History FanFic / MagicaMadokaVeneficusPuella

* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler:Just when things are going smoothly for the heroines, the Incubators hatch a plan to manipulate Madoka and [=EnBey=] into forcing Homura to become a Veneficus Puella. The result? Madoka is incapacitated in battle, and Homura, filled to the brim with guilt for being unable to protect Madoka past and present, unleashes destructive powers beyond [=EnBey's=] control. Plus the Incubators may very well have a better source of energy to exploit. WordOfGod [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=6234369&postcount=519 suggests this was Kyubey's intent all the way back in the old universe.]]

* TheWikiRule: In-universe, there's a ''wiki on Veneficus Puella.'' It's also [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded.]]
-->''"There's a wiki?" Oh, of course there was a wiki--it was PUBLIC.''
* YuriFan: Junko, in spades. Her own daughter is not exempt from this. To a much lesser extent Hitomi (or well, from what we've seen. She definitely tries to push Sayaka/Madoka at one point).

[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6893660/1/Magica_Madoka_Veneficus_Puella Magica Madoka Veneficus Puella]] is a [[DeadFic dead]] ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' fanfic by The Moiderah of Writing on Fanfiction.net. It follows an AlternateContinuity in which Homura dies fighting Walpurgis Nacht, and Madoka wishes for a world in which her friends can survive.

Notable for having an author who may or may not be a troper. [[note]]Oh, but [[@/TheMoiderah he most certainly is.]][[/note]]

And a warning from [[WordOfGod God himself,]] '''''DO NOT READ THIS FICTION UNTIL YOU HAVE FINISHED THE SERIES. THIS FANFICTION CONTAINS HEAVY SPOILERS FOR EVERYTHING UP TO EPISODE TEN.'''''

Now has [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=192132 a Spacebattles thread.]]

And a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?p=6603025#post6603025 second one.]]

And a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/magica-whatever-veneficsomethingsomething.245552/ third.]]

* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler:Just when things are going smoothly for the heroines, the Incubators hatch a plan to manipulate Madoka and [=EnBey=] into forcing Homura to become a Veneficus Puella. The result? Madoka is incapacitated in battle, and Homura, filled to the brim with guilt for being unable to protect Madoka past and present, unleashes destructive powers beyond [=EnBey's=] control. Plus the Incubators may very well have a better source of energy to exploit.]]
** [[spoiler:And if WordOfGod [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=6234369&postcount=519 is something to follow by]], this may have been canon!Kyubey's intent all along when he had to pick a universe to drop Madoka and Homura into way back in the beginning.]]

* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Thought Sayaka got a raw deal in the original? In this fic, ''she was broken before the damn thing even began.'']] [[FromBadToWorse It gets worse]]. [[spoiler:''[[UnfortunateImplications She might be better off for it.]]'']]

** Taken UpToEleven in Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom

** There are a ''[[UpToEleven ton]]'' of them in the author's notes.

* UpToEleven: Compare Mami's finishers for starters.

* AdultFear: [[spoiler:When Homura goes apeshit, guess what everyone, including Madoka's mother, sees? [[MindRape Images of her dying. Over and over again.]] [[AndIMustScream And she can't do anything to stop it.]]]]
** [[spoiler: ''Worse'' when you remember that one of those "deaths" was a MercyKill wherein Homura was asked by Madoka to shoot her Soul Gem to prevent her turning into a witch. Imagine watching your child in pain and just begging to die, not to mention Madoka ended up turning into a witch in some timelines.]]

* SchoolgirlLesbians: Sayaka, possibly Homura, maybe...[[CastFullOfGay oh, fuck it.]]

* MythologyGag: Homura [[BigDamnHeroes saves Madoka]] from a bunch of {{Red Shirt Reporter}}s by [[MemeticMutation bashing the camera with a baseball bat.]]

