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%%* ThatsWhatSheSaid: The Situation, [[CatchPhrase all the time]].
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%%* ThatsWhatSheSaid: The Situation, [[CatchPhrase all the time]].time.
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ZCE comment-outs.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: [[spoiler: [[DepravedHomosexual Garfiel]]]], to Edward.
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* AlcoholHic: Edward, all the time. [[spoiler: Winry too, actually]].
* AlmightyJanitor: Liza Hawkeye. Lampshaded in Chapter 21:
-->'''Roy''': How is it that I'm a higher rank than you?
-->'''Liza''': Not a day goes by where I don't ask myself that same question, sir.
* AlmightyJanitor: Liza Hawkeye. Lampshaded in Chapter 21:
-->'''Roy''': How is it that I'm a higher rank than you?
-->'''Liza''': Not a day goes by where I don't ask myself that same question, sir.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking
* BerserkButton: Surprisingly, there's been but one joke related to Ed's height. He actually calls ''himself'' short. He doesn't react well.
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** En...er, "Spam" really seems to hate it when people [[DudeLooksLikeALady mistake him for a girl]].
* BlackComedy: Big time. There have been jokes made about underage drinking, steroid use, eating disorders, and Ling's opium.
* ButtMonkey: Alphonse, though Edward himself is certainly not exempt.
** Spam definitely counts, considering he's pretty much always the butt of a gender-confusion/gay joke or getting hacked (or otherwise injured) by Ling.
* TheChewToy: Edward, definitely.
** Also, Tom.
* BlackComedy: Big time. There have been jokes made about underage drinking, steroid use, eating disorders, and Ling's opium.
* ButtMonkey: Alphonse, though Edward himself is certainly not exempt.
** Spam definitely counts, considering he's pretty much always the butt of a gender-confusion/gay joke or getting hacked (or otherwise injured) by Ling.
* TheChewToy: Edward, definitely.
** Also, Tom.
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** En...er, "Spam" Spam really seems to hate it when people [[DudeLooksLikeALady mistake him for a girl]].
* BlackComedy:Big time. There have been jokes made about underage drinking, steroid use, eating disorders, and Ling's opium.
* ButtMonkey:Alphonse, though Edward himself is certainly not exempt.
** Spam definitely counts, considering he'sSpam's pretty much always the butt of a gender-confusion/gay joke or getting hacked (or otherwise injured) by Ling.
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* DepravedHomosexual: [[spoiler: Garfiel]].
* TheDitz: Ed, but that's mostly due to being drunk.
** Winry too. And Pinako.
*** Tom. Just Tom.
* TheDitz: Ed, but that's mostly due to being drunk.
** Winry too. And Pinako.
*** Tom. Just Tom.
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* FunnyForeigner: Ling. Dear God, just Ling.
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Ling, apparently.
* IllTellYouWhenIveHadEnough: Guess who?
-->"Hey ID. You saw my old man!"
* IllTellYouWhenIveHadEnough: Guess who?
-->"Hey ID. You saw my old man!"
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* {{Jerkass}}: Ed, ''especially'' towards [[{{Buttmonkey}} Alphonse]].
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* MyEyesAreUpHere: [[strike: Lust]] STD has this problem with [[AllMenArePerverts Roy and Havoc]].
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* ShoutOut: There are quite a few of these in the story
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** A notable one is made at Music/JustinBieber too.
** And ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
* ThanksForTheMammary: Roy's attempt to get STD's Internet...
* ThatsWhatSheSaid: The Situation, [[CatchPhrase all the time]].
* [[HollywoodTourettes Tourettes]] [[SoundEffectBleep S*** C**k]] [[HollywoodTourettes Syndrome]]: Izumi.
* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[note]]According to the standards of feng shui[[/note]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.]]
** And ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
* ThanksForTheMammary: Roy's attempt to get STD's Internet...
* ThatsWhatSheSaid: The Situation, [[CatchPhrase all the time]].
* [[HollywoodTourettes Tourettes]] [[SoundEffectBleep S*** C**k]] [[HollywoodTourettes Syndrome]]: Izumi.
* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[note]]According to the standards of feng shui[[/note]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.]]
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%%* ThanksForTheMammary: Roy's attempt to get STD's Internet...
* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[note]]According to the standards of feng shui[[/note]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.
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** "{{Thats what she said}}" for [[strike: Greed]] The Situation.
** "{{Thats what she said}}" for [[strike: Greed]] The Situation.
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** The author punishes ''herself'' after a [[HurricaneOfPuns Firestorm of]] [[IncrediblyLamePun Incredibly Lame Fire-puns]] by ''reading'' ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''!
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** The author punishes ''herself'' after a [[HurricaneOfPuns Firestorm of]] [[IncrediblyLamePun Incredibly Firestorm]] of [[LamePunReaction Lame Fire-puns]] by ''reading'' ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''!''Literature/TheTwilightSaga''!
