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* FirstGirlWins: [[{{Metroid}} Samus]] in 10.5, [[Franchise/ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]] in 11.
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* BritishAccents: He's certainly justified in their use.
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A contributor with an understandably British sense of humour. Most of his comics derive from Nickelodeon cartoons (WesternAnimation/TheFairlyOddParents and [[WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants SpongeBob SquarePants]] especially) and WorldWarII paraphernalia.
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* HannibalHasAPoint: In an exceptionally rare instance of the ''villain'' having the last laugh, Hacker Prime challenges whether [=CivGeneral=]'s pursuit is motivated by anything more than petty revenge. The revelation that Hackergeddon was the work of android doubles means his ''true'' culpability remains ambiguous, and he questions what purpose his death would serve given the rest of the world assumes his last stand was at Wetickra. [=CivGeneral=] kills him anyway just as Zheng He attempts to intervene, then immediately admits that the admiral would have wanted to take him to trial.
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* OurGodsAreGreater: indeed, all the Essental Beings.
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* OurGodsAreGreater: OurGodsAreDifferent: indeed, all the Essental Beings.
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* CoolCar: His [[Film/BackToTheFuture DeLorean]] TimeMachine
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A contributor with an understandably British sense of humour. Most of his comics derive from Nickelodeon cartoons (TheFairlyOddParents (WesternAnimation/TheFairlyOddParents and [[SpongeBobSquarePants [[WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants SpongeBob SquarePants]] especially) and WorldWarII paraphernalia.
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A newer contributor active midway through DYOS XI, self-professed homosexual, [[FurryFandom furry]], and SonicTheHedgehog fan, all of which he plays for laughs.
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A newer contributor active midway through DYOS XI, self-professed homosexual, [[FurryFandom [[UsefulNotes/FurryFandom furry]], and SonicTheHedgehog fan, all of which he plays for laughs.
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* JadeColoredGlasses: Partly due to depression, partly due to DYOS 10.5's shift towards GreyAndGrayMorality, and partly due to his experience in ImperiumOfftopicum.
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* JadeColoredGlasses: Partly due to depression, partly due to DYOS 10.5's shift towards GreyAndGrayMorality, and partly due to his experience in ImperiumOfftopicum.''Roleplay/ImperiumOfftopicum''.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Coruscant is initially skeptical of the Union's invasion of Canada, but after [=Captain2=] joins the Space Nazis in DYOS 10.5, New Port pledges unconditional support to the occupation.
* RageAgainstTheAuthor as a result of winding up in harrowing circumstances for [[ButtMonkey little-to-no reason]].
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* BreaktheHaughty: Self-inflicted. Afterwords, he started to become a much nicer person.
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* BreaktheHaughty: Self-inflicted. Afterwords, he started to become a much nicer person.BreakTheHaughty: Self-inflicted as part of his apology for the depression period, signalling the mellowing of his character.
* CreatorBreakdown: A layoff in December 2009 spiralled into clinical depression in 2010, leading to frequent fights with fellow contributors and chronic CreatorBacklash. His work's quality nosedived as his plots became blatant WishFulfillment, possibly as a coping mechanism.
* CreatorRecovery: His depression slowly began to ease in latter 2010, and a dramatic turnaround occurred in 2014.
* CreatorRecovery: His depression slowly began to ease in latter 2010, and a dramatic turnaround occurred in 2014.
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* FourthDateMarriage: to [[Franchise/ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]]. Technically they knew each other, but that was year ago.
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* FourthDateMarriage: to [[Franchise/ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]]. Technically they knew each other, but that was year ago.years ago and the flame had to be lighted afresh.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation
* HairTriggerTemper: He's been a lot better at controlling his temper.
* HumanPopsicle: For the first half of DYOS 11. WordofGod states it was an explanation for his three month absence.
* JadeColoredGlasses
* HairTriggerTemper: He's been a lot better at controlling his temper.
