The parody elements are there, as well as a decent familiarity with the cast personalities. The pop-culture references are a bit overdone, likely to make the work dated in a decade, and the grammar/syntax needs improvement.
If you don't mind reading a first draft, the story is enjoyable.
Great concept, weak execution
The parody elements are there, as well as a decent familiarity with the cast personalities. The pop-culture references are a bit overdone, likely to make the work dated in a decade, and the grammar/syntax needs improvement.
If you don't mind reading a first draft, the story is enjoyable.