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* TheReveal: Toward the end of the story, Allura manages to sneak up behind the Boss and stabs him in the back repeatedly, to which he doesn't even flinch. Allura spins him around, only to discover [[spoiler:he was an Auton all along]], after which [[spoiler:she gets injected with a human-size syringe that had been inside it]], leading to an even bigger reveal once she regains sub-consciousness (see "Wham Line", below).
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* WhamLine:
-->'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for ''I'' am the Poison.
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* WhamLine:
-->'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for ''I'' am the Poison.
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* TheReveal: Toward the end of the story, Allura manages to sneak up behind the Boss and stabs him in the back repeatedly, to which he doesn't even flinch. After a brief conversation, Allura realizes he should at least be bleeding and spins him around, only to discover [[spoiler:he was an Auton all along]], after which along]]. Only moments afterward, [[spoiler:she gets injected with a human-size syringe that had been inside it]], leading to an even bigger reveal once she regains sub-consciousness (see "Wham Line", below).
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* WhamLine:
-->'''[[spoiler:SusanWhamLine: Upon regaining sub-consciousness from the above event, Allura sees an unfamiliar figure at the controls of her mind.
-->'''Figure:''' It is quite a pleasure to be your poison, Mrs. [=McCoy=].\\
''(the figure swivels around, the various controls continuing to move on their own)''\\
'''Allura:''' No...\\
''(the figure smiles)''\\
'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for ''I'' am the Poison.
-->'''[[spoiler:Susan
-->'''Figure:''' It is quite a pleasure to be your poison, Mrs. [=McCoy=].\\
''(the figure swivels around, the various controls continuing to move on their own)''\\
'''Allura:''' No...\\
''(the figure smiles)''\\
'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for ''I'' am the Poison.
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* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls. Said parents are named early on but aren't encountered until late in the story, as part of the Boss' overall plan.
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* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but the idea repulses Allura.
-->'''Allura:''' Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment.\\
'''Chrissie:''' Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?\\
'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise just ''wrong''. ''(sighs)'' But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
-->'''Allura:''' Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment.\\
'''Chrissie:''' Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?\\
'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise just ''wrong''. ''(sighs)'' But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Allura's hair is lilac when she first appears, although this isn't her natural color.
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. While straight, it's implied that she's [[NoodleIncident had some experiences]].
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* And a child-girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
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Part of ''FanFic/TheWarioBarkerCollection'', inspired by (and started in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused it to become a multi-chapter story.
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* And a child-girl, child, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
Part of ''FanFic/TheWarioBarkerCollection'', inspired by (and started in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as asimple oneshot, positive reception caused it to become a multi-chapter story.
Part of ''FanFic/TheWarioBarkerCollection'', inspired by (and started in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a
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* CrapsackWorld: Suggested by Allura's comments in "Reasons", although the area was in fact mostly evacuated.
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* CrapsackWorld: Suggested by Allura's comments in "Reasons", Chapter 1, although the area was in fact mostly evacuated.
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. While straight, it's implied that she's had [[NoodleIncident more than a few unwanted experiences]].
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls. Said parents are eventually encountered late in the story, as part of the Boss' overall plan.
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls. Said parents are eventually encountered late in the story, as part of the Boss' overall plan.
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. While straight, it's implied that she's had [[NoodleIncident more than a few unwanted had some experiences]].
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls. Said parents areeventually named early on but aren't encountered until late in the story, as part of the Boss' overall plan.
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls. Said parents are
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'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise just ''wrong''. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
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'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise just ''wrong''. (''sighs'') ''(sighs)'' But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
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* NoodleIncident: Allura doesn't want Chrissie to talk about what happened at Machu Piccu (''[[JustForFun/IThoughtItMeant not]]'' Machu Picc'''h'''u).
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura's gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is almost-entirely off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: "Home" originally had Chrissie looking through TV listings and reading off four titles, two of which paralleled stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura's gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is almost-entirely off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: "Home" originally had Chrissie looking through TV listings and reading off four titles, two of which paralleled stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* MythologyGag: In Chapter 2, it's mentioned that Nadimia was taught by her parents that seeing a specific symbol (which she finds on the kitchen wall of Allura and Chrissie's house) meant she would be safe there. A vague description is given from her point of view, but was intended to be the Seal of Rassilon, denoting those whom the Doctor considered friends.
