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The summary of the story, copy-pasted everywhere you look, is: ''“Son, it’s about time I tell you how I met your mother.” “What…? It’s 2 AM!” A [=SilverspawnShipping=] dish with a moderate amount of LOL sauce''.
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The summary of the story, copy-pasted everywhere you look, is: ''“Son, it’s ''"Son, it's about time I tell you how I met your mother.” “What…? It’s " "What...? It's 2 AM!” AM!" A [=SilverspawnShipping=] dish with a moderate amount of LOL sauce''.
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Ariana basically starts her battle with Sird by spamming Synthesis to heal her Oddish as it keeps being hurt, even doing Sunny Day to make it more effective. [[FridgeBrilliance She also attempted to order]] [[EpicFail a Tackle against Starmie]]. [[spoiler: Then she ''evolves her Oddish mid-battle'' and retaliates with [[SuperweaponSurprise SolarBeam]], which is powered up by ''Sunny Day, of all things!'']] In the end, her Pokémon lost solely because of ''bad timing.''
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Ariana basically starts her battle with Sird by spamming Synthesis to heal her Oddish as it keeps being hurt, even doing Sunny Day to make it more effective. [[FridgeBrilliance She also attempted to order]] [[EpicFail a Tackle against Starmie]]. [[spoiler: Then she ''evolves her Oddish mid-battle'' and retaliates with [[SuperweaponSurprise SolarBeam]], which is powered up by ''Sunny Day, of all things!'']] In the end, her Pokémon lost solely because of ''bad timing.''
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* DishingOutDirt: The specialty of Viridian City's Gym are Ground Pokémon. [[spoiler: Don't trust that bit of information, or ''you're dead''.]]
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* DishingOutDirt: The specialty of Viridian City's Gym are Ground Pokémon. [[spoiler: Don't trust that bit of information, or ''you're dead''.]]
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships [[OlympusMons Arceus]] and is against Pokémon training, by the way.
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships [[OlympusMons Arceus]] and is against Pokémon training, by the way.
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokémon like [[Manga/PokemonAdventures Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokémon like [[Manga/PokemonAdventures Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Orm's presence is confirmed for a future chapter in the Author's Notes of "Chapter 4 of ?", not to mention that it was already established that someone was courting Sird and [[Manga/PokemonSpecial he's the most likely candidate]].]]
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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Orm's presence is confirmed for a future chapter in the Author's Notes of "Chapter 4 of ?", not to mention that it was already established that someone was courting Sird and [[Manga/PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonAdventures he's the most likely candidate]].]]
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this inconsistent with ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
** Thanks to VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
** Thanks to VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this inconsistent with ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' ''Manga/PokemonAdventures'' canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
** Thanks to VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the[[Manga/PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonAdventures Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
** Thanks to VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokémon like [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokémon like [[Manga/PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonAdventures Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or Literature/GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[Manga/PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonAdventures Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or Literature/GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' ''Manga/PokemonAdventures'' verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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* PurpleProse: The fic's title came out from Giovanni's description of Ariana, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny after being interrupted by Silver's complaint]] (see RunningGag and ShoutOut below). The paragraph itself was a parody.
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* PurpleProse: The fic's title came out from Giovanni's description of Ariana, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments after being interrupted by Silver's complaint]] (see RunningGag and ShoutOut below). The paragraph itself was a parody.
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] Literature/GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the Manga/PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the Manga/PokemonSpecial ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this inconsistent with PokemonSpecial canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this inconsistent with PokemonSpecial ''Manga/PokemonSpecial'' canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
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Redheaded Hero is being cut per the Appearance tropes cleanup thread.
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* FieryRedhead[=/=]EvilRedhead: [[HeroesWantRedheads Ariana]] and ''all'' her side of the family. Silver is [[RedHeadedHero another trope]], though.
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* FieryRedhead[=/=]EvilRedhead: [[HeroesWantRedheads Ariana]] and ''all'' her side of the family. Silver is [[RedHeadedHero another trope]], though.
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this [[TheyJustDidntCare inconsistent]] with PokemonSpecial canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this [[TheyJustDidntCare inconsistent]] inconsistent with PokemonSpecial canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
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* LoveAtFirstSight
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sird.
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** On Giovanni's side, the word "politeness" (and related terms, such as "polite") is ''always'' between quotes when he refers to [[SomebodyElsesProblem bystanders not caring enough]].
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** On Giovanni's side, the word "politeness" (and related terms, such as "polite") is ''always'' between quotes when he refers to [[SomebodyElsesProblem [[BystanderSyndrome bystanders not caring enough]].
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->'''--Summary'''
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial Manga/PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[VideoGame/{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} [[VideoGame/PokemonGoldAndSilver HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Orm's presence is confirmed for a future chapter in the Author's Notes of "Chapter 4 of ?", not to mention that it was already established that someone was courting Sird and [[PokemonSpecial he's the most likely candidate]].]]
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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Orm's presence is confirmed for a future chapter in the Author's Notes of "Chapter 4 of ?", not to mention that it was already established that someone was courting Sird and [[PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonSpecial he's the most likely candidate]].]]
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Ariana basically starts her battle with Sird by spamming Synthesis to heal her Oddish as it keeps being hurt, even doing Sunny Day to make it more effective. [[FridgeBrilliance She also attempted to order]] [[EpicFail a Tackle against Starmie]]. [[spoiler: Then she ''evolves her Oddish mid-battle'' and retaliates with [[SuperweaponSurprise SolarBeam]], which is powered up by ''Sunny Day, of all things!'']] In the end, her Pokemon lost solely because of ''bad timing.''