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* {{For Inconvenience Press One}}: ForInconveniencePressOne: Poor Hughes...
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* IllTellYouWhenIveHadEnough: [[CaptainObvious Guess who?]]
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* IllTellYouWhenIveHadEnough: [[CaptainObvious Guess who?]]who?
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* TakeThat: Many, ''many'' examples of this toward ''Series/TwoAndAHalfMen''. The author [[CaptainObvious probably doesn't like the show]].
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* TakeThat: Many, ''many'' examples of this toward ''Series/TwoAndAHalfMen''. The author [[CaptainObvious probably doesn't like the show]].show.
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** And ''{{Twilight}}''
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** And ''{{Twilight}}''''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
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-->'''Roy''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny I put a band-aid on it]].
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-->'''Roy''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments I put a band-aid on it]].
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* AdaptationNameChange: The Homunculi are given the names of "modern" sins. Lust becomes STD, Gluttony becomes Fatass, Envy becomes Spam, Greed becomes The Situation...
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** Or [[strike: Greed]] [[JerseyShore The Situation]].
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** Or [[strike: Greed]] [[JerseyShore [[Series/JerseyShore The Situation]].
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* TakeThat: Many, ''many'' examples of this toward ''TwoAndAHalfMen''. The author [[CaptainObvious probably doesn't like the show]].
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* TakeThat: Many, ''many'' examples of this toward ''TwoAndAHalfMen''.''Series/TwoAndAHalfMen''. The author [[CaptainObvious probably doesn't like the show]].
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** [[SoylentGreen "OREGANO IS PEOPLE!"]]
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** [[SoylentGreen [[Film/SoylentGreen "OREGANO IS PEOPLE!"]]
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* [[TourettesShitcockSyndrome Tourettes]] [[SoundEffectBleep S*** C**k]] [[TourettesShitcockSyndrome Syndrome]]: Izumi.
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* [[TourettesShitcockSyndrome [[HollywoodTourettes Tourettes]] [[SoundEffectBleep S*** C**k]] [[TourettesShitcockSyndrome [[HollywoodTourettes Syndrome]]: Izumi.
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* {{Buttmonkey}}: Alphonse, though Edward himself is certainly not exempt.
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** Don't forget [[{{Futurama}} Bender!Al]]
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** Don't forget [[{{Futurama}} [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender!Al]]
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: [[spoiler: [[DepravedHomosexual Garfeil]]]], to Edward.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: [[spoiler: [[DepravedHomosexual Garfeil]]]], Garfiel]]]], to Edward.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[hottip:*:According to the standards of feng shui]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[hottip:*:According furniture[[note]]According to the standards of feng shui]], shui[[/note]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.]]
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''Fullmetal Lol'' is a particularly [[CrackFic crack-tastic]] {{fanfic}} by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/654657/Nimrochan Nimrochan]]. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5803816/1/Fullmetal_Lol here]]. Perhaps one of the best crack-fics written about the ''{{Fullmetal Alchemist}}'' series, the premise has Ed [[TheAlcoholic constantly drunk]] and Al as [[OnlySaneMan the only brother with the least bit of sense]], looking to discover the powers of the mysterious Internet. ItMakesSenseInContext...[[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext maybe]].
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''Fullmetal Lol'' is a particularly [[CrackFic crack-tastic]] {{fanfic}} by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/654657/Nimrochan Nimrochan]]. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5803816/1/Fullmetal_Lol here]]. Perhaps one of the best crack-fics written about the ''{{Fullmetal Alchemist}}'' ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' series, the premise has Ed [[TheAlcoholic constantly drunk]] and Al as [[OnlySaneMan the only brother with the least bit of sense]], looking to discover the powers of the mysterious Internet. ItMakesSenseInContext...[[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext maybe]].
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** Lan Fan and Fu are now {{Pokemon}}, apparently.
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** Lan Fan and Fu are now {{Pokemon}}, Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, apparently.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Roy Mustang is heavily affected by the balance of his office furniture[[hottip:*:According to the standards of feng shui]], and his subordinates use this against him a lot. [[spoiler: Then he discovers Pepto Bismol.]]
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** A notable one is made at JustinBieber too.
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** A notable one is made at JustinBieber Music/JustinBieber too.
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** Also, Tom.
* DepravedHomosexual: [[spoiler: Garfiel]].
** Though [[FridgeLogic considering that's a]] DeadUnicornTrope...
* NoIndoorVoice: MAJOR ALEXANDER LOUIS ARMSTRONG! But that's because of the steroids...
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** And ''Twilight''''{{Twilight}}''
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* TakeThat: Many, ''many'' examples of this toward ''TwoAndAHalfMen''. The author [[CaptainObvious probably doesn't like the show]].
** A notable one is made at JustinBieber too.
** And ''Twilight''
** A notable one is made at JustinBieber too.
** And ''Twilight''