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NoNonsenseNemesis: Apophis DOES '''NOT''' fuck around. Not even bothering with formalities, It annhiliates the characters and their entire planet without hesitation. When their souls manage to somehow maintain awareness despite the loss of their bodies, It creates entire worlds, specifically designed to break their minds. When THAT fails, it forces their duel spirits to be it's vessel as a form of psychological warfare.
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* NoNonsenseNemesis: Apophis DOES '''NOT''' fuck around. Not even bothering with formalities, It annhiliates the characters and their entire planet without hesitation. When their souls manage to somehow maintain awareness despite the loss of their bodies, It creates entire worlds, specifically designed to break their minds. When THAT fails, it forces their duel spirits to be it's vessel as a form of psychological warfare.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: Literally the very first thing it does.
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* MindRape: What it does during the "Nightmare Sequence"
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* RealityWarper: Apophis makes it clear that he just does ''not'' give a fuck about our physical laws.
** RealityMaker: The MindRape scenarios that Apophis created were ''not'' illusions, he ''literally'' created seven different realities from the ground up.
** RealityMaker: The MindRape scenarios that Apophis created were ''not'' illusions, he ''literally'' created seven different realities from the ground up.
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* VerbalTic: appends 'kapish[[hottip:*:Is this clear?]]' to the ends of her sentences.
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* VerbalTic: appends 'kapish[[hottip:*:Is Appends 'kapish[[note]]Is this clear?]]' clear?[[/note]]' to the ends of her sentences.
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* OlderThanHeLooks: Its hinted Haine was around during ''Battle City'', and somehow knows about the battle between Seto and Yugi and Umbra and Lumis.[[hottip:*:More interestingly, he also knows that Seto is the reincarnation of Set. And calls them Yu-chan, Set-chan, Mask 1 and Mask 2.]]
* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: With the question answered that Haine is Yami Marik, and the knowledge that Yami Marik said that he was waiting for one thousand years, the question still remains...''what is in this child's body?'']]
* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: With the question answered that Haine is Yami Marik, and the knowledge that Yami Marik said that he was waiting for one thousand years, the question still remains...''what is in this child's body?'']]
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* OlderThanHeLooks: Its hinted Haine was around during ''Battle City'', and somehow knows about the battle between Seto and Yugi and Umbra and Lumis.[[hottip:*:More [[note]]More interestingly, he also knows that Seto is the reincarnation of Set. And calls them Yu-chan, Set-chan, Mask 1 and Mask 2.]]
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!!! "I am your biggest fan!"
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* StrawNihilist: David seems to view the empty void created by Apophis as very interesting, and only reluctantly aided the heroes. It certainly does make his true allegiances harder to acertain.
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* BreakTheHaughty: He is incredibly arrogant in his early appearances, this soon changes following an absolutely ''crippling'' defeat at the hands of Peter. [[FromBadToWorse To make matters worse, he then finds himself a target for Gretel's bullying, who precedes to degrade and humiliate him even further]]. And to add to [[UpToEleven that]], he becomes the first duellist to lose to a cultist and is nearly crippled as a result.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: A rare example in that he does it ''while he's unconscious''.
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* RunningGag: Jacques' inability to accomplish anything while unconscious. ItMakesSenseInContext.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend You Are Not My Girlfriend]]: Has repeatedly told this to the [[PaintingTheMedium pink voiced]] Gamma-03. Doesn't seem to take, really.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend You Are Not My Girlfriend]]: Has repeatedly told this to the [[PaintingTheMedium pink voiced]] Gamma-03. Doesn't seem to take, really.
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* PetTheDog: He is much nicer around Regulus after Regulus became the first duellist to beat him during the tournament, and is the first duellist to express concern for him when he is temporarily rendered comatose.
** Despite having a blatant dislike of Marcus, Peter actually seem to offer words of encouragement to the boy when he hears him being tortured by Haine.
* TheRival: To Marcus.
** Despite having a blatant dislike of Marcus, Peter actually seem to offer words of encouragement to the boy when he hears him being tortured by Haine.
* TheRival: To Marcus.
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** Despite having a blatant dislike of Marcus, Peter actually seem to offer words of encouragement to the boy when he hears him being tortured by Haine.
* TheStoic: Tries to act aloof and detached to maintain his "Mysterious loner BadAss" credentials.
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* TheSmartGuy: Shows shades of this. Which is related to...
* ShownTheirWork: Did enough researching into Duel Academies prior to attending that both the large quantity of Duel Spirit-seeing people and an OmnicidalManiac trying to revive himself left him mostly unfazed.
* TagTeam: Part of one in a two-on-one duel with Peter against one of Apophis' cultists.
* ShownTheirWork: Did enough researching into Duel Academies prior to attending that both the large quantity of Duel Spirit-seeing people and an OmnicidalManiac trying to revive himself left him mostly unfazed.
