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** Alice doesn't even ''have'' a living family to speak of.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The [[OrphansOrdeal suffering of her parents' deaths]], and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Alice so emotionally traumatized that she can not form healthy relationships; she compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to her.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The [[OrphansOrdeal suffering of her parents' deaths]], and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Alice so emotionally traumatized that she can not form healthy relationships; she compensates by heroic deeds having a severe case of ChronicHeroSyndrome and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to her.
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** This is CrapsackWorld, Alice lost her father in war. And her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid her poor village.
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** This is a CrapsackWorld, Alice lost her father in war. And her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid her poor village.
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** Both of Alice's parents died the moment she was [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Alice was RaisedByWolves which [[KillEmAll also pass away]], allowing her to do whatever she wants throughout her entire life without familial responsibilities.
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** Both of Alice's parents died the moment she was [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Alice was RaisedByWolves which [[KillEmAll also pass away]], away, allowing her to do whatever she wants throughout her entire life without familial responsibilities.
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** Alice is an orphn, [[OrphansOrdeal but damn it sucks to be one.]]
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** Alice is an orphn, orphan, [[OrphansOrdeal but damn it sucks to be one.]]
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** Alice is an orphn, [[OrphansOrdeal but damn it sucks to be one.]]
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** Alice is an adult, she can do what she wants.
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** Not so long after Bob was adopted, TheHero is killed and Bob continue his adventure.
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** Not so long after Bob was adopted, TheHero is killed [[TheHeroDies killed]] and Bob continue his adventure.
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** Alice’s parents aren’t dead, they just [DoorstopBaby couldn’t take care of her.]]
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** Alice’s parents aren’t dead, they just [DoorstopBaby [[DoorstopBaby couldn’t take care of her.]]
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** Alice’s parents aren’t dead, just missing.
** Alice’s parents aren’t dead, they just [DoorstopBaby couldn’t take care of her.]]
** Alice’s parents faked their deaths.
** Alice’s parents aren’t dead, they just [DoorstopBaby couldn’t take care of her.]]
** Alice’s parents faked their deaths.
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* '''Exploited''': ???[[TheBaroness Madame Malicious]] realizes that the best way to tempt the heroes isn't her [[FemmeFatale seductive abilities]], bribery, or offers of power but [[ThePowerOfLove familial love they desperately crave]]. She is able to turn Alice [[UndyingLoyalty forever loyal]] just through exploiting her abandonment and mother issues.
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** Alice has a very large family so she can angst over missing them while she's away on adventures.
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* '''Justified''': This is CrapsackWorld, Alice lost her father in war. And her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid her poor village.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** This is CrapsackWorld, Alice lost her father in war. And her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid her poorvillage.village.
** Alice was too young to remember her parents when they died, or at least she didn't know them well enough to feel bothered.
** This is CrapsackWorld, Alice lost her father in war. And her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid her poor
** Alice was too young to remember her parents when they died, or at least she didn't know them well enough to feel bothered.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The suffering of her parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Alice so emotionally traumatized that she can not form healthy relationships; she compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to her.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The [[OrphansOrdeal suffering of her parents' deaths, deaths]], and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Alice so emotionally traumatized that she can not form healthy relationships; she compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to her.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is orphaned, allowing him to leave home to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] without having to deal with family.
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* '''Straight''': Bob Alice is orphaned, allowing him her to leave home to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] {{Power Crystal}}s without having to deal with family.
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** Both of Bob's parents died the moment he was [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Bob was raised by wolves [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him to do whatever he wants throughout his entire life without familial responsibilities.
** Both of Bob's parents died [[FridgeLogic years before he was born]] and his adoptive parents die when he's 5.
** Bob loses his entire family as soon as he's born.
* '''Downplayed''': Bob's parents are PutOnABus or made [[AdultsAreUseless useless]]. They're still alive but unable to truly interfere in Bob's adventures.
* '''Justified''': This is CrapsackWorld, Bob lost his father in war. And his mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid his poor village.
** Both of Bob's parents died [[FridgeLogic years before he was born]] and his adoptive parents die when he's 5.
** Bob loses his entire family as soon as he's born.
* '''Downplayed''': Bob's parents are PutOnABus or made [[AdultsAreUseless useless]]. They're still alive but unable to truly interfere in Bob's adventures.
* '''Justified''': This is CrapsackWorld, Bob lost his father in war. And his mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid his poor village.
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** Both of Bob's Alice's parents died the moment he she was [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Bob Alice was raised by wolves RaisedByWolves which [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him her to do whatever he she wants throughout his her entire life without familial responsibilities.
** Both ofBob's Alice's parents died [[FridgeLogic years before he she was born]] and his her adoptive parents die when he's she's 5.