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Ariana basically starts her battle with Sird by spamming Synthesis to heal her Oddish as it keeps being hurt, even doing Sunny Day to make it more effective. [[FridgeBrilliance She also attempted to order]] [[EpicFail a Tackle against Starmie]]. [[spoiler: Then she ''evolves her Oddish mid-battle'' and retaliates with [[SuperweaponSurprise SolarBeam]], which is powered up by ''Sunny Day, of all things!'']] In the end, her Pokemon Pokémon lost solely because of ''bad timing.''
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* DishingOutDirt: The specialty of Viridian City's Gym are Ground Pokemon. [[spoiler: Don't trust that bit of information, or ''you're dead''.]]
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* DishingOutDirt: The specialty of Viridian City's Gym are Ground Pokemon.Pokémon. [[spoiler: Don't trust that bit of information, or ''you're dead''.]]
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships [[OlympusMons Arceus]] and is against Pokemon training, by the way.
** As of PokemonBlackAndWhite, [[spoiler: this cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) might remind some fans of Team Plasma and N.]]
** As of PokemonBlackAndWhite, [[spoiler: this cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) might remind some fans of Team Plasma and N.]]
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships [[OlympusMons Arceus]] and is against Pokemon Pokémon training, by the way.
** As ofPokemonBlackAndWhite, VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, [[spoiler: this cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) might remind some fans of Team Plasma and N.]]
** As of
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[{{Pokemon}} Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this [[TheyJustDidntCare inconsistent]] with PokemonSpecial canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
** Thanks to PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
** Thanks to PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
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* {{Jossed}}: In "Chapter 1 of ?", hideouts are vaguely implied to be as small as they seem to be in the [[{{Pokemon}} [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Ruby and Sapphire games]]. Not only is this [[TheyJustDidntCare inconsistent]] with PokemonSpecial canon, but [[spoiler: Silver's hideout in HGSS is a small cottage, so even if he moved out of it, he'd have chosen something around the same size and not just a hole in a wall or tree.]]
** Thanks toPokemonBlackAndWhite, VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
** Thanks to
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokemon like [[PokemonSpecial Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokemon Pokémon like [[PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Yellow and Lance]] do]].
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[PokemonSpecial [[Manga/PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either Literature/{{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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trope renamed at TRS
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* {{Nakama}}: ''Everyone'' at Viridian City's gym for Giovanni. The relationships among them vary, though. [[spoiler: For example, Petrel is well-liked by both Sird and Ariana, and Archer ''despises'' Proton.]]
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* TrueCompanions: ''Everyone'' at Viridian City's gym for Giovanni. The relationships among them vary, though. [[spoiler: For example, Petrel is well-liked by both Sird and Ariana, and Archer ''despises'' Proton.]]
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} [[VideoGame/{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the unexpected jokes that slip past your defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her [[{{Fanon}} sister]] [[PokemonDiamondAndPearl Mars]], and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her [[{{Fanon}} sister]] [[PokemonDiamondAndPearl [[VideoGame/PokemonDiamondAndPearl Mars]], and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
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* CrossesTheLineTwice
** "Chapter 1 of ?":
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and [[BigBad he]] hadn't encouraged [[OrphanageOfFear them]] to study it either..."
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty" [[MemeticSexGod Ditto]].
** "Chapter 3 of ?":
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a ''[[{{Squick}} kink ]]''[[{{Squick}} of one of his ]]''[[{{Squick}} parents?]]'' He was truly ''[[RunningGag tired]],'' wasn't he?"
** "Chapter 4 of ?":
-->'''Ariana''': "Does it ''amuse you'' to lie to your challengers?"
-->'''Narrator''' (Giovanni's side): "Oh, damn right it did! But since [[{{Yandere}} she was tightening her hold on both ends of his scarf]], Giovanni just shook his head."
** Petrel is a special case in the fourth chapter:
--->'''Petrel''' (to Giovanni): "Are you looking for some chloroform to use on this lovely young lady?"
--->'''Petrel''' (to Ariana, in the ''same paragraph''): "After your horrible loss at the gym, I could offer you some help. I have explosives, if you ever want to bring down the building in revenge. It's a rather ''ugly'' building too, so I'd recommend it anyways."
--->'''[[BeyondTheImpossible Petrel]]''' (to Archer and Proton): "[[ShipperOnDeck Go solve your issues with fewer fists and more kisses]]."
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then... Mostly during Silver's scenes, as exemplified in CrossesTheLineTwice.
** "Chapter 1 of ?":
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and [[BigBad he]] hadn't encouraged [[OrphanageOfFear them]] to study it either..."
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty" [[MemeticSexGod Ditto]].
** "Chapter 3 of ?":
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a ''[[{{Squick}} kink ]]''[[{{Squick}} of one of his ]]''[[{{Squick}} parents?]]'' He was truly ''[[RunningGag tired]],'' wasn't he?"
** "Chapter 4 of ?":
-->'''Ariana''': "Does it ''amuse you'' to lie to your challengers?"
-->'''Narrator''' (Giovanni's side): "Oh, damn right it did! But since [[{{Yandere}} she was tightening her hold on both ends of his scarf]], Giovanni just shook his head."