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* TheSmartGuy: Shows shades of this. Which is related to...
* ShownTheirWork: Did enough researching into Duel Academies prior to attending that bothEspecially in the large quantity of Duel Spirit-seeing people and an OmnicidalManiac trying to revive himself left him mostly unfazed.
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* ShownTheirWork: Did enough researching into Duel Academies prior to attending that both
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* BattleInTheCentreOfTheMind: Has one with Freed. However it's inside ''Freed's'' mind rather than his own.
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* CryForTheDevil: Expresses genuine sympathy for Skull Knight when he realises the latter was [[TragicVillain possessed and forced to be a monster.]]
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* CryForTheDevil: Expresses Sigmund expresses genuine sympathy for Skull Knight when he realises the latter was [[spoiler: [[TragicVillain possessed and forced to be a monster.]]]]]]
* TheLeader: Has almost certainlybecome this by now.
** AFatherToHisMen.
** AFatherToHisMen.
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* YouShallNotPass: Pulls this on Skull Knight to allow Regulus to get the Exodia card to Sophia. {{Subverted}}, however, in that he manages to survive. He however made it clear that this was what he ''thought'' he was doing.
* DevilsAdvocate: What he's ''trying'' to be. Unfortunately for him, his aggressive nature makes him seem like a CommanderContrarian
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* FusionDance: Him and Meteor were forced in to doing this during the duel against his parents, proving there conviction but also hoeing to gain the power to win [[spoiler: Marcus being mostly unable to keep a monster on the field for them had not helped matters.]]
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* TheWorfEffect: Suffers this at the hands of David.
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* CreepyMonotone: Uses this during his BreakingSpeech to Gretel.
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* EpicFail: During the battle royale, he screws up his entire strategy twice by misreading his cards.
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* EpicFail: During the battle royale, he screws up his entire strategy twice ''twice'' by misreading his own cards.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch:
** His BreakingSpeech to Gretel was ''incredibly'' vicious, but you can't really say she didn't deserve it.
** Then there's his cold blooded [[spoiler: execution of one of the cultists. It was horrible enough to qualify him as the group's TokenEvilTeammate, but considering that the cultist was a nihilistic psycho who had tried to torture and kill Daniel...]]
** His BreakingSpeech to Gretel was ''incredibly'' vicious, but you can't really say she didn't deserve it.
** Then there's his cold blooded [[spoiler: execution of one of the cultists. It was horrible enough to qualify him as the group's TokenEvilTeammate, but considering that the cultist was a nihilistic psycho who had tried to torture and kill Daniel...]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Briefly has this reaction when he believes that the cultist he {{Mind Rape}}d and killed was a friend of Roxas. [[SubvertedTrope He gets over it in seconds, however, when he finds out that Roxas objected on principle alone]].
* MyGreatestFailure: While he tries to deny it, he clearly feels horrible about the death of Sylvestre.
* MyGreatestFailure: While he tries to deny it, he clearly feels horrible about the death of Sylvestre.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: A subtle example during the Tag Duel with Denero. While his strategy is solid, it unfortunately has the unforeseen consequence of being indirectly responsible for Denero merging his mind with the Meteor and becoming more aggressive and unstable as a result.
* NightmareFace: It appears during his BreakingSpeech to Gretel and is based on [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13409218090A18920100&page=47#1156 the photo of his RPer]].
* ObfuscatingStupidity: He used this in the early parts of his duel against Gretel, [[BatmanGambit playing on her arrogance and impatience to lure her into a trap]].
* NightmareFace: It appears during his BreakingSpeech to Gretel and is based on [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13409218090A18920100&page=47#1156 the photo of his RPer]].
* ObfuscatingStupidity: He used this in the early parts of his duel against Gretel, [[BatmanGambit playing on her arrogance and impatience to lure her into a trap]].
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* NightmareFace: It appears during his BreakingSpeech to Gretel and is based on [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13409218090A18920100&page=47#1156 the photo of his RPer]].
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* ShootTheDog: He orders his partner to read the mind of a helpless cultist then kill him. Naturally, [[WhatTheHellHero this horrifies the other members.]]
* SoftSpokenSadist: See TranquilFury below.
* SoftSpokenSadist: See TranquilFury below.
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* TranquilFury: Despite being utterly ''furious'' with Gretel, he rarely raises his voice against her, instead opting to [[MindRape slowly break her mind through psychological warfare.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: He recently curbstomped Denero into dust, showing that he might well be more than just a fanboy.
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* HeroicRROD: It appears David's duel with Denero resulted in him being temporarily weakened, as if it took a lot out of him just to do that.
