There's a lot I can say here about what makes this Fan Fic so awful. So I'll use a list.
1. The characters are very out of character. The author may claim that's how they behave in the books, but I call bullcrap.
2. When Hermione kills Ron (I know he's portrayed as an abusive jerk, but still!), Harry says she was defending herself. Last time I checked, she did it on purpose in front of her kids!
3. Harry hates Ginny because she gains weight and is a racist? Those two are very unlike Ginny if you ask me.
4. Finally, they got over their dumping-their-spouses really quickly. Whatever happened to the 5 stages of grief?
Anyway, that's what I wanted to say. Oh, and I wouldn't recommend reading this either.
FanFic Awful
There's a lot I can say here about what makes this Fan Fic so awful. So I'll use a list.
1. The characters are very out of character. The author may claim that's how they behave in the books, but I call bullcrap.
2. When Hermione kills Ron (I know he's portrayed as an abusive jerk, but still!), Harry says she was defending herself. Last time I checked, she did it on purpose in front of her kids!
3. Harry hates Ginny because she gains weight and is a racist? Those two are very unlike Ginny if you ask me.
4. Finally, they got over their dumping-their-spouses really quickly. Whatever happened to the 5 stages of grief?
Anyway, that's what I wanted to say. Oh, and I wouldn't recommend reading this either.