** Petrel is a special case in the fourth chapter:
--->'''Petrel''' (to Giovanni): "Are you looking for some chloroform to use on this lovely young lady?"
--->'''Petrel''' (to Ariana, in the ''same paragraph''): "After your horrible loss at the gym, I could offer you some help. I have explosives, if you ever want to bring down the building in revenge. It's a rather ''ugly'' building too, so I'd recommend it anyways."
--->'''[[BeyondTheImpossible Petrel]]''' (to Archer and Proton): "[[ShipperOnDeck Go solve your issues with fewer fists and more kisses]]."
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then... Mostly during Silver's scenes, as exemplified in CrossesTheLineTwice.
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* {{Shipping}}: Was nominated for the Shipping Fanfic Award at Bulbagarden, too. Along with another fic by the same author... [[spoiler: This one won.]]
** It has been nominated again for the Fall Awards, and it's up against "Kisses" once more... Is this a RunningGag or something?
** It has been nominated again for the Fall Awards, and it's up against "Kisses" once more... Is this a RunningGag or something?
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* TenderTears[=/=]TearsOfRemorse: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to lose when challenging the Viridian Gym. Continues crying after.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sird.
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* WaterWorks: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to lose when challenging the Viridian Gym.
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in the author notes for "Chapter 3 of ?", after Ariana expends half of the chapter in tears.
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sird. Though she's [[{{YMMV}} not that pretty...]]
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in the author notes for "Chapter 3 of ?", after Ariana expends half of the chapter in tears.
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sird. Though she's [[{{YMMV}} not that pretty...]]
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* IfYouKnowWhatIMean: Yes, Proton, we know what you mean.
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: Yes, Proton, we know what you mean.
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** Scene changes will undoubtedly remind you of ThePrincessBride.
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** Scene changes will undoubtedly remind you of ThePrincessBride.Film/ThePrincessBride.
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* LeprechaunColourScheme: "Chapter 4 of ?" reveals that Ariana has been wearing green all along.
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* RedheadInGreen: "Chapter 4 of ?" reveals that Ariana has been wearing green all along.
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* [[{{Main/ptitle67cpn4dlu8j9}} Chekhov's Armoury]]
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* [[{{Main/ptitle67cpn4dlu8j9}} Chekhov's Armoury]]ChekhovsArmoury
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Tropers/KayiRowling's most recent work (started in June 2010). As of this writing, it's currently on its fourth chapter, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer entitled "Chapter 4 of ?"]]. The beginning, "Chapter 1 of ?", may be read at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6020203/1/ Fanfiction.net]] and at the [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=66521 Bulbagarden Forums]]; from there, navigation towards newer chapters is easy.
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Tropers/KayiRowling's most recent work (started in June 2010). As of this writing, it's currently on its fourth chapter, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer entitled "Chapter 4 of ?"]].?". The beginning, "Chapter 1 of ?", may be read at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6020203/1/ Fanfiction.net]] and at the [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=66521 Bulbagarden Forums]]; from there, navigation towards newer chapters is easy.
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either {{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: [[PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either {{Twilight}} Literature/{{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Thanks to PokemonBlackAndWhite, the second paragraph of "Chapter 1 of ?", where the [[PokemonSpecial Pokedex holders']] latest adventure is detailed, can't be talking about Isshu.
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* [[{{Main/ptitle67cpn4dlu8j9}} Chekov's Armoury]]
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* [[{{Main/ptitle67cpn4dlu8j9}} Chekov's Chekhov's Armoury]]
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-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he hadn't encouraged them to study it either..."
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty" Ditto.
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty" Ditto.
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-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he [[BigBad he]] hadn't encouraged them [[OrphanageOfFear them]] to study it either..."
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty"Ditto.[[MemeticSexGod Ditto]].
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "flirty"
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-->'''Narrator''' (Giovanni's side): "Oh, damn right it did! But since she was tightening her hold on both ends of his scarf, Giovanni just shook his head."
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-->'''Narrator''' (Giovanni's side): "Oh, damn right it did! But since [[{{Yandere}} she was tightening her hold on both ends of his scarf, scarf]], Giovanni just shook his head."
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* DefensiveFeintTrap
* DesignatedGirlFight: OK, their Pokemon did it, but couldn't one of the guys challenge Ariana instead?
* DesignatedGirlFight: OK, their Pokemon did it, but couldn't one of the guys challenge Ariana instead?
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* DefensiveFeintTrap
* DesignatedGirlFight: OK, theirDefensiveFeintTrap: Ariana basically starts her battle with Sird by spamming Synthesis to heal her Oddish as it keeps being hurt, even doing Sunny Day to make it more effective. [[FridgeBrilliance She also attempted to order]] [[EpicFail a Tackle against Starmie]]. [[spoiler: Then she ''evolves her Oddish mid-battle'' and retaliates with [[SuperweaponSurprise SolarBeam]], which is powered up by ''Sunny Day, of all things!'']] In the end, her Pokemon did it, but couldn't one lost solely because of the guys challenge Ariana instead?''bad timing.''
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* FieryRedhead: Silver, Ariana and ''all her side of the family''.
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* FieryRedhead: Silver, Ariana FieryRedhead[=/=]EvilRedhead: [[HeroesWantRedheads Ariana]] and ''all ''all'' her side of the family''.family. Silver is [[RedHeadedHero another trope]], though.