* NoodleIncident: Alluradoesn't does ''not'' want Chrissie to talk about what happened at Machu Piccu (''[[JustForFun/IThoughtItMeant not]]'' Machu Picc'''h'''u).
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]:Nadimia, since Allura's gone a bit off due to Nadimia. Not only have Allura and Chrissie (who is almost-entirely off-kilter).
been run ragged due to having to hunt down the creatures, but also because of the events orchestrated by the Boss.
* ParallelPornTitles:"Home" Chapter 2 originally had Chrissie looking through TV listings and reading off four titles, two of which paralleled stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — - and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* NoodleIncident: Allura
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]:
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* TheReveal: Toward the end of the story, Allura manages to sneak up behind the Boss and stabs him in the back repeatedly, to which he doesn't even flinch. Allura spins him around, only to discover [[spoiler:he was an Auton all along]]...after which [[spoiler:she gets injected with a human-size syringe that had been inside it]], leading to an even bigger reveal (see "Wham Line", below).
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* TheReveal: Toward the end of the story, Allura manages to sneak up behind the Boss and stabs him in the back repeatedly, to which he doesn't even flinch. Allura spins him around, only to discover [[spoiler:he was an Auton all along]]...along]], after which [[spoiler:she gets injected with a human-size syringe that had been inside it]], leading to an even bigger reveal once she regains sub-consciousness (see "Wham Line", below).
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-->'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for '''I''' ''I'' am the Poison.
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* NoodleIncident: Allura doesn't want Chrissie to talk about what happened at Machu Piccu (''[[IThoughtItMeant not]]'' Machu Picc'''h'''u).
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* NoodleIncident: Allura doesn't want Chrissie to talk about what happened at Machu Piccu (''[[IThoughtItMeant (''[[JustForFun/IThoughtItMeant not]]'' Machu Picc'''h'''u).
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Part of ''FanFic/TheWarioBarkerCollection'', inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused it to become a multi-chapter story.
Currently up to Chapter 4: in order, [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]]; and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; Website/DeviantArt account is required to view).
Currently up to Chapter 4: in order, [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]]; and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; Website/DeviantArt account is required to view).
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Part of ''FanFic/TheWarioBarkerCollection'', inspired by (and uploaded started in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused it to become a multi-chapter story.
Currently up to Eventually stalled, with the story stopping after Chapter 4: in 4 was posted. In order, the chapters were [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]]; and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; Website/DeviantArt account is required to view).
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. While straight, it's implied that she's had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly unwanted experiences]].
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls.
* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is wrong.
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls.
* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is wrong.
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. While straight, it's implied that she's had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly more than a few unwanted experiences]].
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair ofgirls.
girls. Said parents are eventually encountered late in the story, as part of the Boss' overall plan.
* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, butAllura knows the mere concept is wrong.idea repulses Allura.
* HasTwoMommies: Nadimia's parents are a pair of
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'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
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'''Allura:''' The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong.just ''wrong''. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
* TheReveal: Toward the end of the story, Allura manages to sneak up behind the Boss and stabs him in the back repeatedly, to which he doesn't even flinch. Allura spins him around, only to discover [[spoiler:he was an Auton all along]]...after which [[spoiler:she gets injected with a human-size syringe that had been inside it]], leading to an even bigger reveal (see "Wham Line", below).
* WhamLine:
-->'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for '''I''' am the Poison.
-->'''[[spoiler:Susan Wise]]:''' I never die, for '''I''' am the Poison.
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Currently up to Chapter 4: in order, [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]]; and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view).
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Currently up to Chapter 4: in order, [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]]; [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]]; and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt account is required to view).
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Hot Mom has been disambiguated. Examples not clearly fitting into one of the tropes other than Fetish Fuel mentioned on Hot Mom are being removed. If you think it fits one of these tropes, feel free to readd with proper context. Same with Hot Dad.
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* HotMom: Allura.
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* HetIsEw: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls.
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-->'''Allura''': Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment.\\
'''Chrissie''': Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?\\
'''Allura''': The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
'''Chrissie''': Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?\\
'''Allura''': The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
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-->'''Chrissie''': Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I am-\\
'''Allura''': The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you...\\
'''Chrissie''': But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now.
* NoodleIncident: Allura doesn't want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
'''Allura''': The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you...\\
'''Chrissie''': But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now.
* NoodleIncident: Allura doesn't want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused it to become a multi-chapter story.
