History Fanfic / MedicinalLullaby

22nd Aug '15 7:08:23 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Naruto [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] that this is how Sasuke behaves during his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
22nd Aug '15 7:02:24 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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* WriterOnBoard: While it doesn't derail her writing, Shivakashi's preferences shine through pretty strongly in the fic: she doesn't like Sasuke and has a dim opinion of the way he's EasilyForgiven in canon, leading to [[spoiler:Naruto eventually facing him, telling him he's "tired of him" and crushing him, with Sakura [[SlashedThroat finishing him off]]]], although she still allows him to be appropriately BadAss; and she doesn't consider Hinata's ShrinkingViolet character and [[CannotSpitItOut inability to Spit It Out]] a good match for Naruto (the fic was written before [[WhamEpisode chapter 437 of the manga]]) and thinks it fair that she simply misses her chance with him when [[spoiler:he and Sakura become lovers]].
27th Apr '15 10:43:45 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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Epic in scope, the story goes well beyond the bounds of the ''Naruto'' manga, following the characters through over a decade of their lives. The story tracks Naruto's growth as not only a father, but as a ninja and eventually as Konoha's greatest champion and defender. Spanning 38 chapters and still incomplete, the story is currently on indefinite hiatus due to a combination of real life events putting the author under pressure and [[JumpingTheShark baffled bewilderment at the direction the actual series has gone in]] sapping her enthusiasm for writing. Hopefully it will some day be resumed.

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Epic in scope, the story goes well beyond the bounds of the ''Naruto'' manga, following the characters through over a decade of their lives. The story tracks Naruto's growth as not only a father, but as a ninja and eventually as Konoha's greatest champion and defender. Spanning 38 chapters and still incomplete, the story is currently on indefinite hiatus due to a combination of real life events putting the author under pressure and [[JumpingTheShark baffled bewilderment at the direction the actual series has gone in]] sapping her enthusiasm for writing. Hopefully After more than 5 years, it will some day seems to be resumed.
sadly [[DeadFic dead]].


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* DeadFic: Not updated since April 2010, nor has Shivakashi written anything else. It's dead.
15th Apr '14 12:04:07 PM Catbert
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* HotDad: Chapter 9 is called 'Girls like Boys with Babies'. It's practically a RunningGag that fatherhood has made Naruto ''extremely'' attractive to the women in the series. He even has "a brief, horrifying insight" of Hitomi's friend Leela coming on to him when she reaches her teenage years.
11th Nov '13 10:07:37 AM MacronNotes
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* StrangeGirl: Hitomi again; her biggest complaint about ikebana classes at the academy is that she's not allowed to eat the flowers.
24th Feb '13 1:50:35 PM Minni128
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** ArtisticLicenseBiology: Contraception does not work that way. PHYSICAL contraceptives such as condoms prevent the sperm from even reaching the egg to fertilise it, but chemical ones like the Pill (which is the kind Kensha was on) actually inhibit ovulation, so there isn't even an egg for the sperm to fertilise. Of course, that's not to say that, since ''Naruto'' is a fictional series set in an alternate pseudo-mediaeval-Japanese-supernatural setting, she wasn't on some kind of fictional contraceptive which would justify this.

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** ArtisticLicenseBiology: Contraception does not work that way. PHYSICAL contraceptives such as condoms prevent the sperm from even reaching the egg to fertilise it, but chemical ones like the Pill (which is the kind Kensha was on) actually inhibit ovulation, so there isn't even an egg for the sperm to fertilise. fertilise (should the condom slip or break). Of course, that's not to say that, since ''Naruto'' is a fictional series set in an alternate pseudo-mediaeval-Japanese-supernatural setting, she wasn't on some kind of fictional contraceptive which would justify this.this and neither are fail-safe but still doesn't work this way in the circumstances.
18th Jan '13 8:47:19 PM DVB
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** However, there is a manner that the Kyuubi could have influenced it. The Kyuubi's ''Yang'' Chakra was sealed in Naruto. Yang Chakra is associated with promoting and giving life. It would make sense for the chakra to reverse the inhibition caused by the contraceptive.
20th Jul '12 7:30:10 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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\n* YouNeedToGetLaid: Madara claims he believed Sasuke did, which is why he [[spoiler:didn't tell Sasuke he was sterile while he was trying to father a child on Karin.]] Sasuke is ''not happy'' when he finds out.
-->'''Madara:''' Besides, I thought you could do with a little sex—
-->'''Sasuke:''' ARE YOU SHITTING ME?
20th Jul '12 7:13:59 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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* FantasticArousal: Non-sexual example; stroking the "whisker marks" on Naruto's and Hitomi's cheeks is soothing to them, causing them to purr contentedly.
1st Jul '12 8:46:51 PM ArcaneAzmadi
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* LittleBitBeastly: Hitomi is born with more noticeable inhuman features than Naruto, such as rapidly developing claws and fangs, as well as the trademark "whisker marks". Naruto also becomes slightly more inhuman as his power develops (in-series he only displays these traits while actually channeling the Kyuubi's chakra) and Sakura notes that his behavior is at times more animalistic- specifically [[spoiler:when they're having sex.]]
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