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships Arceus and is against Pokemon training, by the way.
* HeroesWantRedheads
* HeroesWantRedheads
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* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships Arceus [[OlympusMons Arceus]] and is against Pokemon training, by the way.
* HeroesWantRedheadsway.
** As of PokemonBlackAndWhite, [[spoiler: this cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) might remind some fans of Team Plasma and N.]]
* HeroesWantRedheads
** As of PokemonBlackAndWhite, [[spoiler: this cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) might remind some fans of Team Plasma and N.]]
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* MissingMom: Ariana, [[spoiler: who's closer to Silver than what he thinks she is]]; her own mother isn't mentioned either. And Giovanni's mother is dead during the flashbacks, [[spoiler: and has been since he was nine.]]
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* MissingMom: Ariana, [[spoiler: who's closer to Silver than what he thinks she is]]; is; her own mother isn't mentioned either. And Giovanni's mother is dead during the flashbacks, [[spoiler: and has been since he was nine.]]
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* NayTheist: Considering there's a cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) worshiping Arceus, it's safe to say anyone that isn't with them fits this trope. [[spoiler: Giovanni definitely is, though.]]
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* NayTheist: Considering there's a cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) worshiping Arceus, [[OlympusMons Arceus]], it's safe to say anyone that isn't with them fits this trope. [[spoiler: Giovanni definitely is, though.]]
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* OnceAnEpisode: The narration on Silver's side will remind you that he's ''tired'' ([[RunningGag word always in italics]]), and his thoughts will eventually get to Blue and Gold.
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* OnceAnEpisode: The narration on Silver's side will remind you that he's ''tired'' ([[RunningGag word always in italics]]), and his thoughts will eventually get to Blue [[CoolBigSis Blue]] and Gold.[[FriendlyRival Gold]].
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: With lots of commas, and didn't mean anything by the end of the battle in "Chapter 2 of ?"
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: With lots of commas, and didn't mean anything by the end of the battle in "Chapter 2 of ?"?".
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* ShipperOnDeck: Parodied in "Chapter 4 of ?" by [[spoiler: Petrel, commenting on Archer and Proton's relationship on passing]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Parodied in "Chapter 4 of ?" by [[spoiler: Petrel, Petrel commenting on Archer and Proton's relationship on passing]].
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** It has been nominated again for the Fall Awards, and it's up against "Kisses" once more... Is this a RunningGag or something [[Tropers/KayiRowling they're not telling me about]]?
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** It has been nominated again for the Fall Awards, and it's up against "Kisses" once more... Is this a RunningGag or something [[Tropers/KayiRowling they're not telling me about]]?something?
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* [[spoiler: StartOfDarkness]]: Ariana joining the gym at the end of "Chapter 4 of ?" [[spoiler: eventually led to her joining Team Rocket. Giovanni even mentions in "Chapter 2 of ?" that she, unlike many others in Team Rocket, wasn't a criminal at the beginning]].
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* [[spoiler: StartOfDarkness]]: Ariana joining the gym at the end of "Chapter 4 of ?" [[spoiler: eventually led to her joining Team Rocket. Giovanni even mentions in "Chapter 2 of ?" that she, unlike many others in Team Rocket, wasn't a criminal at in the beginning]].beginning.]]
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* WaterWorks: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to lose challenging the Viridian Gym.
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* WaterWorks: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to lose when challenging the Viridian Gym.
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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Orm's presence is confirmed for a future chapter in the Author's Notes of "Chapter 4 of ?", not to mention that it was already established that someone was courting Sird and [[PokemonSpecial he's the most likely candidate]].]]
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*** Petrel is a special case in this chapter:
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
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* {{Flashback}}
* FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks, which are the main story.
* FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks, which are the main story.
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* {{Flashback}}
*{{Flashback}} and FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks, which are the main story.story.
* FourEyesZeroSoul: Archer.
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* FourEyesZeroSoul: Archer.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: See BetaCouple.
* [[spoiler: INeverToldYouMyName]]: "Chapter 4 of ?".
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* [[TheLancer Lancers]] or [[TheDragon Dragons]]: Whether or not you consider Giovanni to be in an heroic role, Sird and Archer occupy this role at the same time.
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* [[TheLancer Lancers]] or [[TheDragon Lancers]][=/=][[TheDragon Dragons]]: Whether or not you consider Giovanni to be in an heroic role, Sird and Archer occupy this role at the same time.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister Mars, and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister Mars, [[{{Fanon}} sister]] [[PokemonDiamondAndPearl Mars]], and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
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* [[TheSmurfettePrinciple Smurfette Principle]]
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* [[TheSmurfettePrinciple Smurfette Principle]]Principle]]: The Viridian Gym trainers, unlike Team Rocket, don't respect the 1-girl-per-4-guys rule. [[spoiler: They're actually closer to 1-girl-per-''40''-guys.]]
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the extensive use of PurpleProse, which numbs you until it slips an unexpected joke past your defenses. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] Rocket Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the extensive use of PurpleProse, which numbs you until it slips an unexpected joke jokes that slip past your defenses.defenses every now and then. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
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!!''[[LongTitle Garnets and Cherries]]'' contains examples of the following tropes (as of "Chapter 3 of ?"):
* [[spoiler: AmoralAttorney]]: Archer.
* [[spoiler: AmoralAttorney]]: Archer.
