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* FandomSpecificPlot: The sequel is a submit-your-own-OC fic.
* FreudianSlip: She wears a black shi(r)t.
* FreudianSlip: She wears a black shi(r)t.
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* TrollFic: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911625/8/Totl_Drana_The_Pays_Taht_Phraxe Confirmed.]]
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You can read the fic here[[https://web.archive.org/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz]]
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You can read the fic here[[https://web.[[http://web.archive.org/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz]]org/web/20120409081918/https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz here]].
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%%* AnythingThatMoves: Jasmine
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What ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho.
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What ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''Franchise/HarryPotter'', ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho.
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What ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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What ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
Tansho.
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* UnfortunateNames: One character in the sequel is named Anna Van ''Dyke.''
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* SuddenlySexuality:
** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of Jasmine.
** Jasmine herself originally thinks "kissin gurlz is gros" and kisses Bridgette the very next chapter.
** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of Jasmine.
** Jasmine herself originally thinks "kissin gurlz is gros" and kisses Bridgette the very next chapter.
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Found the fic through the wayback machine, you can read it all, I made sure before I added the link
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You could read the fic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz here.]], but it's been taken down.
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You could can read the fic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz here.]], but it's been taken down.
here[[https://web.archive.org/s/6911582/1/The_phrase_taht_paiz]]
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Jasmine is pregnant for two days.
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* YouFailBiologyForever: Jasmine is pregnant for two days.
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** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
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** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
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What ''MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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What ''MyImmortal'' ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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** The sequel has two more examples: Mary Natalie Samantha Isabella Stacy Candy Mindy Mandy Jessica Solange Loreley Sue Perfect (dubbed "Bitchwipe") and Alan Fisherman Muzic Aladdin [[MyImmortal Raven Way.]]
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** The sequel has two more examples: Mary Natalie Samantha Isabella Stacy Candy Mindy Mandy Jessica Solange Loreley Sue Perfect (dubbed "Bitchwipe") and Alan Fisherman Muzic Aladdin [[MyImmortal [[Fanfic/MyImmortal Raven Way.]]
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%%* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Bridgette.
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Misuse. You Gotta Have Blue Hair is about an artistic convention where a large portion of the cast have unnatural hair colors to help the audience tell the characters apart.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Jasmine's hair has purple and blue streaks. And it lookz wai cooler than Gwen's hair.
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Commented out Zero Context Examples and removed Word Cruft. Fixed Example Indentation. Misuse of Small Name Big Ego; wiki policy forbids troping real people. Examples Are Not Arguable means, among other things, \"Don\'t speculate.\" The \"reviewers\" example of This Loser Is You is misuse.
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* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: And the fic is rated ''K.''
* AnythingThatMoves: Jasmine
* AnythingThatMoves: Jasmine
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* AuthorAvatar: Jasmine.
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* BreakTheCutie: Gwen.
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* DearNegativeReader: This happens often.
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* DramaticEllipsis: In Chapter 7.
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Bridgette.
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* FollowTheLeader: Or more, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6532194/1/ThE_PHRasE_ThAt_pAys bash the leader]].
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* KilledOffForReal: Possibly [[ButtMonkey Gwen,]] who has not appeared since she died in chapter 10.
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* TheQuietOne: Anna from the sequel.
* RandomEventsPlot: And how.
* RandomEventsPlot: And how.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: But of course!
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: "Gasp" I gaspdd.
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: "Gasp" I gaspdd.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: But of course!
The spelling is [[TrollFic intentionally]] horrid.
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** "Gasp" I gaspdd.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: The author. Oh so much.
* SuddenlySexuality: [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
** Possibly Jasmine herself, who originally thinks "kissin gurlz is gros" and kisses Bridgette the very next chapter.
* ThisLoserIsYou: If AlternateCharacterInterpretation works as the same way as in MyImmortal, Jasmine is a parody of Duncan fangirls.
** Also, the reviewers who try to argue with the author.
** The entire fic seems to be a parody of OC fics, self-insert or otherwise.
* SuddenlySexuality: [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
** Possibly Jasmine herself, who originally thinks "kissin gurlz is gros" and kisses Bridgette the very next chapter.
* ThisLoserIsYou: If AlternateCharacterInterpretation works as the same way as in MyImmortal, Jasmine is a parody of Duncan fangirls.
** Also, the reviewers who try to argue with the author.
** The entire fic seems to be a parody of OC fics, self-insert or otherwise.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: The author. Oh so much.