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* WhatTheHellHero: He calls out Denero basically every time he shows up for being a jerk.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: He is inflicting this on both Marcus and Sylvestre. Never mind the Shadow Game, the deck he is using is essentially made as a collection of ''his favorite torture devices.'']]
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* DoNotTauntCthulhu: Marcus spent most of their first encounter mocking Haine. This proved to be a '''[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Very.]] [[ColdBloodedTorture Big.]] [[NotSoHarmlessVillain Mistake.]]'''
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* NoSell: To Gol'gar's ''Cosmic Nebula Force'' attack
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* OutOfTheInferno: Does this after completely [[NoSell No Selling]] Gol'gar's ''[[WaveMotionGun Cosmic Nebula Force]]'' attack.
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** And then he switches to a larger and more powerful XYZ Deck made purely to kill his five enemies as quickly as possible, using many cards used by the Barian Invaders of Yugioh Zexal.
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** And then he switches to a larger and more powerful XYZ Deck made purely to kill his five enemies as quickly as possible, using many cards used by the Barian Invaders of Yugioh Zexal.
Zexal. [[spoiler: Ironically, this deck ends up being ''easier'' for the duelists to beat.]]
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* MindRape: does this to one of the cultists.
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* YouKilledMyBrother: Subverted, since she hardly knew [[spoiler: Sylvestre]] and has no desire to avenge him.
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* YouKilledMyBrother: [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed my Brother]]: Subverted, since she hardly knew [[spoiler: Sylvestre]] and has no desire to avenge him.
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* {{Invisibility}}: Although all Duel Spirits are InisibleToNormals, he is able to make it so that no one is able to see him unless he want them to.
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* {{Invisibility}}: Although all Duel Spirits are InisibleToNormals, InvisibleToNormals, he is able to make it so that no one is able to see him unless he want them to.
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* Invisibility: Although all Duel Spirits are InisibleToNormals, he is able to make it so that no one is able to see him unless he want them to.
* Jerkass
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* Invisibility: {{Invisibility}}: Although all Duel Spirits are InisibleToNormals, he is able to make it so that no one is able to see him unless he want them to.
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* Invisibility: Although all Duel Spirits are InisibleToNormals, he is able to make it so that no one is able to see him unless he want them to.
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* EnemyWithin: A Duel Spirit, apparently.
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* TheCorruption: The "Power of Chaos".
* EnemyWithin: A Duel Spirit, apparently. And now he might have another one.
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** And now he's using a vastly more powerful "Chaos" deck.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: He's actively fighting the darker side of his "power".
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: He's actively fighting the darker side of his "power".
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** And then he switches to a larger and more powerful XYZ Deck made purely to kill his five enemies as quickly as possible, using many cards used by the Barian Invaders of Yugioh Zexal.
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* BadassAbnormal: Very recently revealed to be not quite mundane.
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought. He claims to be an "Apophis Guardian", and was the one who told Avrum about the threat posed by Apophis. Even so, there are numerous mysterious facts about his personality, let alone his bizarre habit of sneaking around the Academy.]] Then again, considering that the cast of this show consists of, at last count, a borderline sociopath, an 'Outseer', a 'Dualmind' multiple people with Duel Spirits, a hacker, a thief with a dark past, a boy possesed by an evil sword and another who can somehow fight Shadow duels despite not having a spirit, David is ''still'' probably the closest thing to a normal person at this school.
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought. He claims to be an "Apophis Guardian", and was the one who told Avrum about the threat posed by Apophis. Even so, there are numerous mysterious facts about his personality, let alone his bizarre habit of sneaking around the Academy.]] Then again, considering that the cast of this show consists of, at last count, a borderline sociopath, an 'Outseer', a 'Dualmind' 'Dualmind', multiple people with Duel Spirits, a hacker, a thief with a dark past, a boy possesed by an evil sword and another who can somehow fight Shadow duels despite not having a spirit, David is ''still'' probably the closest thing to a normal person at this school.
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought. He claims to be an "Apophis Guardian", and was the one who told Avrum about the threat posed by Apophis. Even so, there are numerous mysterious facts about his personality, let alone his bizarre habit of sneaking around the Academy.]]
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought. He claims to be an "Apophis Guardian", and was the one who told Avrum about the threat posed by Apophis. Even so, there are numerous mysterious facts about his personality, let alone his bizarre habit of sneaking around the Academy.]]
]] Then again, considering that the cast of this show consists of, at last count, a borderline sociopath, an 'Outseer', a 'Dualmind' multiple people with Duel Spirits, a hacker, a thief with a dark past, a boy possesed by an evil sword and another who can somehow fight Shadow duels despite not having a spirit, David is ''still'' probably the closest thing to a normal person at this school.
