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* BadDreams: Kestral starts having them in ''The Eastern Realm''.
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* EyesNeverLie: In ''Velvet Battlefield'' and a few other stories published since, this is often the only way other characters (usually Kestral) can tell what Hakim is thinking, [[TheStoic since it's the only part of his facial expression he can't control]].
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* WindowsOfTheSoul: In ''Velvet Battlefield'' and a few other stories published since, this is often the only way other characters (usually Kestral) can tell what Hakim is thinking, [[TheStoic since it's the only part of his facial expression he can't control]].
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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Marcus finally proposes to Alandra in ''Friendly Fire''.]] [[CaptainObvious She says yes.]]
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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Marcus finally proposes to Alandra in ''Friendly Fire''.]] [[CaptainObvious She says yes.]]
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* ExactWords: In ''Loyalty and Legend'', a Janubian excavator manages to [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome trick Sabatt into leaving without telling a single lie about the situation]].
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** In ''Friendly Fire'': [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean "You look somewhat familiar. Have I burned down your camp before?"]] Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Marcus since he's concussed and tied up at the time.
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** In ''Friendly Fire'': [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean "You look somewhat familiar. Have I burned down your camp before?"]] Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Marcus since he's is concussed and tied up at the time.
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* WelcomeBackTraitor: Elias is accepted back into the ranks after his betrayal, as in canon. [[TheScrappy He's still ignored.]]
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* WelcomeBackTraitor: Elias is accepted back into the ranks after his betrayal, as in canon. [[TheScrappy He's still ignored.]]
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In consequence, this game has attracted a small[[note]]okay, minuscule[[/note]] fandom on [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] that focuses around the adventures of the various knights. All the stories in the archive form a reasonably tight continuity, resulting in unusually consistent {{fanon}} and {{shipping}}. As such, they can effectively be considered one multi-author work.
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In consequence, this game has attracted a small[[note]]okay, minuscule[[/note]] fandom on [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] Website/FanFictionDotNet that focuses around the adventures of the various knights. All the stories in the archive form a reasonably tight continuity, resulting in unusually consistent {{fanon}} and {{shipping}}. As such, they can effectively be considered one multi-author work.
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** In ''Friendly Fire'': [[PiratesOfTheCaribbean "You look somewhat familiar. Have I burned down your camp before?"]] Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Marcus since he's concussed and tied up at the time.
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** In ''Friendly Fire'': [[PiratesOfTheCaribbean [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean "You look somewhat familiar. Have I burned down your camp before?"]] Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Marcus since he's concussed and tied up at the time.
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In consequence, this game has attracted a small[[hottip:*:okay, minuscule]] small[[note]]okay, minuscule[[/note]] fandom on [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] that focuses around the adventures of the various knights. All the stories in the archive form a reasonably tight continuity, resulting in unusually consistent {{fanon}} and {{shipping}}. As such, they can effectively be considered one multi-author work.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeology: Lampshaded. As we all know, Titanium is the strongest wood of all!!
** Recent episodes reveal that the second-strongest wood of all is Uranium.
** Recent episodes reveal that the second-strongest wood of all is Uranium.
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* YouFailGeologyForever: The underground scenes in ''Loyalty and Legend''.
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In consequence, this game has attracted a small[[hottip:*:okay, miniscule]] minuscule]] fandom on [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] that focuses around the adventures of the various knights. All the stories in the archive form a reasonably tight continuity, resulting in unusually consistent {{fanon}} and {{shipping}}. As such, they can effectively be considered one multi-author work.
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* TheArcher: Kestral, but [[{{Tsundere}} subverted in terms of characterisation]].
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* DramaticShattering: Hakim drops a teapot in ''So Much We Share''. [[BetterThanItSounds It's more dramatic than it sounds.]]
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* DramaticShattering: Hakim drops a teapot in ''So Much We Share''. [[BetterThanItSounds It's more dramatic than it sounds.]]
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* {{Nakama}}: The Knights of Darion, [[FireForgedFriends though it takes a long time for some of them to stop trying to kill each other]].
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* ThirdActMisunderstanding: ''Loyalty and Legend'', except it's not the discovery of [[spoiler:Hakim's identity]] that causes Kestral to become utterly furious at him, but the fact that he's [[spoiler:been manipulating her and her {{Nakama}} for the past year.]]
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* ThirdActMisunderstanding: ''Loyalty and Legend'', except it's not the discovery of [[spoiler:Hakim's identity]] that causes Kestral to become utterly furious at him, but the fact that he's [[spoiler:been manipulating her and her {{Nakama}} TrueCompanions for the past year.]] ]]
* TrueCompanions: The Knights of Darion, [[FireForgedFriends though it takes a long time for some of them to stop trying to kill each other]].
