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** Alice [[WomanInWhite dresses in white]], and her injuries are ''very'' visible as a result.
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** Alice [[WomanInWhite [[WhiteShirtOfDeath dresses in white]], and her injuries are ''very'' visible as a result.
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** Alice is also wearing brown pants in case she craps them out of fear.
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** Alice is also wearing brown pants in case she [[PottyFailure craps them them]] [[BringMyBrownPants out of fear.]]
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** Alice is wearing a red jacket, is wounded, bleeds all over it, discards it, gets a green jacket, is wounded again, and bleeds ''green'' this time.
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** Alice [[WomanInWhite dresses in white]], and her injuries are ''very'' visible as a result.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Alice gets a punch in the nose and a consequent nosebleed in a fight while wearing a red jacket.
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* '''Justified''': The bright red made Alice stand out more among her comrades, and so the enemy decided to target her.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
* '''Justified''': The bright red made Alice stand out more among her comrades, and so the enemy decided to target her.
* '''Justified''': The bright red made Alice stand out more among her comrades, and so the enemy decided to target her.
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** Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
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** Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice ends up dying because the medics didn't notice that she was bleeding out and appeared to only be unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead, which is what she would have wanted anyway.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead, which is what she would have wanted anyway.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice ends up dying because the medics didn't notice that she was bleeding out and appeared to only be unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead, which is what she would have wanted anyway.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead, which is what she would have wanted anyway.
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%% Optional items, added after Conversed, at your discretion:
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Inverted''': Alice, wearing her red jacket, is the only one to escape the battle uninjured.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice, wearing her red jacket, is the only one to escape the battle uninjured.
** Alice, wearing her red jacket, is the only one to escape the battle uninjured.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
** Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
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* '''Parodied''': Anyone who will wear red will get injured during the very same minute when they dress themselves up or will have accidents happen during the whole day.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Anyone who will wear red will get injured during the very same minute when they dress themselves up or will have accidents happen during the whole day.
** Anyone who will wear red will get injured during the very same minute when they dress themselves up or will have accidents happen during the whole day.
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* '''Straight''': Alice is wearing red in the battle, and gets stabbed by her opponent.
* '''Exaggerated''': Anyone wearing any red during the battle gets brutally sliced up by the enemy.
* '''Exaggerated''': Anyone wearing any red during the battle gets brutally sliced up by the enemy.
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* '''Straight''': Alice is wearing red in the battle, battle and gets stabbed by her opponent.
* '''Exaggerated''': Anyone wearing any red duringthe battle gets brutally sliced up by the enemy.
* '''Exaggerated''': Anyone wearing any red during
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** Alternatively: When a wound opens back up, Alice [[FanDisservice takes off her red shirt, treating everyone to a nice view of the gaping hole in her chest.]]
* '''Subverted''': Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded... but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
** Or alternatively Alice goes to the battle and survives without a scratch, but it's revealed that she has gotten severely wounded [[DeadAllAlong or maybe even got killed]] while wearing the red jacket.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Until later in the battle when her opponent really does severely wound her.
* '''Subverted''': Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded... but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
** Or alternatively Alice goes to the battle and survives without a scratch, but it's revealed that she has gotten severely wounded [[DeadAllAlong or maybe even got killed]] while wearing the red jacket.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Until later in the battle when her opponent really does severely wound her.
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** Alternatively: When Alternatively, when a wound opens back up, Alice [[FanDisservice takes off her red shirt, treating everyone to a nice view of the gaping hole in her chest.]]
* '''Subverted''': Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded... but it turns out not to be her blood on her clothing, but her opponent's instead.
**Or alternatively Alternatively, Alice goes to the battle and seemingly survives without a scratch, but it's revealed that she has has, indeed, gotten severely wounded [[DeadAllAlong or maybe even got killed]] while wearing the red jacket.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Until later in thebattle battle, when her opponent really does severely wound her.
* '''Subverted''': Alice, battling while wearing all red, looks to be wounded...
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Until later in the
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* '''Reconstructed''': However her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead which is what she would have wanted anyway.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice, wearing her red jacket, seems to alternate between appearing to be fine or apparently terribly wounded, until nobody can tell how she's really doing.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice, wearing her red jacket, seems to alternate between appearing to be fine or apparently terribly wounded, until nobody can tell how she's really doing.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However However, her death ends up causing the medics to use the [[TooAwesomeToUse powerful healing artifact meant for her]] on her badly wounded daughter instead instead, which is what she would have wanted anyway.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice, wearing her red jacket, seems to alternate between appearing to be fineor apparently and terribly wounded, until nobody can tell how she's really doing.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice, wearing her red jacket, seems to alternate between appearing to be fine
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* '''Enforced''': "We want people to see her get injured, but she's surrounded by a swarm of ordinary soldiers in all these scenes- let's make her wear red, so it sticks out."
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* '''Enforced''': "We want people to see her get injured, but she's surrounded by a swarm of ordinary soldiers in all these scenes- scenes - let's make her wear red, so it sticks out."
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* '''Invoked''': Knowing she'll probably be wounded in battle, Alice wears red so that the blood doesn't stand out too much, and her comrades don't start worrying.
* '''Defied''': "NO! Alice! Don't wear red to the battle, those people always end up hurt!"
* '''Defied''': "NO! Alice! Don't wear red to the battle, those people always end up hurt!"
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* '''Invoked''': Knowing she'll probably be wounded in battle, Alice wears red so that the blood doesn't won't stand out too much, and so that her comrades don't won't start worrying.
* '''Defied''': "NO! Alice! Don't wear red tothe battle, those battle! Those people always end up hurt!"
* '''Defied''': "NO! Alice! Don't wear red to
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* '''Conversed''': Alice walks around wearing red, and has a conversation with Bob on how in various media, the color would mean bad news for her.
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* '''Conversed''': Alice walks around wearing red, red and has a conversation with Bob on how how, in various media, the color would mean bad news for her.
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** Alternatively: When a wound opens back up, Alice [[FanDisservice takes off her red shirt, treating everyone to a nice view of the gaping hole in her chest.]]
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** Alice is also wearing brown pants in case she craps them out of fear.
