Lucillia has written roughly a hundred different fanfics for various series, but First Try is probably one of the most involved series she's produced. The story explores what would become of a Naruto who manages to go through his formative training without the influence of Sasuke and Sakura, as well as having an instructor who is actually invested in his development. The ripple effect leads to some very interesting changes in the stations of canon.
That said, Lucillia's grammar and composition leave a lot to be desired. She frequently writes sentences that can contain a whole paragraph of information, usually conveying up to three complete thoughts in a run-on fashion. Even worse, a lot of what gets added in is actually irrelevant to the subject at hand. The effect is a bit like having an entire conversation thrown into the blender and then fed to you in a glass; you'll be able to pick out all of the individual ideas, but you might need to read through it several times to grasp them all. If you're the kind of reader that gets frustrated with poor composition, tread carefully.
First Try Series
Lucillia has written roughly a hundred different fanfics for various series, but First Try is probably one of the most involved series she's produced. The story explores what would become of a Naruto who manages to go through his formative training without the influence of Sasuke and Sakura, as well as having an instructor who is actually invested in his development. The ripple effect leads to some very interesting changes in the stations of canon.
That said, Lucillia's grammar and composition leave a lot to be desired. She frequently writes sentences that can contain a whole paragraph of information, usually conveying up to three complete thoughts in a run-on fashion. Even worse, a lot of what gets added in is actually irrelevant to the subject at hand. The effect is a bit like having an entire conversation thrown into the blender and then fed to you in a glass; you'll be able to pick out all of the individual ideas, but you might need to read through it several times to grasp them all. If you're the kind of reader that gets frustrated with poor composition, tread carefully.