**Bob Alice loses his her entire family as soon as he's she's born.
* '''Downplayed''':Bob's Alice's parents are PutOnABus or made [[AdultsAreUseless useless]]. They're still alive but unable to truly interfere in Bob's Alice's adventures.
* '''Justified''': This is CrapsackWorld,Bob Alice lost his her father in war. And his her mother was kidnapped when group of bandits raid his her poor village.
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* '''Justified''': This is CrapsackWorld,
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** Bob's parents are still alive, and he can't go on an adventure to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] because his parent's say he can't.
** Bob's parents are still alive, and the only reason he ''can'' go on an adventure is because they raised him to be the hero. If they'd died at any time before the quest, he could never succeed.
** Bob's parents are still alive, and the only reason he ''can'' go on an adventure is because they raised him to be the hero. If they'd died at any time before the quest, he could never succeed.
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** Bob's Alice's parents are still alive, and he she can't go on an adventure to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] {{Power Crystal}}s because his her parent's say he she can't.
**Bob's Alice's parents are still alive, and the only reason he she ''can'' go on an adventure is because they raised him her to be the hero. If they'd died at any time before the quest, he she could never succeed.
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** Bob's parents are still alive, but they are abusive parents who never care about him. So Bob going for adventure, promise them that he will bring back some money.
** Alice is an orphan. TheHero adopt her and take her on adventuring.
** Alice is an orphan. TheHero adopt her and take her on adventuring.
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** Bob's Alice's parents are still alive, but they are abusive parents AbusiveParents who never care about him. her. So Bob Alice going for adventure, promise them that he she will bring back some money.
**Alice Bob is an orphan. TheHero adopt her adopts him and take her takes him on adventuring.
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** His parents are killed off shortly afterward, allowing him to go on his adventure without return.
** Not so long after Alice was adopted, TheHero is killed and Alice continue her adventure.
* '''Parodied''': Everyone is an orphan. Everyone in town? They're orphans. The BigBad? Orphan. The protagonist and his friends? Orphans.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has been led to believe his parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his adventure, he discovers one or both of his parents alive and well and suspends his quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s are actually killed and he must resume his quest.
* '''Averted''': Bob is not restricted to go on an adventure by his parents, who are alive.
* '''Enforced''': "His parents would never let him go on such a suicidal journey. We're going to have to kill them off."
** Not so long after Alice was adopted, TheHero is killed and Alice continue her adventure.
* '''Parodied''': Everyone is an orphan. Everyone in town? They're orphans. The BigBad? Orphan. The protagonist and his friends? Orphans.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has been led to believe his parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his adventure, he discovers one or both of his parents alive and well and suspends his quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s are actually killed and he must resume his quest.
* '''Averted''': Bob is not restricted to go on an adventure by his parents, who are alive.
* '''Enforced''': "His parents would never let him go on such a suicidal journey. We're going to have to kill them off."
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** His Her parents are killed off shortly afterward, allowing him her to go on his her adventure without return.
** Not so long afterAlice Bob was adopted, TheHero is killed and Alice Bob continue her his adventure.
* '''Parodied''': Everyone is an orphan. Everyone in town? They're orphans. The BigBad? Orphan. The protagonist andhis her friends? Orphans.
* '''Zig Zagged''':Bob Alice has been led to believe his her parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his her adventure, he she discovers one or both of his her parents alive and well and suspends his her quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s her parent(s) are actually killed and he she must resume his her quest.
* '''Averted''':Bob Alice is not restricted to go on an adventure by his her parents, who are alive.
* '''Enforced''':"His "Her parents would never let him her go on such a suicidal journey. We're going to have to kill them off."
** Not so long after
* '''Parodied''': Everyone is an orphan. Everyone in town? They're orphans. The BigBad? Orphan. The protagonist and
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* '''Conversed''': "He's an orphan because the writers couldn't think of any other way the kid could get around authority this blatantly.
* '''Deconstructed''': The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Looking back on it though, he eventually concludes that this was a good thing, because of what it allowed him to do, and what it allowed him to become.
* '''Deconstructed''': The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Looking back on it though, he eventually concludes that this was a good thing, because of what it allowed him to do, and what it allowed him to become.
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* '''Conversed''': "He's "She's an orphan because the writers couldn't think of any other way the kid could get around authority this blatantly.
blatantly."
* '''Deconstructed''': The suffering ofhis her parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob Alice so emotionally traumatized that he she can not form healthy relationships; he she compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
her.
* '''Reconstructed''': Looking back on it though,he she eventually concludes that this was a good thing, because of what it allowed him her to do, and what it allowed him her to become.
