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* '''Justified''': Deidre is the only attractive single female of the whole cast.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Deidre is the only attractive single female of the wholecast.cast.
** The setting is HighSchool. Marcus, Josh and Deidre are all teenagers and lack the necessary maturity for this not to happen.
** Deidre is the only attractive single female of the whole
** The setting is HighSchool. Marcus, Josh and Deidre are all teenagers and lack the necessary maturity for this not to happen.
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** [[IncompatibleOrientation Deidre is actually a lesbian]], causing Marcus and Josh to respectfully back off.
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** Either Deidre lied about being a lesbian or Marcus and Josh realizes that she's actually bisexual, causing them to go back to fighting.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what [[BiTheWay they]] [[IfItsYouItsOkay originally wanted]].
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what [[BiTheWay they]] they [[IfItsYouItsOkay originally wanted]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': Deidre ends up sick of Marcus and Josh and [[DumpThemAll dumps both of them]], thinking that they are nothing but immature manchildren.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Deidre ends up sick of Marcus and Josh and [[DumpThemAll dumps both of them]], thinking that they are nothing but immature manchildren.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Deidre ends up sick of Marcus and Josh and [[DumpThemAll dumps both of them]], thinking that they are nothing but immature manchildren.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The fight becomes so violent that Marcus eventually kills Josh, who was the one Deidre was pining for and she refuses to be with Marcus as a result.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
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%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Played For Drama''': ??????
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** Deidre settles everything by saying that she isn't interested by either of them.
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** Deidre settles everything by [[DumpThemAll saying that she isn't interested by either of them.them]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metaph]][[VisualInnuendo orically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metaph]][[VisualInnuendo orically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].literal.
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** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both screw Deidre.
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** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both screw date Deidre.
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** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both date Deidre.
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** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both date screw Deidre.
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%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???[[TakeAThirdOption Juan]] takes advantage of Marcus and Josh fighting to pitch woo to Deidre without interruptions.
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** IfICantHaveYou
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** IfICantHaveYouMurderTheHypotenuse
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** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre {{shipper|OnDeck}}s respectively.
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** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre {{shipper|OnDeck}}s respectively.both [[ShipperOnDeck try to convince each other that Deidre is the right person for them]].
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** [[ClosetKey Marcus and Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** [[ClosetKey Marcus and Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss [[BelligerentSexualTension growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what [[BiTheWay they origi]][[IfItsYouItsOkay nally wanted]].
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what [[BiTheWay they origi]][[IfItsYouItsOkay nally they]] [[IfItsYouItsOkay originally wanted]].
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** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre [[ShipperOnDeck shippers]] respectively.
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** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre [[ShipperOnDeck shippers]] {{shipper|OnDeck}}s respectively.
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* '''Inverted''': BettyAndVeronica
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* '''Inverted''': BettyAndVeronica'''Inverted''':
** BettyAndVeronica
** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre [[ShipperOnDeck shippers]] respectively.
** BettyAndVeronica
** Marcus and Josh are Josh/Deidre and Marcus/Deidre [[ShipperOnDeck shippers]] respectively.
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** [[ClosetKey Marcus]] [[IfItsYouItsOkay and]] [[BiTheWay Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** [[ClosetKey Marcus]] [[IfItsYouItsOkay and]] [[BiTheWay Marcus and Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what they originally wanted.
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** Except that they both eventually realize they were [[BetterAsFriends Better As Rivals]] and go right back to what [[BiTheWay they originally wanted.origi]][[IfItsYouItsOkay nally wanted]].
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** [[BiTheWay Marcus]] and [[IfItsYouItsOkay Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** [[BiTheWay [[ClosetKey Marcus]] and [[IfItsYouItsOkay and]] [[BiTheWay Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** Marcus and Josh end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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** Marcus [[BiTheWay Marcus]] and Josh [[IfItsYouItsOkay Josh]] end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another]] and go for the GayOption.
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* '''Averted''': Deidre isn't pined for by anyone.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Deidre isn't pined for byanyone.anyone.
** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both date Deidre.
** Deidre isn't pined for by
** Everyone within the LoveTriangle decides to be in an open relationship. So that way they can both date Deidre.
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metapho]][[VisualInnuendo rically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metapho]][[VisualInnuendo rically]] metaph]][[VisualInnuendo orically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metapho]][[VisualInnendo rically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metapho]][[VisualInnendo metapho]][[VisualInnuendo rically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metaphorically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes [[PhallicWeapon metaphorically]] metapho]][[VisualInnendo rically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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** The CockFight becomes metaphorically literal.
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** The CockFight becomes metaphorically literal.[[PhallicWeapon metaphorically]] [[FreudWasRight literal]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???The boys are only mildly antagonistic, and one of them soon finds a new girlfriend.
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'''Basic Trope''': Two guys compete for a girl's affections, sometimes violently.
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'''Basic Trope''': Two guys compete for a girl's affections, sometimes violently.
* '''Downplayed''': ???
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** Not like that makes either of them ''stop''...
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* '''Deconstructed''': The fight becomes so violent that Marcus eventually kills Josh, who was the one Deidre was pining for and she refuses to be with Marcus as a result.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
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* '''Averted''': Deidre isn't pined for by anyone.
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* '''Averted''': Deidre isn't pined for by anyone.
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* '''Invoked''':
--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first."
--> '''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are."
--> '''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, got it!?"
--> '''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me."
--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first."
--> '''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are."
--> '''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, got it!?"
--> '''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me."
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* '''Invoked''':
'''Invoked''':
--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first."
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'''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are."
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'''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, gotit!?"
-->it!?"\\
'''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me.""
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--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first.
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'''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are.
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'''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, got
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'''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': The fight becomes so violent that Marcus eventually kills Josh, who was the one Deidre was pining for and she refuses to be with Marcus as a result.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...wait, no, Josh was only knocked out, like he'd knocked out Marcus before. Still, the scare makes them agree to not fight as violently anymore, and to keep it to showing off.
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* '''Invoked''': ??'''Invoked''':
--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first."
--> '''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are."
--> '''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, got it!?"
--> '''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me."
--> '''Josh''': "Alright Marcus, you want Deidre? Well, tough shit, I saw her first."
--> '''Marcus''': "Yeah? Well she doesn't want you, she wants me. And anyway I'm better for her than you are."
--> '''Josh''': "You don't deserve her and you won't have her! Over my dead body, got it!?"
--> '''Marcus''': "I don't give a shit what you say. I love her more than you do and you won't stop me."
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
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** IfICantHaveYou
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* '''Subverted''': Deidre settles everything by saying that she isn't interested by either of them.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Deidre settles everything by saying that she isn't interested by either of them.
** Deidre settles everything by saying that she isn't interested by either of them.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Not like that makes either of them ''stop''...
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted'''
** Not like that makes either of them ''stop''...
** Not like that makes either of them ''stop''...
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** The CockFight becomes literal.
** The CockFight becomes literal.
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* '''Enforced''': "Hey guys, we need to show that this girl's worth more than the others. Let's have the two [[EstrogenBrigadeBait most desirable dudes]] in the show fight over her!"
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* '''Enforced''': "Hey guys, we need to show that this girl's worth more than the others. Let's have the two [[EstrogenBrigadeBait [[MrFanservice most desirable dudes]] in the show fight over her!"
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** Marcus and Josh end up growing attracted to one another and go for the GayOption.
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** Marcus and Josh end up [[SlapSlapKiss growing attracted to one another another]] and go for the GayOption.
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* '''Parodied''': The CockFight becomes literal. literal.
** The CockFight becomes metaphorically literal.
** The CockFight becomes metaphorically literal.
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* '''Conversed''': ??
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* '''Conversed''': ??"Hey, look at those guys, fighting over a chick! I wonder who'll win..."
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* '''Parodied''': The CockFight becomes [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean literal]].
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* '''Parodied''': The CockFight becomes [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean literal]].literal.