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought. He claims to be an "Apophis Guardian", and was the one who told Avrum about the threat posed by Apophis. Even so, there are numerous mysterious facts about his personality, let alone his bizarre habit of sneaking around the Academy.]]
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* INeedYouStronger / YouAreNotReady: He wants to try to duel Denero again in order to try to make him less of a jerk in order to make the party "complete".
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* INeedYouStronger / YouAreNotReady: He wants to try to duel Denero again in order to try to make him less of a jerk in order to make the party "complete". Though it has the nasty caveat of David inwardly threatening to "discard" Denero if he doesn't shape up.
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!!!"Impressive, truly impressive. But there is one thing you've failed to consider..."
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!!!"Impressive, truly ''truly'' impressive. [[IAmNotLeftHanded But there is one thing you've failed to consider..."]]"
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* BadassBystander: Not afraid to stand up against a scary Denero for the girl he seems to like, [[spoiler: even less scared to tell him in a frank manner why he sucks, and then curbstomp him.]]
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* BadassBystander: Not afraid to stand up against a scary Denero for the girl he seems to like, [[spoiler: even less scared to tell him in a frank manner why he sucks, and then curbstomp him. And that was when David was at his ''weakest''.]]
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* HiddenDepths: It seems there is definitely more to David than meets the eye. And he definitely knows a lot more than he says.
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* HiddenDepths: It seems there is definitely more to David than meets the eye. And he definitely knows a lot more than he says. [[spoiler: He is apparently very devoted to making sure the heroes face Apophis, but is willing to do anything to make sure this comes about. He also spies on people, and seems to have hidden a lot of issues.]]
* INeedYouStronger / YouAreNotReady: He wants to try to duel Denero again in order to try to make him less of a jerk in order to make the party "complete".
* INeedYouStronger / YouAreNotReady: He wants to try to duel Denero again in order to try to make him less of a jerk in order to make the party "complete".
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* MasterActor: He conceals his more courageous side under the guise of a cowardly nerd, and even this is revealed to be an act, in that he's actually vastly more guileful and powerful than we thought, and used the image of a secretly courageous person for his plans, whatever they may be.
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* YouKilledMyBrother: Subverted, since she hardly knew [[spoiler: Sylvestre]] and has no desire to avenge him.
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** Then there's the question of who's agenda he serves. [[SelfishGoodSelfishEvil His own]]? [[BigBad Apophis's]]? [[BiggerBad The monsters sealed by Apophis]]? [[BigGood The other Gods]]? Or ''[[ThePowersThatBe someone else]] [[OutsideContextVillain entirely]]?''
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** Then there's the question of who's agenda he serves. [[SelfishGoodSelfishEvil His own]]? own? [[BigBad Apophis's]]? [[BiggerBad The monsters sealed by Apophis]]? [[BigGood The other Gods]]? Or ''[[ThePowersThatBe someone else]] [[OutsideContextVillain entirely]]?''
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** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up and fight].]''
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** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up and fight].]''fight.]]''
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The son of the wealthy Kyleman family, Marcus is probably the most... "[[CloudCuckooLander unique]]" duellist in the academy.
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The son of the wealthy Kyleman family, Marcus is probably the most... "[[CloudCuckooLander "[[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} unique]]" duellist in the academy.
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* CloudCuckooLander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Probably the most absent-minded of the duellists.
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* CloudCuckoolander: He has a strange train of thought. He tends to say very odd, random things, and contributes to conversations in odd, inexplicable ways.
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* CloudCuckoolander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: He has a strange train of thought. He tends to say very odd, random things, and contributes to conversations in odd, inexplicable ways.
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* CloudCuckooLander: Occasionally. Though it's lessened since CerebusSyndrome kicked in.
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* CloudCuckooLander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Occasionally. Though it's lessened since CerebusSyndrome kicked in.
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: It is very, very difficult to tell which side he's on, if he has one aside from his own, or what kind of person he really is underneath all of the false fronts, lies, and guileful behavior.
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: It is very, very difficult to tell which side he's on, if he has one aside from his own, or what kind of person he really is underneath all of the false fronts, lies, and guileful behavior. Even his answers have vague meanings, and could be construed differently.
* BadassAbnormal: Very recently revealed to be not quite mundane.
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* ShoutOut / {{Expy}}: In general, he seems reminiscent of Shingetsu Rei. He is aloof and mysterious, while pretending to be goofy and unassuming around others, and has shown hints of a darker, more mysterious side of his personality. He even calls himself a "Apophis Guardian".
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: It is very, very difficult to tell which side he's on, if he has one aside from his own, or what kind of person he really is underneath all of the false fronts, lies, and guileful behavior.
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* BadassBystander: Not afraid to stand up against a scary Denero for the girl he seems to like, [[spoiler: even less scared to tell him in a frank manner why he sucks, and then curbstomp him into dust.]]