As of now, the first four chapters are up — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]], and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view).
As of now, the first four chapters are up — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]], and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last three contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view).
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* CrapsackWorld: Suggested by Allura's comments in "Darkness", although the area was in fact mostly evacuated.
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* CrapsackWorld: Suggested by Allura's comments in "Darkness", "Reasons", although the area was in fact mostly evacuated.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Allura is ''[[Anime/{{Voltron}} that]]'' Allura, albeit much older.
* CrapsackWorld: Implied with Allura's comments in Chapter 1.
* CrapsackWorld: Implied with Allura's comments in Chapter 1.
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* {{Moe}}: Nadimia.
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As of now, the first three chapters are up — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] (last two contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view).
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As of now, the first three four chapters are up — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-1-Reasons-143077530 "Reasons"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]], com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-2-Home-157887232 "Home"]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-3-Darkness-254649457 "Darkness"]], and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Part-4-Storm-285291904 "Storm"]] (last two three contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view).
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. She is straight, but has been implied to have had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly unwanted experiences]].
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* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. She is While straight, but has been it's implied to have that she's had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly unwanted experiences]].
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* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is morally-wrong.
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* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is morally-wrong.wrong.
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* NoodleIncident: Allura does ''not'' want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
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* NoodleIncident: Allura does ''not'' doesn't want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
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* ParallelPornTitles: Chapter 2 originally had Chrissie looking through TV listings and reading off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* ParallelPornTitles: Chapter 2 "Home" originally had Chrissie looking through TV listings and reading off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked paralleled stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this isn't her natural color.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, lilac when she first appears, although this isn't her natural color.
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* A schoolgirl who stalks the city streets, trying to destroy a deadly evil whilst hiding under a lilac cover...
* Her daughter, who lies awake at night pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
* And a child-girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, followed by with more to come.
As of now, the first three chapters are up with one more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]],
[[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] (last two contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here]].
* Her daughter, who lies awake at night pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
* And a child-girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, followed by with more to come.
As of now, the first three chapters are up with one more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]],
[[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] (last two contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here]].
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused
As of now, the first three chapters are up
The CharacterSheet can be viewed
[[Characters/TheReasonWhy
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Allura is ''that'' [[{{Voltron}} Allura]], albeit much older.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Allura is ''that'' [[{{Voltron}} Allura]], ''[[Anime/{{Voltron}} that]]'' Allura, albeit much older.
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura has gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is ''entirely'' off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: The original Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* ParallelPornTitles: The original Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura has Allura's gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is ''entirely'' almost-entirely off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles:The original Chapter 2 originally had a small bit where Chrissie looked looking through TV listings and read reading off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* ParallelPornTitles:
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Allura is ''that'' [[{{Voltron}} Allura]], albeit much older.
* CrapsackWorld: Implied with Allura's comments in Chapter 1.
* CurseCutShort: Done many a time with Chrissie, thanks to Allura.
* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. She is straight, but has been implied to have had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly unwanted experiences]].
* HetIsEw: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls.
* HotMom: Allura.
* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is morally-wrong.
-->'''Allura''': Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment.
-->'''Chrissie''': Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?
-->'''Allura''': The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
* MediumAwareness: Chrissie.
-->'''Chrissie''': Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I am-
-->'''Allura''': The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you...
-->'''Chrissie''': But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now.
* {{Moe}}: Nadimia.
* NoodleIncident: Allura does ''not'' want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura has gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is ''entirely'' off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Allura and Chrissie.
* ShoutOut: A few things.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this isn't her natural color.
* CrapsackWorld: Implied with Allura's comments in Chapter 1.
* CurseCutShort: Done many a time with Chrissie, thanks to Allura.
* EveryoneIsGay: Averted with Allura. She is straight, but has been implied to have had more than a few [[NoodleIncident completely and utterly unwanted experiences]].
* HetIsEw: Nadimia's parents are a pair of girls.
* HotMom: Allura.
* IncestIsRelative: Chrissie's all for it, but Allura knows the mere concept is morally-wrong.
-->'''Allura''': Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment.
-->'''Chrissie''': Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?
-->'''Allura''': The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
* MediumAwareness: Chrissie.
-->'''Chrissie''': Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I am-
-->'''Allura''': The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you...
-->'''Chrissie''': But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now.
* {{Moe}}: Nadimia.