* StarfishAlien: The Incubators, naturally, but really driven home by [=TorBey=]:

* CrapsackWorld: The world's political systems are streamlined for use by the Veneficus Puellae, the death rate is significantly lower for the girls, and the [[StarfishAlien Incubator]] that is provided isn't actively trying to screw them over. These are good things. Meanwhile, [[EldritchAbomination the witches]] cause horrible collateral damage, the inhabitants are still [[HumansAreFlawed incredibly disagreeable,]] and some are willing to [[spoiler: [[MoralEventHorizon rape, torture, and kill recovered Remnants]] [[KnightTemplar out of a misguided sense of "Justice".]]]]''

** [=EnBey=] refuses to go into Madoka's room, because he think it's creepy for him, a StarfishAlien, to invade a little girl's privacy.

* DestructiveSaviour: ''[[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed.]]'' If it weren't for the Veneficus Puellae, the witches would be unstoppable. Despite the damage that is caused by each fight (which is mostly repaired by the witches' magic release), the Veneficus Puellae are thanked, and even celebrated, for their service.

* [[spoiler:AllAccordingToPlan: Just when things are going smoothly for the heroines, the Incubators hatch a plan to manipulate Madoka and [=EnBey=] into forcing Homura to become a Veneficus Puella. The result? Madoka is incapacitated in battle, and Homura, filled to the brim with guilt for being unable to protect Madoka past and present, unleashes destructive powers beyond [=EnBey's=] control. Plus the Incubators may very well have a better source of energy to exploit.]]

* [[spoiler:ApocalypseHow: If Homura becomes a witch, it'll be an X-3+ at least (a good chunk of the universe is destroyed), provided that she isn't stopped. Same thing could easily happen if she contracts with [=EnBey=] and Madoka dies.]]

* FryingPanOfDoom:

* [[spoiler:MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: Being Homura ''sucks''.]]

* [[spoiler:NiceJobBreakingItHero: Having Homura contract via [=EnBey=]? All part of the [=TorBey=] collective's plan.]]

* [[spoiler:TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: the last scene in each chapter makes allusions to it, but ch 12 hammers it home that there's more than just [=TorBey=] and [=KyuBey=] working together.]]

* [[spoiler: {{Reconstruction}}]]
* [[spoiler: RelationshipUpgrade: Madoka and Homura in Chapter 11. Naturally, tragedy strikes not long after.]]

** In Episode 14/Chapter 16, [=EnBey=] says this about two magical girls: "They're calm, cool, collected, and work perfectly as a pair". He's talking about [[spoiler:[[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Yuuri]] and [[IJustWantToBeYou Airi.]]]] It's even more amusing that [[spoiler: they're being called to Mitakihara to keep an eye on Sayaka - Canon!Yuuri and Canon!Sayaka have CounterpartComparison, while Canon!Airi is someone who would agree with [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge killing the people who hurt those you care about]].]]

Notable for having an author who may or may not be OneOfUs. [[note]]Oh, but [[@/TheMoiderah he most certainly is.]][[/note]]

* OneOfUs: [=EnBey=]. Quoting tropes, referencing [[MyImmortal crappy fanfics,]] it's only a matter of time before he starts [[Anime/GaoGaiGar turning people into light with a hammer.]]

** Taken UpToEleven in SpaceBattles

* XMeetsY: ''Madoka Magica'' meets ''{{Fanfic/Nobody Dies}}''.

Notable for having an author who may or may not be OneOfUs. [[note]]Oh, but [[@/TheMoiderah he most certainly is.]] Unfortunately.[[/note]]

-->''"GREETINGS, FELLOWS. I AM NOT [[BrianBlessed BRIAN BLESSED]], BUT I WILL TYPE LIKE JUST LIKE HOW HE SPEAKS, IN A LOVING HOMAGE TO A FINE SHAKESPEAREAN ACTOR."''

* BroughtDownToNormal: Homura. [[{{Badass}} It doesn't inconvenience her very much.]]

** Mami refers to training against another Veneficus Puella as [[{{MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha}} "befriending"]]. [[{{MoreDakka}} It]] [[{{WaveMotionGun}} involves]] [[{{BFG}} what you]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill think it does.]]