* CloudCuckoolander: He has a strange train of thought.
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* BadassBystander: Not afraid to stand up against a scary Denero for the girl he seems to like, [[spoiler: even less scared to tell him in a frank manner why he sucks, and then curbstomp him into dust.him.]]
* CloudCuckoolander: He has a strange train of thought. He tends to say very odd, random things, and contributes to conversations in odd, inexplicable ways.
* CloudCuckoolander: He has a strange train of thought. He tends to say very odd, random things, and contributes to conversations in odd, inexplicable ways.
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* CowardlyLion: In large groups, he seems shy and awkward. When he's in less packed spaces, he is far more courageous.
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* CowardlyLion: In large groups, he seems shy and awkward. When he's in less packed spaces, he is far more courageous. [[spoiler: Subverted, though, in that this is an act.]]
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: He seems to be a somewhat dimwitted, cowardly sort when being watched by others, and who can only be courageous when fighting to defend a girl he likes. [[spoiler: This front was momentarily dispelled when he became quite serious at the end of his duel with Denero, dishing out a very brutal Reason You Suck Speech.]]
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: He seems to be a somewhat dimwitted, cowardly sort when being watched by others, and who can only be courageous when fighting to defend a girl he likes. [[spoiler: This front was momentarily dispelled when he became quite serious at the end of his duel with Denero, dishing out a very brutal Reason You Suck Speech.]] And ever since then, he simply stopped being quite so ditzy and cowardly, and has become more mysterious.]]
* ShoutOut / {{Expy}}: In general, he seems reminiscent of Shingetsu Rei. He is aloof and mysterious, while pretending to be goofy and unassuming around others, and has shown hints of a darker, more mysterious side of his personality.
* ShoutOut / {{Expy}}: In general, he seems reminiscent of Shingetsu Rei. He is aloof and mysterious, while pretending to be goofy and unassuming around others, and has shown hints of a darker, more mysterious side of his personality.
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* TortureTechnician: [[spoiler: Just like in the original series]], his deck is based around inflicting as much suffering as possible. A task he takes to with ''gleeful'' relish.
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* TheGhost: has yet to actually appear in any fashion. Nevertheless, he is still the driving force behind all the cultists.
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* TheGhost: has yet to actually appear in any fashion. Nevertheless, he it is still the driving force behind all the cultists.
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* KnightOfCerebus: He's yet to appear, but the very idea of his existence and presence, paints a feeling of menace that the previous TournamentArc never had.
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TheGodBehindTheMan]]: He's the one the cultists all serve.
* OmnicidalManiac: It's goal is to destroy all of existence.
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Takes the form of a giant Serpent.
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* CowardlyLion: In large groups, he seems shy and awkward. When he's in less packed spaces, he is far more courageous. [[spoiler: Shown to be a front, underneath the front, David is a far stranger, more enigmatic individual.]]
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* CowardlyLion: In large groups, he seems shy and awkward. When he's in less packed spaces, he is far more courageous. [[spoiler: Shown to be a front, underneath the front, David is a far stranger, more enigmatic individual.]]
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* EnigmaticMinion: His role, apparently. Despite early appearances, it seems he has occupied a strange role in the events. He alternates between responses to events, seems to have a pseudo-mystical view point and possibly is more involved than anyone thought.
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* WildCard: With more and more of his darker personality being revealed, it is becoming increasingly difficult to define where his loyalties lie. Is he [[TheMole a spy]] [[EnigmaticMinion for Apophis]], or an AloofAlly for our side? Is he PlayingBothSides against each other, or is he [[AllPowerfulBystander content to watch the Fireworks]].
** Then there's the question of who's agenda he serves. [[SelfishGoodSelfishEvil His own]]? [[BigBad Apophis's]]? [[BiggerBad The monsters sealed by Apophis]]? [[BigGood The other Gods]]? Or ''[[ThePowersThatBe someone else]] [[OutsideContextVillain entirely]]?''
** Then there's the question of who's agenda he serves. [[SelfishGoodSelfishEvil His own]]? [[BigBad Apophis's]]? [[BiggerBad The monsters sealed by Apophis]]? [[BigGood The other Gods]]? Or ''[[ThePowersThatBe someone else]] [[OutsideContextVillain entirely]]?''
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* CowardlyLion: In large groups, he seems shy and awkward. When he's in less packed spaces, he is far more courageous. [[spoiler: Shown to be a front, underneath the front, David is a far stranger, more enigmatic individual.]]
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal.
* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with the duellists fighting Apophis, and he is, as stated, their biggest fan.
* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with the duellists fighting Apophis, and he is, as stated, their biggest fan.
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A student at the Academy who always wears sunglasses, has spiky hair, and is possibly one of the only normal guys in the cast. He seems to have a thing for Crystal.