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!!''[[LongTitle Garnets and Cherries]]'' contains examples of the following tropes (as of "Chapter 3 4 of ?"):
*[[spoiler: AmoralAttorney]]: Archer.AmoralAttorney: Archer.
* BasementDweller: Petrel.
* BoomTown: Viridian City some time after the opening of the gym.
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* BasementDweller: Petrel.
* BoomTown: Viridian City some time after the opening of the gym.
* [[TheCityNarrows City Narrows]]: Viridian City's were explored swiftly by Giovanni and Ariana in "Chapter 4 of ?". [[TooDumbToLive At night.]]
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--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a ''[[{{Squick}} kink ]]''[[{{Squick}} of one of his ]]''[[{{Squick}} parents?]]'' He was truly ''tired,'' wasn't he?"
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** "Chapter 4 of ?":
-->'''Ariana''': "Does it ''amuse you'' to lie to your challengers?"
-->'''Narrator''' (Giovanni's side): "Oh, damn right it did! But since she was tightening her hold on both ends of his scarf, Giovanni just shook his head."
*** Petrel is a special case in this chapter:
--->'''Petrel''' (to Giovanni): "Are you looking for some chloroform to use on this lovely young lady?"
--->'''Petrel''' (to Ariana, in the ''same paragraph''): "After your horrible loss at the gym, I could offer you some help. I have explosives, if you ever want to bring down the building in revenge. It's a rather ''ugly'' building too, so I'd recommend it anyways."
--->'''[[BeyondTheImpossible Petrel]]''' (to Archer and Proton): "[[ShipperOnDeck Go solve your issues with fewer fists and more kisses]]."
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Sird forbids Giovanni to use his Viridian Forest powers because they hurt him, but he always thinks he can fool her and uses them anyways.
** "Chapter 4 of ?" discusses this:
--->'''Silver''': "And you ''still'' decided it was for the best to use it back then?"
--->'''Giovanni''': "[[YouthIsWastedOnTheDumb I was young and believed myself to be immortal]], son; it's obvious that I did."
** "Chapter 4 of ?" discusses this:
--->'''Silver''': "And you ''still'' decided it was for the best to use it back then?"
--->'''Giovanni''': "[[YouthIsWastedOnTheDumb I was young and believed myself to be immortal]], son; it's obvious that I did."
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* DistressedDamsel: Ariana, more often than not. [[spoiler: Giovanni calls her out on it in "Chapter 3 of ?"]]
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* DistressedDamsel: Ariana, more often than not. [[spoiler: Giovanni calls her out on it in "Chapter 3 of ?"]]?". [[spoiler: But he helps her recover her stolen things in "Chapter 4 of ?" anyways.]]
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* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: [[spoiler: Proton, who allows his mother to stick around while he trains. The rest of the team loves her too.]]
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* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: [[spoiler: Proton, who allows his mother to stick around while he trains. [[TeamMom The rest of the team loves her too.]]too]].
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* FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks.
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* FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks.flashbacks, which are the main story.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: No points for guessing who.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: No points for guessing who.HeroesWantRedheads
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* LongTitle: Usually shortened to "Garnets and Cherries" by the author, and "Two Garnets" by the rest of the crew at Bulbagarden.
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* LeprechaunColourScheme: "Chapter 4 of ?" reveals that Ariana has been wearing green all along.
* LongTitle: Usually shortened to "Garnets andCherries" by the author, and "Two Garnets" by the rest of the crew at Bulbagarden.Cherries".
* LongTitle: Usually shortened to "Garnets and
** "Chapter 4 of ?":
-->[[spoiler: '''Weavile''']]: "I think you're after my mistress, sir."
* {{Nakama}}: ''Everyone'' at Viridian City's gym for Giovanni. The relationships among them vary, though. [[spoiler: For example, Petrel is well-liked by both Sird and Ariana, and Archer ''despises'' Proton.]]
-->[[spoiler: '''Weavile''']]: "I think you're after my mistress, sir."
* {{Nakama}}: ''Everyone'' at Viridian City's gym for Giovanni. The relationships among them vary, though. [[spoiler: For example, Petrel is well-liked by both Sird and Ariana, and Archer ''despises'' Proton.]]
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* [[TheNicknamer Nicknamer]]: Proton just refuses to call anyone by their name when talking to Giovanni.
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* [[TheNicknamer Nicknamer]]: Proton just refuses to call anyone by their name when talking to Giovanni.Proton.
* ObliviousToLove: [[spoiler: Giovanni is a special case, since he's very much [[LoveAtFirstSight in love with Ariana]], but he doesn't realize she likes him back.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler: Sird]] for Giovanni. Silver's not pleased to hear about it.
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler: Sird]] Sird for Giovanni. Silver's not pleased to hear about it.
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* PurpleProse: It's mostly just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]]... But the fic's title came out from Giovanni's description of Ariana, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny after being interrupted by Silver's complaint]] (see ShoutOut below)
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister [[spoiler: Mars]], and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister [[spoiler: Mars]], and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
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* PsychicPowers: The manifestation of the powers of a Viridian Forest child usually have a couple of this, mainly {{Telepathy}}, [[spoiler: but Giovanni's include a form of mind control instead of being able to heal Pokemon like [[PokemonSpecial Yellow and Lance]] do]].
