The concept and plotting of the story is great and so are the murders, but a few things don't make sense like how Hinata remembers everything but doesn't use his "talents" for anything and is instead stuck with his baseline knowledge. The writing also isn't strong especially with the big plot twist near the end. I disagree with the previous review, I'd at most give the story a 6.5/10 and more likely a 6/10. It's ok, but nothing special.
Project Rewrite
The concept and plotting of the story is great and so are the murders, but a few things don't make sense like how Hinata remembers everything but doesn't use his "talents" for anything and is instead stuck with his baseline knowledge. The writing also isn't strong especially with the big plot twist near the end. I disagree with the previous review, I'd at most give the story a 6.5/10 and more likely a 6/10. It's ok, but nothing special.