Crystal. [[spoiler: However, recently, David has shown a slightly darker and more Badass side to his personality. He curbstomped Denero into dust, completely turned his appearance around, and he appears to have a few more internalized...problems...than we thought.]]
* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with theduellists duelists fighting Apophis, and he is, as stated, their biggest fan.
* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with the
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* HiddenDepths: It seems there is definitely more to David than meets the eye.
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* HiddenDepths: It seems there is definitely more to David than meets the eye. And he definitely knows a lot more than he says.
* ItAmusedMe: Apparently, his real reason for flirting up a storm with Crystal is because he was either bored or he needed something to do.
* ItAmusedMe: Apparently, his real reason for flirting up a storm with Crystal is because he was either bored or he needed something to do.
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* Large Ham: Sometimes, during a duel, he becomes the largest of hams.
* Bi the Way: According to Word of God.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Well, everyone, really. A more personal comparison could be his sister - stated to be a semi-finalist. Not that this really seems to affect him in any way.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Well, everyone, really. A more personal comparison could be his sister - -- stated to be a semi-finalist. Not that this really seems to affect him in any way.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname / FailOSuckyname: Art's real name, [[spoiler: [[WorldOfWarcraft Arthas]] M. Caltenrich]].
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* AwesomeMcCoolname / FailOSuckyname: Art's real name, [[spoiler: [[WorldOfWarcraft [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft Arthas]] M. Caltenrich]].Caltenrich.
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* [[spoiler: TookALevelInBadass: Using Deathcaliber on his monsters propels them from one relative "class" in attack power into another, and he generally has a lot of cards that increase attack power now.]]
* YouCantFightFate: He is showing some signs of another persona taking hold, namely, one based heavily on the [[spoiler: Lich King]]. Though he doesn't say it, this ''deeply'' troubles Art.
* YouCantFightFate: He is showing some signs of another persona taking hold, namely, one based heavily on the [[spoiler: Lich King]]. Though he doesn't say it, this ''deeply'' troubles Art.
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* BreakTheHaughty: He is incredibl arrogant in his early appearences, this soon changes following an absolutely ''crippling'' defeat at the hands of Peter. [[FromBadToWorse To make matters worse, he then finds himself a target for Gretel's bullying, who precedes to degrade and humiliate him even further]]. And to add to [[UpToEleven THAT]], he becomes the first duelist to lose to a cultist and is nearly crippled as a result.
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* BreakTheHaughty: He is incredibl incredibly arrogant in his early appearences, appearances, this soon changes following an absolutely ''crippling'' defeat at the hands of Peter. [[FromBadToWorse To make matters worse, he then finds himself a target for Gretel's bullying, who precedes to degrade and humiliate him even further]]. And to add to [[UpToEleven THAT]], that]], he becomes the first duelist duellist to lose to a cultist and is nearly crippled as a result.
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* TheHeart: He falls into this role near the end of the Apophis Arc.
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** Supposedly Jacques is a very good duelist. This gets harder to believe with every loss he receives.
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** Supposedly Jacques is a very good duelist.duellist. This gets harder to believe with every loss he receives.
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** JerkassFacade: An act he conciously maintain's because he thinks it make him look "cool"
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Shows up around Regulus.
* PetTheDog: He is much nicer around Regulus after [[spoiler: Regulus became the first duellist to beat him during the tournament,]] and is [[spoiler: the first duellist to express concern for him when he is temporarily rendered comatose.]]
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Shows up around Regulus.
* PetTheDog: He is much nicer around Regulus after [[spoiler: Regulus became the first duellist to beat him during the tournament,]] and is [[spoiler: the first duellist to express concern for him when he is temporarily rendered comatose.]]
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** JerkassFacade: An act he conciously maintain's consciously maintains because he thinks it make him look "cool"
"cool".
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold:Shows His heat of gold shows up around Regulus.
* PetTheDog: He is much nicer around Regulus after[[spoiler: Regulus became the first duellist to beat him during the tournament,]] tournament, and is [[spoiler: the first duellist to express concern for him when he is temporarily rendered comatose.]]
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold:
* PetTheDog: He is much nicer around Regulus after
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Definitely shows signs of this during his duel with the Skull Knight as he uses the Skull Knight's hatred and his own darkness as a weapon.
** Once he finds out what happened to Marcus he encourages Gol'Gar to mind rape and kill Haine.
** Once he finds out what happened to Marcus he encourages Gol'Gar to mind rape and kill Haine.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: GoodIsNotSoft:
** Definitely shows signs of this during his duel with the Skull Knight as he uses the Skull Knight's hatred and his own darkness as a weapon.
** Once he finds out what happened toMarcus Marcus, he encourages Gol'Gar to mind rape MindRape and kill Haine.
** Definitely shows signs of this during his duel with the Skull Knight as he uses the Skull Knight's hatred and his own darkness as a weapon.
