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* BleachedUnderpants: This began as an adult visual novel.
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* FlatWhat: Yume’s reaction to Natoses attempt at traditional medicine to cure a cold (Leek up your bum) is probably not as enthusiastic as Natose would have liked.
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* FlatWhat: Yume’s reaction to Natoses Natose’s attempt at traditional medicine to cure a cold (Leek up your bum) is probably not as enthusiastic as Natose would have liked.
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** One Hato Dekopin failed to cause any pain, much to Benis confusion. Unfortunately, “You are already dead.”
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** One Hato Dekopin failed to cause any pain, much to Benis Beni’s confusion. Unfortunately, “You are already dead.”
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* TamerAndChaster: This began as an adult visual novel.
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* SenpaiKohai:
** As Rens senpai, Beni tries to get him to act more deferentially. [[VolleyingInsults Doesn’t work.]]
** Natose on the other hand earnestly wants to assist Ren properly, but lets him know this after she oversleeps. Not exactly the best example.
** When Yume asks the older girls about love, Mihato says she looks at her brother to understand love, Miyu indicates she doesn’t know and Natose admits to having no experience. Shinra compliments the food. Natose apologizes for knowing nothing about it and Miyu tells her that admission is better than evading the question. Apparently, Shinra thinks the dessert is also quite nice.
** As Rens senpai, Beni tries to get him to act more deferentially. [[VolleyingInsults Doesn’t work.]]
** Natose on the other hand earnestly wants to assist Ren properly, but lets him know this after she oversleeps. Not exactly the best example.
** When Yume asks the older girls about love, Mihato says she looks at her brother to understand love, Miyu indicates she doesn’t know and Natose admits to having no experience. Shinra compliments the food. Natose apologizes for knowing nothing about it and Miyu tells her that admission is better than evading the question. Apparently, Shinra thinks the dessert is also quite nice.
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* FormalCharactersUseKeigo: As servants, Natose and Ren using formal speech is to be expected, but they also tend to use it on Yume out of habit, which bothers her. Ren’s mastery of keigo is considered insufficient for use on important guests, however.
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* {{Keigo}}: As servants, Natose and Ren using formal speech is to be expected, but they also tend to use it on Yume out of habit, which bothers her. Ren’s mastery of keigo is considered insufficient for use on important guests, however.
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*** After this scene, Miyu drops a boxcutter onto the bear, [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede]] style. The bear's response? He uses a [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya Mikuru beam]]
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*** After this scene, Miyu drops a boxcutter onto the bear, [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede]] style. The bear's response? He uses a [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya [[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Mikuru beam]]
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* HelicopterParents: Played with at first via parental surrogates Shinra and the colonel. They meddle in Yume’s attempts to find a boyfriend and when she settles on someone they seem very against it. When they hear it’s Ren, they relax a little and allow it to continue, though they’re not very happy. The real problem comes in later: Yume has been much more sheltered or even babied than either of her older sisters, leaving her weak, passive and unable to take criticism.
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* [[OverprotectiveDad Overprotective Parents]]: Played with at first via parental surrogates Shinra and the colonel. They meddle in Yume’s attempts to find a boyfriend and when she settles on someone they seem very against it. When they hear it’s Ren, they relax a little and allow it to continue, though they’re not very happy. The real problem comes in later: Yume has been much more sheltered or even babied than either of her older sisters, leaving her weak, passive and unable to take criticism.
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* BittersweetEnding: Unlike the other generally happy endings, Natose [[spoiler:leaves the mansion]] in her ending, feeling that [[spoiler:she’s too emotionally dependent and insecure to stay. She plans to return when she’s become more independent.]]
* BittersweetEnding: Unlike the other generally happy endings, Natose [[spoiler:leaves the mansion]] in her ending, feeling that [[spoiler:she’s too emotionally dependent and insecure to stay. She plans to return when she’s become more independent.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: Unlike the other generally happy endings, Natose [[spoiler:leaves the mansion]] in her ending, feeling that [[spoiler:she’s too emotionally dependent and insecure to stay. She plans to return when she’s become more
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: not played for as much angst as most examples of the troupe and they all turned out into quite decent people despite of it, but still, most of the main cast has one.