* PurpleProse:It's mostly just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]]... But the The fic's title came out from Giovanni's description of Ariana, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny after being interrupted by Silver's complaint]] (see RunningGag and ShoutOut below)
below). The paragraph itself was a parody.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister[[spoiler: Mars]], Mars, and their father. Arguably, the two girls aren't evil or dangerous, [[spoiler: until they grew up.]]
* PurpleProse:
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Ariana, her sister
** On Giovanni's side, the word "politeness" (and related terms, such as "polite") is ''always'' between quotes when he refers to [[SomebodyElsesProblem bystanders not caring enough]].
* ScheduleSlip
-->[[spoiler: '''Tropers/KayiRowling:''' ''DAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMN!!!'']]
* ShipperOnDeck: Parodied in "Chapter 4 of ?" by [[spoiler: Petrel, commenting on Archer and Proton's relationship on passing]].
* ScheduleSlip
-->[[spoiler: '''Tropers/KayiRowling:''' ''DAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMN!!!'']]
* ShipperOnDeck: Parodied in "Chapter 4 of ?" by [[spoiler: Petrel, commenting on Archer and Proton's relationship on passing]].
** It has been nominated again for the Fall Awards, and it's up against "Kisses" once more... Is this a RunningGag or something [[Tropers/KayiRowling they're not telling me about]]?
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read either {{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue [[PokemonSpecial Blue]] has read either {{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Sird has a lot of these in store for Ariana.
* [[spoiler: [[{{Main/ptitlev20ohdey}} That Didn't Happen]]]]: The current status of Giovanni and Ariana's relationship, [[spoiler: ''and'' she walked out on him.]]
* [[spoiler: [[{{Main/ptitlev20ohdey}} That Didn't Happen]]]]: The current status of Giovanni and Ariana's relationship, [[spoiler: ''and'' she walked out on him.]]
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* StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler: Ariana thought this of Giovanni, until he clarified who he was in "Chapter 4 of ?"]].
* [[spoiler: StartOfDarkness]]: Ariana joining the gym at the end of "Chapter 4 of ?" [[spoiler: eventually led to her joining Team Rocket. Giovanni even mentions in "Chapter 2 of ?" that she, unlike many others in Team Rocket, wasn't a criminal at the beginning]].
* TermsOfEndangerment: Sird has a lot of these in store forAriana.
* [[spoiler: [[{{Main/ptitlev20ohdey}} That Didn't Happen]]]]: The current status of GiovanniAriana. She has a preference for "hon(ey)" and Ariana's relationship, [[spoiler: ''and'' she walked out on him.]]"Skitty".
* [[spoiler: StartOfDarkness]]: Ariana joining the gym at the end of "Chapter 4 of ?" [[spoiler: eventually led to her joining Team Rocket. Giovanni even mentions in "Chapter 2 of ?" that she, unlike many others in Team Rocket, wasn't a criminal at the beginning]].
* TermsOfEndangerment: Sird has a lot of these in store for
* [[spoiler: [[{{Main/ptitlev20ohdey}} That Didn't Happen]]]]: The current status of Giovanni
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** During the flashbacks, Giovanni is around Silver's age ("nearly twen--!")
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** During the flashbacks, Giovanni is around Silver's age ("nearly twen--!")(he's a "twenty-something year old")
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* WallsOfText: And the author is so aware of it, she'll apologize extensively if you mention it in a review or a comment.
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sird. Though she's [[{{YMMV}} not that pretty...]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Yakuza}}]]: Giovanni's side of the family.
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* [[spoiler: {{Yakuza}}]]: {{Yakuza}}: Giovanni's side of the family.
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** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "''flirty''" Ditto.
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** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "''flirty''" "flirty" Ditto.
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--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a [[{{Squick}} ''kink'' of one of his ''parents?'']] He was truly ''tired,'' wasn't he?"
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then...
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of ?".
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then...
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--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a [[{{Squick}} ''kink'' ''[[{{Squick}} kink ]]''[[{{Squick}} of one of his ''parents?'']] ]]''[[{{Squick}} parents?]]'' He was truly ''tired,'' wasn't he?"
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of?".
?".
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then... Mostly during Silver's scenes, as exemplified in CrossesTheLineTwice.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The chocolate milk scene in "Chapter 2 of
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The normal narration will surprise you every now and then... Mostly during Silver's scenes, as exemplified in CrossesTheLineTwice.
* FramingDevice: Silver's side of the narration encases Giovanni's flashbacks.
* [[TheNicknamer Nicknamer]]: Proton just refuses to call anyone by their name when talking to Giovanni.
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* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]]...
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* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually mostly just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]]...wall-texty]]... But the fic's title came out from Giovanni's description of Ariana, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny after being interrupted by Silver's complaint]] (see ShoutOut below)
** Giovanni's side of the narration remarks that Ariana isn't beautiful twice before Silver finally breaks it in "Chapter 3 of ?":
-->'''Silver''': "I'm beginning to think you are saying that ''on purpose.''"
-->'''Silver''': "I'm beginning to think you are saying that ''on purpose.''"
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read {{Twilight}},]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read it, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read {{Twilight}},]] either {{Twilight}} or GoneWithTheWind,]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read it, whichever novel it was, but he denied everything when asked.]]
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** Averted with Ariana: she's ''nineteen.'' However, her father was able to initially convince Giovanni she was ''fifteen...''