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* TeamDad: What he ''tries'' to act like at times. He's becoming much better at it as the series progresses.
** Really comes to light when he comforts Marcus.
** Really comes to light when he comforts Marcus.
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* TeamDad: What he ''tries'' to act like at times. He's becoming much better at it as the series progresses.
** Reallyprogresses; it really comes to light when he comforts Marcus.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Gets this from Jacques after his decision to abandon Marcus. Ironic, since Marcus had ''wanted'' them to leave.
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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
** Gets this from Jacques after his decision to abandon Marcus. Ironic, since Marcus had ''wanted'' them to leave.
** Gets this from Jacques after his decision to abandon Marcus. Ironic, since Marcus had ''wanted'' them to leave.
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* AloofAlly: Played with, minus the BadAss aspect. While he's happy to help the group and is reasonably polite to them, he doesn't really consider himself to be part of the team, and considers their alliance to be more along the lines of a business deal.
** To the point where he is legitimately shocked to hear Sigmund call him a friend.
** To the point where he is legitimately shocked to hear Sigmund call him a friend.
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* AloofAlly: Played with, minus the BadAss {{Badass}} aspect. While he's happy to help the group and is reasonably polite to them, he doesn't really consider himself to be part of the team, and considers their alliance to be more along the lines of a business deal.
** Todeal; it's exaggerated to the point where he is legitimately shocked to hear Sigmund call him a friend.
** To
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* BerserkButton: NEVER bully someone in front of him, and if you do, and you continue to belittle others, then pray to '''GOD''' that you can back it up or Marcus will ''destroy'' you. As Gretel found out the hard way.
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* BerserkButton: NEVER Never bully someone in front of him, and if you do, and you continue to belittle others, then pray to '''GOD''' '''God''' that you can back it up or Marcus will ''destroy'' you. As Gretel found out the hard way.
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** During the duel with Gretel, he used Obfuscating Stupidity both to lure Gretel into a false sense of security, and also to simply [[TheGadfly annoy the crap out of her]]. (She had ''really'' pissed him off with her arrogant attitude before the duel, so he was trying to not just beat, but humiliate her) When Marcus saw the face down cards on Gretel's side of the field, he was almost positive that they were traps. However, he also realized that it was better to spring them ''now'', and lose a weak monster, than to spring them later and lose one of his trump cards. Furthermore, he also had three separate traps of his own that he could use to counter her retaliation. Now, if he were to use the same cold, confident and eloquent attitude he had been using in the previous duels, then it would be obvious to Gretel that he had a plan. And Marcus knew that Gretel was intelligent enough to easily figure it out. (After all, if ''he'' could figure it out, then so could she.) But by acting like a fool, he could make his reckless actions look like the work of an incompetent amateur who didn't know what he was doing. Furthermore, by being as annoyingly retarded as possible, he manipulated Gretel into wanting to end the duel as quickly as possible, which meant she would be quick to play her strongest monsters in order to take him down as quickly as possible, little knowing that he had a surprise waiting for them. His plan worked perfectly. She wasted her backrow and Mystical Space Typhoon on cards that could easily be replaced, and in her impatience to end the sham of a duel and shut up the babbling idiot, she threw one of her beloved XYZ monsters right into the path of a Mirror Force. leaving Alien Hypno free to attack her directly.
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** During the duel with Gretel, he used Obfuscating Stupidity ObfuscatingStupidity both to lure Gretel into a false sense of security, and also to simply [[TheGadfly annoy the crap out of her]]. (She had ''really'' pissed him off with her arrogant attitude before the duel, so he was trying to not just beat, but humiliate her) When Marcus saw the face down face-down cards on Gretel's side of the field, he was almost positive that they were traps. However, he also realized that it was better to spring them ''now'', and lose a weak monster, than to spring them later and lose one of his trump cards. Furthermore, he also had three separate traps of his own that he could use to counter her retaliation. Now, if he were to use the same cold, confident and eloquent attitude he had been using in the previous duels, then it would be obvious to Gretel that he had a plan. And Marcus knew that Gretel was intelligent enough to easily figure it out. (After all, if ''he'' could figure it out, then so could she.) But by acting like a fool, he could make his reckless actions look like the work of an incompetent amateur who didn't know what he was doing. Furthermore, by being as annoyingly retarded as possible, he manipulated Gretel into wanting to end the duel as quickly as possible, which meant she would be quick to play her strongest monsters in order to take him down as quickly as possible, little knowing that he had a surprise waiting for them. His plan worked perfectly. She wasted her backrow and Mystical Space Typhoon on cards that could easily be replaced, and in her impatience to end the sham of a duel and shut up the babbling idiot, she threw one of her beloved XYZ Xyz monsters right into the path of a Mirror Force. leaving Alien Hypno free to attack her directly.