* TrueCompanions: The Knights of Darion, [[FireForgedFriends though it takes a long time for some of them to stop trying to kill each other]].
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Elias takes trading to insane levels in ''Bragging Rights'', proving once and for all he's not a [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway wimp]].
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* SerialEscalation: Elias takes trading to insane levels in ''Bragging Rights'', proving once and for all he's not a wimp.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome
** Alandra's speech in Gran Lorcha in ''New Alliances''.
** The final showdown in ''Velvet Battlefield'', where Kestral absolutely thrashes her [[NewOldFlame old boyfriend]] in a duel.
** Milo saving Hakim in the same story.
** Hakim trouncing Thordal in an arm-wrestle in ''Nobody Calls Me Chicken''.
** Marcus' rescue of Alandra while completely defying her orders in ''Hopeless Sincerity''.
** In ''Friendly Fire'', Marcus manages to sass a 'bandit leader', fight several more bandits and [[spoiler:propose to Alandra]] all ''with a concussion''.
** Crimson Sabatt is a walking CMOA, particuarly in ''The Eastern Realm''.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny
** Any time Kestral and Crimson Sabatt open their mouths in each other's presence.
** Pretty much the entire of ''Nobody Calls Me Chicken''.
** The other knights' reactions to Elias' story in ''Bragging Rights''.
** The tent falling on Marcus in ''The Eastern Realm''.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming
** Marcus' extreme protectiveness in ''New Alliances''. Aww.
** The [[spoiler:proposal]] scene in ''Friendly Fire''. Double awwwww.
** Hakim and Kestral have plenty of these in ''Velvet Battlefield''.
** Alandra's speech in Gran Lorcha in ''New Alliances''.
** The final showdown in ''Velvet Battlefield'', where Kestral absolutely thrashes her [[NewOldFlame old boyfriend]] in a duel.
** Milo saving Hakim in the same story.
** Hakim trouncing Thordal in an arm-wrestle in ''Nobody Calls Me Chicken''.
** Marcus' rescue of Alandra while completely defying her orders in ''Hopeless Sincerity''.
** In ''Friendly Fire'', Marcus manages to sass a 'bandit leader', fight several more bandits and [[spoiler:propose to Alandra]] all ''with a concussion''.
** Crimson Sabatt is a walking CMOA, particuarly in ''The Eastern Realm''.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny
** Any time Kestral and Crimson Sabatt open their mouths in each other's presence.
** Pretty much the entire of ''Nobody Calls Me Chicken''.
** The other knights' reactions to Elias' story in ''Bragging Rights''.
** The tent falling on Marcus in ''The Eastern Realm''.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming
** Marcus' extreme protectiveness in ''New Alliances''. Aww.
** The [[spoiler:proposal]] scene in ''Friendly Fire''. Double awwwww.
** Hakim and Kestral have plenty of these in ''Velvet Battlefield''.
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* BatmanGambit: Manipulation is Hakim's specialty; ''New Alliances'' probably being his MostTriumphantExample when he's ''barely in it''. He's so good he only has to appear in one scene to pull off the gambit of the century.
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* BatmanGambit: Manipulation is Hakim's specialty; ''New Alliances'' probably being his MostTriumphantExample best example when he's ''barely in it''. He's so good he only has to appear in one scene to pull off the gambit of the century.
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** [[DoctorWho Fan]]''[[DoctorWho tas]]''[[DoctorWho tic]].
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** [[DoctorWho Fan]]''[[DoctorWho tas]]''[[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Fan]]''[[Series/DoctorWho tas]]''[[Series/DoctorWho tic]].
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* TheCombatPragmatist: Crimson Sabatt.
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* CheerfulChild: Sophie, Marcus' younger sister.
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* IsThatCuteKidYours?: Played with in ''Cutesy Face''. Kestral knows perfectly well it isn't, but she likes messing with Alandra's head.
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* PuppyDogEyes: A favourite trick of Sophie, Marcus' younger sister. She calls it her "cutesy face". It doesn't work on Sabatt.
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* BlastingItOutOfTheirHands: Kestral pulls this off to [[spoiler:Sabatt]] in ''Loyalty and Legend'', [[AccidentalAimingSkills but she was actually trying to kill them]].
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* MessyHair: Kestral. She often doesn't even bother brushing it.
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* TwiceShy: Marcus and Alandra. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Thordal in ''Friendly Fire''.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Possibly the writers' favourite type of relationship.