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** Averted with Ariana: she's ''nineteen.'' However, her father was able to initially convince Giovanni she was ''fifteen...''''[[OlderThanTheyLook fifteen...]]''
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Tropers/KayiRowling's most recent work (started in June 2010). As of this writing, it's currently on its third chapter, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer entitled "Chapter 3 of ?"]]. The beginning, "Chapter 1 of ?", may be read at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6020203/1/ Fanfiction.net]] and at the [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=66521 Bulbagarden Forums]]; from there, navigation towards newer chapters is easy.
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Tropers/KayiRowling's most recent work (started in June 2010). As of this writing, it's currently on its third fourth chapter, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer entitled "Chapter 3 4 of ?"]]. The beginning, "Chapter 1 of ?", may be read at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6020203/1/ Fanfiction.net]] and at the [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=66521 Bulbagarden Forums]]; from there, navigation towards newer chapters is easy.
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] [[CanonImmigrant game-verse Rocket Executive]] [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the extensive use of PurpleProse, which numbs you until it slips an unexpected joke past your defenses. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
...needless to say, this is purely {{Fanon}}, and it may be {{Jossed}} at any moment by the manga's own [=HeartGold=] and [=SoulSilver=] chapter.
...needless to say, this is purely {{Fanon}}, and it may be {{Jossed}} at any moment by the manga's own [=HeartGold=] and [=SoulSilver=] chapter.
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A more detailed summary may actually care enough to tell you that this is a fanfic set in the PokemonSpecial verse, featuring [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Silver]] and [[AntiVillain Giovanni]] as the latter tells the former about the time he met his [[LoveInterest one-true-love]], the [[{{PokemonGoldAndSilver}} HGSS]] [[CanonImmigrant game-verse Rocket Executive]] Executive [[EvilRedhead Ariana]]. HilarityEnsues via the extensive use of PurpleProse, which numbs you until it slips an unexpected joke past your defenses. The short dialogue in the summary naturally [[NeverTrustATrailer never happens]] (it ''is'' 2 AM when it starts, though)
...needless to say, this is purely {{Fanon}}, and it may be {{Jossed}} in its entirety at any moment by the manga's own [=HeartGold=] and [=SoulSilver=]chapter.
chapter.
...needless to say, this is purely {{Fanon}}, and it may be {{Jossed}} in its entirety at any moment by the manga's own [=HeartGold=] and [=SoulSilver=]
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!!''[[LongTitle Garnets and Cherries]]'' contains examples of the following tropes (as of "Chapter 2 of ?"):
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!!''[[LongTitle Garnets and Cherries]]'' contains examples of the following tropes (as of "Chapter 2 3 of ?"):
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* [[spoiler: AmoralAttorney]]: Archer.
* [[spoiler: AmoralAttorney]]: Archer.
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* [[spoiler: ChildProdigy]]: Giovanni.
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he hadn't encouraged them to study it either..."
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he hadn't encouraged them to study it either..."
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* [[spoiler: ChildProdigy]]: Giovanni.
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
ChildProdigy: Giovanni was a gym leader at the age of nine, and before him there was no gym at Viridian City.
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Talk about an ego booster."
* CrossesTheLineTwice
** "Chapter 1 of ?":
--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he hadn't encouraged them to study it either...""
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "''flirty''" Ditto.
** "Chapter 3 of ?":
--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a [[{{Squick}} ''kink'' of one of his ''parents?'']] He was truly ''tired,'' wasn't he?"
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
-->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Talk about an ego booster."
* CrossesTheLineTwice
** "Chapter 1 of ?":
--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "...this other national region he had never heard of before--[[PokemonSpecial Mask of Ice]] wasn't a master on geography, and he hadn't encouraged them to study it either...
** "Chapter 2 of ?": Sird's "''flirty''" Ditto.
** "Chapter 3 of ?":
--->'''Narrator''' (Silver's side): "Figure out a [[{{Squick}} ''kink'' of one of his ''parents?'']] He was truly ''tired,'' wasn't he?"
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* [[spoiler: DefensiveFeintTrap]]
* [[spoiler: DesignatedGirlFight]]: OK, their Pokemon did it, but [[spoiler: couldn't one of the guys challenge Ariana instead?]]
* [[spoiler: DesignatedGirlFight]]: OK, their Pokemon did it, but [[spoiler: couldn't one of the guys challenge Ariana instead?]]
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* [[spoiler: DefensiveFeintTrap]]
DefensiveFeintTrap
*[[spoiler: DesignatedGirlFight]]: DesignatedGirlFight: OK, their Pokemon did it, but [[spoiler: couldn't one of the guys challenge Ariana instead?]]instead?
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* [[spoiler: DistressedDamsel]]
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* DistressedDamsel: Ariana, more often than not. [[spoiler: DistressedDamsel]]Giovanni calls her out on it in "Chapter 3 of ?"]]
* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: [[spoiler: Proton, who allows his mother to stick around while he trains. The rest of the team loves her too.]]
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* FieryRedhead: Silver, Ariana and ''[[spoiler: all her side of the family]]''.
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* FieryRedhead: Silver, Ariana and ''[[spoiler: all ''all her side of the family]]''.family''.
* {{Flashback}}
* [[spoiler: GenerationXerox]]
* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships Arceus and is against Pokemon training, by the way.
* {{Flashback}}
* [[spoiler: GenerationXerox]]
* [[TheHeretic Heretic]]: Ariana, according to her father. Their family worships Arceus and is against Pokemon training, by the way.