* HumanPopsicle: For the first half of DYOS 11. WordofGod states it was an explanation for his three month absence.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation
HeroicSelfDeprecation: A reflection of his depression in 2010. Combined with jealousy toward his fellow contributors it briefly made him TheResenter (especially of Thorvald), becoming so bad that any praise for colleagues' comics would spark passive-aggressive begs for attention. In one scene during the time travel arc, his character reacts furiously after learning that Thorvald kills Wesker in Bad 2011.
* HairTriggerTemper:He's been Reached its peak in 2010, again stemming from depression. Still a lot better at controlling his temper.
trademark of the character, although the forumer has since mellowed considerably.
* HumanPopsicle:For the first half of He justified his delayed entry into DYOS 11. WordofGod states it was an explanation for 10 in-universe as a result of his three month absence.
character being imprisoned by cryostasis. By the time resistance fighters free him, the Avatar Wars are well underway.
*JadeColoredGlassesJadeColoredGlasses: Partly due to depression, partly due to DYOS 10.5's shift towards GreyAndGrayMorality, and partly due to his experience in ImperiumOfftopicum.
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* LukeYouAreMyFather: During the time travel plot, he meets his future daughter Nozomi when a separate accident lands her in 2003.
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* GenreShift: Most notable example. His early comics were comedic shorts; when he got involved in the Gem arc, he took on a much darker tone and the trappings of a psychological thriller. Now he’s back to the funny pages.
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* GenreShift: Most notable example. His early comics were comedic shorts; when he got involved in the Gem arc, he took on a much darker tone and the trappings of a psychological thriller. Now he’s back to After flirting with the funny pages.pages again, he's settled on existential black comedy.
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Brother of Stylesrj. When they first joined in DYOS 5, they took turns writing what was essentially the same comic. While they continue to share characters, over time they came to develop divergent styles. Stylesjl's comics are primarily dialogue-driven shorts that often include references to current events. Recently they follow a two-part formula, where the former half deals with the ongoing story and the latter half is devoted to a FourthWallMailSlot.
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Brother of Stylesrj. When they first joined in DYOS 5, they took turns writing what was essentially the same comic. While they continue to share characters, over time they came to develop divergent styles. Stylesjl's comics are primarily dialogue-driven shorts that often include references to current events. Recently they follow a two-part formula, where the former half deals with the ongoing story and the latter half is devoted to a FourthWallMailSlot.
* FourthWallMailSlot: Midway through DYOS 11, he devoted half his comic to fan letters, typically from comic characters.
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Brother of Stylesjl. When they first joined in DYOS 5, they took turns writing what was essentially the same comic. While they continue to share characters, over time they came to develop divergent styles. Stylesrj's comics carry a campy action feel and begin and end with a narrator segment that occasionally spins off into its own subplot.
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Brother of Stylesjl. When they first joined in DYOS 5, they took turns writing what was essentially the same comic. While they continue to share characters, over time they came to develop divergent styles. Stylesrj's comics carry a campy action feel and begin and end with elements of a narrator segment that occasionally spins off into its own subplot.sitcom.
* IJustWantToBeNormal
* CanonWelding: Many of the characters introduced after he started drawing herald from an unpublished personal project, and Toyoda's inclusion in particular has led to extensive {{revision}} of DYOS history.
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* {{Tuckerization}}: At least two of his characters are named after people he knows, although he insists their personalities are completely unrelated.
* BeenThereShapedHistory: choxorn's sleuthing links a handful of military bases built by him to major events in DYOS (specifically, Quiet October and the War of the Steppes in DYOS 6), although whether he was ''personally'' involved isn't made clear.
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* FallenOnHardTimesJob: Between the end of DYOS X and the rise of the Enclave, he worked as a janitor.
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* LastGirlWins: [[DeadorAlive Ayane]] in 11.
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* LastGirlWins: [[DeadorAlive [[VideoGame/DeadorAlive Ayane]] in 11.
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[note]]Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]][[/note]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' ''VideoGame/HalfLife2'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[note]]Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]][[/note]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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* TheBadGuyWins: In DYOS 10, [=CivCube=]'s evil avatar killed him off and has remained his main character since.[[hottip:*: He's still called [=CivCube=] by the other characters, though.]] May represent a shift to VillainProtagonist.