** [[spoiler:Sabatt]] and Kestral, once they stop trying to kill each other.
** Marcus and Kestral also have their moments.
** Marcus and Jakob in ''Overture''.
** [[spoiler:Sabatt]] and Kestral, once they stop trying to kill each other.
** Marcus and Kestral also have their moments.
** Marcus and Jakob in ''Overture''.
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* WindowsOfTheSoul: In ''Velvet Battlefield'' and a few other stories published since, this is often the only way other characters (usually Kestral) can tell what Hakim is thinking, [[TheStoic since it's the only part of his facial expression he can't control]].
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* DramaticShattering: Hakim drops a teapot in ''So Much We Share''. [[BetterThanItSounds It's more dramatic than it sounds.]]
* HeyYouHaymaker: Marcus in ''The Mathematics of Deceit''.
* ItsASmallWorldAfterAll: In ''So Much We Share''. [[LampshadeHanging It's even in the title.]]
* [[HeroStoleMyBike Marcus Stole My Horse]]
* RoadBlock: In ''The Mathematics of Deceit''. They jump over it.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: In ''The Mathematics of Deceit''. [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Suuuure she isn't, Marcus.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler:Marcus to Alandra]] in ''Loyalty and Legend''.
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* WillNotTellALie: The Janubian race as a whole; though they will use ExactWords.
** Bizarrely, despite his facade of following this trope, Hakim actually does lie. [[InformedAbility On a regular basis.]]
** Bizarrely, despite his facade of following this trope, Hakim actually does lie. [[InformedAbility On a regular basis.]]
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* BadDreams: Kestral starts having them in ''The Eastern Realm''.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler:Marcus to Alandra]] in ''Loyalty and Legend''.
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** [[spoiler:Kestral]] also gives [[spoiler:Hakim]] one in ''Loyalty and Legend'', except it's more like a [[MegatonPunch Armor Piercing Punch To The Jaw]].
* BatmanGambit: Manipulation is Hakim's specialty; ''New Alliances'' probably being his MostTriumphantExample when he's ''barely in it''. He's so good he only has to appear in one scene to pull off the gambit of the century.
** And in ''Loyalty and Legend'', she hits Sabatt's weapon and knocks it out of her hand while she's mid-thrust. That was her ''missing''.
** And then she does it to ''herself'' in ''Loyalty and Legend''. [[SarcasmMode Squashing someone's injured arm while hugging them is really conductive to romance, Kes.]]
* {{Nakama}}: The Knights of Darion, [[FireForgedFriends though it takes a long time for some of them to stop trying to kill each other]].
* {{Nakama}}: The Knights of Darion, [[FireForgedFriends though it takes a long time for some of them to stop trying to kill each other]].
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Subverted in “The Meltdown”. Elias and Thordal treat it like a tabletop roleplay. [[RuleOfFun And it's much more fun that way.]]
* SnowballFight: In “The Meltdown”, though it's not the main plot point. [[StraightMan Hakim]] gets the worst of it, naturally.
* SnowballFight: In “The Meltdown”, though it's not the main plot point. [[StraightMan Hakim]] gets the worst of it, naturally.
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* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Kestral and the other knights ''plan'' this for Marcus and Alandra, but for once the UnspokenPlanGuarantee doesn't work. [[spoiler:They get together immediately after the botched plan anyway.]]
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* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Kestral and the other knights ''plan'' this for Marcus and Alandra, but for once the UnspokenPlanGuarantee doesn't work. [[spoiler:They get together immediately after the botched plan anyway.]]
* ThirdActMisunderstanding: ''Loyalty and Legend'', except it's not the discovery of [[spoiler:Hakim's identity]] that causes Kestral to become utterly furious at him, but the fact that he's [[spoiler:been manipulating her and her {{Nakama}} for the past year.]]
* ThirdActMisunderstanding: ''Loyalty and Legend'', except it's not the discovery of [[spoiler:Hakim's identity]] that causes Kestral to become utterly furious at him, but the fact that he's [[spoiler:been manipulating her and her {{Nakama}} for the past year.]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: Kestral is the Betty and Sabatt is the Veronica for Hakim early in the timeline, although Kestral would probably be the Veronica if opposing almost anyone else. [[spoiler:He picks Kestral.]]
* TheCombatPragmatist: Crimson Sabatt.
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* LoveConfession: [[spoiler:Marcus finally proposes to Alandra in ''Friendly Fire''.]] ''[[CannotSpitItOut Finally.]]''
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* CombatByChampion: In ''Loyalty and Legend''.
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* IronicEcho: "Your concern is most touching."touching," in ''The Mathematics of Deceit''.
** Also "Everyone has their price" in ''Of Folly and Flight'' and ''Loyalty and Legend'', doubling as a CallBack.
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* GetItOverWith: Marcus to Sabatt in ''The Mathematics of Deceit''.
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* IronicEcho: "Your concern is most touching."