* IfYouKnowWhatIMean: Yes, Proton, we know what you mean.
* [[TheLancer Lancers]] or [[TheDragon Dragons]]: Whether or not you consider Giovanni to be in an heroic role, Sird and Archer occupy this role at the same time.
* LovableSexManiac: Proton.
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* MissingMom: Ariana, [[spoiler: who's closer to Silver than what he thinks she is.]] Probably also [[spoiler: Giovanni's mom.]]
* MoralityPet: Admit it, [[spoiler: Sird's relationship with her Starmie, and possibly her Meowth too, is ''special.'']]
* [[spoiler: MySensorsIndicateYouWantToTapThat]]: ''Damn it,'' Beedrill!
* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: Ariana, as part of her battle strategy. Shame Sird prefers more direct approaches, and beats her up for it.]]
* MoralityPet: Admit it, [[spoiler: Sird's relationship with her Starmie, and possibly her Meowth too, is ''special.'']]
* [[spoiler: MySensorsIndicateYouWantToTapThat]]: ''Damn it,'' Beedrill!
* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: Ariana, as part of her battle strategy. Shame Sird prefers more direct approaches, and beats her up for it.]]
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* MafiaPrincess: Giovanni's mother.
* MissingMom: Ariana, [[spoiler: who's closer to Silver than what he thinks sheis.]] Probably also [[spoiler: is]]; her own mother isn't mentioned either. And Giovanni's mom.mother is dead during the flashbacks, [[spoiler: and has been since he was nine.]]
* MoralityPet: Admit it,[[spoiler: Sird's relationship with her Starmie, and Starmie (and possibly her Meowth too, too) is ''special.'']]
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*[[spoiler: MySensorsIndicateYouWantToTapThat]]: MySensorsIndicateYouWantToTapThat: ''Damn it,'' Beedrill!
* NayTheist: Considering there's a cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) worshiping Arceus, it's safe to say anyone that isn't with them fits this trope. [[spoiler: Giovanni definitely is, though.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity:[[spoiler: Ariana, as part of her battle strategy. Shame Sird prefers more direct approaches, and beats her up for it.]]
* MissingMom: Ariana, [[spoiler: who's closer to Silver than what he thinks she
* MoralityPet: Admit it,
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* NayTheist: Considering there's a cult (or [[InsistentTerminology religion]]) worshiping Arceus, it's safe to say anyone that isn't with them fits this trope. [[spoiler: Giovanni definitely is, though.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity:
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler: Sird for Giovanni. Silver's not pleased to hear about it.]]
* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]].
* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually just [[WallsOfText wall-texty]].
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** Ariana is also the one uttering the last line of every chapter.
* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler:Sird Sird]] for Giovanni. Silver's not pleased to hear about it.]]
it.
* PreAssKickingOneLiner: With lots of commas, and didn't mean anything by the end of the battle in "Chapter 2 of ?"
* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually just [[WallsOfTextwall-texty]].wall-texty]]...
* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler:
* PreAssKickingOneLiner: With lots of commas, and didn't mean anything by the end of the battle in "Chapter 2 of ?"
* PurpleProse: It's lengthy and descriptive and mildly poetic, indeed, but ''damn'' if the setting couldn't be replaced by a ''void'' and everyone could walk around ''naked'' without changing a ''single thing''. One could actually say it's actually just [[WallsOfText
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* {{Shipping}}: Was nominated for the Shipping Fanfic Award at Bulbagarden, too. Along with another fic by the same author...
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* RunningGag: Silver is ''tired'' not tired.
* {{Shipping}}: Was nominated for the Shipping Fanfic Award at Bulbagarden, too. Along with another fic by the same author... [[spoiler: This one won.]]
* {{Shipping}}: Was nominated for the Shipping Fanfic Award at Bulbagarden, too. Along with another fic by the same author... [[spoiler: This one won.]]
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** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read {{Twilight}}, if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful.]]
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-->'''Giovanni''': "As you wish."
** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read{{Twilight}}, {{Twilight}},]] if one goes along Silver's complaint over Giovanni specifying Ariana is ''not'' beautiful.beautiful. [[spoiler: She might have also made him read it, but he denied everything when asked.]]
** Apparently, [[spoiler: Blue has read
* TermsOfEndangerment: Sird has a lot of these in store for Ariana.
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* [[spoiler: WaterWorks]]: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to [[spoiler: lose]] challenging the Viridian Gym.
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** During the flashbacks, Giovanni is around Silver's age ("nearly twen--!")
** Averted with Ariana: she's ''nineteen.'' However, her father was able to initially convince Giovanni she was ''fifteen...''
*[[spoiler: WaterWorks]]: WallsOfText: And the author is so aware of it, she'll apologize extensively if you mention it in a review or a comment.
* WaterWorks: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to[[spoiler: lose]] lose challenging the Viridian Gym.Gym.
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in the author notes for "Chapter 3 of ?", after Ariana expends half of the chapter in tears.
** Averted with Ariana: she's ''nineteen.'' However, her father was able to initially convince Giovanni she was ''fifteen...''
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* WaterWorks: ''Someone'' wasn't expecting to
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in the author notes for "Chapter 3 of ?", after Ariana expends half of the chapter in tears.
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* [[spoiler: {{Yakuza}}]]: Giovanni's side of the family.