** Ren and Mihato have a MissingMom (she died when [[DeathByChildbirth giving him birth]]) and lived (up to the beginning of the series) with their [[AlcoholicParent drunken dad]] who regularly [[AbusiveParents beat them up]].
** Ren and Mihato have a MissingMom (she died when [[DeathByChildbirth giving him birth]]) and lived (up to the beginning of the series) with their [[AlcoholicParent drunken dad]] who regularly [[AbusiveParents beat them up]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: not Not played for as much angst as most examples of the troupe and they all turned out into quite decent people despite of it, but still, most of the main cast has one.
** Ren and Mihato have a MissingMom (she died when [[DeathByChildbirth givinghim birth]]) birth to Ren]]) and lived (up to the beginning of the series) with their [[AlcoholicParent drunken dad]] who regularly [[AbusiveParents beat them up]].
** Ren and Mihato have a MissingMom (she died when [[DeathByChildbirth giving
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** Shinra was forced at a young age to take over the familial responsibilities on top of her other musical responsibilities, causing [[spoiler: her to suppress her normal emotions and causing a rift between her and Yume that is not resolved until late in the series]]
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** Shinra was forced at a young age to take over the familial responsibilities on top of her other musical responsibilities, causing [[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her to suppress her normal emotions and causing a rift between her and Yume that is not resolved until late in the series]]series]].
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* FirstKiss: forcefully stolen from Ren by Ageha, after she deemed him being allowed [[IKissYourHand to kiss her hand]] to be too demure as a way of thanking him. Cue Ren's and his [[BigBrotherInstinct sister]], [[BrotherSisterIncest Mihato's]] (who happens to be watching said scene from a window) [[PostKissCatatonia complete]] [[BlueWithShock and utter]] [[BlankWhiteEyes shock]], followed by Ren [[OcularGushers bawling]] about his firts kiss on the floor. Ageha then blushes and reveals it was her first too, before running away.
* FirstKiss: forcefully stolen from Ren by Ageha, after she deemed him being allowed [[IKissYourHand to kiss her hand]] to be too demure as a way of thanking him. Cue Ren's and his [[BigBrotherInstinct sister]], [[BrotherSisterIncest Mihato's]] (who happens to be watching said scene from a window) [[PostKissCatatonia complete]] [[BlueWithShock and utter]] [[BlankWhiteEyes shock]], followed by Ren [[OcularGushers bawling]] about his firts kiss on the floor. Ageha then blushes and reveals it was her first too, before running away.
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* SpitTrailKiss: TheBigDamnKiss between [[spoiler: Ren & Shinra in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] into a flight of stairs.]]
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* SpitTrailKiss: TheBigDamnKiss between [[spoiler: Ren [[spoiler:Ren & Shinra in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] into a flight of stairs.]]stairs]].
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* VolleyingInsults: Beni and Ren
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* VolleyingInsults: Beni and RenRen.
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* KiAttacks: The colonel and later on Ren and Kojuurou, though they're usually used for the RuleOfFunny. Natose can use them too.
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* KiAttacks: KiManipulation: The colonel and later on Ren and Kojuurou, though they're usually used for the RuleOfFunny. Natose can use them too.
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** Episode 3 has the Colonel driving with Ren to pick up Shinra, when another car quickly passes by them. Cue the art shift of the [[ThreeDEffectsTwoDCartoon cars into CGI]] and the colonel [[Manga/InitialD showing Ren just how a real man drifts]]... on a limousine.
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** Episode 3 has the Colonel driving with Ren to pick up Shinra, when another car quickly passes by them. Cue the art shift of the [[ThreeDEffectsTwoDCartoon [[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects cars into CGI]] and the colonel [[Manga/InitialD showing Ren just how a real man drifts]]... on a limousine.
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** Episode 3 has the Colonel driving with Ren to pick up Shinra, when another car quickly passes by them. Cue the art shift of the [[Manga/InitialD cars onto]] ConspicuousCG [[Manga/InitialD and the colonel showing Ren just how a real man drifts]]. On a fucking Limousine.
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** Episode 3 has the Colonel driving with Ren to pick up Shinra, when another car quickly passes by them. Cue the art shift of the [[ThreeDEffectsTwoDCartoon cars into CGI]] and the colonel [[Manga/InitialD cars onto]] ConspicuousCG [[Manga/InitialD and the colonel showing Ren just how a real man drifts]]. On drifts]]... on a fucking Limousine.limousine.