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* TheBadGuyWins: In DYOS 10, [=CivCube=]'s evil avatar killed him off and has remained his main character since.[[hottip:*: [[note]] He's still called [=CivCube=] by the other characters, though.]] [[/note]] May represent a shift to VillainProtagonist.
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* ScarsAreForever: An abrupt comic by Nuclear Kid had Kan' taken hostage and his left leg amputated. While he admitted to sometimes forgetting which leg he'd lost, in all future stories Kan' depicted himself with a peg leg.[[hottip:*:Following his DYOS 11 regeneration, however, it's flesh-and-bone once more.]]
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* ScarsAreForever: An abrupt comic by Nuclear Kid had Kan' taken hostage and his left leg amputated. While he admitted to sometimes forgetting which leg he'd lost, in all future stories Kan' depicted himself with a peg leg.[[hottip:*:Following [[note]]Following his DYOS 11 regeneration, however, it's flesh-and-bone once more.]]
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, Grievous[[note]]Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]] Grievous]][[/note]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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!!Taniciusfox
A newer contributor, self-professed homosexual, [[FurryFandom furry]], and SonicTheHedgehog fan, all of which he plays for laughs.
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* LiteralSplitPersonality: In DYOS X, he explains his avatars as each embodying a different aspect of his soul; unlike the other heroes, he defeats them by assimilating them back into himself.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Olive oil, introduced as a gag in DYOS 6.
* BastardUnderstudy: Originally recruited as TheApprentice to Mara Jade, she uses Umbrella's attack on New Port to assemble her own army. She betrays Mara during evacuation, leaving her for dead and absorbing what remains of Umbrella into the Second Empire.
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Chief villain of DYOS 11, at least at the outset.
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Chief villain of DYOS 11, at least at the outset. outset, controversial for remaining the focus of the main story despite rapid onset of VillainDecay. Initially believed to be a ChaoticEvil marauder, the character pursued by the heroes is revealed to be a decoy as the true Hacker toils to create his own universe.
* AffablyEvil: As demonstrated by his interactions with the Narratorspace Gang, at least until Haruhi's antics collided with the canon.
* DependingOnTheWriter: Perhaps more so than any villain previous. e350tb's original SequelHook portrayed him as a ruthless strategist about to launch a concerted assault. [=CivCube=] showed him as pitiless, but also playful. The Styles brothers loaded him with interpersonal relationships such that he almost came across as a PunchClockVillain. In short, every contributor had a different take... [=CivGeneral=]'s, despite being the most prevalent, was arguably the least interesting.
* HannibalHasAPoint: In an exceptionally rare instance of the ''villain'' having the last laugh, Hacker Prime challenges whether [=CivGeneral=]'s pursuit is motivated by anything more than petty revenge. The revelation that Hackergeddon was the work of android doubles means his ''true'' culpability remains ambiguous, and he questions what purpose his death would serve given the rest of the world assumes his last stand was at Wetickra. [=CivGeneral=] kills him anyway just as Zheng He attempts to intervene, then immediately admits that the admiral would have wanted to take him to trial.
* DependingOnTheWriter: Perhaps more so than any villain previous. e350tb's original SequelHook portrayed him as a ruthless strategist about to launch a concerted assault. [=CivCube=] showed him as pitiless, but also playful. The Styles brothers loaded him with interpersonal relationships such that he almost came across as a PunchClockVillain. In short, every contributor had a different take... [=CivGeneral=]'s, despite being the most prevalent, was arguably the least interesting.
* HannibalHasAPoint: In an exceptionally rare instance of the ''villain'' having the last laugh, Hacker Prime challenges whether [=CivGeneral=]'s pursuit is motivated by anything more than petty revenge. The revelation that Hackergeddon was the work of android doubles means his ''true'' culpability remains ambiguous, and he questions what purpose his death would serve given the rest of the world assumes his last stand was at Wetickra. [=CivGeneral=] kills him anyway just as Zheng He attempts to intervene, then immediately admits that the admiral would have wanted to take him to trial.
* SelfDuplication: Employed as a diversion tactic when the heroes corner him on Wetickra. Hacker Prime reveals that previous encounters throughout the story were similarly android doubles.
