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* DualWielding: Freya's wield dual [[BladeBelowTheShoulder hidden blades]]. Ironic, considering that the Hidden Blade was an Assassin weapon, and the ones running Abstergo happen to be the sworn enemies of the Assassin Order.
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* SiblingYinYang: Ceres is a ColdSniper whose WeaponOfChoice happens to be a HandCannon, while her twin sister is instead a BladeEnthusiast. Freya for that matter is a superpowered robot assassin, in contrast to the [[spoiler:usually]] gentle, innocent and childlike Chii.
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* SiblingYinYang: Ceres is a ColdSniper whose WeaponOfChoice weapon happens to be a HandCannon, while her twin sister is instead a BladeEnthusiast. Freya for that matter is a superpowered robot assassin, in contrast to the [[spoiler:usually]] gentle, innocent and childlike Chii.
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* WeaponOfChoice: Freya's [[DualWielding dual]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder hidden blades]]. Ironic, considering that the Hidden Blade was an Assassin weapon, and the ones running Abstergo happen to be the sworn enemies of the Assassin Order.
** [[spoiler:Ceres and her HandCannon]].
** [[spoiler:Ceres and her HandCannon]].
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* SuperPrototype: Freya was already this in canon. Abstergo's upgrades take it UpToEleven.
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* SuperPrototype: Freya was already this in canon. Abstergo's upgrades take it UpToEleven.up to eleven.
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While the one on ff.net is the main copy, the fic can also be found [[http://s7.zetaboards.com/AntiFanfiction/topic/8739441/1/#new here]].
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While the one on ff.net is the main copy, the fic can also be found [[http://s7.zetaboards.com/AntiFanfiction/topic/8739441/1/#new [[https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/antifanfiction/platinum-angel-t1126.html here]].
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* SiblingYinYang: Ceres is a ColdSniper whose WeaponOfChoice happens to be a HandCannon, while her twin sister is instead a KnifeNut. Freya for that matter is a superpowered robot assassin, in contrast to the [[spoiler:usually]] gentle, innocent and childlike Chii.
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* SiblingYinYang: Ceres is a ColdSniper whose WeaponOfChoice happens to be a HandCannon, while her twin sister is instead a KnifeNut.BladeEnthusiast. Freya for that matter is a superpowered robot assassin, in contrast to the [[spoiler:usually]] gentle, innocent and childlike Chii.
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: Only half of the pairing in question is an actual schoolgirl, though. [[spoiler:The other half happens to be a certain gunslinging, NinjaMaid persocom.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: Freya thinks to herself she might not be so different from Abstergo, considering she massacred the scientists responsible for what she was turned into.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Freya thinks to herself she might not be so different from Abstergo, considering she massacred the scientists responsible for what she was turned into.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.Platinum Angel to Fanfic.Platinum Angel. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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How To Write An Example - Don't Write Reviews
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* CurbStompBattle: Happens all the time in connection to any battle Freya is even remotely in. And considering the amazing fact that she could also pull this off while [[spoiler:remotely controlling Chii, who, by the way, doesn't have any of her enhancements or weapons,]] it's pretty clear. YMMV, but some of these could also fall under CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* CurbStompBattle: Happens all the time in connection to any battle Freya is even remotely in. And considering the amazing fact that she could also pull this off while [[spoiler:remotely controlling Chii, who, by the way, doesn't have any of her enhancements or weapons,]] it's pretty clear. YMMV, but some of these could also fall under CrowningMomentOfAwesome.weapons]].
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* ShoutOut: to ''{{Cyborg 009}}'' so far, what with Freya's serial number and her use of the eponymous cyborg's [[SuperSpeed Acceleration Mode]]. Also see ActorAllusion above.