* NoodleIncident: Allura does ''not'' want Chrissie to go into the "Machu Piccu incident".
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia, since Allura has gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is ''entirely'' off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one (''The First Story''), but the other (''The Twelve Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Allura and Chrissie.
* ShoutOut: A few things.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this isn't her natural color.
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-->'''Allura''': Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive
-->'''Chrissie''':
'''Chrissie''': Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy
-->'''Allura''':
'''Allura''': The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]
-->'''Chrissie''': Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I
-->'''Allura''':
'''Allura''': The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of
-->'''Chrissie''':
'''Chrissie''': But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now.
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come.
As of now, the first two chapters are up with two more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]] (contains some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
As of now, the first two chapters are up with two more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]] (contains some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, followed by with more to come.
As of now, the firsttwo three chapters are up with two one more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 Chapter 2]] (contains 2]],
[[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] (last two contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
As of now, the first
[[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-3-254649457 Chapter 3]] (last two contain some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. As of now the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here]].
(NOTE: Chapter 2 contains some mature content, and requires a DeviantArt account to view.)
(NOTE: Chapter 2 contains some mature content, and requires a DeviantArt account to view.)
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. come.
As ofnow now, the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed up with two more (at least) to come — [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and Chapter 1]], [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] Chapter 2]] (contains some mature content; DeviantArt account is required to view)
The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhyhere]].
(NOTE: Chapter 2 contains some mature content, and requires a DeviantArt account to view.)here]].
As of
The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhy
(NOTE: Chapter 2 contains some mature content, and requires a DeviantArt account to view.)
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* A schoolgirl who stalks the city streets, trying to destroy a deadly evil whilst hiding under a lilac cover...
* Her daughter, who lies awake at night pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
* And a child-girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
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-->'''Allura''': "Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment."
-->'''Chrissie''': "Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?"
-->'''Allura''': "The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]"
-->'''Chrissie''': "Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?"
-->'''Allura''': "The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]"
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-->'''Allura''': "Saying Saying "Hey, mom, nice [[PrecisionFStrike ass]]!" is ''not'' a positive compliment."
compliment.
-->'''Chrissie''':"Aaand...Aaand...what's wrong with telling you that you have a squishy butt?"
butt?
-->'''Allura''':"The The fact that it's sickening, disturbing, and otherwise morally-wrong. (''sighs'') But, then again, I'm talking to a girl that I can't even spank anymore if she misbehaves because [[TooKinkyToTorture she loves masochism!]]"masochism!]]
-->'''Chrissie''':
-->'''Allura''':
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-->'''Chrissie''': "Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I am-"
-->'''Allura''': "The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you..."
-->'''Chrissie''': "But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now."
-->'''Allura''': "The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you..."
-->'''Chrissie''': "But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now."
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-->'''Chrissie''': "Mother, Mother, I know my attitude has changed considerably since we first [[spoiler:left this planet]], but....it's a part of me. It's part of who I am-"
am-
-->'''Allura''':"The The way you are now...it wasn't ''supposed'' to be a part of you..."
you...
-->'''Chrissie''':"But But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now."
-->'''Allura''':
-->'''Chrissie''':
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* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other ("The Twelve Dimensions", which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The (''The First Story"), Story''), but the other ("The (''The Twelve Dimensions", Dimensions'', which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this is not her natural color.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this is not isn't her natural color.
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A schoolgirl stalks the city streets, trying to destroy a deadly evil whilst hiding under a lilac cover...
Her daughter lies awake at night, pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
And a little girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
Her daughter lies awake at night, pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
And a little girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
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A story about three girls:
* A schoolgirl who stalks the city streets, trying to destroy a deadly evil whilst hiding under a lilaccover...
cover...
* Herdaughter daughter, who lies awake at night, night pondering her fate as she sees a bizarre shadow following her everywhere...
everywhere...
* And alittle girl, child-girl, the daughter of two people who were never supposed to meet, who witnesses all the carnage with a strangely-calm disposition...
* A schoolgirl who stalks the city streets, trying to destroy a deadly evil whilst hiding under a lilac
* Her
* And a
* CrapsackWorld: Implied with Allura's comments in Chapter 1.
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* HetIsEw: Nadimia's parents are a girl...and another girl.
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* HetIsEw: Nadimia's parents are a girl...and another girl.pair of girls.