* TrickBoss: Played completely straight with the introduction of Hacker Prime. As very few contributors were aware the plot twist was in the works, [=CivGeneral=]'s surprise was all too genuine.
* {{Ubermensch}}: In his [[EvilGloating villainous monologue]] to [=CivGeneral=], Hacker Prime lambastes a world that has enslaved itself to technology, boasting that in realizing and harnessing its "true" potential, he became [[AGodAmI a literal God from the machine]]. Now he seeks to exercise that boundless creativity by building his own reality.
* TrickBoss: Played completely straight with the introduction of Hacker Prime. As very few contributors were aware the plot twist was in the works, [=CivGeneral=]'s surprise was all too genuine.
* {{Ubermensch}}: In his [[EvilGloating villainous monologue]] to [=CivGeneral=], Hacker Prime lambastes a world that has enslaved itself to technology, boasting that in realizing and harnessing its "true" potential, he became [[AGodAmI a literal God from the machine]]. Now he seeks to exercise that boundless creativity by building his own reality.
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** Then came the climax, [[TookALevelInBadass and the "real" hacker took the stage.]]
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** Then came the climax, [[TookALevelInBadass and the "real" hacker Hacker took the stage.]]
* YouCantThwartStageOne: Despite the heroes ransacking his Wetickra headquarters, Hacker Prime reveals his ''true'' goal has just been achieved, and escapes to Xen.
* YouCantThwartStageOne: Despite the heroes ransacking his Wetickra headquarters, Hacker Prime reveals his ''true'' goal has just been achieved, and escapes to Xen.
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* BadassAbnormal in DYOS 10.5: Samus saves his life through a blood transfusion to counter TheVirus, imbuing him with Metroid and Chozo DNA.
** In DYOS 11, Wesker [[BroughtDownToNormal brings him down to normal]].
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* EmpoweredBadassNormal in DYOS 10.5: Samus saves his life through a blood transfusion to counter TheVirus, imbuing him with Metroid and Chozo DNA.
** In DYOS 11, Wesker [[BroughtDownToNormal brings him down to normal]].
** In DYOS 11, Wesker [[BroughtDownToNormal brings him down to normal]].
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* TheHero: He's the main protagonist in every major story arc. Recently he's tried to shake up his spot on the SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Sad but true. Especially when falling through the DespairEventHorizon after losing his job and [[ItGotWorse suffering a major depression]].
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Sad but true. Especially when falling through the DespairEventHorizon after losing his job and [[ItGotWorse suffering a major depression]].depression.
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* FourthDateMarriage: to [[ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]]. Technically they knew each other, but that was year ago.
* FirstGirlWins: [[{{Metroid}} Samus]] in 10.5, [[ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]] in 11.
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* FourthDateMarriage: to [[ResidentEvil [[Franchise/ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]]. Technically they knew each other, but that was year ago.
* FirstGirlWins: [[{{Metroid}} Samus]] in 10.5,[[ResidentEvil [[Franchise/ResidentEvil Jill Valentine]] in 11.
* FirstGirlWins: [[{{Metroid}} Samus]] in 10.5,
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* BLAMEpisode: BizarroEpisode: Most of his comics, especially the more recent contributions, are treated as this.
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The creator of DrawYourOwnStory. He was very active in the early years and has returned again; although like many others recently, new additions have been infrequent.
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The creator of DrawYourOwnStory.''Draw Your Own Story''. He was very active in the early years and has returned again; although like many others recently, new additions have been infrequent.
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Some of the notable characters from DrawYourOwnStory.''Webcomic/DrawYourOwnStory''. For a more complete (and '''much''' more detailed) list, see [[http://dyos.wikkii.com/wiki/Category:Characters its own wiki]].
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* DisContinuity: What usually happens to his comics.
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* CoolCar: His [[BackToTheFuture DeLorean]] TimeMachine
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} [[VideoGame/{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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A participant from the early years. While still active on the forums, he hasn't contributed since DYOS 5. Even so, he carries considerable star power, and is still referenced in new installments. Curt is in real life the creator of the independent comic series ''Total Fear''.