* '''Deconstructed''': The suffering of
* '''Reconstructed''': Looking back on it though,
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
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* '''Deconstructed''':
**'''Deconstructed''': The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''':Bob learns as time passes by Looking back on it though, he eventually concludes that his father this was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village a good thing, because he didn't want his son of what it allowed him to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself do, and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives what it allowed him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.become.
**
* '''Reconstructed''':
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** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
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Why is Bob losing both parents when he\'s born Fridge Logic? As long as his mother lives long enough to give birth to him, it should be OK, given that the wolves are actually able to raise an infant.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Both of Bob's parents [[FridgeLogic died the moment he was]] [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Bob was raised by wolves [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him to do whatever he wants throughout his entire life without familial responsibilities.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Both of Bob's parents[[FridgeLogic died the moment he was]] was [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Bob was raised by wolves [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him to do whatever he wants throughout his entire life without familial responsibilities.responsibilities.
** Both of Bob's parents died [[FridgeLogic years before he was born]] and his adoptive parents die when he's 5.
** Bob loses his entire family as soon as he's born.
** Both of Bob's parents
** Both of Bob's parents died [[FridgeLogic years before he was born]] and his adoptive parents die when he's 5.
** Bob loses his entire family as soon as he's born.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Both of Bob's parents [[FridgeLogic died the moment he was born]], and Bob was raised by wolves [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him to do whatever he wants throughout his entire life without familial responsibilities.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Both of Bob's parents [[FridgeLogic died the moment he was was]] [[DeathByChildbirth born]], and Bob was raised by wolves [[KillEmAll which also pass away]], allowing him to do whatever he wants throughout his entire life without familial responsibilities.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Bob's parents are PutOnABus or made [[AdultsAreUseless useless]]. They're still alive but unable to truly interfere in Bob's adventures.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "My parents are dead. Bye friends, I'm off to have a parental free adventure!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "My parents are dead. Bye friends, I'm off to have a parental freeadventure!"
* '''Invoked''':adventure!"
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has been led to believe his parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his adventure, he discovers one or both of his parents alive and well and suspends his quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s are actually killed and he must resume his quest.
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has been led to believe his parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his adventure, he discovers one or both of his parents alive and well and suspends his quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s are actually killed and he must resume his quest.
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** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
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* '''Invoked''': "It's not as bad as you think, being an orphan. It's actually quite convenient."
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** "It's not as bad as you think, being an orphan. It's actually quite convenient."
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** "It's not as bad as you think, being an orphan. It's actually quite convenient."
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob learns as time passes by that his father was actually an assassin, and didn't want Bob to leave the village because he didn't want his son to learn about his profession as a trained killer. Returning home after a failed mission with the police hot on his tail, he poisoned both himself and his wife. His realization of this, and the desire to learn about his father's life, gives him the courage to go out and find the power crystals.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Bob's parents are still alive, and he can't go on an adventure to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] because his parent's say he can't.
** Bob's parents are still alive, and he can't go on an adventure to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] because his parent's say he can't.
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** Bob's parents are still alive, but they are abusive parents who never care about him. So Bob going for adventure, promise them that he will bring back some money.
** Bob's parents are still alive, but they are abusive parents who never care about him. So Bob going for adventure, promise them that he will bring back some money.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** His parents are killed off shortly afterward, allowing him to go on his adventure without return.
** His parents are killed off shortly afterward, allowing him to go on his adventure without return.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
** Both of Bob's parents come down with a terminal disease. He can't go on his adventure because he has to take care of them, because no one else will. His mother passes away, then his father, his last wish being to stay in the village. Out of grief and respect, he decides he can't take his adventure.
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** SelfMadeOrphan
* '''Exploited''': Bob kills his own parents so he can go on his adventure without responsibilities.
* '''Exploited''': Bob kills his own parents so he can go on his adventure without responsibilities.
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* '''Inverted''': Bob parent's Bob's parents are still alive, and he can't go on an adventure to collect the [[PowerCrystal power crystals]] because his parent's say he can't.can't.
** Bob's parents are still alive, and the only reason he ''can'' go on an adventure is because they raised him to be the hero. If they'd died at any time before the quest, he could never succeed.
** Bob's parents are still alive, and the only reason he ''can'' go on an adventure is because they raised him to be the hero. If they'd died at any time before the quest, he could never succeed.
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** The suffering of his parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
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** The suffering of his parent's death, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
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** The suffering of his parent's death, parents' deaths, and the emotional neglect of the orphanage, have left Bob so emotionally traumatized that he can not form healthy relationships; he compensates by heroic deeds and WalkingTheEarth so no one gets too attached to him.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Bob has been led to believe his parents have been killed, and goes on an adventure to avenge them. During the course of his adventure, he discovers one or both of his parents alive and well and suspends his quest for vengeance. Shortly thereafter, his parent/s are actually killed and he must resume his quest.