited 23rd Sep '12 4:55:35 AM by Nitramy
Neither goony beard-men nor rainbow-haired she-twinks will stand in the way of my dreams!may I ask, who are we waiting for atm?
You at the barricade listen to this.From what I can tell, everyone.
"Why does everything have to loop back to YGO?" -Guy who ruined YGOhey to be fair I JUST moved into uni so I only just have gotten the internet set up.
Also my character isn't doing anything ATM so its all good on my front.
Zehi Ni Oyobazu... - Oda Nobunagahow is you'r uni xar?, I ment to text you yeterday but stuff came up.
You at the barricade listen to this.
@des
Hope you dont mind me including that bit of background information on the Alien race. I just wanted to give a believable in story reason why Gol'Gar is on longer babbling like an idiot anymore.