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A participant from the early years. While still active on the forums, he hasn't contributed since DYOS 5. Even so, he carries considerable star power, and is still referenced in new installments. Curt is in real life the creator of the independent comic series ''King Evil'' and ''Total Fear''.
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* WarIsHell: Despite the primarily comedic tone of his work, the few times he addresses the dark underbelly of conflict are arresting. Especially noteworthy is the fight for London late in DYOS 11.
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Sporadic contributor since DYOS
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Late in DYOS 11, he's reintroduced under his [[{{Webcomic/Homestuck}} Jack Noir]] avatar and attempts to kill Mariko for an EstablishingCharacterMoment, but is blocked by the DYOS Rules, as [=CivGeneral=] set her up as a recurring villain.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Although he followed the story closely, months often passed between contributions, and with the notable exception of DYOS 10 his subplots rarely reached meaningful closure.
!!Perfection
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Although he followed the story closely, months often passed between contributions, and with the notable exception of DYOS 10 his subplots rarely reached meaningful closure.
!!Perfection
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** Schisming Coruscant's empire probably isn't the best way to show up the "factional" politics of Earth.
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* VillainDecay: At the start of the story his actions were dangerously unpredictable; he'd commit random assassinations and in one instance obliterated downtown Sydney, Australia. Over time inaction on his part and the heroes' victories diminished his perceived threat. Now he's lost the villainous spotlight to Wesker and his beatdown by Marsha Conrad pretty much shattered any remaining air of menace.
** Until recently when he started to weaponize [[DwarfFortress carp]]
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* VillainDecay: At the start of the story his actions were dangerously unpredictable; he'd commit random assassinations and in one instance obliterated downtown Sydney, Australia. Over time inaction on his part and the heroes' victories diminished his perceived threat. Now he's Barely halfway through the story he lost the villainous spotlight to Wesker Wesker, and his beatdown by Marsha Conrad pretty much shattered any remaining air of menace.
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]]]] Grievous]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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* HollywoodAtheist: Declare your love for God, and he'll declare war on you!
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A fairly recent contributor notable as one of the few who consistently hand-draws the story. He's a sort of roving vigilante, traveling with [[AquaTeenHungerForce a giant walking milkshake]] and an assassin called Valerie.
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A fairly recent contributor notable as one of the few who consistently hand-draws the story. He's a sort of roving vigilante, traveling with [[AquaTeenHungerForce [[WesternAnimation/AquaTeenHungerForce a giant walking milkshake]] and an assassin called Valerie.
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* AmicablyDivorced from Jill within DYOS 11.
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** In DYOS 11, [[spoiler: Wesker [[BroughtDownToNormal brings him down to normal]].]]
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** In DYOS 11, [[spoiler: Wesker [[BroughtDownToNormal brings him down to normal]].]]
* AnyoneCanDie: Brutally and unapologetically. Supporting characters have been bumped off with little-to-no warning, and even [[spoiler:Spongebob and Sandy]] bit the bullet ([[spoiler:although they both earned a reprieve later]]).
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!!Kan' Sharuminar
Another veteran and hobby cartoonist. While he tries to remain active in new stories, he tends to drop out if the plot becomes overly convoluted. Even so, he carries a similar reputation as [=CurtSibling=].
Another veteran and hobby cartoonist. While he tries to remain active in new stories, he tends to drop out if the plot becomes overly convoluted. Even so, he carries a similar reputation as [=CurtSibling=].
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Another veteran and hobby cartoonist. While he tries
One-shot contributor to
* OneHitWonder: The "original" [=GuitarHero=]'s much-lauded [[http://forums.civfanatics.com/showthread.php?p=6447692#post6447692 comic]].
!!Kan' Sharuminar
Another veteran and hobby cartoonist. While he tries to remain active in new stories, he tends to drop out if the plot becomes overly convoluted. Even so, he carries a similar reputation as [=CurtSibling=].
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!!Kan' Sharuminar
Another veteran and hobby cartoonist. While he tries to remain active in new stories, he tends to drop out if the plot becomes overly convoluted. Even so, he carries a similar reputation as [=CurtSibling=].
