While the story has some truly impressive moments (especially the art), awkward pacing and sometimes questionable character development on Youmu's part bog the story down a little. I note these flaws because they stand out next to the other positive aspects; I still recommend reading it.
Selryam's review
While the story has some truly impressive moments (especially the art), awkward pacing and sometimes questionable character development on Youmu's part bog the story down a little. I note these flaws because they stand out next to the other positive aspects; I still recommend reading it.