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* ShoutOut: to ''{{Cyborg ''Manga/{{Cyborg 009}}'' so far, what with Freya's serial number and her use of the eponymous cyborg's [[SuperSpeed Acceleration Mode]]. Also see ActorAllusion above.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Aside from the canon examples [[NorseMythology Freya and Elda (Chii)]], the Assassin Order also seems to name its persocoms after figures in ClassicalMythology. The only exceptions so far are [[spoiler:Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi]], and even then they may still count, having been named after figures in JapaneseMythology.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Aside from the canon examples [[NorseMythology [[Myth/NorseMythology Freya and Elda (Chii)]], the Assassin Order also seems to name its persocoms after figures in ClassicalMythology. Myth/ClassicalMythology. The only exceptions so far are [[spoiler:Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi]], and even then they may still count, having been named after figures in JapaneseMythology.Myth/JapaneseMythology.
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*** For that matter, Freya's weapon loadout as of chapter 39 mirrors that of [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedIVBlackFlag Edward Kenway]].
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 11, Freya can be noticed singing [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Lacus]] [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEEDDestiny Clyne's]] 'Fields of Hope'. Both Lacus and Freya (and Chii) are voiced by RieTanaka.
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 11, Freya can be noticed singing [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Lacus]] [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEEDDestiny Clyne's]] 'Fields of Hope'. Both Lacus and Freya (and Chii) are voiced by RieTanaka.Creator/RieTanaka.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Aside from the canon examples [[NorseMythology Freya and Elda (Chii)]], the Assassin Order also seems to name its persocoms after figures in ClassicalMythology. The only exceptions so far are [[spoiler:Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi]], and even then they may still count, having been named after figures in Japanese mythology.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Aside from the canon examples [[NorseMythology Freya and Elda (Chii)]], the Assassin Order also seems to name its persocoms after figures in ClassicalMythology. The only exceptions so far are [[spoiler:Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi]], and even then they may still count, having been named after figures in Japanese mythology.JapaneseMythology.
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** Itachi Yukishiro is an obvious ShoutOut to ''Manga/{{Naruto}}. In fact, his persocoms Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are named after the signature techniques used by his namesake.
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** Itachi Yukishiro is an obvious ShoutOut to ''Manga/{{Naruto}}.''Manga/{{Naruto}}''. In fact, his persocoms Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are named after the signature techniques used by his namesake.
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* AntiVillain: Daniel Cross and most of his subordinates count as this.
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** The hidden blades used by [[spoiler:Demeter]] are detachable, similar to those used by [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedIII Connor and Haytham Kenway]].
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** The hidden blades used by [[spoiler:Demeter]] Demeter are detachable, similar to those used by [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedIII Connor and Haytham Kenway]].
** Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are anti-villainous takes on this trope.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Aside from the canon examples [[NorseMythology Freya and Elda (Chii)]], the Assassin Order also seems to name its persocoms after figures in ClassicalMythology. The only exceptions so far are [[spoiler:Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi]], and even then they may still count, having been named after figures in Japanese mythology.
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** The hidden blades used by [[spoiler:Demeter]] are detachable, similar to those used by [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedIII Connor Kenway]].
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While the one on ff.net is the main copy, the fic can also be found [[http://s7.zetaboards.com/AntiFanfiction/topic/8739441/1/?x=0#post8045890 here]].
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While the one on ff.net is the main copy, the fic can also be found [[http://s7.zetaboards.com/AntiFanfiction/topic/8739441/1/?x=0#post8045890 com/AntiFanfiction/topic/8739441/1/#new here]].
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* {{Expy}}: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]] and, to a lesser extent, [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Flay Allster]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:[[Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn Marida Cruz]] in her backstory.
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* {{Expy}}: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]] and, to a lesser extent, [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Flay Allster]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:[[Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn Marida Cruz]] Cruz]]]] in her backstory.
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* {{Expy}}: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]] and, to a lesser extent, [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Flay Allster]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:Marida Cruz Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn]] in her backstory.
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* {{Expy}}: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]] and, to a lesser extent, [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Flay Allster]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:Marida Cruz Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn]] [[spoiler:[[Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn Marida Cruz]] in her backstory.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]], Trinity]] and, to a lesser extent, [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamSEED Flay Allster]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:[[Marida [[spoiler:Marida Cruz Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn]]]] Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn]] in her backstory.
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* Expy: Reina is an obvious one for [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Nena Trinity]], while also containing hints of [[spoiler:[[Marida Cruz Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn]]]] in her backstory.