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* ScarsAreForever: An abrupt comic by Nuclear Kid had Kan' taken hostage and his left leg amputated. While he admitted to sometimes forgetting which leg he'd lost, in all future stories Kan' depicted himself with a peg leg.
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* ScarsAreForever: An abrupt comic by Nuclear Kid had Kan' taken hostage and his left leg amputated. While he admitted to sometimes forgetting which leg he'd lost, in all future stories Kan' depicted himself with a peg leg.
leg.[[hottip:*:Following his DYOS 11 regeneration, however, it's flesh-and-bone once more.]]
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!!Lucifer
[=DaemonDD=]' s main character, an "Essential Being" whose ultimate aim is to rebuild the universe in his image. Despite the name, he shouldn't be confused with the Biblical {{Satan}}, who has appeared as a character in his own right.
[=DaemonDD=]' s main character, an "Essential Being" whose ultimate aim is to rebuild the universe in his image. Despite the name, he shouldn't be confused with the Biblical {{Satan}}, who has appeared as a character in his own right.
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[=DaemonDD=]' s main character, an "Essential Being" whose ultimate aim is to rebuild
A loose collection of villains introduced by e350tb in DYOS 10.5 known for using cloning technology, hence the
* FauxAffablyEvil: Colonel Sykes... until things fail to go according to plan.
* HeelFaceTurn: Two female clone soldiers, Fifteen and Seventeen, defect to the heroes after growing fed up with the Hacker in DYOS 11.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorum seemed to be heading in this direction when he was first introduced, until taillesskangaru started putting him in his stories.
!!Lucifer
[=DaemonDD=]' s main character, an "Essential Being" whose ultimate aim is to rebuild the universe in his image. Despite the name, he shouldn't be confused with the Biblical {{Satan}}, who has appeared as a character in his own right.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Two female clone soldiers, Fifteen and Seventeen, defect to the heroes after growing fed up with the Hacker in DYOS 11.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorum seemed to be heading in this direction when he was first introduced, until taillesskangaru started putting him in his stories.
!!Lucifer
[=DaemonDD=]' s main character, an "Essential Being" whose ultimate aim is to rebuild the universe in his image. Despite the name, he shouldn't be confused with the Biblical {{Satan}}, who has appeared as a character in his own right.
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The OppositeSexClone of [=CivGeneral=]. Originally intended for [=CivGeneral=] to [[BodySurf transfer his soul into]]. Awakened by his old nemesis, she desires to resurrect the [[StarWars Galactic Empire]] as well as [[HeroKiller kill him]].
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The OppositeSexClone of [=CivGeneral=]. Originally intended as a backup for [=CivGeneral=] to [[BodySurf transfer his soul into]]. Awakened by his old nemesis, Mara Jade in DYOS 11, she desires seeks to resurrect the [[StarWars Galactic Empire]] as well as and [[HeroKiller kill him]].CG]].
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* BoomerangBigot: An Earthling who despises Earth
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* BoomerangBigot: An Earthling who [[InsignificantLittleBluePlanet despises EarthEarth]]
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* CainAndAbel: Cain to [=CivGeneral=]'s Abel
* CloningBlues
* CrazyPrepared
* CloningBlues
* CrazyPrepared
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* CainAndAbel: Cain CloningBlues: She believes herself superior to [=CivGeneral=], embarking on a CainAndAbel rivalry. Her attempts to insert herself into [=CivGeneral=]'s Abel
family tree are received... [[ThatThingIsNotMyChild poorly]].
*CloningBlues
* CrazyPreparedCommissarCap: ShoutOut to [[StreetFighter M. Bison]].
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* CrazyPrepared
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* EvilSoundsDeep
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* NiceHat
** CommissarCap: ShoutOut to [[StreetFighter M. Bison]].
* InsignificantLittleBluePlanet: Holds a strong view on this after learning about the infighting that happened in DYOS past.
* [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou Only One Allowed to Defeat]]/[[OnlyICanKillHim Kill Him]]: Holds this view towards [=CivGeneral=].