* SuddenlySexuality:SuddenlySexuality:
** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
**Possibly Jasmine herself, who herself originally thinks "kissin gurlz is gros" and kisses Bridgette the very next chapter.
* ThisLoserIsYou:If AlternateCharacterInterpretation works as the same way as in MyImmortal, Jasmine is a parody of Duncan fangirls.
** Also, the reviewers who try to argue with the author.
** The entire fic seems to be a parody of OC fics, self-insert or otherwise.fangirls.
* SuddenlySexuality:
** [[AmbiguouslyGay Noah]] becomes "strait" and Bridgette suddenly decides she's a lesbian because of [[RelationshipSue Jasmine.]]
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* ThisLoserIsYou:
** Also, the reviewers who try to argue with the author.
** The entire fic seems to be a parody of OC fics, self-insert or otherwise.
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* YaoiFangirl: Jasmine.
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* GratuitousGerman: "Ja" being used in Chapter 1.
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* GratuitousGerman: GratuitousGerman:
** "Ja" being used in Chapter 1.
** "Ja" being used in Chapter 1.
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* FreudWasRight: The volcano.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Averted when Ezakill [[spoiler: kills her girlfrond Brig, and then starts to make out with Jasmine]].
* OneSceneWonder: Gwen shows up in Chapters 2, 4, and 10 and is never seen again.
** Justin is in chapter 6 for some reason, [[KilledOffForReal dies]], and is never seen again.
* OverlyLongName: Guess who.
* OneSceneWonder: Gwen shows up in Chapters 2, 4, and 10 and is never seen again.
** Justin is in chapter 6 for some reason, [[KilledOffForReal dies]], and is never seen again.
* OverlyLongName: Guess who.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Averted when Ezakill [[spoiler: kills her girlfrond Brig, and then starts to make out with Jasmine]].
* OneSceneWonder: Gwen shows up in Chapters 2, 4, and 10 and is never seen again.
OverlyLongName:
**Justin is in chapter 6 for some reason, [[KilledOffForReal dies]], and is never seen again.
* OverlyLongName: Guess who.the original story has the protagonist, Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho.
* OneSceneWonder: Gwen shows up in Chapters 2, 4, and 10 and is never seen again.
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* OverlyLongName: Guess who.
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* TrollFic
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911625/8/Totl_Drana_The_Pays_Taht_Phraxe Confirmed.]]
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911625/8/Totl_Drana_The_Pays_Taht_Phraxe Confirmed.]]
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* TrollFic
**TrollFic: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911625/8/Totl_Drana_The_Pays_Taht_Phraxe Confirmed.]]
**
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What ''MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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What ''MyImmortal'' is to Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland.''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama Island.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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What ''MyImmortal'' is to HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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What ''MyImmortal'' is to HarryPotter, Franchise/HarryPotter, ''The Phrase That Pais'' is to ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland.'' It's a fic that follows the adventures of [[MarySue Jasmine Alice Canary Ramirez Tansho]].
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Noah breaks up with Cody because "he wuss bein a douche n had a bad hairctu."
* AudioErotica: Duncan, evidently.
* AudioErotica: Duncan, evidently.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Noah breaks up with Cody because "he wuss bein a douche n had a bad hairctu."
* AudioErotica: Duncan, evidently.
* AudioErotica: Duncan, evidently.
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Cleanup project — only use this when it happens in-universe.
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[[AndTheFandomRejoiced The fic has ended,]] but a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6911625/1/Totl_Drana_The_Pays_Taht_Phraxe sequel]] is in the works.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Jasmine's hair has purple and blue streaks. And it lookz wai cooler than Gwen's hair.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Jasmine's hair has purple and blue streaks. And it lookz wai cooler than Gwen's hair.hair.
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]], but it's been taken down.
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* IGotBetter: Bitchwipe dies once a chapter. She's always alive again at the beginning of the next one.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Bitchwipe dies once a chapter. She's always alive again at the beginning of the next one.
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* DesignatedVillain: Gwen.
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* HoYay: Noah and Cody.
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* LesYay: Jasmine/Bridgette in Chapter 5.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: The fic is rated K. The ''second word'' in the first chapter is "bitchez."
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* ShoutOut: At one point while trying to apologize to Jasmine, Duncan calls her "Jasmine Alice [[{{Fanfic.StarkitsProphecy}} Starkit]] Ramirez Tansho".