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* LoveableSexManiac: The [[HelloNurse nurses]] taking care of Kojuurou during his stay at the hospital during episodes 7 and 8 definitely count. Sadly for them, he's [[SingleTargetSexuality Ageha-sexual]]
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* LoveableSexManiac: The [[HelloNurse [[HospitalHottie nurses]] taking care of Kojuurou during his stay at the hospital during episodes 7 and 8 definitely count. Sadly for them, he's [[SingleTargetSexuality Ageha-sexual]]Ageha-sexual]].
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YMMV
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* {{Tearjerker}}: Episode 10 is largely dedicated to detailing the sisters' and Natose's DarkAndTroubledPast it also hints at more issues with Ren and Mihato.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan:: The reason why Ren appeals to both Shinra & Miyu is the fact that he's honest, hardworking and maintains an air of [[ChasteHero innocence]]... somewhat.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan:: SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: The reason why Ren appeals to both Shinra & Miyu is the fact that he's honest, hardworking and maintains an air of [[ChasteHero innocence]]... somewhat.
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How To Write An Example - Don't Write Reviews
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* [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan Single Women Seeking A Good Man]]: The reason why Ren appeals to both Shinra & Miyu is the fact that he's honest, hardworking and maintains an air of [[ChasteHero innocence]]... somewhat.
* SpitTrailKiss: [[spoiler: Ren & Shinra's [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Kiss]] in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments into a flight of stairs.]]]]
* SpitTrailKiss: [[spoiler: Ren & Shinra's [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Kiss]] in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments into a flight of stairs.]]]]
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* [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan Single Women Seeking A Good Man]]: SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan:: The reason why Ren appeals to both Shinra & Miyu is the fact that he's honest, hardworking and maintains an air of [[ChasteHero innocence]]... somewhat.
* SpitTrailKiss: TheBigDamnKiss between [[spoiler: Ren &Shinra's [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Kiss]] Shinra in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments into a flight of stairs.]]]]]]
* SpitTrailKiss: TheBigDamnKiss between [[spoiler: Ren &
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* SpitTrailKiss: [[spoiler: Ren & Shinra's [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Kiss]] in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny into a flight of stairs.]]]]
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* SpitTrailKiss: [[spoiler: Ren & Shinra's [[BigDamnKiss Big Damn Kiss]] in the finale, which results in Ren [[PostKissCatatonia smashing face-first]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments into a flight of stairs.]]]]
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*** Yume Dream using her magical wand to produce a [[WaveMotionGun giant, pink, magical]] [[PersonOfMassDestruction beam of destruction]] to finally defeat the bear, while being utterly cheerful about it, seems a little bit too similar to certain other [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha magical girl]].
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*** Yume Dream using her magical wand to produce a [[WaveMotionGun giant, pink, magical]] [[PersonOfMassDestruction beam of destruction]] to finally defeat the bear, while being utterly cheerful about it, seems a little bit too similar to certain other [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha magical girl]].Anime/{{magical girl|LyricalNanoha}}.
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The makers of the show don't leave out the emotional material either, which in this case actually works pretty nicely and gives this show a bit more depth than you'd first expect despite the fact that it is filled to the brim with all kinds of {{otaku}} {{fetish|Fuel}}es.
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The makers of the show don't leave out the emotional material either, which in this case actually works pretty nicely and gives this show a bit more depth than you'd first expect despite the fact that it is filled to the brim with all kinds of {{otaku}} {{fetish|Fuel}}es.
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*** Mihato pulls a [[FistOfTheNorthStar Hokuto Hyakuretsu Ken]], the RapidFireFisticuffs from [[FistOfTheNorthStar Kenshiro]] onto Venis, which is so awesome it deletes all her lines from the script, effectively vanishing her from most of the episode after five seconds.
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*** Mihato pulls a [[FistOfTheNorthStar [[Manga/FistOfTheNorthStar Hokuto Hyakuretsu Ken]], the RapidFireFisticuffs from [[FistOfTheNorthStar [[Manga/FistOfTheNorthStar Kenshiro]] onto Venis, which is so awesome it deletes all her lines from the script, effectively vanishing her from most of the episode after five seconds.