* OneOfUs: [=EnBey=]. Quoting tropes, referencing [[MyImmortal crappy fanfics,]] it's only a matter of time before he starts [[GaoGaiGar turning people into light with a hammer.]]

* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler:[=EnBey=] knows he's racing against three things: the next Walpurgis Nacht, [=TorBey=] turning Homura into a witch, and Madoka's death. If any of these come to pass very bad things will happen. So what does he do? Contracts Homura. Which backfires spectacularly.

** [[spoiler:[[FromBadToWorse It gets worse]]. It turns out that [[FridgeHorror there was a Madoka from this universe, and she's been trapped in the canon 'verse.]]

Notable for having an author who may or may not be OneOfUs. [[note]]Oh, but [[@/TheMoiderah he most certainly is. Unfortunately.[[/note]]

* LighterAndSofter: Playwed with. Things are better for the girls, but the death toll and collateral damage is horrifying, [[spoiler: their pasts were made worse than what they already were]] and[=TorBey=] is '''very''' unpleasant.

** Note about [[spoiler:[[Manga/PuellaMagiOrikoMagica Kirika Kure]]]]. In Canon, she was [[spoiler:GenkiGirl with AxeCrazy personalities]]. In here, she was [[spoiler:a ShrinkingViolet that find it [[NiceGirl distasteful to kill another human being.]]. Just like [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Shinji Ikari,]] if I may say so.]]

* AlternateUniverse: Subverted and Deconstructed. Madoka and Homura still remember the old world, and they have to learn how to roll with the punches. ''Quickly.''
** [[spoiler:And of ''course'' [[FromBadToWorse it gets worse]]. It turns out that [[FridgeHorror there was a Madoka from this universe,]] [[OhCrap and she's been trapped in the canon 'verse.]]]]

* {{Deconstruction}}: [[CaptainObvious Naturally.]]

* DestructiveSaviour: ''[[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed.]]'' If it weren't for the Veneficus Puellae, the witches would be completely unstoppable. Despite the damage that is caused by each fight (which is mostly repaired by the witches' magic release), the Veneficus Puellae are actually thanked, and even celebrated, for their service.

* DeconstructionFic: Take everything about your typical Puella Magi FixFic, put it in a blender, bash it on the head until its brains pop out, [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs throw in some crack]], ''[[IncendiaryExponent light it on fire,]]'' [[PetTheDog put it out,]] [[{{Reconstruction}} fix up its head]], and you get this fanfic.

* EldritchAbomination: The witches, obviously. But then again, [=TorBey=] and the other Incubators have elements of this too.

* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler:[=EnBey=] knows he's racing against three things: the next Walpurgis Nacht, [=TorBey=] turning Homura into a witch, and Madoka's death. If any of these come to pass very bad things will happen. So what does he do? Contracts Homura. [[OhCrap Which backfires]]. Spectacularly.]]

* FixFic: Subverted. Magical Girls now have an Incubator that isn't trying to screw them over, but there are still witches around, more powerful/deadly than before, and the other Incubator makes Kyubey look nice in comparison.

* {{Jerkass}}: [=EnBey=], oh so very much.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:[=EnBey=] can only feel negative emotions. However, they give him a sense of morality. He however does cut the swearing and goes as straight forward as he can when meeting with Junko privately in chapter 12.]]

* [[LetsYouAndHimFight Let's You And Her Fight]]: Invoked by [=EnBey=] by uttering this ''very'' line. [[spoiler: Although this is a subversion, as the fight was suggested by him as a practice between Kyouko and Sayaka.]]

* LighterAndSofter: Subverted. Things are better for the girls, but the death toll and collateral damage is horrifying, and [=TorBey=] is '''very''' unpleasant.
** [[spoiler:The fact that some of their pasts were made worse than what they already were does not help matters.]]

* {{Multiverse}}: [[spoiler:The timeline at the start, the current timeline, and well, the original Madoka and Homura from the timeline they're now in had to be sent [[OhCrap some]][[FridgeHorror where]].]]

Notable for having an author who may or may not be OneOfUs. [[hottip:*: Oh, but [[@/TheMoiderah he most certainly is. Unfortunately]]