* OppositeSexClone: To [=CivGeneral=]
** CommissarCap: ShoutOut to [[StreetFighter M. Bison]].
* InsignificantLittleBluePlanet: Holds a strong view on this after learning about the infighting that happened in DYOS past.
* [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou Only One Allowed to Defeat]]/[[OnlyICanKillHim Kill Him]]: Holds this view towards [=CivGeneral=].
* OppositeSexClone: To [=CivGeneral=]
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** CommissarCap: ShoutOut to [[StreetFighter M. Bison]].
* InsignificantLittleBluePlanet: Holds a strong view on this after learning about the infighting that happened in DYOS past.
* OppositeSexClone: To [=CivGeneral=]
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!!Dr. Wallace Breen
Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]]]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]]]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
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Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]''
Taillesskangaru's alter ego (he's depicted as a rocket, based on the
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Both in regard to the source material ''and'' between contributors. In one comic by Thorvald, Breen seems to figure out Corporal Reitan's CrypticConversation, but in subsequent comics by [=CivGeneral=], he's unfazed by whatever he learned. This is revisited in DYOS 10.5 when Breen confronts [=CivGeneral=] and appears much more frightened, going so far as to suggest [[EnemyMine he'll join the good guys in fighting the Combine]].
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Breen refuses to [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary mind-rip]] Corporal Reitan, even though it would skip the excruciatingly frustrating interrogations.
!!Rocket
Taillesskangaru's alter ego (he's depicted as a rocket, based on the poster's old avatar). He is cold, manipulating and revels in chaos.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Breen refuses to [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary mind-rip]] Corporal Reitan, even though it would skip the excruciatingly frustrating interrogations.
!!Rocket
Taillesskangaru's alter ego (he's depicted as a rocket, based on the poster's old avatar). He is cold, manipulating and revels in chaos.
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* DespotismJustifiesTheMeans
!!The Clone Guild
A loose collection of villains introduced by e350tb in DYOS 10.5 known for using cloning technology, hence the name.
!!The Clone Guild
A loose collection of villains introduced by e350tb in DYOS 10.5 known for using cloning technology, hence the name.
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* DespotismJustifiesTheMeans
!!The Clone Guild
A loose collectionDespotismJustifiesTheMeans
* ManipulativeBastard
!!Dr. Wallace Breen
Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader ofvillains introduced by e350tb the Combine Empire. In DYOS 10, he emerges shortly before General Grievous[[hottip:*:Yes, [[StarWars that Grievous]]]] is killed to supplant kulade as the BigBad. Breen becomes the president of the [[{{Fallout}} Enclave]] in DYOS 10.5 known for using cloning technology, hence the name.5, only to face a string of successive defeats that lead to his capture.
!!The Clone Guild
A loose collection
* ManipulativeBastard
!!Dr. Wallace Breen
Dr. Breen was pulled straight from ''[[HalfLife Half-Life 2]]'' as the leader of
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Colonel Sykes... until things fail to go according to plan.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorum seems to be heading in this direction when he was first introduced, until taillesskangaru started putting him in his stories.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorum seems to be heading in this direction when he was first introduced, until taillesskangaru started putting him in his stories.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Colonel Sykes... until things fail AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Both in regard to go according to plan.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorumthe source material ''and'' between contributors. In one comic by Thorvald, Breen seems to be heading figure out Corporal Reitan's CrypticConversation, but in this direction subsequent comics by [=CivGeneral=], he's unfazed by whatever he learned. This is revisited in DYOS 10.5 when he was first introduced, until taillesskangaru started putting him Breen confronts [=CivGeneral=] and appears much more frightened, going so far as to suggest [[EnemyMine he'll join the good guys in his stories.fighting the Combine]].
** See also: PingPongNaivete
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Breen refuses to [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary mind-rip]] Corporal Reitan, even though it would skip the excruciatingly frustrating interrogations.
* LaughablyEvil: General Valorum
** See also: PingPongNaivete
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Breen refuses to [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary mind-rip]] Corporal Reitan, even though it would skip the excruciatingly frustrating interrogations.