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* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (which ("The Twelve Dimensions", which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* ShoutOut: The doorbell and the "strange symbol on the wall".
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* ShoutOut: The doorbell and the "strange symbol on the wall".A few things.
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''[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused with]] [[http://www.amazon.com/Reason-Why-Story-Charge-Brigade/dp/0140012788 the nonfiction book about the Light Brigade]], the [[http://books.google.com/books?id=jkI1AAAAMAAJ&printsec=frontcover&dq=%22The+Reason+Why%22&source=bl&ots=0zGmavESga&sig=cjMuP8m24YgBmA6auZ99NverBEk&hl=en&ei=fOxxTNPcJ8L48AaAtJiDDQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=8&ved=0CDQQ6AEwBzgK#v=onepage&q&f=false "Story of Fact and Fiction" by Ernest Emory Russell]], the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Reason_Why music album by Little Big Town]], or a couple of websites called "The Reason Why".''
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. As of now the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] It also has a CharacterSheet, which is over [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here.]]
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. As of now the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] It also has a CharacterSheet, which is over The CharacterSheet can be viewed [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here.]]
here]].
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by -- and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to -- [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. As of now the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] It also has a CharacterSheet, which is over [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here.]]
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Story from Tropers/WarioBarker, inspired by -- and (and uploaded in Fall 2009 as a response to -- to) [[http://mr-xvious.deviantart.com/art/Why-142739327 this artwork.]] Originally intended as a simple oneshot, positive reception caused a second chapter to be uploaded later, with more to come. As of now the first two chapters are up, which can be viewed [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-1-143077530 here]] and [[http://danielbenfield.deviantart.com/art/The-Reason-Why-Chapter-2-157887232 here.]] It also has a CharacterSheet, which is over [[Characters/TheReasonWhy here.]]
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* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (which sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release -- — and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Allura's hair is lilac, although this is not her natural color.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: When she is first seen, Allura's hair is lilac, although this is not her natural color.
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''Not to be confused with [[http://www.amazon.com/Reason-Why-Story-Charge-Brigade/dp/0140012788 the nonfiction book about the Light Brigade]], the [[http://books.google.com/books?id=jkI1AAAAMAAJ&printsec=frontcover&dq=%22The+Reason+Why%22&source=bl&ots=0zGmavESga&sig=cjMuP8m24YgBmA6auZ99NverBEk&hl=en&ei=fOxxTNPcJ8L48AaAtJiDDQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=8&ved=0CDQQ6AEwBzgK#v=onepage&q&f=false "Story of Fact and Fiction" by Ernest Emory Russell]], the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Reason_Why music album by Little Big Town]], or a couple of websites called "The Reason Why".''
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''Not to be confused with [[http://www.amazon.com/Reason-Why-Story-Charge-Brigade/dp/0140012788 the nonfiction book about the Light Brigade]], the [[http://books.google.com/books?id=jkI1AAAAMAAJ&printsec=frontcover&dq=%22The+Reason+Why%22&source=bl&ots=0zGmavESga&sig=cjMuP8m24YgBmA6auZ99NverBEk&hl=en&ei=fOxxTNPcJ8L48AaAtJiDDQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=8&ved=0CDQQ6AEwBzgK#v=onepage&q&f=false "Story of Fact and Fiction" by Ernest Emory Russell]], the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Reason_Why music album by Little Big Town]], or a couple of websites called "The Reason Why".''
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-->'''Chrissie''': "But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[MediumAwareness cha--person]] than I am now."
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-->'''Chrissie''': "But if I left that behind, I would be a much flatter [[MediumAwareness [[FourthWallObserver cha--person]] than I am now."
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* CurseCutShort: Done many a time with Chrissie.
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* CurseCutShort: Done many a time with Chrissie.Chrissie, thanks to Allura.
* HotMom: Allura.
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia.
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (which sets-up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release.
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (which sets-up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release.
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Girl]]: Nadimia.
Nadimia, since Allura has gone a bit off due to Chrissie (who is ''entirely'' off-kilter).
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (whichsets-up sets up a sizable chunk of Allura and Chrissie's backstory) never saw release.release -- and, indeed, a majority of it was never written.
* ParallelPornTitles: The original version of Chapter 2 had a small bit where Chrissie looked through TV listings and read off four "alternative" titles, two of which mimicked the titles of stories the author had previously written. The author had published one ("The First Story"), but the other (which