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* ComplexityAddiction: He has a tendance to use rather elaborate battle strategies.
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* ComplexityAddiction: He has a tendance tendency to use rather elaborate battle strategies.
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* {{Determinator}}: Marcus states outright that he can never be defeated, because he will always be back for more.
** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up and fight]]''
** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up and fight]]''
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* {{Determinator}}: {{Determinator}}:
** Marcus states outright that he can never be defeated, because he will always be back for more.
** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up andfight]]''fight].]''
** Marcus states outright that he can never be defeated, because he will always be back for more.
** This is one of the reason's losing to Haine effects him so badly. For the first time in his life ''[[HeroicBSOD Marcus is too scared to get back up and
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* EpicFail: During the battle royale, he screws up his entire strategy TWICE, by misreading his cards.
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* EpicFail: During the battle royale, he screws up his entire strategy TWICE, twice by misreading his cards.
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* GenreSavvy: Despite his arrogant act, Marcus is an extremely cautious duelist who absolutely ''refuses'' to underestimate his opponents.
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* GenreSavvy: Despite his arrogant act, Marcus is an extremely cautious duelist duellist who absolutely ''refuses'' to underestimate his opponents.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Briefly has this reaction when he believes that the cultist he [[spoiler: {{Mind Rape}}d and killed]] was a friend of Roxas. [[SubvertedTrope He gets over it in seconds, however, when he finds out that Roxas objected on principle alone]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Briefly has this reaction when he believes that the cultist he [[spoiler: {{Mind Rape}}d and killed]] killed was a friend of Roxas. [[SubvertedTrope He gets over it in seconds, however, when he finds out that Roxas objected on principle alone]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: A subtle example during the Tag Duel with Denero. While his strategy is solid, it unfortuneatly has the unforeseen consequence of being indirectly responsible for Denero merging his mind with the Meteor and becoming more aggresivre and unstable as a result.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: A subtle example during the Tag Duel with Denero. While his strategy is solid, it unfortuneatly unfortunately has the unforeseen consequence of being indirectly responsible for Denero merging his mind with the Meteor and becoming more aggresivre aggressive and unstable as a result.
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* ParentalNeglect: While they genuinely love him and were never abusive, Marcus's parents never knew how to "handle" his quirks when he was growing up, and with the demands of their jobs, this lead them to be quite distant, leading Marcus to believe that everyone considers him a burden.
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* ParentalNeglect: While they genuinely love him and were never abusive, Marcus's Marcus' parents never knew how to "handle" his quirks when he was growing up, and with the demands of their jobs, this lead them to be quite distant, leading Marcus to believe that everyone considers him a burden.
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* ShootTheDog: He orders his partner to [[spoiler: read the mind of a helpless cultist then kill him.]] Naturally, [[WhatTheHellHero this horrifies the other members.]]
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* ShootTheDog: He orders his partner to [[spoiler: read the mind of a helpless cultist then kill him.]] him. Naturally, [[WhatTheHellHero this horrifies the other members.]]
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* TheStoic: He's likely the most calm and levelheaded of the group. [[DissonantSerenity Too a sometimes disturbing degree.]]
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* TheStoic: He's likely the most calm and levelheaded level-headed of the group. [[DissonantSerenity Too To a sometimes disturbing degree.]]
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* TheRival: To Peter and Gretel
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** To Peter and
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* TokenEvilTeammate: After what he did to the [[spoiler:cultist]]...
** The others seem to have dropped this attitude though. The fact that they had to listen to him being tortured likely helped.
** The others seem to have dropped this attitude though. The fact that they had to listen to him being tortured likely helped.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: After what he did to the [[spoiler:cultist]]...
** The others seem to have dropped this attitude though. The fact that they had to listen to him being tortured likely helped.cultist...
** The others seem to have dropped this attitude though. The fact that they had to listen to him being tortured likely helped.
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* WhatTheHellHero: With basically the entire cast freaking out on him for his [[spoiler:killing and [[MindRape Mind-Raping]] of the cultists]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: With basically the entire cast freaking out on him for his [[spoiler:killing killing and [[MindRape Mind-Raping]] of the cultists]].cultists.
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* HoYay: '''MASSIVE''' amounts of this with Art during their first encounter, to the point where it almost sounds like he's ''flirting'' with him.
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* HoYay: '''MASSIVE''' Massive amounts of this with Art during their first encounter, to the point where it almost sounds like he's ''flirting'' with him.
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* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with the duelists fighting Apophis, and he is, as stated, their biggest fan.
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* AscendedFanBoy: He gets to hang out with the duelists duellists fighting Apophis, and he is, as stated, their biggest fan.